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  • 19:1019:10, 23 September 2024 diff hist −13 Conquest of the Canary Islands top: "and described" is unclear and makes it sound like its missing "is" or "has been" or "can be". Also, I think combining the two periods into the lead sentence flowed a bit more slowly, since it describes the nature of the article's subject itself instead of a categorization of the subject.
  • 18:5318:53, 23 September 2024 diff hist 0 m Israel–Hamas war top: removing a semicolon I accidentally left when splitting the sentence these used to all be combined into
  • 18:5218:52, 23 September 2024 diff hist +154 Israel–Hamas war top: "axis of resistance" is an informal term that doesn't refer to an agreed-upon or organized set of actors. It also notably is not always described as including Hamas. I kept it in as a link though because I don't want to unilaterally completely override the previous decision to include it.

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  • 21:1121:11, 12 September 2024 diff hist +82 Pax Britannica top: previous lead sentence had several problems. 1: it said pax britannica was the time period itself instead of referring specifically to the peace between great powers. 4: not mentioning Britain until the next sentence excludes its critical part of the direct definition. 3: Saying it was the period of relative peace between great powers is very vague and doesn't specify a time period except for through the link. Changed to better match content in article. Not sure if "roughly" is needed.

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  • 16:1816:18, 30 August 2024 diff hist −13 Tamale top: Previous link was for "nacatamal", which didn't explicitly contained the information cited. This link is for the word "tamal" itself and contains the corresponding information.

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