User contributions for MLHinCLE
A user with 62 edits. Account created on 24 October 2017.
15 June 2024
- 04:4504:45, 15 June 2024 diff hist +1 Qurban (Islamic ritual sacrifice) →Stipulations of qurban: Pluralized the predicate noun, harmonizing it with the plural subject. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
20 February 2024
- 19:2019:20, 20 February 2024 diff hist −5 Saccidananda Ashram →Description: Minor edit: replaced archaic idiom with modern, without suffering any loss of tone, mood, or content (denotative or connotative), while markedly improving readability. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
14 February 2024
- 05:5105:51, 14 February 2024 diff hist +30 Ancient history Altered idiom to parallelize (original) "beginning with" verbiage. N.B.: there was an already-extant failure of sentence to provide clear, understandable information that this syntactical change wasn't meant to, and doesn't, address. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 05:2105:21, 14 February 2024 diff hist −13 Ancient history Parallelized construction of first sentence by removing "as far as" verbiage and adding "through," so that "from" phrase was followed by "through" phrase. The change was syntactical; no semantic change was involved. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 05:0805:08, 14 February 2024 diff hist 0 Ancient history Corrected spelling of "until" (from "till") and removed errant, preceding comma. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 01:3101:31, 14 February 2024 diff hist +11 Casting (performing arts) →Casting process: Moved comma to its proper spot and added em dashes to make parenthetical clause clearer and sentence more readable. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
30 November 2023
- 02:5702:57, 30 November 2023 diff hist +847 Talk:Speed limit →Footnote 1 irrelevant to material needing support: new section Tag: New topic
4 February 2023
- 12:4512:45, 4 February 2023 diff hist 0 m Ristretto Changed "like" to standard type, leaving "look" italicized; this conforms better to the objective intent of the writer.
10 January 2023
- 15:5215:52, 10 January 2023 diff hist −3 m Aseem Malhotra deleted first "be" from "should be not be eaten"
25 October 2022
- 08:3908:39, 25 October 2022 diff hist −1 m Anabaptism →Beliefs and practices: Second paragraph, first sentence, final clause: "off" changed to "of," as is required and, surely, was intended.
13 January 2022
- 01:4301:43, 13 January 2022 diff hist −1 m Video game piracy Fixed spacing by removing extra carriage return. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 01:4201:42, 13 January 2022 diff hist 0 m Video game piracy Corrected spelling of "appearin" to "appearing." Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 01:4101:41, 13 January 2022 diff hist −12 m Video game piracy (1) Shortened and otherwise modified idiom of "Around this time in the 1980s, pirated copies of games became associated with crack intros," and (2) with immediately-following (unchanged) sentences, created a new paragraph. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
30 November 2021
- 17:3017:30, 30 November 2021 diff hist −2 m Real ID Act →Implementation progress: eliminated two unnecessary, distracting commas
12 November 2021
- 23:4823:48, 12 November 2021 diff hist −9 m Ngari Prefecture →History: Restructured the second sentence of the second paragraph to eliminate redundant wording, simplify the structure, and make it easier to parse. Tag: Reverted
9 October 2021
- 20:1320:13, 9 October 2021 diff hist +10 m Discord Inserted word left out of my previous edit. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 20:1220:12, 9 October 2021 diff hist −6 m Discord Clarified confusing verbiage without altering meaning. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 20:0820:08, 9 October 2021 diff hist −14 m Discord Removed comma and made non-substantive changes to cumbersome idiom. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 18:0118:01, 9 October 2021 diff hist −2 m Discord Corrected pronoun "they" to "it" to agree with antecedent noun, "company" (used in the sense of an incorporated entity, not an assemblage). Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 17:5617:56, 9 October 2021 diff hist +5 m Discord Harmonized tense, changing "stated" to "had stated" and "is" to "was." Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
10 September 2021
- 04:2904:29, 10 September 2021 diff hist −101 m Mayoral elections in Albany, New York Condensed first two sentences into a single, more readable sentence.
- 04:1904:19, 10 September 2021 diff hist −3 m Mayoral elections in Albany, New York Corrected "to election" to "to elect."
18 July 2021
- 23:3323:33, 18 July 2021 diff hist +1 m Halakha →Flexibility: corrected grammar by changing "the issue is passed onto" to "the issue is passed on to"
18 September 2020
- 23:5123:51, 18 September 2020 diff hist +3 m Pipe wrench Inserted a clearly omitted "as." Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
12 August 2020
- 02:2002:20, 12 August 2020 diff hist 0 m Titles of distinction awarded by the University of Oxford Changed "affect" to "effect."
11 August 2020
- 17:1217:12, 11 August 2020 diff hist +2 m Collective unconscious To make the sentence fragment a sentence, I removed the second comma (after "Eagle") and replaced it with "is."
18 July 2020
- 06:3806:38, 18 July 2020 diff hist −4 m Charles Murray (political scientist) Removed "the" before "those"; the definite article was obviously left in by accident during some other edit. Leaving it in the sentence is not an option in Standard English and was clearly not intended. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
29 December 2019
- 13:1513:15, 29 December 2019 diff hist +1 m Buddhahood Added comma neccessary to introduce parenthetical clause. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
23 September 2019
- 03:1003:10, 23 September 2019 diff hist −3 m International Life Sciences Institute Deleted second "is" in sentence. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
11 August 2019
- 11:0811:08, 11 August 2019 diff hist −1 m Karma Removed errant comma. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
6 July 2019
- 14:4114:41, 6 July 2019 diff hist +1 m Gadsden flag Corrected quote (which had the additional benefit of correcting the syntax). Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 14:2314:23, 6 July 2019 diff hist −1 m Agorism Harmonized verb to its subject. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 14:1914:19, 6 July 2019 diff hist −3 m Agorism Removed preposition I errantly included in my previous edit. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 14:1814:18, 6 July 2019 diff hist +7 Agorism Sentence reworked (predominantly by moving dates and harmonizing use of parentheses) to clarify content. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 14:1114:11, 6 July 2019 diff hist −5 Agorism Three minor changes: "because" replacing "since," "to" replacing "with" (required by verb), and unnecessary "that" removed. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 14:0614:06, 6 July 2019 diff hist 0 m Agorism Comma moved to inside quotation mark. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 14:0414:04, 6 July 2019 diff hist +1 m Agorism Missing period added. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 14:0014:00, 6 July 2019 diff hist +15 m Agorism Period moved to inside quotation mark. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 13:5213:52, 6 July 2019 diff hist 0 m Gadsden flag Period moved to inside quotation mark. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 13:4213:42, 6 July 2019 diff hist 0 m Gadsden flag Comma moved to inside quotation mark. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 13:4113:41, 6 July 2019 diff hist 0 m Gadsden flag Period moved to inside quotation mark. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 13:3513:35, 6 July 2019 diff hist +3 m Gadsden flag Sentence cleaned up by removing and inserting punctuation, conjunctions, and prepositions. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 13:3113:31, 6 July 2019 diff hist 0 m Gadsden flag Period moved to inside quotation mark. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 13:2913:29, 6 July 2019 diff hist 0 m Gadsden flag Comma moved to inside quotation mark. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 13:2813:28, 6 July 2019 diff hist 0 m Gadsden flag Comma placed inside quotation mark. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 13:2713:27, 6 July 2019 diff hist 0 m Gadsden flag Period moved to inside quotation mark. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 13:2513:25, 6 July 2019 diff hist 0 m Moultrie Flag Comma placed inside quotation mark. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 13:2313:23, 6 July 2019 diff hist 0 m Gadsden flag Period placed inside quotation mark (American English rule (article concerns hostory of American symbols), no applicable exception). Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
1 July 2019
- 04:4704:47, 1 July 2019 diff hist +1 m Baptists Added closing parenthesis to second bullet point. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
14 June 2019
- 19:1119:11, 14 June 2019 diff hist −1 m Document file format Changed verb to plural to conform notational agreement. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
