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Good articleHMS Pomone (1897) has been listed as one of the Warfare good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
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DateProcessResult
January 2, 2011Good article nomineeListed

GA Review

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This review is transcluded from Talk:HMS Pomone (1897)/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: CrowzRSA 23:00, 26 December 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • These "Third class" cruisers were designed I'm not sure, but shouldn't "Third" be in lowercase?
    • Indeed. Fixed.
  • There is inconsistency between spelling out single digit numbers and using numerals for single digit numbers.
    • The conversion template doesn't allow for numbers to be spelled out. Plus I'm using numerals for all hyphenated measurements like 4-inch.
  • The lead should be expanded.
    • Again, not much to work with here. What else do you think can be added?

That's all I see. I'm putting the article on hold for a week. CrowzRSA 01:41, 2 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]