User contributions for Jimmu1

2 August 2024

• 02:4902:49, 2 August 2024 diff hist +875‎ Talk:Nostrand Avenue ‎No edit summary
• 02:4602:46, 2 August 2024 diff hist +72‎ Nostrand Avenue ‎ See talk page. Tag: Visual edit

1 August 2024

• 17:1117:11, 1 August 2024 diff hist +6‎ Talk:Nostrand Avenue ‎No edit summary
• 17:1017:10, 1 August 2024 diff hist +4‎ Talk:Nostrand Avenue ‎No edit summary
• 11:5411:54, 1 August 2024 diff hist +2‎ Talk:Nostrand Avenue ‎No edit summary
• 11:5411:54, 1 August 2024 diff hist +1,755‎ Talk:Nostrand Avenue ‎No edit summary

7 July 2024

• 00:2500:25, 7 July 2024 diff hist −13,415‎ Toyota Entune ‎ I chopped this one down a lot but I really felt it was justified; I didn't see the need to go into all that detail about an outdated service Toyota doesn't even use in its cars anymore; I felt that a short summary of what this was and what vehicles had it was sufficient. I actually owned a car that had this system but I didn't cite myself :) Tags: Reverted COI template removed Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit

30 June 2024

• 20:0020:00, 30 June 2024 diff hist −3,670‎ Ministry of Information and Communications Technology (Qatar) ‎ The article was written like election propaganda, lol; I cut down the section about the e-government and digital literacy programs. The article had a lot about “Cyber Security”, including the “National Strategies” related to cyber security, but based on my research, this is handled by a different Qatari agency, the NCSA. So I deleted all of that. I also added a couple panels with Qatar-related topics. current Tags: COI template removed Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit

16 June 2024

• 23:5023:50, 16 June 2024 diff hist −331‎ m Saeed Ahmed bin Khalaf Al Otaiba ‎ It read like one of his relatives wrote it (lol)...I made it more encyclopedic. I'm not sure if this even belongs on Wikipedia but I'll defer to someone with more editing experience. Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: links

19 May 2024

• 19:3519:35, 19 May 2024 diff hist +232‎ m Teen Missions International ‎ The article was flagged for not meeting Wikipedia's notability guidelines, and for having possible original research. After reviewing the article, I feel the organization does meet the notability guidelines; it is mentioned in multiple external sources, including a book about AIDS relief in Africa. I also believe the information is not original research, but rather mostly from the organization's website. I may come back to clean up more of the language which sounds like an advertisement... Tag: Visual edit

6 February 2024

• 20:4520:45, 6 February 2024 diff hist −748‎ m Sortimo ‎ It was definitely written like an advertisement; I cleaned up a lot of the language. I also deleted the sentence stating that the facility manufactured van racks and shelving. Of course it did, (lol) that's what the company sells. I added some more source material on company histoyr as well. Tags: COI template removed Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit

19 January 2024

• 18:5218:52, 19 January 2024 diff hist +140‎ m Statistics of the COVID-19 pandemic in Italy ‎ Added more links and some rewriting to make it more encyclopedic. Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: links

15 January 2024

• 20:2720:27, 15 January 2024 diff hist −617‎ m Excimer laser-assisted nonocclusive anastomosis ‎ It was flagged for not having enough links to other Wikipedia articles. However, I also thought it could use a rewrite to make it more clear and encyclopedic. (compare prior version) I also added a new journal citation about how the technique is also used for cardiac surgery. Tags: Visual edit: Switched Newcomer task Newcomer task: links

10 January 2024

• 02:5902:59, 10 January 2024 diff hist +112‎ Canalicular adenoma ‎ The article was flagged for not having enough links to other Wikipedia articles and for being overly technical. I didn't think it was that lacking in links to other articles, but it was definitely written in a very technical style with a lot of professional jargon. I rewrote it with simpler and more understandable language. Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: links
• 02:4002:40, 10 January 2024 diff hist +19‎ m Association for Nutrition ‎ It was flagged for not having links to other Wikipedia articles. I actually felt that it did have sufficient links to other Wikipedia articles, but I added a few more. And corrected a couple small things :) current Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: links

3 January 2024

• 16:4016:40, 3 January 2024 diff hist −76‎ WeMall ‎ It was written like an advertisement. I cleaned it up....so it wouldn't be written like an advertisement. Also, this platform's website says it's shut down until further notice; I indicated and cited that. I will watch this page and see if that pages. current Tags: COI template removed Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit

1 January 2024

• 22:3022:30, 1 January 2024 diff hist +507‎ Talk:Pachmarhi ‎No edit summary
• 22:2822:28, 1 January 2024 diff hist −610‎ m Pachmarhi ‎ cleaned up more of it but I'm not done... Tag: Visual edit

29 December 2023

• 00:2200:22, 29 December 2023 diff hist −100‎ m Pachmarhi ‎ Definitely needed the tone cleaned up to match encyclopedic style! I'm not done yet! Coming back to clean up "Tourism" to the end... Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit

28 December 2023

• 16:2116:21, 28 December 2023 diff hist +58‎ m Canadian Forces College ‎ As the template message, it was written like an advertisement. I changed a couple introduction sentences and also rewrote the curriculum description so it read like an encyclopedia article instead of an advertisement for His Majesty's military. lol Tags: COI template removed Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit

21 December 2023

• 12:4312:43, 21 December 2023 diff hist −237‎ m Tamana (NGO) ‎ It was written like an advertisement. I rewrote it so it would read like an encyclopedia article. I may come back and rewrite it some more after reviewing Wikipedia's guidlines...lol... Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit

17 December 2023

• 22:1522:15, 17 December 2023 diff hist +398‎ m Flyboys (film) ‎ It was flagged for not having an encyclopedic tone and indeed in parts it did not; I rewrote the film description so that it would read in a more encyclopedic manner. Yay for encyclopedic tone... Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit

16 December 2023

• 13:5413:54, 16 December 2023 diff hist +844‎ Hong Kong Maritime Museum ‎ Cleaned up the English translation some more and removed some of the language that sounded like an advertisement. And added a journal citation! I know right? So excited when we can find support in an academic journal... Tag: Visual edit
• 04:2604:26, 16 December 2023 diff hist −1‎ Hong Kong Maritime Museum ‎ More cleaning up of the English translation... Tag: Visual edit
• 03:1003:10, 16 December 2023 diff hist +138‎ m Hong Kong Maritime Museum ‎ Cleaned up the "Initial Murray House Location" paragraph; I'm going to come back and clean up the rest. It just needed a better English translation...e.g. we don't really use "treble" to describe three times the amount in 2023, unless you're talking about a legal statute Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
• 02:4402:44, 16 December 2023 diff hist +8‎ m Hong Kong Maritime Museum ‎ I replaced "it also covers" with "its exhibits also cover." In English don't really say a museum "covers" a certain topic, that verb is more so used for books and other print media. More edits on here to come...(maybe...) Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit

14 December 2023

• 01:0301:03, 14 December 2023 diff hist +48‎ m One Year Later ‎ Added a non primary source (the best one possible, in my opinion) Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
• 00:5900:59, 14 December 2023 diff hist +11‎ m One Year Later ‎ The article was full of past tense usage, e.g. "in Volume 6, Batman punched the Joker", which I replaced with the preferred historical present tense, e.g. "in Volume 6, Batman punches the Joker." Interestingly some of the descriptions did use historical present tense; it was inconsistent throughout the article. It's consistent now! Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
• 00:4000:40, 14 December 2023 diff hist −401‎ m Mian Chah ‎ Cleaned up the tone to make it more encyclopedic (is that a word?) but the lack of citations is still an issue. I didn't find this village in a single book, not on Google Books or Everafter or anywhere else I looked, so someone else can maybe tackle that challenge...maybe someone who speaks Farsi... Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit

12 December 2023

• 01:2901:29, 12 December 2023 diff hist +34‎ Kheroth Bose ‎No edit summary Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: links
• 01:2801:28, 12 December 2023 diff hist −8‎ Kheroth Bose ‎No edit summary Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: links
• 01:2801:28, 12 December 2023 diff hist −109‎ m Kheroth Bose ‎ Cleaned up the introductory paragraph and moved some of its content to the main body of the article. Tags: nowiki added Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: links

10 December 2023

• 22:2622:26, 10 December 2023 diff hist +161‎ Talk:Books of Mortals ‎No edit summary
• 22:2422:24, 10 December 2023 diff hist −160‎ m Books of Mortals ‎ I cleaned this up a little but see my notes on the talk page... Tag: Visual edit
• 21:5321:53, 10 December 2023 diff hist −57‎ Embrace Innovations ‎No edit summary Tag: Visual edit
• 21:5021:50, 10 December 2023 diff hist +33‎ Embrace Innovations ‎No edit summary Tag: Visual edit
• 21:4821:48, 10 December 2023 diff hist −859‎ m Embrace Innovations ‎ Wow that was totally written like an advertisement, lol. Cleaned up the language. Tags: COI template removed references removed Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
• 19:1219:12, 10 December 2023 diff hist 0‎ Abdirahman Haji Mumin ‎No edit summary Tags: Newcomer task Newcomer task: links
• 19:1119:11, 10 December 2023 diff hist −2‎ Abdirahman Haji Mumin ‎No edit summary Tags: Manual revert Newcomer task Newcomer task: links
• 19:1119:11, 10 December 2023 diff hist +2‎ Abdirahman Haji Mumin ‎No edit summary Tags: Reverted Newcomer task Newcomer task: links
• 19:1119:11, 10 December 2023 diff hist +2‎ Abdirahman Haji Mumin ‎No edit summary Tags: Newcomer task Newcomer task: links
• 19:1019:10, 10 December 2023 diff hist +28‎ Abdirahman Haji Mumin ‎No edit summary Tags: Visual edit: Switched Newcomer task Newcomer task: links
• 19:0919:09, 10 December 2023 diff hist +138‎ m Abdirahman Haji Mumin ‎ Added years and cleaned it up Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: links
• 18:5918:59, 10 December 2023 diff hist +4‎ m Aspiro ‎ Cleaned it up a little bit :) Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit

9 December 2023

• 21:2521:25, 9 December 2023 diff hist −582‎ Ko Klang ‎ Cleaned up the translation. Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
• 13:3613:36, 9 December 2023 diff hist −396‎ Inmarko ‎ Cleaned up the translation Tag: Visual edit
• 12:4212:42, 9 December 2023 diff hist +11‎ Yushaev Zamir ‎No edit summary Tag: Visual edit: Switched
• 00:5300:53, 9 December 2023 diff hist +101‎ Church of Our Lady of Sarlós ‎ Cleaned up the Hungarian translation. Tag: Visual edit

8 December 2023

• 23:3723:37, 8 December 2023 diff hist 0‎ Emilio Bigi ‎No edit summary Tag: Visual edit
• 23:3623:36, 8 December 2023 diff hist −11‎ Emilio Bigi ‎ One more edit :) ("Carerra" was translated as trajector or path instead of career, lol) Tag: Visual edit