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Legal/Copyright issues
[edit]Wow - there is so much content on the copyright of peter pan on this page, that it almost warrants a page of its own. Kabads
Nah, just use ==headlines==. --Eloquence
Is it legal (in Wikipedia terms at least) to have a link which takes you straight to an electronic text which breaches copyright? Is the online version of Peter Pan 'kosher'? Adambisset 03:52, 15 Oct 2004 (UTC)
I believe the Project Gutenberg text is lawful (in the U.S. at the least). I think the text of the article is misleading, or at best poorly documented in some of its claims. I'm not very familiar with UK copyright law, but the legislation cited seems to be saying, "yes, the copyright expired, but the hospital is entitled to royalties regardless," making it more of a pseudo-copyright. That's a matter of semantics; the effect remains the same. But the assertion (apparently taken from the hospital's web site) that it remains under copyright in the U.S. until 2023 seems contrary to U.S. law (which I am familiar with) which states that anything published before 1923 is (without exception) already in the public domain. And finally, the claim that a sequel would establish a new copyright in the characters is not my understanding of how U.S. character copyrights work. (If it did work that way, Disney could renew their copyright in Mickey indefinitely without having to get Congress to extend copyright terms every couple decades.) I am going to research this further and correct/clarify the article, as necessary. Tverbeek 17:35, 21 Nov 2004 (UTC)
- It's important to distinguish copyright from trademark. Copyright expires (eventually). Trademark does not. You cannot copyright a literary character, but you can trademark one. (This is why Tarzan continues to enjoy protection, even though the original Burroughs books have lapsed into the public domain.) The notable exception to the issue of character copyright is that Mickey Mouse is an animated character, and artistic design DOES attain copyright status.
- While Disney would greatly love to hold copyright on the Mickey Mouse cartoons indefinitely, it's not going to happen. Someone will eventually be able to put out their own collection of public domain Mickey Mouse cartoons, but it will be interesting to see how they address the issue of package design since they can't use any of Disney's trademarked Mickey branding (like the silhouette of the ears) without being crushed into oblivion by Mouse House lawyers.
- The issue of legal information on GOSH's website seems to indicate their deliberate or wilful ignorance of US copyright law. The Sonny Bono Copyright Extension Act does not pertain in any way to the Peter Pan case because it does not have standing to re-grant copyright status to public domain work. Peter Pan had already long since been public domain, so GOSH's claims to the contrary are utterly without merit or basis in fact.
- There's a bit more info on the publication history of Pan in the section below on the name of the book.Akahige719 16:58, 30 July 2005 (UTC)
I've revised this section based on my research, mostly putting the hospital's claims into context, and dropping the claim about sequels renewing copyrights, which seems like mere wishful thinking. As for whether a link to the text online is permissible by Wikipedia standards, considering that Wikisource itself has it online as well, I'd have to say that it is. :) Tverbeek 21:08, 21 Nov 2004 (UTC)
- According to GOSH: "Peter Pan is in the public domain in the UK so no royalties would be due on publication of a new story using characters from Barrie's original, whether a sequel, prequel or other spin-off.
- "Royalties would only be owed to us under Schedule 6 of the CDPA (1988) if it's a new edition of the original play or novel, a new production or adaptation of the play or any broadcast of the original story. In the case of a new work with a different storyline, a UK author would not have to pay royalties."
- I sent GOSH an email of enquiry to gain the above information.
Listener Sheogorath (talk) 00:55, 12 February 2013 (UTC)
- For Wikipedia's purposes, the information would need to be published somewhere. -Jason A. Quest (talk) 03:40, 12 February 2013 (UTC)
- What about reply 5 at <a>http://www.jmbarrie.co.uk/msgbrd/index.php?topic=732.0</a>?
- 178.99.26.164 (talk) 04:07, 11 July 2013 (UTC)
- For Wikipedia's purposes, the information would need to be published somewhere. -Jason A. Quest (talk) 03:40, 12 February 2013 (UTC)
Sexual themes
[edit]Some compentators see the story as containing sexual alegory. Wendy's sexual awakening, and Peter's Freudian feelings for a mother figure, along with his flight, and conflicted feelings for Wendy and Tinkerbell, each representing differnt idealized women, loom large in the narative."
Sorry User:The_Trolls_of_Navarone, but if you can´t tell me the names of the commentators I can only see this as a joke [you may have a point, but I´m pretty sure the Autor didn´t write it as an allegory :D ]
P.S. Do try a bit harder on your spelling please :)
Sean Heron 21:40, 18 Apr 2004 (UTC)
- Appologies for the spelling, but there's actually a lot of commentary on this by serious critics - I'll try to pull some out for you. The Trolls of Navarone 07:17, 19 Apr 2004 (UTC)
- The Case of Peter Pan, Or, the Impossibility of Children's Fiction (Language, Discourse, Society) by Jacqueline Rose
- Hauntings: Anxiety, Technology, and Gender in Peter Pan ANN WILSON
- Here are two - honestly, it's such a common theme in literaty criticism of Peter Pan, I'm surprised you took it for a joke - if you don't like the paragraph I wrote, perhaps you want to take a crack at re-working it? Even the name 'Pan' comes from a lewd Greek God of debauchery typically shown with a huge penis. Thanks, The Trolls of Navarone 07:32, 19 Apr 2004 (UTC)
Thank you for going to the trouble of finding some commentators :)
I must admit I hadn´t actually read any interpretations of peter pan myself, but the "sexual themes" just seemed to be so out of place (its just as long as the storyline!) that I couldn´t take it seriously, sorry. I also find the title somewhat over the top.
But anyway, as you say, I shouldn´t moan, I should give it some work. Until I´m a bit more motivated and less tired than now, I decided to put back your section back in [minus the spelling mistakes :) ]
So keep watching this place, should change soon!
- Great - my paragraph definately needs some work! The Trolls of Navarone 05:43, 20 Apr 2004 (UTC)
Since I've come to the conclusion that people see sexual matter is a problem--positive or negative, whichever--in the story of Peter Pan, may I ask just how old is he? It's obvious that he's a boy that refuses to grow up, but since sexual matters have been meddled into his life, he couldn't be that young, right? The same goes for Wendy. And if he already has thoughts about sex (I wouldn't think too explicitly. I mean in a mild way) and woman-man relationship, it would mean that he has grown, right? Wouldn't that completely oppose who Peter Pan is? 202.73.122.227 23:56, 10 July 2006 (UTC)
The name of the book
[edit]Wasn't the book called Peter Pan and Wendy ? Julianp 01:12, 13 May 2004 (UTC) Peter Pan the character was born many years before the novel "Peter and Wendy" and actually before the first draft of the play. He originated in one chapter of Barrie's novel "The Little White Bird" (1902) written for adults, but dedicated to the eldest of the Llewelyn Davies brothers. That one chapter was the most popular, and so he printed it on its own, under the name "Peter Pan in Kensington Gardens." The play Peter Pan was first produced in 1904, and was produced every Christmas season in London for a long time after that. "When Wendy Grew Up" was a one-act addition that is pretty essential to understanding the psyche of Peter. It was performed once, after the final show of the 1908 season (Feb 22). It is included with the novel "Peter and Wendy," which was published in 1911. The text of the play was published in 1928, but the extravagant stage directions and narrative tone show it to be a work for individual reading, not performing. Barrie didn't die until 1937, which was unfortunatly for him after the deaths of two or three of the Llewelyn Davies boys, including his personal pet favorite Michael.
- Assumably, the 1911 date corresponds to initial publication in the UK. If there was a time lag between initial appearance and publication in other countries (as there almost always was), Gale makes no mention of it. The etext at Project Gutenberg, Peter Pan, is subtitled (or alternately titled) Peter and Wendy, which would mean that publication in the US occurred early enough for the work to have gone into public domain (hence, pre-1923). (Though the legal work for determining public domain status is scrupulous, the great deficiency of the Gutenberg project is that they include no publication history for any of the work they produce.)
- This information is equally important to the issue of copyright status (see section above).Akahige719 16:58, 30 July 2005 (UTC)
Bobby Driscoll as Peter
[edit]"This voice was thought be many to be a rather mature choice, and not in complete accordance to the preferences of audiences." This statement is completely unsourced, and seems to present a personal opinion padded with weasel words to justify including it. Who are the "many" who thought this? What were the audiences' preferences, and how do we know them? (I don't recall being asked, but maybe that's because I only saw it in re-release; did movie-goers in 1953 fill out comment cards?) And even if verifiably true, how is it noteworthy that a movie didn't completely meet the audience's preferences? Tverbeek 00:21, 29 July 2005 (UTC)
Wendy
[edit]66.37.230.151 (talk · contribs) added the following to the article, which I reverted and copied below. -- Longhair | Talk 01:06, 15 August 2005 (UTC)
Existing content
Barrie is sometimes said to have "invented" the name Wendy with this story. In fact, the name was already in use in both the United States and Britain, but was extremely rare. The Peter Pan stories popularized the name, at first in Britain. Wendy is related to the Welsh name Gwendydd (pronounced Gwen-deeth), and was used by Barrie at a time when Welsh names were making a resurgence in England.
Added by 66.37.230.151 (talk · contribs)
Before the above assertions can be accepted as fact, whoever wrote the above paragraph should provide evidence for them in the form of a written record referring to a woman named Wendy born in the United States or the United Kingdom before 1902. Otherwise it would seem to be wiser to accept the statements in given name dictionaries published in the United Kingdom (Withycombe, The Oxford Dictionary of English Christian Names; Dunkling, Everyman's Dictionary of First Names, and Hanks & Hodges, A Dictionary of First Names) that Wendy was a name created by James Barrie from the baby-talk phrase "friendy-wendy." Of course, even if one can find isolated examples of women called Wendy before 1902, that by itself doesn't prove that Barrie was using a pet form of Gwendydd instead of independently creating the name.
- The way I heard it, Wendy already existed as a nickname for either Wendell or Gwendolyn, but Peter Pan popularized the latter, making it forever a girl's name.
Ancestry.com shows around 18 women named Wendy who were born before 1902 in Britain and the USA. See http://forums.randi.org/showpost.php?p=3001355&postcount=230 for a list. Zooterkin 05:47, 27 September 2007 (UTC)
Vandalism
[edit]jan 08 2006 (gmt +10 i think) I changed the page back to what it was before someone wrote peter pan is gay all over it, as it is my first time editing any page i dont relly know if ive done it right but judging from what it was before i cant imagine I made it anyworse. Sorry if I did though.
- You did it just fine. Thanks for pitching in to help. By the way, if you type ~~~~ at the end of your comments, Wikipedia will automatically add your address and the date/time.
I've had to change this article due to vandalism again. Is this a common issue? Wendoline 04:57, 5 March 2006 (UTC)
I removed the word "butt" that seemed to be randomly placed at the begining of paragraph 2. I assumed it was a pointless act of vandalism. Mystyc1 03:06, 22 September 2006 (UTC)
"Themes" section - original research?
[edit]While I love the "Themes" section and think it is very well-written, there are no sources whatsoever. For example:
- "There is a reason why there are only lost boys and not lost girls. Girls have more sense then to be arrogant; they see the significance in growing up and maturity."
While I might very well believe this, it violates the standards for inclusion if we are just offering our own opinions. Are there any volunteers to rewrite this section so that it is properly sourced? Nandesuka 18:56, 15 February 2006 (UTC)
Peter himself gives us the answer in both the play "Peter Pan" and the novel "Peter and Wendy." The Lost Boys are actually lost, much in the same way one loses an umbrella. "They are the children who fall out of their perambulators when the nurse is looking the other way. If they are not claimed in seven days they are sent far away to the Neverland to defray expenses. I'm captain." ..... "Are none of the others girls?" [asked Wendy] "Oh no; girls, you know, are much too clever to fall out of their prams." (Peter and Wendy,Oxford World Classics edition, pp94-95)
Did Peter really find a new nemesis in the original book?
[edit]"Peter, with the callousness of youth, quickly forgets Hook and finds a new nemesis, but as Hook made a stronger impression on the public, most sequels brought him back one way or another."
- From a quick look at the end of the Gutenberg version, it appears there is no clear information he did. While Hook is clearly gone since Peter Pan forgot about him, there's no mention of him having a new nemesis simply that he had new adventures and forgot the old... Nil Einne 12:54, 17 April 2006 (UTC)
Sexism
[edit]While it's clear that Peter Pan potrays various sex stereotypes I would have to say the way the discussion of sexism is written now seems to indicate it is only the potrayal of woman that is a bit unfair. I'm sure some commentators must have noted that in fact the potrayal of men is not any better even though different. The potrayal of women as mature (and smart) people who recognise the importance of growing up (and don't fall out of their prams) whereas the men as immature people who don't recognise the importance of growing up and are silly enough to fall out of their prams hardly seems fair to either men or women (but I think many would feel it's potrayal of men is worse). The love/smitten angle while clearly unfair on women, seem rather unfair on men as well since Peter Pan is too immature and silly to notice the problem or acknowledge his feelings. Nil Einne 12:44, 17 April 2006 (UTC)
Does Legend of Zelda: Ocarina of Time qualify to be added to "other references in entertainment"?
[edit]In The Legend of Zelda: Ocarina of Time, the Kokiri are a race of children that live in the forest named after them, all possess fairies, wear green tunics, and never age. They do not show themselves to the outside world, as they believe they will die if they leave the forest. Although not all of them are male, all the boys also wear green caps. They seem to be a pretty obvious reference to Peter Pan, so should this be added to "Other references in entertainment"? 71.198.181.226 05:47, 11 June 2006 (UTC)
in responce to "Themes"
[edit]I don't think he wanted to stay a boy just to avoid the responcibiliies of adulthood. He may just want to be that way just to have fun. Bud0011 02:02, 20 June 2006 (UTC)
New Article about the character Peter Pan
[edit]I created a new article Peter Pan (fictional character) to cover the information about the character separate from this article. I also changed the header to reflect the book rather than the character, and added the infobox. Both the info here as well as the other article need clean up. Please help. Bytebear 01:37, 27 October 2006 (UTC)
Dating Peter Pan
[edit]I've added a theory on the setting[s] for the book. Before anyone deletes it entirely - something I'm seeing a lot recently - I'm hoping some of you put up your thoughts on my theory. [User: Stripey]. what am im talking about. wtf!!!
Character histories
[edit]Much of the information on the characters in the Characters section is not from Barrie's Peter Pan but from Peter Pan in Scarlet. Granted it is an authorized sequel, but that new information should be cited as such. Of the few little bios that make mention of when the characters grow up in Scarlet, that caveat is not put in the right place to separate Barrie's world from Scarlet's. I propose to move all information from Scarlet to the section on Scarlet, so that all the information left is from Barrie's world alone. Because all other sequels, prequels, and adaptations use these characters—and use them differently—it will be easier to understand what happens in which book, as well as give more respect to Barrie's work. Thoughts?Cheeselouise 04:57, 27 November 2006 (UTC)
- I will remove this excess. It is alread captured on the PP in S page so no merge needed.Obina 21:23, 6 September 2007 (UTC)
On an unrelated note, someone using the IP 69.0.41.239 changed Michael to a girl. I reverted the changes, but someone should check up on other changes 69.0.41.239 made to other pages, usually in need of being reverted as well.Cheeselouise 05:12, 27 November 2006 (UTC)
reviews
[edit]Full cut and paste text of the reviews have no place in the article. I shall remove and add back one of the references.18:33, 29 December 2006 (UTC)
Page splitting?
[edit]I think this page need to split. Is it about the novel or the megabrand? To get better, it needs to be split into a few articles - perhaps one on characters, one on theatre, and one on expansion /sequel stories. . Do you agree?Obina 00:21, 31 December 2006 (UTC)
- Yes, clearly, the musical and its TV versions, and other major topics, should be split off. -- Ssilvers 19:59, 28 January 2007 (UTC)
- I realize it's a bit late to make this point, but while I agree that splitting the sequels and adaptations off is appropriate, there's no need (and frankly, I see no advantage) to split them off into two separate articles. - JasonAQuest (talk) 03:17, 16 December 2007 (UTC)
2003 film: imbalanced criticisms
[edit]Yes, I'm demanding citations for these overstated supposed critical complaints, whose inclusion seems more like fanboy whining in disguise. Mixing fantastic sceanarios akin to Chronicles of Narnia, the comedic high-adventure of Pirates of the Caribbean, and the bittersweet romance of Moulin Rouge!, the surprisingly beautiful 2003 Peter Pan film adaptation easily squashes Spielberg's ridiculous deviation, yet I see no mentioning in the article of critics' opinions for that film, where you'll notice that Robin Williams likewise has an American accent (to say the least) and the "romantic aspect" is applauded. To call a spade a spade, I suspect these negative comments were added to the page by the same American prudes who were oblivious to the original story's theme of young sexual awakening and were thus caught off guard when expecting a fluffy Disney rehash. I found Captain Hook's abrupt outbursts of violence far more shocking than these two kids sharing a first kiss; it's not surprising that American audiences would give a casual pass to the killing but are mortified at anything remotely sexual, despite its tactful innocence and emotional resonance. As far as Jeremy Sumpter's lone American accent goes, I thought it underscored his alien separateness from the other Lost Boys, affecting greater pathos in his not belonging to the group, as when left outside the window at the end.
EDIT: Actually, on consideration, I don't think those criticisms should be included in this article at all. As with the overview of Spielberg's Hook and other listed incarnations, the paragraph here should only describe the movie, not reactions to it. Observe how no other section of the page relies on reviewer opinion, whereas for the 2003 film alone we're told almost nothing of the movie other than a listing of the main players before launching immediately into critique and bean counting. The individual Peter Pan film page is even worse, wrongly taking for granted that readers should have prior knowledge of the original story, and weaseling with an interspersed checklist of differences from the source material alongside speculative criticisms of why the movie may have failed to capture the box office. Apart from the opening sentence, all references there to the book/play should be pushed to the bottom of the article, made to follow an independent synopsis of the movie itself — see the Akira (film) page for an example of article structure, separately listing at page bottom the differences seen in the film adaptation, not kneaded into the plot synopsis. ~ 172.130.114.106 15:35, 22 February 2007 (UTC)
Jane/Jayn
[edit]The last person to edit this article before myself changed the name 'Jane' to 'Jayn'. I checked my copy of the book, and Barrie used the spelling 'Jane', so I reverted it. However, this edit does not resemble vandalism to me. Is the spelling 'Jayn' used in a related work such as Peter Pan in Scarlet and should thus be mentioned in this article? Shui9 05:22, 15 March 2007 (UTC)
- No; it's spelled Jane in Peter Pan in Scarlet as well. Mukino 04:21, 11 June 2007 (UTC)
Delete Trivia Section
[edit]Deleted the trivia section. None of the points listed were significant or relevant to Peter Pan. Such a famous literary figure is of course referenced several times in popular culture, but to list every instance would be folly. If the reference to Peter Pan is important to the popular work in question, it should be mentioned in the article dealing with the popular work itself. However, many of the points on this list was very obscure, and do not merit mention anywhere on Wikipedia. For those of you who disagree with me, please read Wikipedia:Trivia before reverting my edit. If you really DO wish to include a popular culture/trivia-section in this article, I suggest it be written in prose form on the general impact of this charachter on popular culture rather than as a list of meaningless trivia. However, such a section would likely be original resarch.Dr bab 22:48, 30 March 2007 (UTC)
- I was the person who recently restored that section (twice!), assuming its deletion was either vandalism or else some prudish parent's effort to bury the many sexualized (or otherwise unsavory) derivations of the original story by removing the entire list, thereby attempting to circumvent WP's "no censorship" policy. While I agree that references in pop music lyrics are mere trivia, other items listed are culturally significant, or are productions directly related to the topic. Examples that you claim are not relevant:
- Very likely as a piggyback to the Mary Martin production, the Overtones, a radio drama group consisting of Carol Beth and Rickey Rood and a small orchestra, recorded a 45rpm two-part adaptation of the Peter Pan story for Cricket Records. The script and music were entirely original and were based on the book, not on the Disney film or the musical.
- In 1980, Petula Clark starred in Never, Never Land as a woman whose niece, captivated by Barrie's tale, runs away and takes refuge with a group of "lost boys" squatting in a deserted London townhouse.
- The 1987 Joel Schumacher film The Lost Boys featured several teen actors as ageless vampires, loosely styled after the lost boys of Peter Pan.
- In 1989, British pop group Five Star performed a medley of Peter Pan songs "You Can Fly", "Never Smile At A Crocodile" and "Second Star To The Right" for a BBC Television special celebrating the works of Walt Disney.
- The 1997 comic book mini-series The Lost by Marc Andreyko and Jay Geldhof starred a vampiric boy hustler named Peter who leads a small group of vampire boys, and lures a girl named Wendy to join them.
- Pop singer Michael Jackson proclaimed in the 2003 documentary Living With Michael Jackson, "I am Peter Pan."
- The 1990s animated series The Mask included a character named "Skillet," who didn't age, dressed in green, could fly, and had a detachable shadow. However, he was a villain, and sent his shadow out to absorb the youth of other people. Skillet's name was presumably based on "pan" as a cooking utensil. (It should be noted, however, that the character also borrows elements from Superman villain Mr. Mxyzptlk as well.) As well, the voice of "Skillet" was first voiced by Jason Marsden, who supplied the voice of Peter Pan in the animated series Peter Pan and the Pirates.
- Peter Pan plays an important part as a background character in the 2002 novel The League of Heroes by Xavier Mauméjean. The story is set in an alternate universe in which Neverland has materialized in Kensington Gardens. The fairy folk are commonplace in London, as are pirates and Indians. Peter Pan is considered an enemy of the repressive government and is pursued by the League whose members include Lord Admiral Hook (Captain Hook), Sherlock Holmes, and Lord Greystoke (Tarzan).
- In 2003, New Media Entertainment released Neverland, a modern punk version of the Peter Pan saga with homosexual undertones. It features Wil Wheaton as John Darling.
- Finding Neverland, a 2004 film starring Johnny Depp as Barrie and Kate Winslet as Sylvia Llewelyn Davies, was a somewhat fictionalized account of their relationship and how it led to the development of Peter Pan. It was based on the 1998 play The Man Who Was Peter Pan by Allan Knee.
- New Line Cinema have greenlit a movie project entitled "Pan," written by screenwriter Ben Magid, which casts Peter in his most controversial role yet...that of a psychopathic killer stalked by a John McClane-style Captain Hook in the present day.
- Alan Moore and Melinda Gebbie's 2006 graphic novel Lost Girls stars a grown-up Wendy Darling along with Alice of Alice in Wonderland and Dorothy of The Wonderful Wizard of Oz.
- In Greg Bear's Anvil of Stars, the boys on the spaceship are called 'lost boys', and the women, 'wendys'.
- To delete the whole section rather than selectively editing it seems an act of laziness. The section was not labelled "Trivia" -- that is your own critical projection being advanced to justify your deletion. There's no WP rule demanding that prose form must be employed to connect a disperate listing of facts, and attempting to lump these assorted items in essay format, as you suggest, would in fact be more confusing to the reader.
- Other than the Overtones recording (which could conceivably be added within the "TV" paragraph), and the graphic novel by Alan Moore (already mentioned in the "Controversy" section, but now left without links thanks to your edit), none of the remaining items can be made to fit within the body of the article since they don't qualify as either prequel or sequel , or are not intended as direct adaptations. Also, notwithstanding personal opinions about Michael Jackson, failing to provide a minimal mentioning of his notorious facination with the character (Neverland Ranch, etc.) is to miss a rather large cultural boat. Due to its wide popularity, the Kingdom Hearts video game (not included in the abbreviated list above) might also merit referencing, if not in this article than in the WP page for Disney's Peter Pan movie since the game involves many Disney animated characters. ~ 172.129.6.126 08:49, 1 April 2007 (UTC)
- I support the removal of the trivial section. Please read Wikipedia:Trivia. If individual items are to be re-added, please work them into the article. See: Wikipedia:Avoid_trivia_sections_in_articles. To those who love a subject, any detail is of interest, but the Wikipedia guideline is that "Keep in mind, however, that 'trivia' content is not exempt from our rules and style guidelines." which include compliance with importance and WP:RS. Buddhipriya 18:34, 1 April 2007 (UTC)
- Of the points listed above, while all of them refer to peter pan in some way, they are not relevant to peter pan. The stress must be that any item contained herein be relevant and important to the subject of the article. As an example, consider the following item: "In 1989, British pop group Five Star performed a medley of Peter Pan songs "You Can Fly", "Never Smile At A Crocodile" and "Second Star To The Right" for a BBC Television special celebrating the works of Walt Disney." I fail to see how an eighties pop-group performing some peter pan songs, at a single event, carry any relevance to the peter pan article. If this was a huge event, for example leading to the breakthrough of the band, it would merit a mention on the bands own article. As it is, it is not important to the band, hence it is certainly not important to peter pan. A second example: The film you mention, The Lost Boys, is clearly influenced by peter pan, if only by its title. The article on The lost boys should (and does) include information on this link. That peter pan is important to The Lost Boys however, does not imply that the Lost Boys is important to peter pan.
- As I said earlier, such an important literary character will serve as inspiration for several works, minor and major. I still feel that the peter pan reference belongs on the pages of those individual works. Again I refer you to Wikipedia:Avoid_trivia_sections_in_articles. Dr bab 07:07, 2 April 2007 (UTC)
- Yawn to both of you for directing me to WP rules which I'm already long familiar with – I'm not new to the site, I just don't bother signing in because a bogus screen name is no more identifying than a random I.P. number, other than to persons interested in tracking my contributions (and why should they want to do that?). You should take your own advice to read those guidelines yourself as it explicitly states "Don't simply remove it"; there are also exceptions pointed out there for grouping irregular items into retitled subsections, or you could have trimmed tenuous items, removed the bullet points, or tagged the section with a "trivia" warning. The whole of the list is not contingent on the value of any single item being deemed too marginal, and if you're personally uninterested in ALL of its information, don't read that particular section!
- The reason that the "Five Star" Brit-pop item was left above for consideration was due only to the Disney reference (paying tribute to their animated film), not the cover band itself, but feel free to chop it if it's too tangential. Similarly, reference to The Mask cartoon episode would have been a throwaway parody but for the fact that the same actor was simultaneously voicing the Pan character on Fox's cartoon series; the cheeky daring of that casting maneuver is what made it all the more noteworthy (at least to viewers of the day).
- The listed items I'm most concerned with preserving are not "trivia" (despite your dismissal) but would more correctly be labelled "Derivative works", fitting into the article after "Sequels", exactly where it was already positioned. The Lost Boys movie, like several other fictional works in the list, taps into literary analysis of the Peter Pan character as a Pied Piper (e.g., panpipes) luring children from their parents, contrary to the benevolent forest figure from Greek myth – it's important for readers to be aware that Barrie's story offers these darker thematic interpretations which have been externally brought to focus more than once, as demonstrated by cited works.
- Alan Moore's graphic novel, borrowing story characters in an after-the-fact tale, is no more or less a sequel than Spielberg's Hook, to which I could apply the very same argument you've offered for The Lost Boys: that Peter Pan is important to Hook does not imply that said film is important to Barrie's original tale. Prominent reference to Spielberg's film within the article goes unquestioned only because of sentimentality held toward it or the director, or as afforded by Hollywood's promotional machinery somehow insisting it's an adaptation. (...Are we to believe "Rufio" fell out of a pram in Kensington Gardens? That movie's diverse casting for its Lost Boys has an odour of Americanized political correctness.)
- There seems to be a double standard in your criteria, or I leave it to you to explain the omission of Finding Neverland by comparison to Hook; technically, both films should be moved into the afore-suggested "Derivative works" category. As an even better comparison regarding handling of contemporary derivations, see how West Side Story (a modern reinterpretation, as per The Lost Boys,) and Shakespeare In Love (fictional bioflick, not unlike the Johnny Depp film here,) are noted in "Film Adaptations" for the Romeo and Juliet article. ~ 172.146.216.16 09:07, 8 April 2007 (UTC)
- Obviously we do not agree about the relevance these items hold to Peter Pan. I feel that Peter Pan is important to The Lost Boys, but not the other way around, while you do not. You argue that Hook should then also be excluded, and I am inclined to agree with you on this point. I think most of the items you are concerned with could be listed as links in a See Also section. This would limtit the list to only include items that merit their own article, and make it more maintainable. The Peter Pan relationship would then be established in those separate articles. If the Peter Pan relationship is not important enough to be mentioned in the Article in question, there is certainly no need to include it here. Dr bab 22:08, 8 April 2007 (UTC).
- Regarding the contributions by anonymous IP accounts, while Wikipedia certainly does allow it, you may also want to read WP:EQ, of which the fourth principle is "Please register yourself". Building constructive social relationships over time is also a goal, and registration helps with that. If you prefer using an IP address that is also OK, of course. Buddhipriya 22:17, 8 April 2007 (UTC)
- If someone had never heard of The Lost Boys film – or West Side Story in the case of Romeo & Juliet – how would they be expected to make the connection to such peripheral works, which on the surface may bear only a remote resemblance to the original material? Should they rely on rumours overheard on street corners or hopeful encounters on message boards? You're resorting to a self-referencing argument due to your own familiarity from immersion in Western culture, taking it for granted by saying, "Of course popular literature will inspire other material!", whereas a reader from (let's obscurely say) the foothills of Nepal would likely be left clueless as to the extent of the original work's cultural penetration, unless spending a lifetime leeching Western television signals. Conversely, imagine if the topic here were a fable popular among East Asians and they were to scoff, "These things are widely known!" Or how would anyone born after 1980 learn of the Petula Clark film without cross-referencing provided here, if not stumbling on it by dumb luck?
- Other than its spot-on representation of mid-1980s zeitgeist, I have no special fondness for The Lost Boys movie (so don't think I'm defending it per se), but it does serve to illustrate the predatory interpretation of Pan in its vampiric parallels: an exclusive gang of ageless boys who can fly (revealed as vampires), enticing a youth named Michael at an idyllic, summery play-land locale (Santa Clara amusement park in the role of Neverland, iirc), as well as extrapolating the original story's sexual tensions. Ditto for the Jay Geldhof vampire comic. Given that vampire stories stem from a monstrous mythologization of sexual desire, the same underlying theme is seen to sustain the Wil Wheaton movie, and the predation angle is plain enough in the described psycho-killer film currently in production. ...We can't attribute all of these to a cannibalization of Joel Schumacher's movie; rather, they have a common origin in the source material's darker corners.
- I'm not arguing that the relevance holds "the other way around", nor is such a thing required (except to your own thinking), nor even possible (short of exhuming and reanimating Barrie's bones via voodoo magic to pen a follow-up story incorporating those later works), but Peter Pan is their mutual springboard, so it doesn't seem unreasonable to make note of them in this root topic. Check Wikipedia:Manual of Style (writing about fiction): "[Articles may describe]...the influence of the work on later creators and their projects..."; or once again, see similar treatment given to any number of articles for Shakespeare material (many of which are simply itemized lists minus the conspicuous bullet points). Nor was I suggesting that Hook should be excluded, just that it be moved into a more honestly titled subcategory alongside other spin-off pieces.
- @ Buddha: I already have an old WP account but contributing by name to a wimpy Peter Pan article would compromise my hardcore Wiki "street cred", haha. ~ 172.162.69.143 06:58, 10 April 2007 (UTC)
- First of all, I agree with you about Hook, so I removed it from the main section. There is an entry on it under "Sequels", were it belongs.
- When it comes to other related work that are not direct sequels or prequels, what do you think about including them in the "See Also" section? Or do you feel that every related work should be mentioned in a Pop Culture section, and the connections to Peter Pan established? The danger here, as I see it, is that there are so many works that are related in some way, that this section could grow out of hand.
- Perhaps a short popular culture section that mentions, for that poor ignorant from Nepal, that Peter Pan has in fact had a large impact on western popular culture? It could then give a few examples. Other related work (apart from said examples) could then be included in the see also section. This would tell everyone that Peter Pan has had a large impact, and give examples as to how this has happened. It would avoid that the "Popular Culture" section dominates the article, while people interested in finding out more about specific related works can read the relevant articles, easily found in the "See also" section. Of course, this would require heavy policing of the article to avoid the detoriation of the Popular Culture section to the state it was in when I removed it. What do you (both of you, and anyone else that might be interested) think?Dr bab 09:53, 10 April 2007 (UTC)
- IMO the article should stick to the format exercised on other pages for fictional works. Many Wikipedia articles have extensive "cultural influence" sections without complaint (or at least without visibly tagged complaint), arranged into subsections, and longer than the checklist that formerly existed here. I don't see any danger of these references eclipsing the article in its currently developed form. [There are articles where the listed derivations nearly surpass the length of the main body of the article: Example. EDIT: In the article for the accompanying play, comprehensive annotating of Shakespeare's pop influence is apparently forgiven as educational, or tolerated for showcasing his modern endurance.]
- The "See also" section is generally reserved for WP-linking to subjects most centrally related to the topic, not intended as a repository for every passing cultural reference. Lumping all miscellaneous items into the same section would lend them too much equal weight while simultaneously delivering too little information and would only invite future additions of random junk. WP's trivia guidelines suggest sorting such loose ends by subject to afford greater utility to their placement in an article.
- Almost inevitably, any section dealing with influences in popular culture is eyed for criticism as "trivia" because pop culture by definition is perceived as disposable entertainment, at least until such time that its own sales pitch dies down and/or nostalgic rediscovery elevates its status to "Art" – by way of example, many old films now considered "classics" were initially met with underwhelming response (eg., Citizen Kane). Items to be included in pop culture subsections for any topic should be judged on their content relevance, not artistic elitism, and irrespective of whether or not they have an impact on the original property – I don't see how they could, other than possible promotional value influencing sales or facilitating social memes. ~ 172.132.129.11 19:42, 11 April 2007 (UTC)
- I agree with Dr bab that since we have just managed to clean out the trivia we should be cautious about creating any section that would be a trivia magnet. In general I do not find the Popular Culture allusions very noteworthy. If anything is important enough to include, it should be worked into the main body of the article in some logical way before creating a new trivia section under another name. Buddhipriya 06:09, 12 April 2007 (UTC)
- Blindly throw a dart at any WP article for a notable fictional work/character that you can think of, and you're almost sure to find references there outlining its influence on popular culture. At random: Superman#Cultural impact, Casablanca (film)#Influence, Star Wars#Cultural impact. Your personal dislike or disinterest in cited material isn't a legitimate reason for its exclusion and is not in keeping with Wikipedia guidelines. I maintain that the mass deletion here seems masked subterfuge intended to shuffle the naughty bits out of sight.
- As an aside, I'll note another detail recollected of The Lost Boys movie: the gang of boys live in a secret underground lair (as in Neverland), identified in dialogue as the forgotten remains of a resort hotel that was buried under in a 1930s(?) earthquake. This always felt like an improbable piece of history for the film to establish until presently recognizing its purpose toward mirroring the original story. A later scene within the underground lair substitutes a bottle of wine (actually blood) offered for drink by the vampires in place of Hook's vial of scarlet poison. There are probably additional parallels but I've never scrutinized the movie searching for them. ~ 172.130.126.229 17:58, 16 April 2007 (UTC)
Adding another movie?
[edit]I was going through some old VHS movies of mine, and I found a Peter Pan animated feature which I don't believe has been mentioned in the article.
It's 50 minutes long and was produced by United American Video. I can't read roman numerals to save my life, so I don't know the date (it's labeled as being MCMXCII).
I didn't know whether or not it would be worth adding, so I decided to ask here first.
EDIT - Also, is the Disney vinyl version of Peter Pan worth mentioning? I own that, too. . .Don't know where it is, though. . .
Mukino 04:25, 11 June 2007 (UTC)
- A search for items produced by United American Video (as a distributor) at IMDB turned up this one, dated 1986 with a run time of 46 minutes: [1]. You could check the cast to see if it is the same item with a different date. The actual production company is listed as "Burbank Films Australia" so perhaps there was some timing issue in the distribution dates. Buddhipriya 04:34, 11 June 2007 (UTC)
- Yes, the cast is the same. It seems that UAV were just distributors, because before the opening credits it says "Burbank Films Australia Presents: Peter Pan". Mukino 05:36, 11 June 2007 (UTC)
- I can't find any mention of it in the article, so if it is an animated feature why don't you try adding it there with a brief description of it, with a link to the IMDB details. If it is a retelling of the standard Peter Pan story it would seem to be a variant of the better-known Disney animation which is discussed in the text. But perhaps the plot is not the standard tale? Buddhipriya 06:02, 11 June 2007 (UTC)
- The plot is the standard tale, but it deviates from the Disney version in that it uses different parts of the story that the Disney version left out. There were also major character changes to Peter as compared to the original book (the Peter in this movie is almost disgustingly polite). Also, the Lost Boys all go home in the end (save Peter, who, upon Wendy's request that he stay home with the Darlings, says 'No thank you. If we did, that would mean we'd have to grow up.' ('we' being a reference to Tinkerbell)). Mukino 17:15, 11 June 2007 (UTC)
Controversy
[edit]Since there are no references anyway, I shall remove the reference to critisms about sequeuls etc with out merging. If you want to add to the split off pages, please include refs.Obina 21:53, 6 September 2007 (UTC)
- Ok I kept the lost girls part there were some refs - put on sequels page.Obina 22:00, 6 September 2007 (UTC)
Rationale for indefinite pseudo-copyright
[edit]If this is in the article, sorry, but i believe it isn't. But anyway, what is the rationale for allowing the Hospital to collect royalties beyond what it would normally be entitled to? It doesn't seem appropriate, and it's hardly random, so I think the rationale would be very good to add. (Or if its already there, made clearer). Also, I assume everywhere else in the EU, it lapses into public domain on 2008-01-01, correct? - EstoyAquí(t • c • e) 21:54, 17 September 2007 (UTC)
- This answer may be a little late, but if you check the entry for James Callaghan, I think you will have your answer. --Phil Holmes 13:42, 12 November 2007 (UTC)
- Ah ok. Thanks.
But does anyone know if it has now lapsed into PD in the rest of the EU?- EstoyAquí(t • c • e) 22:34, 5 January 2008 (UTC)- Nm. It's in the article. - EstoyAquí(t • c • e) 22:35, 5 January 2008 (UTC)
- Ah ok. Thanks.
Disambiguation
[edit]Please see Talk:Peter Pan (disambiguation) to discuss how the title "Peter Pan" is disambiguated. - JasonAQuest 19:14, 3 December 2007 (UTC)
name change
[edit]This doesn't make sense. The most common name for this story is Peter Pan. Ask GOSH. Can't we reach agreement before we make this change?Obina (talk) 20:50, 9 December 2007 (UTC)
- I now see you discussed this somewhere else. Sorry I missed it. The right place to discuss was here though. I see you had one person agreeing with you and one not. Hmmm.Obina (talk) 20:55, 9 December 2007 (UTC)
- Reaching agreement before making any further changes would be a good idea. And can we discuss this without snide comments? The question affected more than one Peter Pan article, so Peter Pan (disambiguation) seemed the best place to discuss, and I put a note here pointing to it, so accusing me of hiding it is unfair. For the record, no one had disagreed when I made the move. "Ask GOSH" isn't a very convincing argument, especially since 3 weeks from now they won't even own the copyright anymore. But of course you're right that "Peter Pan" is a more common name for it... but it's also the most common name for the character, and I think it's pretty clear that more people know Peter Pan the character than know Peter Pan the play. - JasonAQuest (talk) 20:53, 10 December 2007 (UTC)
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Novel vs. Play
[edit]I disagree with the rewrite of the intro focusing on the novel. This is an article about both the play and the novel (since they are essentially the same work in two formats); the name of the novel is used for the article because it is shorter and simpler than the full name of the play, and to disambiguate it from the shorter name of the play ("Peter Pan"). Demoting the play to secondary status is especially inappropriate considering that it was the original. Finally details such as the color of the cover seem more like trivia to me, rather than something that belongs in the intro paragraph. - JasonAQuest (talk) 11:59, 11 September 2008 (UTC)
- While this is an article about the novel and the play the general reader wouldn't know that from the title of the article. Additionally, the infobox focuses on the novel rather than the play. I think the subject should be split into two articles: play and novel with a plot summary for the play divided into acts, photos of performers, behind the scenes information, genesis of the play, etc. IndianCaverns (talk) 15:54, 11 September 2008 (UTC)
- The title of the article is just the title. The opening sentence explains what the subject of the article is. (Or at least it used to.) Yes, it has an infobox which focuses too much on the novel; this should be fixed. Splitting this into separate articles about the play and the novel would be a bit like creating separate articles for the original theatrical release of Star Wars and the Special Edition DVD. PPOTBWWGU and P&W are the same story featuring the same characters, with a shared history and single author. One is simply the "home" version of the other (in the technology of its day). - JasonAQuest (talk) 20:38, 11 September 2008 (UTC)
Discussion of changes
[edit]Well, now the title of the article clearly needs to be fixed, something that might have been avoided with an actual discussion of the renaming before doing it. IndianCaverns, if it's not too much trouble, would you mind holding off on further edits until you've at least read Talk:Peter Pan (disambiguation) and WP:NAME? Hint: We don't tack "(play)" onto the end of an article title just because the subject is a play. Wikipedia conventions also call for common names to be used, not necessarily the most "correct" one (that people don't actually use much). Please consider that other people contributing here have their own ideas of how the information about Peter Pan should be organized, and it's not your place ignore all that, and redo things the way you think they should be done without first discussing it. Wikipedia operates on consensus, which is essential to resolving differences of opinion.
With that said, I'm going to reiterate my view that having a single article about both the play and novel - under the simple and well-known name of the novel - is the best way to provide information about them. They have far more information that is common to both forms of the story, and there is ample room in a single article to provide the remaining information that applies to just the book or just the play. Previous discussions have resulted in the decision that the article Peter Pan should be about the character, and that the simplest well-known name of the work of fiction - Peter and Wendy - should be about that work (both versions). Why should that consensus be tossed out? - JasonAQuest (talk) 01:20, 12 September 2008 (UTC)
- I moved the article name back the way it was. I think Jason explained this just right. I agree with Jason to keep the article called Peter and Wendy with a redirect from the name of the play, and the explanation of both of them and how they are related. We talked about this a lot a few months ago and several people agreed. Unless a bunch of other people also want to change those decisions we should stay with the way we decided it in those other discussions. --Linda (talk) 02:44, 12 September 2008 (UTC)
(Comments copied from User_talk:IndianCaverns): The article needs to be focused on either the play or the novel. since the play was the original it should probably go that way. Trying to discuss both play and novel in one article is confusing to the reader. It's like trying to combine a Star Wars movie and a novelization of the movie in one article. Doesn't work. While the novel should certainly be mentioned the focus should be upon the play with passing reference to its adaptations as novel, film, ballet, etc. Peter Pan (play) would be an appropriate title for the article if you're bent on "fixing" the title. Hope this helps! IndianCaverns (talk) 01:56, 12 September 2008 (UTC)
- Why does it need to be about just the play or just the novel? Why doesn't an article about both versions work? Relegating the novel to "passing reference" is just as inappropriate as your effort to do that to the play when you started editing the article. Both have served as "the original" for various people, with both stage/movie adaptations/sequels and prose adaptations/sequels taking their cues from either/both of them. (As for the analogy to the novelization of Star Wars, that was an obviously secondary literary work compared to the movie; Alan Dean Foster was a hired pen, not the story's creator. How the book was bound or who the cast were are bits of trivia, none of which are central to the topic of the story, which is the notable subject that justifies an article in Wikipedia.
- As for the suggestion of calling it Peter Pan (play), that would be fine if I agreed with your assumption that the play has to be covered in a separate article from the novel. I don't. Using Peter and Wendy as the title of this article was a compromise, one that has apparently failed to confuse many readers since it was agreed upon. - JasonAQuest (talk) 02:47, 12 September 2008 (UTC)
- This article shimmies back and forth between play and novel, leaving the general reader confused as to whether the author is talking about the play or the book. That's the problem with trying to juggle too many balls in one article. You've read the article over a million times and it's all very clear to you but for the reader who haps upon this article for the first itme, it is confusing. I think someone wants to handle the entire "Peter Pan mythos" in one lump-all article. It's not working. I'm not sure what the "Plot summary" is based upon -- the novel (as indicated in the title of the article) or the play, or both? At some point, it's mentioned Peter has all his baby teeth. Is that in both play and novel? In the play, Peter urges the audience to applaud to revive Tinkerbell. How is the moment handled in the novel? Perhaps a section called "Comparison between play and novel" or changing the title to Peter Pan (1904 play and 1911 novel) would bring some clarity to the proceedings. Well, I have done with the article. I am pissed that you've retained a lot of my work and deleted some material. You should delete all of my work and return the article to the edition before I stepped in. IndianCaverns (talk) 04:03, 12 September 2008 (UTC)
- Please don't feel bad about some of your work being changed. That happens all the time on Wikipedia. People are changing each other's writing constantly. That's how it works. We just can't take it personally or we'll always be sad about it. After a while, the work that you add will mix in with the work that other people add and the result will be better than one person can do by themselves.
- I like your idea about adding a section with the "Comparison between play and novel". That would make the article better. If you want to work on that, I'd like to see how it comes out. --Linda (talk) 04:21, 12 September 2008 (UTC)
- I think someone wants to handle the entire "Peter Pan mythos" in one lump-all article. That topic is currently covered by: 6 articles about the characters, 10 about written works, 10 about stage/screen adaptations, a "list of" article about a bunch more, about a dozen about the various people involved in the characters' creation and debut, and about 2 dramatizations of that history. 40 articles seems to be enough. - JasonAQuest (talk) 12:55, 12 September 2008 (UTC)
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Removal of "to die will be an awfully big adventure"
[edit]In the course of being trained as a London tourist guide, I was told that performances of Peter Pan after World War 1 omitted this line because of the likely presence in the audience of so many veterans returned from active service, where they saw so many of their friends and colleagues lost. Does anybody know if this is true? Shrdlu junction (talk) 22:08, 8 February 2009 (UTC)
- I can't find an actual reference to it skimming the book, but this review of Lisa Chaney's biography of JMB in New Statesman states that this happened. This is corroborated by this review, of another book in The NY Times and this review of Finding Neverland in The Guardian. - Jason A. Quest (talk) 00:26, 9 February 2009 (UTC)
Question for editors about copyright status
[edit]I found the info about the copyright status of Peter Pan interesting (I'm interested in issues of intellectual property), but missing from the article is whether Peter Pan's unusual status vis-a-vis an act of Parliament and the U.S. support of the same act, is, in fact, unusual. Does this kind of thing happen often, or is it something unique to Peter Pan, or at least highly unusual and occasioned by the sentimental and cultural status of the work?
The article explains the facts, but not the context.... —Preceding unsigned comment added by StrangeAttractor (talk • contribs) 04:57, 13 September 2009 (UTC)
The US does not support the British Copyright Designs & Patents Act of 1988 which by its nature is only applicable in the UK. The US had (and has) completely different copyright laws and the reason the play is still in copyright in the US is because its term runs from first date of publication (in this case 1928 for the play) which was extended to 95 years(term set by the Sony Bono Copyright Extension Act of 1998 for works published between 1923 and 1977). The act granting a right to royalty to GOSH in perpetuity in the UK is indeed unique to Peter Pan and very likely occasioned by its sentimental status and the special position the hospital holds in Britain. Lord Callaghan had closed connections with the hospital and was a lifelong supporter. —Preceding unsigned comment added by Stelmaris (talk • contribs) 15:40, 16 September 2009 (UTC)
Split novel vs. play
[edit]I do not agree with the recent move trying to split this article into two separate articles, one about the play and another about the novel. They are essentially one work, with the same characters, the same plot, and the same history and development. The novel is an adaptation by the playwright of the 1911 version of the stageplay, and for Wikipedia's purposes, it makes far more sense to cover them in a single article. -Jason A. Quest (talk) 00:34, 20 December 2011 (UTC)
- I beg to differ that the play is very similar to the book. The play is put into great disfavour by making it a sub-section of and sub-serviant to a so-called Peter and Wendy book. The play came long before the book, in fact 7 years earlier and is significant on its own . Here as we have it it is inferior to the book, with no unique identity and its right place in Wikipedia. It's not that we have limited space and have to conserve wasting pages. We have plenty for both articles. Why insist on one extremely long article under "book" appearance? Is it because the traditional editors prefer literature to plays? The book also added certain episodes that are not just found in the play. After all, a play, any play, is almost always significantly different from a book, which in this case came much later anyway. A play relies on exchanged conversations and physical acts, literature works are descriptive and in prose.It is very traditional and sane Wikipedia policy to give each type of work (literature vs theatre) its own distinctive presentation and space and not to discriminate so obviously in favour of a later book. Theatre work had its history, development, staging. So it is not just a question of just strict content either. Features that cannot be covered adequately if there is one specific "book-oriented" article: For example, just how many different plays have been running throughout the decades, who were the principal actors in each majour prodcution, who were the directors, the venues used, lengths they ran. Differences in approaches in the various productions done. These have nothing to do with a specific-year publication (1911) and more importantly have nothing to do with so-called "Peter and Wendy" book. Even if after discussion, they have to be merged, I simply insist on a different title giving equal weight to play and novel, like saying Peter Pan (play and novel) as title and both Peter and Wendy and play title directing to the more inclusive title and with adequate clear sections given to the play specificallywerldwayd (talk) 00:57, 20 December 2011 (UTC) werldwayd (talk) 00:59, 20 December 2011 (UTC) werldwayd (talk) 01:08, 20 December 2011 (UTC)
- You seem to be assuming that just because the article bears the title of the novel that it's about the novel, not the play. That is incorrect. It was kept as a single article covering the two forms of the work – after discussion – and that title was chosen – after discussion – because it is simpler and more commonly known than the full title of the play (which relatively few people know from memory), and serves as a convenient way to disambiguate the story from the character and the various other things called simply "Peter Pan". (See WP:COMMONNAME and WP:DISAMBIG for further guidance on this question.) You seem to be taking great offense that (in your perception) the play is getting short shrift because of this choice, and I'd suggest that when that happens you're losing your objectivity and need to take a step back. For example, your "insistence" on a different title is simply out of line.
- Most of the time when a work exists in two forms, that's the result of another creator taking a finished work and revising it to work in another medium. That is not the case here. The novel and the play were written by a single author in parallel, and are highly consistent with each other. In 1911, when JMB put the story into novel form, he was still revising the play, and many of the differences you may perceive between the two forms are simply the differences between the 1911 version of the story (published in novel form) and the 1928 version (published in stageplay form), both of which differ from the 1904 version staged at the Duke of York's. The plot is the same. The characters are the same. The influences that went into them are the same. Even their legacies are inextricably intertwined. If we were to write separate articles about the two forms, we'd have to duplicate most of that information, and when someone updated it in one article, someone would have to check the other to see if the same change would apply there. It'd be an inefficient and confusing way to organize common information.
- You're right of course that there is a great deal that can be written about the play that doesn't apply to the novel; entire books could be written about it, including the kinds of exhaustive reference databases you describe. Wikipedia is not intended to be that book, however. Just because it has unlimited space does not mean that space needs to be filled, and Wikipedia guidelines and policies make that point very clear. A Wikipedia article is a collection of the most important information about its subject, with links and references to more complete and thorough sources. I don't object to more information about the play being added here. However, I don't think that a list of principle actors, directors, venues, etc. for every major production in the past century (and counting) would be appropriate, because Wikipedia is not a database. -Jason A. Quest (talk) 02:37, 20 December 2011 (UTC)
- See this recent edit for an example of the duplication of information and effort this arrangement invites. -Jason A. Quest (talk) 17:08, 21 December 2011 (UTC)
I would agree with Jason A Quest's argument. Yet another Wiki entry relating to the story of Peter Pan is just superfluous, since the genesis of the play and novel were covered in 'Peter and Wendy'. It is the same story, by the same author, albeit with some minor differences. And Jason is quite right about the danger of duplication - and the opposite risk, that some details are added to one page and not to the other. (Although the recent split was helpful in highlighting some inaccuracies which had been missed out in the past.) I think we should go back to the previous single entry for play and novel, perhaps adding info about the play to balance it out.--Stelmaris (talk) 20:09, 21 December 2011 (UTC)
- I've restored the single article, incorporating the updates by user:Werldwayd. -Jason A. Quest (talk) 15:20, 22 December 2011 (UTC)
- To set the record straight, I have added now a play infobox, since this article is serving also the play, in addition to a clarifying disambiguation two-liner at the beginning of the article. Also the inclusion of the historic announcement of the launching of the 1904 play gives the article a more balanced impression and focus. werldwayd (talk) 20:31, 23 December 2011 (UTC)
- I express great satisfaction at the way things have turned out in this article, with a clear and fair introduction that gives equal weight to play and book. The intro is more representative of the two works and is so clear. With these new amendments, I think my somewhat "drastic" attempts did give a very satisfying result. I guess this is what they mean when they say "be bold" in Wikipedia. What remains now is a better historical presentation of the theatre works, specially the significant ones produced, but that can be done with time. werldwayd (talk) 04:30, 25 December 2011 (UTC)
- To set the record straight, I have added now a play infobox, since this article is serving also the play, in addition to a clarifying disambiguation two-liner at the beginning of the article. Also the inclusion of the historic announcement of the launching of the 1904 play gives the article a more balanced impression and focus. werldwayd (talk) 20:31, 23 December 2011 (UTC)
Punctuation in title of play
[edit]While I accept there may be a case for differentiating the title of the play from that of the novel, the current punctuation is far from ideal, as not only it isn't as written by Barrie, but it is grammatically incorrect: a semi-colon after just a name is wrong, and so is the comma after 'or' (at least in British English). If having the two titles already in bold is not enough in your view, perhaps putting the alternate title of the play in brackets after 'Peter Pan' would work?--ErikaJJ (talk) 16:24, 12 February 2012 (UTC)
- The grammatical rules of sentences cannot be directly applied to the title of a work of fiction; they are two different things. JMB didn't title his play Peter Pan or the Boy Who Wouldn't Grow Up, as if it were about a character who might be one or the other, like Glen or Glenda. Rather, the subtitle here is an appositive for the subject of the main title, much like Frankenstein; or, The Modern Prometheus. It's standard stylistic procedure to put some form of punctuation between a title and a subtitle, as demonstrated by the examples on Subtitle (titling). Since Barrie definitely did include "or" between them, a colon doesn't make much sense. I've never seen a subtitle put in brackets, and I don't think we should be inventing new styles. Personally, I'm happy to follow either Shelley's example or the one Tolkein used in The Hobbit, or There and Back Again. The semicolon-and-comma form was preferred by another editor, and is also the form used by Encyclopedia Britannica. -Jason A. Quest (talk) 17:17, 12 February 2012 (UTC)
Why does the crocodile tick?
[edit]There's no explanation. It's an easy fix, and worth the effort, but I don't remember the story well enough to do it correctly. I think that one independent clause would do it. Mad Hieronimo (talk) 07:15, 17 June 2012 (UTC)
"Mr Smee is an Irish nonconformist pirate"
[edit]This links to noncomformism, which states "a Protestant Christian who did not "conform" to the governance and usages of the established Church of England." If Mr Smee is Irish, why does he have anything to do with the established Church of England? --Richardson mcphillips (talk) 03:40, 20 April 2015 (UTC)
Probably because at the time the play was written (1904) and the novel published (1911), Ireland wasn't an independent country as the Republic wasn't established until a few years later. In this context, as Ireland was part of the UK, the Church of England would have been a general term used to designate the established Anglican church, whether in Ireland, Wales or Scotland, as opposed to the Catholic, Presbyterian or other Protestant denominations. --Stelmaris (talk) 07:38, 20 April 2015 (UTC)
Template message
[edit]This article has had a template message for more citations since December 2017. I think that it has enough citations. AprilShowersBringMayFlowers (talk) 16:00, 13 March 2018 (UTC)AprilShowersBringMayFlowers
You're right. The plot of the story doesn't need citations anyway and the rest has plenty. I'll remove the redundant message.--Stelmaris (talk) 20:42, 13 March 2018 (UTC)
Some notes on copyright status of the play script in the US
[edit]In a discussion elsewhere there were quite a few details dug up regarding the copyright status of the play script, so I thought I'd just add a note of them here for the benefit of anyone that might want to know about it in the future (or in case it's useful for the article itself).
The play script was published in New York in 1928 by Charles Scribner's Sons. A lot of US newspapers run the same profile on Barrie in March/April, possibly as PR before the publication, and the play was produced in New York in November/December some time (presumably based on the US publication of the script). When the script was published, Barrie already had a US agent representing him for licensing performance rights (it's listed in the published script): Charles Frohman's company (run by his brother and nephew I think), and Frohman had produced Peter Pan both in the UK and US (before his death in 1915).
The US publication included a copyright notice, and was registered with the copyright office in registration D85173 dated 26 October 1928, which date probably corresponds quite closely to the actual publication date. Based on UK newspaper notices, the UK edition by Hodder & Stoughton was published on the same date or very shortly afterwards (on the order of within a week).
Due to simultaneous publication in the US and UK, the script is treated as a US publication for copyright purposes and its US copyright status is not affected by URAA restoration or similar complicating factors. It is however still in copyright in the US due to renewal R171921 dated 4 June 1956. With one thing and another, this means it is in copyright in the US until 95 years from the end of the year of first publication: 1928 + 95 = 2023, meaning it will enter the public domain in the US on 1 January 2024.
Anyways, hopefully this can be useful to someone (or at least interesting, to copyright wonks). --Xover (talk) 15:21, 21 July 2020 (UTC)
- The article already covers this pretty well, I think. The 1928 version of the script is under US copyright for a few more years. However, the original script (copyright 1904) and the novel (copyright 1911) are not, so the characters, setting, plot, etc as found in those works are in the public domain. -Jason A. Quest (talk) 01:33, 22 July 2020 (UTC)
- Oh, yeah, I didn't mean to suggest this article needed changing. I was just dropping some info here in case was useful for someone. In particular, the specific copyright registrations / renewal was not mentioned anywhere, which made figuring out the copyright status a bit harder than it had to be. --Xover (talk) 13:13, 22 July 2020 (UTC)
Racism
[edit]Why can't the page just call the depiction of Native Americans racist? Even the Washington football team gave up on that name. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 2600:6C5A:457F:EE00:C9AE:E240:A0AA:2CAE (talk) 15:13, 28 August 2020 (UTC)
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[edit]Vguhnin 112.204.1.218 (talk) 08:17, 19 February 2022 (UTC)
- Add what specifically? MasterWolf0928-Æthelwulf (talk) 17:07, 9 August 2022 (UTC)
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why is Peter Pan always played by a woman?
[edit]interesting that Wendy's father and Captain Hook are traditionally played by the same actor. Perhaps there can be some info about the more conspicuous traditional casting choice that Peter Pan is always played by a woman? judging by the names this was the case from the very first stage production.
J Edward Malone (talk) 16:42, 30 October 2022 (UTC)
- Good point. I have added information about Peter's casting in the Stage Productions section. Stelmaris (talk) 14:39, 31 October 2022 (UTC)
Copyright (again)
[edit]The act talks about GOSH being entitled to royalties for performances of the play, but it's not clear if reprinting and republication of the book is similarly restricted. Robin S. Taylor (talk) 21:50, 11 February 2024 (UTC)
- GOSH cannot restrict either performances or publications, as Peter Pan is now out of copyright in the UK. They are however entitled to royalties (or remuneration, as the act states) for these. Publications (either new editions or reprints) are covered by the act as it specifies that remuneration is due on any performance and adaptations of the play. Since the novel published in 1911 is in effect an adaptation of the play, as would be subsequent editions and versions of the story, GOSH would be entitled to royalties. This would apply to film versions of the story and audiobooks, but not merchandising, quotes or excerpts. Stelmaris (talk) 08:10, 12 February 2024 (UTC)
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