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After playing seven or eight different routes, and being angry at this game, I finally understood it could be boiled down to one comment:

Choices should have consequences.

Eve is supposedly the submissive character, yet this is not at all reflected anywhere in this game, except the sex-scenes. She starts off the game as a bitch, and no matter how nice or dominant you play, she still continues being a bitch

The story is horribly written. I recognize several points where the creator tries to make something feel scary, or disconcerting, or rage-inducing, but it just feels empty, because the women aren't women I would protect from anything, considering how they treat the MC.

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There is a saying..."if you've got nothing nice to say, don't say anything."

Fair enough that you don't like the game, so stop playing and go find something that does float your boat. But you don't need to insult the creator of this very fine visual novel. 

Just look at the art - Its top shelf!! The story (like all VNs) is exactly that, a story! So suspend your disbelief and roll with it. 

I've played through this novel four times now, and while I know the macro story pretty well, I'm still finding little zigs and zags in the story that entertain for a variety of reasons. To think that there are still 14 other endings that I've yet to see, makes this a phenomenal creative work. 

I have nothing but praise for the Captain, and all the other creators who develop these VNs - some are great (this one, Good Girl Gone Bad, Leap of Faith, and Tales from the Unending Void to name a few) and some are pretty low grade for a variety of reasons (Friends of Mine, Girl Games, Weekend Lollygagging) - but I would never post content on those games that sought to diminish the creators efforts - if I didn't like/enjoy it, I move on.  You should too.

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Artwork is good. And that's the only compliment I can give this game.

I post comments like the one above, because I am allowed to voice my opinion, and I would like to inform other players that this game is not a good game.

You said this game is as good as a few others, and I have tried those other games you listed, even love them. Because they have character development, this game doesn't. Because those games have consequences of your choices, this game doesn't. Because those games have a story, this game doesn't. Because those games have a diversity of characters/personalities, this game doesn't.

Just because someone is a decent visual artist, does not mean they know how to make a game, write a good story, or that their game is good simply because they are a decent visual artist.

The only difference in the story, is whether or not you get to see boring sex-scenes. There's nothing else new. Unlike one of the games you mentioned, Good Girl Gone Bad, where I can find new things in story and scenes even after playing it more than 200 times (not an exaggeration). This game is empty after you've played through it 'wrong' and then 'right'.

Eve never changes, Cassie never changes, the MC never changes, the story never changes, the events never change, your choices never change, your relationships never change. It is fine to make a VN where you simply want to tell a story, but then you don't get to claim, as the author of this game does, that your choices matter, or that there's eighteen different paths, when every path contains the exact same lines from the exact same characters in the exact same positions in the exact same events, no matter which choices you make. As I've said several times, the only difference of your choices is whether you get to see a few boring sex-scenes or not.

I played this as the nicest, most helpful guy possible the first time, and got bitched out, humiliated, ordered around, had my privacy invaded, and ended up as their slave. I played this game as the nastiest, most hateful guy possible the second time, and got bitched out, humiliated, ordered around, had my privacy invaded, and ended up as their slave. I tried being nice to Eve and stay away from Cassie the third time I played, and got bitched out, humiliated, ordered around, had my privacy invaded, and ended up as their slave. I tried being cruel to Eve and kind to Cassie, and got bitched out, humiliated, ordered around, had my privacy invaded, and ended up as their slave. I tried telling them everything, and got bitched out, humiliated, ordered around, had my privacy invaded, and ended up as their slave. I tried telling them nothing, and got bitched out, humiliated, ordered around, had my privacy invaded, and ended up as their slave. Tried being kind without buying gifts, and got bitched out, humiliated, ordered around, had my privacy invaded, and ended up as their slave. Tried staying away from Kelly, and got bitched out, humiliated, ordered around, had my prvacy invaded, and ended up as their slave. I tried starting a relationship with Kelly, and got bitched out, humiliated, ordered around, had my privacy invaded, and ended up as their slave.

The only difference your choices make, is whether or not you get to see a few boring sex-scenes. Absolutely nothing else changes.

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I think you may have missed a few things. But that's alright. Given your take, this isn't a game for you.
Thank you for playing it.

(+9)

Thank you. I respect any author that doesn't get angry at those leaving bad reviews/scathing comments on their games. I may not like your game, but I do respect you for being so polite.