Talk:Malta Philharmonic Orchestra
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[edit]While it was very good to see this article expanded from a stub, some of the edits were not helpful:
- 1. The original references were removed
- 2. The link to the article on the Russian Wikipedia (Мальтийский филармонический оркестр) was removed
- 3. All the categories were removed
These have now been re-added. I have also re-structured the new version to conform to the Wikipedia Manual of Style, including a lead paragraph, and have copy-edited the text for idiomatic English and to restore encyclopedic tone. In parts, the expanded article had read like a promotional brochure for the orchestra and contained inappropriate expressions like "beyond our shores", i.e. outside Malta. I have also remedied the over-linking within the article. A note to the editor who expanded the article (User:Maltaorchestra). Your user name suggests a possible conflict of interest. If you are connected in any way with the orchestra, it would be a good idea to read Wikipedia:Conflict of interest for guidance when editing under these circumstances. Best wishes, Voceditenore (talk) 07:09, 9 January 2010 (UTC)