User contributions for Pam-javelin

2 May 2018

• 15:5815:58, 2 May 2018 diff hist −73 Star Trek: Nemesis →Plot: Tweaking article.
• 15:5215:52, 2 May 2018 diff hist −59 Star Trek: Nemesis Irrelevance removed.
• 15:1615:16, 2 May 2018 diff hist −35 Attack on USNS Card →Background: Not needed.
• 15:1515:15, 2 May 2018 diff hist −17 Attack on USNS Card →Background: Keep it factual and neutral.
• 13:2913:29, 2 May 2018 diff hist +1 Pima Air & Space Museum →History: Built rather than made.
• 12:2412:24, 2 May 2018 diff hist 0 Fifth Doctor →Appearances: Capitals not needed.

27 April 2018

• 07:0807:08, 27 April 2018 diff hist −8 USS Ranger (CV-61) Past tense in 2018.
• 05:2705:27, 27 April 2018 diff hist 0 USS Independence (CV-62) Switched words around.
• 05:2505:25, 27 April 2018 diff hist −18 Phalanx CIWS GD only needed for info box.
• 05:2505:25, 27 April 2018 diff hist −14 Phalanx CIWS GD only needed for info box.

26 April 2018

• 10:3210:32, 26 April 2018 diff hist −100 HMS Belfast No citations plus now in 2018.
• 09:3009:30, 26 April 2018 diff hist 0 Kobben-class submarine →History: Transferred.

25 April 2018

• 06:2806:28, 25 April 2018 diff hist +6 UC3 Nautilus →Specifications: Correction carried out.
• 06:2706:27, 25 April 2018 diff hist −63 UC3 Nautilus →Specifications: Why would it be armed plus it was crowdfunded?
• 05:3005:30, 25 April 2018 diff hist 0 Gerry Anderson →1980s: Past tense.
• 05:2005:20, 25 April 2018 diff hist −168 Supermarionation →Anderson's "Supermarionated" television shows: No citation so removed.

24 April 2018

• 11:1411:14, 24 April 2018 diff hist 0 Miranda (TV series) →Premise: British English required.
• 11:1111:11, 24 April 2018 diff hist −692 Mel and Sue →1990s: |Name dropping removed as irrelevant to the article
• 11:0011:00, 24 April 2018 diff hist −4 The Sweeney →Popular culture: Keep article neutral.

23 April 2018

• 05:3605:36, 23 April 2018 diff hist −5 John Thaw →Illness and death
• 05:3505:35, 23 April 2018 diff hist −16 John Thaw →Career: Keep it factual and neutral.
• 05:3305:33, 23 April 2018 diff hist −50 John Thaw →Early life: Lots of famous actors were there at that time but nothing to do with the article on Thaw.
• 05:3205:32, 23 April 2018 diff hist −104 Sheila Hancock →Personal life: Irrelevance to Thaw and Hancock removed.
• 05:1805:18, 23 April 2018 diff hist 0 Queen Elizabeth-class aircraft carrier The BBC show stated that 25 knots was the designed speed required for the contract and top speed of the ships designed had not been attained at that point.

18 April 2018

• 14:2914:29, 18 April 2018 diff hist −10 Airliner Number 4 Add on removed.

17 April 2018

• 17:4217:42, 17 April 2018 diff hist 0 Concorde →British Airways buys its Concordes outright: British English required for British Airways.
• 16:4016:40, 17 April 2018 diff hist 0 The Waters of Mars →Plot: British English required.
• 16:3616:36, 17 April 2018 diff hist −17 Robert Pattinson →Personal life: Rubbish removed.
• 16:3516:35, 17 April 2018 diff hist −4 Robert Pattinson →Personal life: Keep to the point and do not use nicknames.
• 16:3516:35, 17 April 2018 diff hist −53 Jack Whitehall →Early life and education: Keep factual.
• 16:2416:24, 17 April 2018 diff hist −245 Shooting Fish →Reception: Keep the factual relevant items are reduce duplication.
• 16:2216:22, 17 April 2018 diff hist 0 Tom Chadbon British English.
• 16:0916:09, 17 April 2018 diff hist +5 2016 Prime Minister's Resignation Honours Incoming rather than new.
• 13:3113:31, 17 April 2018 diff hist −9 Great Cumberland Place They are all quite old in London.

16 April 2018

• 12:5012:50, 16 April 2018 diff hist 0 Airbus A350 →A350-1000: Spelling correction.

12 April 2018

• 07:4007:40, 12 April 2018 diff hist −4 Doctor Who series 1 →Writing: Keep it factual.
• 06:2206:22, 12 April 2018 diff hist +4 Royal Navy →Surface fleet: Normally over 1000ft and nuclear powered.

6 April 2018

• 15:0715:07, 6 April 2018 diff hist −370 Daniel Day-Lewis →Early life: Irrelevant picture removed as

29 March 2018

• 10:2210:22, 29 March 2018 diff hist 0 AgustaWestland AW159 Wildcat →Development: British English used for UK article.
• 10:0810:08, 29 March 2018 diff hist −10,074 User talk:Pam-javelin ←Blanked the page Tag: Blanking

5 March 2018

• 13:1513:15, 5 March 2018 diff hist +332 Talk:HMS Ocean (L12) →Sale to Brazil: Reply.
• 13:1313:13, 5 March 2018 diff hist +116 User talk:Pam-javelin →Please read: Reply.

20 February 2018

• 20:3820:38, 20 February 2018 diff hist −2 HMS Ocean (L12) →Background: Fixed grammar, Still too much "she" in the article and you achieve at top speed not manage when on sea trials. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit

18 February 2018

• 17:5817:58, 18 February 2018 diff hist 0 Elecon Engineering Fixed grammar, Old ex-British Empire countries like India use British English. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit
• 17:5017:50, 18 February 2018 diff hist +13 HMS Ocean (L12) →2011–2018: Ocean would not have been moored at Greenwich - the correct terminology would have been "positioned" as she was on active military service during the 2012 Games. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit
• 17:4517:45, 18 February 2018 diff hist −4 HMS Ocean (L12) →Background: Again, this ship was brand new on trials and the wording should at least be "achieved" instead of "managed" as that describes a ship struggling to reach her top speed. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit
• 16:4116:41, 18 February 2018 diff hist −8 Bylaugh Hall →Later history: Fixed grammar Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit
• 16:4016:40, 18 February 2018 diff hist −10 Bylaugh Hall →Present use: Fixed grammar Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit
• 15:5915:59, 18 February 2018 diff hist +6 Thirteenth Doctor →Costume: Have the BBC PC Brigade been altering the truth ( just like in the 12th Doctors historical Earth stories in series 10)? Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit
• 15:5115:51, 18 February 2018 diff hist −217 Twice Upon a Time (Doctor Who) Davis and Chibnall info nothing to do with this final story for the 12th Doctor. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit