Talk:Ohio State Route 253
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- This review is transcluded from Talk:Ohio State Route 253/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: --PCB 00:38, 23 February 2011 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (references):
b (citations to reliable sources):
c (OR):
- Why are some highway maps official and others not?
- a (references):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects):
b (focused):
- a (major aspects):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):
b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- I will put the article on hold for the prose issues listed below.
- Pass/Fail:
Lead:
- I don't think you need to include the OH 253 abbreviation if it's not used in the article. Please correct me if I'm wrong.
- Perhaps include the length in the first sentence instead of the last.
- Maybe you should split the history summary in the lead into two sentences, one describing the first part and one for the second.
Route description:
- Maybe it's just me, but "commences" usually refers to a time event.
- I think you should reword "picking up where KY 10 left off." It sounds silly to me.
- "The highway exits the bridge via its eastern approach, then soon after, crosses a bridge over the Norfolk Southern Railway line." This sentence has several issues. "Then soon after" should somehow be replaced, or the sentence should be split. Exiting a bridge via an eastern approach sounds confusing, perhaps you shuld reword it a little.
- Why is the end abrupt?
- Are traffic counts given most often in terms of AADT or always?
History:
- The word "iteration" is uncommon and used twice, perhaps you should find a synonym for one instance.
- The second sentence of the first paragraph is pretty long. I think you should split it up into 2 sentences.
Other:
- Any sites for possible external links?
- Any other categories? Is there a category for Scioto County?--PCB 00:57, 23 February 2011 (UTC)
- I think all the issues have been addressed and the article is now ready to pass. --PCB 23:29, 24 February 2011 (UTC)
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