User:H Case
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Problems
[edit]This article is currently has a messy lead and precautions section. It hyper-focuses on Bikram yoga as opposed to what hot yoga is today. The sources used for this article are questionable as well. This article should be organized and written in coherence with other articles of its type.
Tasks
[edit]- Refine lead to focus more on what hot yoga is today, less about Bikram
- Add citations to History
- Edit History to be relevant
- Add other types of hot yoga
- Match Precautions to like practices, break up with sub headings
- Rename Notes to References
Problems
[edit]This article is written like an incomplete academic essay. In the talk page, the main contributor notes that he/she only touched on the main points he/she deemed important. The article does not match Wikipedia stylistically as noted by the tags and in the talk page. Additionally, the current information should be reorganized to give others the opportunity to add supplemental, relevant information.