Talk:Madison Kocian

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GA Review

Passed. Kimikel (talk) 22:30, 5 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.

This review is transcluded from Talk:Madison Kocian/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Nominator: Riley1012 (talk · contribs) 22:28, 3 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: Kimikel (talk · contribs) 23:21, 4 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hello @Riley1012: please see my review below. Good work, just some suggestions below to consider implementing. I found an issue with sourcing in the spotcheck below so I'll do another one after you have a chance to respond to this review. Please let me know if there are any issues with my comments. Thank you. Kimikel (talk) 23:21, 4 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Kimikel: Okay, thank you. I believe I have addressed everything. -Riley1012 (talk) 21:49, 5 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Riley1012: Just went through again and after reviewing it, there's nothing amiss. Thank you for your quick responses, and congratulations! Kimikel (talk) 22:30, 5 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Well-written

Woga Classic is wikilinked 6 times throughout this article, just once would suffice. same with the U.S. Classic, the City of Jesolo Trophy, Ashton Locklear, etc.

Done

Early life

"whom Kocian has" > who Kocian

Done

Junior elite career

"Then at the City of Jesolo Trophy" > remove then

Done

Senior elite career

"vault and uneven bars where" > the vault and the uneven bars, where
"Then at the U.S. Classic," > remove then
"Then at the U.S. Championships" > remove then
wikilink floor exercise

"she again finished second to Locklear on the uneven bars, and she placed fifth on the balance beam."> she again finished second to Locklear on the uneven bars and also placed fifth on the balance beam.

"rule with Biles" > rule, with Biles
wikilink radius
"at the U.S. Classic competing only" > at the U.S. Classic, competing only
"Then at the U.S. Championships" > remove then
"a first-ever four-way" > an unprecedented four-way
"Russians Viktoria Komova and Daria Spiridonova," > Russians Viktoria Komova, Daria Spiridonova,
"National Team members attended" > National Team members, attended
"Olympic-hopefuls" > Olympic hopefuls
"Then at the U.S. Olympic Trials" > remove then

All Done

College career

wikilink labrum
"competing on only balance beam" > competing only on the balance beam
"PAC-12 Championships" > Pac-12 Championships
"at the BYU, Utah State tri-meet" > at a tri-meet with BYU and Utah State, / also wikilink BYU and Utah State
"She was nominated by UCLA for the NCAA Woman of the Year Award." > worth mentioning the result
"at Baylor College of Medicine" > at the Baylor College of Medicine

All Done

Personal life

This section looks a little anemic. I would consider adding Kocian's comments about refusing to return to elite competition at the bottom of [1], since I think it's worth noting and would flesh out that section a little more

Done I added some more information I found.

Verifiable

The fact that her middle name is Taylor is never sourced anywhere
The coaches listed in her infobox aren't sourced anywhere and don't appear in the article

Done

Spot check

73: Verified
40: Doesn't mention gold medals

Done

16: Verified
32: Verified
80: Verified

Neutral, Broad, Stable, Illustrated

All good in these categories. Images' licenses are all properly tagged.

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