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Overall, it was a good article with a pertinent description. I would just mention what a krater is used for, and some more specific painting techniques that were used to make the pot.

Cscameron (talk) 22:03, 6 November 2017 (UTC)Carson Cameron[reply]

Sunni's Comment

Hi Ryan, your article looks good so far! I do think you need to add in your citations soon because I need to know you can correctly cite your sources. I enjoy that you've included both the A side and B side, but I do think you could add more about the Dolon Painter in there as well. You could also talk about the characteristics of Lucanian red-figure vases, particularly calyx-kraters. You could also talk about the artistic details of this krater, and how the Dolon Painter uses them to enhance the composition. Keep working, you can do it! Sunniobrien (talk) 22:22, 14 November 2017 (UTC)Sunni O'Brien[reply]

Comments from Prof. Paga

Hi Ryan - this is a solid start! You've got some good comments from Sunni already which I encourage you to answer/address, and here are a few of my own suggestions.

Make sure to proofread your article carefully.
You need to have a full bibliography with integrated sources. This is an important aspect of Wikipedia articles and without this, your article will likely be deleted.
Add another section or two, perhaps on the use of kraters or about the particular scene. Remember that you need to clearly connect your article to your group's theme of Death in Ancient Greek Art, so think about how you can use your article to highlight this theme.

Jpaga (talk) 16:42, 2 December 2017 (UTC)[reply]