Talk:Mike Cannon-Brookes
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"Early life"
[edit]"Early life" paragraph doesn't make grammatical sense. I'd edit it, but I can't figure out the meaning... 71.139.160.146 (talk) 00:44, 25 July 2016 (UTC)
- It should now be clearer. Edwardx (talk) 09:23, 25 July 2016 (UTC)
Career
[edit]The "Career" section needs a little more information between a startup on credit cards and being worth several billion a couple of decades later. Errantios (talk) 07:46, 30 March 2024 (UTC)
- I'm gathering some information from independent sources (I was initially looking at the Scott Farquhar article but they overlap) and will likely add information once I get it organized a bit. Amplexer (talk) 03:35, 31 March 2024 (UTC)
- OK, I added some of the most relevant intervening details per citations that I could find. The article still needs work but at least it is improved now. Amplexer (talk) 02:42, 13 April 2024 (UTC)
Personal life
[edit]In the "Personal life" section, the first sentence doesn't make grammatical sense.
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Ceswyd (talk) 05:32, 22 April 2024 (UTC)
Overview
[edit]The ‘Overview’ section is out of date, with missing context surrounding Cannon-Brookes' (and Scott Farquhar's) milestone as Australia's first technology billionaires. Suggest adding, with below source, after the first paragraph.
Context around Cannon-Brookes' vocal advocacy for action to combat climate change and significant investment in climate projects is also missing, suggest inclusion as per below source. Suggest adding after above paragraph.
The existing information in the article relating to the Australian-Asia Power Link is out of date, and doesn’t fit in the Overview section. Suggest removal from this section, and building out an updated ‘Other activities’ section that improves the accuracy of references to Cannon-Brookes' climate project ventures in this article.
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Cannon-Brookes and Farquhar were Australia’s first technology billionaires.[1] |
- Reason for the change: Additional insight into Cannon-Brookes' position within the tech and business industry in Australia.
- Reference supporting change: https://www.nytimes.com/2019/02/13/technology/atlassian-cannon-brookes-farquhar.html (see source reference).
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Cannon-Brookes is an advocate for combatting climate change and a major investor in green projects. He has pledged to donate and invest AUD$1.5 billion on climate projects by 2030.[2] |
- Reason for the change: Additional insight into Cannon-Brookes' significant investment in projects to combat climate change
- Reference supporting change: https://www.smh.com.au/environment/climate-change/mike-cannon-brookes-pledges-1-5b-to-climate-initiatives-ahead-of-cop26-20211020-p591p5.html (see source reference above).
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Since 2018, he has been involved in the Australia-Asia Power Link, a huge electricity infrastructure project to be developed in the Northern Territory by Sun Cable in a collaboration with Twiggy Forrest. |
- Reason for the change: The information relating to the Australian-Asia Power Link is out of date and doesn’t fit in the Overview section. Suggest removal from this section, and building out an updated ‘Other activities’ section that improves the accuracy of references to Cannon-Brookes' climate project ventures in this article.
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Ceswyd (talk) 07:19, 23 April 2024 (UTC)
- I'm not sure about this change.
Cannon-Brookes is one of Australia’s most vocal advocates for more urgent action to combat climate change, and has pledged to donate and invest AUD$1.5 billion on climate projects by 2030
- The first part of the sentence doesn't sound encyclopedic and also I didn't find these exact words in the SMH article. I would either lose it or tone it down (e.g., "Cannon-Brooks is a an advocate for combatting climate change and a major investor in green projects. He has pledged..."). Alaexis¿question? 08:52, 10 May 2024 (UTC)
- Thanks @Alaexis - really helpful. I agree and will edit the request to reflect your suggestion. Should I make this change within the original request above? Or create a new request? Ceswyd (talk) 01:03, 13 May 2024 (UTC)
- I have applied your suggested edit to the request above. Ceswyd (talk) 07:30, 17 May 2024 (UTC)
- @Alaexis - I have made the change you've suggested and updated the final section to match the source format. The other requests follow the format prescribed in the Wikipedia paid edit requests policies. Do you need me to make any further changes or additions to assist in helping to have these edit requests reviewed and applied? Ceswyd (talk) 08:02, 5 June 2024 (UTC)
- @Alaexis - I have updated this section to include ready-to-use content with source formatting and inline references. Ceswyd (talk) 02:17, 17 June 2024 (UTC)
- Hey, I've added the content you prepared to the article. I've made some minor changes to make it more encyclopedic and removed content that isn't notable in my view. Alaexis¿question? 19:43, 28 June 2024 (UTC)
- @Alaexis - I have updated this section to include ready-to-use content with source formatting and inline references. Ceswyd (talk) 02:17, 17 June 2024 (UTC)
- @Alaexis - I have made the change you've suggested and updated the final section to match the source format. The other requests follow the format prescribed in the Wikipedia paid edit requests policies. Do you need me to make any further changes or additions to assist in helping to have these edit requests reviewed and applied? Ceswyd (talk) 08:02, 5 June 2024 (UTC)
- I have applied your suggested edit to the request above. Ceswyd (talk) 07:30, 17 May 2024 (UTC)
- Thanks @Alaexis - really helpful. I agree and will edit the request to reflect your suggestion. Should I make this change within the original request above? Or create a new request? Ceswyd (talk) 01:03, 13 May 2024 (UTC)
References
- ^ Bowles, Nellie (13 February 2019). "The Strange Experience of Being Australia's First Tech Billionaires". The New York Times. Archived from the original on 13 February 2019.
- ^ O'Malley, Nick (21 October 2021). "Mike Cannon-Brookes pledges $1.5b to climate initiatives ahead of COP26". The Sydney Morning Herald. Archived from the original on 20 October 2021.
Career
[edit]In the ‘Career’ section, the information on the Atlassian business is out of date. Propose additional information is added to provide an accurate update on the Atlassian business size as of 2024.
This section is also missing further detail on Cannon-Brooke’s previous tech business which he founded, then sold in 2000, and his board positions.
Information relating to SunCable is a separate venture, suggest moving it to an updated 'Other activities' section that improves the accuracy of references to Cannon-Brookes' climate project ventures in this article.
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Atlassian has grown to 12 offices and 300,000 customers.[1][2] |
- Reason for the change: Updated information about the current size/scale of Atlassian.
- References supporting change: https://www.forbes.com/sites/lisaconn/2023/10/24/the-future-of-work-is-flexible-just-ask-atlassian/?sh=3256581e4759, https://www.reuters.com/technology/atlassian-second-quarter-revenue-profit-beat-estimates-2024-02-02/ (see source references above).
- Not done, this page is about Cannon-Brookes not Atlassian. If this provided useful context for his life it'd be fine but I don't see anything this contextualizes. Rusalkii (talk) 20:57, 18 August 2024 (UTC)
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Before founding Atlassian, Cannon-Brookes co-founded an internet bookmark management tool called The Bookmark Box with his university classmate Niki Scevak. The Bookmark Box was sold to Blink.com [1] in 2000.[3] |
- Reason for the change: Additional insight into Cannon-Brookes' previous tech business which he founded, then sold in 2000.
- Reference supporting change: https://www.smh.com.au/technology/how-atlassians-scott-farquhar-and-mike-cannonbrookes-became-software-titans-20140725-zwo3x.html (see source reference above).
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Boards
Cannon-Brookes is on the Board of Directors for Room to Read [2] globally and regionally, and Chairman of Blackbird Ventures.[4] |
- Reason for change: Additional detail on Cannon-Brookes' Board positions.
- References supporting change: https://www.roomtoread.org/leadership-board/board-of-directors/, https://www.smh.com.au/business/small-business/blackbird-raises-500m-fund-taps-cannon-brookes-to-drive-expansion-20200804-p55ia5.html (see source references above).
- Partly done no need for a separate section. I'd want to see independent coverage of the Room to Read position to make sure it's WP:DUEWEIGHT. I've added the Blackbird position to the career section. Rusalkii (talk) 20:57, 18 August 2024 (UTC)
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In March 2022, Cannon-Brookes and billionaire Andrew Forrest invested in the Sun Cable project, to build a solar and battery farm 12,000 hectares (120 km2) in size at Powell Creek, Northern Territory, and a power-cable to link it to Singapore (via Indonesia) leaving Australia at Murrumujuk beach. In January 2023, Sun Cable went into administration owing to disagreements between Cannon-Brookes and Forrest, and in May 2023, Cannon-Brookes' company Grok Ventures outbid Forrest and others to buy the liquidated company. |
- Reason for the change: Information relating to SunCable is a separate venture, suggest moving it to an updated 'Other activities' section that improves the accuracy of references to Cannon-Brookes' climate project ventures in this article.
- Done, it was already duplicated in that section. Rusalkii (talk) 20:57, 18 August 2024 (UTC)
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Ceswyd (talk) 14:35, 24 April 2024 (UTC)
References
- ^ Conn, Lisa (24 October 2023). "The Future Of Work Is Flexible. Just Ask Atlassian". Forbes. Archived from the original on 23 April 2024.
- ^ "Atlassian second-quarter revenue, profit beat estimates". Reuters. 2 February 2024. Archived from the original on 23 April 2024.
- ^ Fitzsimmons, Caitlin (24 October 2023). "How Atlassian's Scott Farquhar and Mike Cannon-Brookes became software titans". The Sydney Morning Herald. Archived from the original on 6 November 2018.
- ^ Waters, Cara (4 August 2020). "Blackbird raises $500m fund, taps Cannon-Brookes to drive expansion". Reuters. Archived from the original on 6 August 2020.
Other activities
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Cannon-Brookes is an adjunct professor at the University of New South Wales' School of Computer Science and Engineering. He is a co-owner in the Utah Jazz and owns a stake in the South Sydney Rabbitohs, the latter who he grew up being a fan of. Cannon-Brookes is a major investor in Australian publicly listed energy company AGL, having planned to take it over in 2022. When that failed, he became the largest shareholder to stop a demerger from spinning out coal power plants. In September 2020, it was revealed that Cannon-Brookes was among 35,000 Australians listed on a Chinese Government "Overseas Key Individuals Database" of prominent international individuals of interest for China. |
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Climate
Cannon-Brookes is one of Australia’s most vocal advocates for more urgent action to address climate change, and believes that the country should be a renewable energy superpower.[1] In March 2017, following a series of power outages in South Australia, Cannon-Brookes challenged Tesla CEO Elon Musk on Twitter to deliver the Hornsdale Power Reserve Battery - the world’s biggest lithium-ion battery, within 100 days to solve the state’s energy problems.[2] In October 2021, Cannon-Brookes pledged to donate and invest $1.5 billion on climate projects by 2030 to reinforce the COP26 goal of limiting global warming to 1.5 degrees above pre-industrial levels.[3] Grok Ventures Cannon-Brookes started Grok Ventures in 2016 as a private investing vehicle. In February 2024, it was announced that Grok Ventures had appointed Tan Kueh as CEO, and that the organisation was accepting third party capital to drive a bigger impact on climate change.[4] Grok Ventures is focused on climate tech, venture and infrastructure, and lighthouse investments. In March 2022, Cannon-Brookes (through Grok Ventures) and billionaire Andrew Forrest invested in the Sun Cable project, to build a solar and battery farm 12,000 hectares (120 km2) in size at Powell Creek, Northern Territory, and a power-cable to link it to Singapore (via Indonesia) leaving Australia at Murrumujuk beach. In January 2023, Sun Cable went into administration owing to disagreements between Cannon-Brookes and Forrest, and in May 2023, Grok Ventures outbid Forrest and others to buy the liquidated company. In 2023, Grok Ventures purchased a majority stake in Australian publicly listed energy company AGL, Australia’s largest greenhouse gas emitter, in a move to force the company to de-carbonise more quickly. Sports[edit]In December 2020, Cannon-Brookes bought a minority stake in NBA team Utah Jazz, along with Qualtrics co-founder Ryan Smith. In November 2021, Cannon-Brookes bought a one-third share of Blackcourt League Investments. Blackcourt owns 75% of the Australian Rugby League team, the South Sydney Rabbitohs.[5][6] Other Cannon-Brookes is an adjunct professor at the University of New South Wales' School of Computer Science and Engineering.[7] In September 2020, it was revealed that Cannon-Brookes was listed on a Chinese Government "Overseas Key Individuals Database" of prominent international individuals of interest for China. In June 2017, Cannon-Brookes hosted a TEDx talk on Imposter Syndrome. [8] |
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Ceswyd (talk) 14:25, 24 April 2024 (UTC)
- Done As far as I can tell this was pretty much entirely implemented. I have not added the promotional text of the first sentence and added Grok Ventures as a separate section.
- Rusalkii (talk) 02:52, 28 August 2024 (UTC)
References
- ^ Gunia, Amy (7 October 2021). "Tech Billionaire Mike Cannon-Brookes on How Australia Could Become a Renewable Energy Superpower". Time (magazine). Archived from the original on 7 October 2021.
- ^ "Elon Musk & Cannon-Brookes Twitter/X exchange". X (social network). 10 March 2017.
- ^ O'Malley, Nick (21 October 2021). "Mike Cannon-Brookes pledges $1.5b to climate initiatives ahead of COP26". Sydney Morning Herald. Archived from the original on 23 April 2024.
- ^ Packham, Colin (9 February 2024). "Billionaire Mike Cannon-Brookes goes all-in on climate investments". The Australian.
- ^ "Mike Cannon-Brookes purchases one-third share of Blackcourt League Investments". South Sydney Rabbitohs. 15 Nov 2021.
- ^ Malone, Ursula (21 October 2021). "Tech billionaire Mike Cannon-Brookes buys stake in South Sydney Rabbitohs". ABC News (Australia). Archived from the original on 15 November 2021.
- ^ Gilmore, Heath (9 October 2014). "UNSW taps Ori Allon, Mike Cannon-Brookes to nurture start-up culture". Sydney Morning Herald. Archived from the original on 20 October 2019.
- ^ "Imposter Syndrome: Mike Cannon-Brookes, TEDxSydney 2017". 16 June 2017.
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