User contributions for Freeman501

19 October 2024

• 15:5415:54, 19 October 2024 diff hist +24 m Abacus →Japan: Copy editing. Tag: Visual edit

16 October 2024

• 22:5522:55, 16 October 2024 diff hist +4 m Frank Sheeran →Hoffa death: Fixed dangling participle. Tag: Visual edit

9 October 2024

• 16:5016:50, 9 October 2024 diff hist −2 m Space Sweepers →Plot summary: Copy edit - use better verb get/is . current Tag: Visual edit

5 October 2024

• 11:3511:35, 5 October 2024 diff hist +11 m P'tang, Yang, Kipperbang →Plot: Using the correct British phrase. current Tag: Visual edit

22 September 2024

• 11:4411:44, 22 September 2024 diff hist −1 m List of The Rookie episodes →Season 6 (2024): " ...he and Bailey...", not "...him and Bailey...".

21 September 2024

• 00:1200:12, 21 September 2024 diff hist −1 m Vikings: Valhalla →Season 1 (2022): "Aid" (a form of help), not "aide" (an assistant in a military or political role).

17 September 2024

• 01:2601:26, 17 September 2024 diff hist 0 m Melanie Phillips →Journalism career: Moved a sentence to keep correct date order in the paragraph. Tag: Visual edit
• 01:2301:23, 17 September 2024 diff hist −5 m Melanie Phillips →Gaza: Removed duplicated word. Tag: Visual edit

14 September 2024

• 23:1023:10, 14 September 2024 diff hist −10 m Horned helmet →Prehistoric Middle East & Cyprus: Copy edit. Tag: Visual edit
• 23:0723:07, 14 September 2024 diff hist −4 m Horned helmet →European Migration Period: Changed 2 dates for consistency. 15 occurrences of BC dates against 2 CE occurences. Tag: Visual edit
• 18:0418:04, 14 September 2024 diff hist 0 m Vendel Period →Burial customs: Improved a slightly awkward sentence. Tag: Visual edit

12 September 2024

• 23:0723:07, 12 September 2024 diff hist −7 m From Where to Eternity →Deceased: Assassination is a term for the murder of a prominent person (esp. a politician), not a low-level would-be gangster. current Tag: Visual edit
• 23:0523:05, 12 September 2024 diff hist +1 m From Where to Eternity →First appearance: Place the most important fact first. Tag: Visual edit

28 August 2024

• 18:2918:29, 28 August 2024 diff hist +40 m Golden Kamuy (film) Added a link to "kan".

27 August 2024

• 16:1716:17, 27 August 2024 diff hist +5 m Sneaky Pete →Season 2 (2018): Copy edit.

21 August 2024

• 21:2221:22, 21 August 2024 diff hist −6 m Jan Kryst →Biography: "ambushed" is not really the right word for a room full of people where no one was concealed. current Tag: Visual edit

5 August 2024

• 12:1612:16, 5 August 2024 diff hist −1 m The Red Sowing →In King's Landing and the Kingswood: If the wound is "superficial", it can hardly be said to have been "inflicted". Let's use a softer, more neutral term. Tag: Visual edit

14 July 2024

• 15:4015:40, 14 July 2024 diff hist 0 m Bay of Fires (TV series) "Jodie" has somehow become "Julie" in episode 7 synopsis.

6 July 2024

• 13:0113:01, 6 July 2024 diff hist +1 m Anunnaki →Pseudoarchaeology and conspiracy theories Tag: Visual edit

3 July 2024

• 15:1915:19, 3 July 2024 diff hist −2 m John Axon →Accident: Adjusted the link, which incorrectly linked to an article relating to computing, to point to another article concerning coupling in trains. current
• 15:0215:02, 3 July 2024 diff hist −9 m Dictionary of National Biography →Oxford Dictionary of National Biography: Reduced a slightly cumbersome phrase. Tag: Visual edit

15 June 2024

• 00:4900:49, 15 June 2024 diff hist −4 m Fallout (American TV series) →Guest: Replaced slightly awkward phrase with a more conventional one.
• 00:4400:44, 15 June 2024 diff hist +2 m Fallout (American TV series) →Premise: To clearly indicate that the squire is not a bounty hunter and avoid the reader having to read the sentence again. Tag: Visual edit
• 00:3800:38, 15 June 2024 diff hist 0 Fallout (American TV series) →Premise: Correction of tense. Tag: Visual edit
• 00:3400:34, 15 June 2024 diff hist +3 m Fallout (American TV series) →Guest: Copy edit.

13 June 2024

• 22:1622:16, 13 June 2024 diff hist −1 m The Sopranos season 1 →Episodes: "exposes" was probably meant here and not "espouses".

5 June 2024

• 21:2721:27, 5 June 2024 diff hist +3 m Time Variance Authority Copy edit - adjusted a sentence in the lede. Tag: Visual edit

3 June 2024

• 00:1700:17, 3 June 2024 diff hist −1 m Musidora →Other works: “Relegate” is not quite the right word: it has elements of a kind of exile, a sending away “Confine” or “restrict” would be better – a sense of keeping in the same place. Tag: Visual edit

29 May 2024

• 12:1312:13, 29 May 2024 diff hist −3 m The Gentlemen (2024 TV series) Groundskeeper, an American term. In a British setting, the appropriate term for a man such as Geoffrey, portrayed patrolling the estate with a shotgun, is a gamekeeper. He calls himself a gamekeeper in episode 8.

21 May 2024

• 14:1914:19, 21 May 2024 diff hist +6 m Criticism of Muhammad →Psychological and medical condition: Resolved the singular and plural clash of “those who suffered” and “was … a wretch”. Also the poor English that “perception” was a “wretch”. Tag: Visual edit
• 12:5812:58, 21 May 2024 diff hist +1 m Muhammad →Invasion of Khaybar: The correct English phrase is "that very night" and not "the very night", a phrase that makes no sense. Tag: Visual edit

20 May 2024

• 18:1518:15, 20 May 2024 diff hist 0 m Hagarism →Methodology: You 'give' or 'provide' an account, rather than 'tell' an account. Tag: Visual edit

19 May 2024

• 04:2204:22, 19 May 2024 diff hist +2 m Papal infallibility →Ordinatio sacerdotalis: Copy edit apostrophe. Tag: Visual edit
• 00:5700:57, 19 May 2024 diff hist −4 m Shola Mos-Shogbamimu →Death threats: Incorrect use of reflexive pronoun. Tag: Visual edit

12 May 2024

• 17:1217:12, 12 May 2024 diff hist +20 m MAC address →Address details: Copy edit. Tag: Visual edit

5 May 2024

• 22:4722:47, 5 May 2024 diff hist −1 m Temporal paradox →Logical impossibility: Remove unnecessary "they". Tag: Visual edit
• 22:3022:30, 5 May 2024 diff hist +8 m Temporal paradox →Grandfather paradox: Copy edit - replace pronoun with a noun. Tag: Visual edit

30 April 2024

• 01:2501:25, 30 April 2024 diff hist −3 m Paulie Gualtieri →Season 4: Copy edit. "Restores" is a more suitable verb than "rejuvenates". Tag: Visual edit

21 April 2024

• 22:0422:04, 21 April 2024 diff hist −1 m 3 Body Problem (TV series) →Episodes: Copy edit. 'Get' is a poor verb to use here.

17 April 2024

• 18:4918:49, 17 April 2024 diff hist −6 m Prion →History: Copy edit. 'Go' is unnecessary in this sentence. Colloquial rather than encyclopaedic English. Tag: Visual edit
• 04:2904:29, 17 April 2024 diff hist +4 m Margaret Howe Lovatt →Personal life: Copy edit. Change to correct tense.

15 April 2024

• 23:4123:41, 15 April 2024 diff hist +21 m 1936 Tulkarm shooting →Incident: Copy edit. Tag: Visual edit

10 April 2024

• 22:0222:02, 10 April 2024 diff hist +69 Arrival (film) →Plot: Copy edit. Tag: Visual edit

1 April 2024

• 12:2512:25, 1 April 2024 diff hist −1 m The Gentlemen (2024 TV series) →Episodes: This is a plural, not a possessive.

27 March 2024

• 17:5817:58, 27 March 2024 diff hist +39 m Bodies (2023 TV series) Moved the link for Metropolitan Police in the Episodes section up to a more suitable position.
• 17:4617:46, 27 March 2024 diff hist +277 m Bodies (2023 TV series) →Episodes: Copy edit to clarify some details. S01E01.

14 March 2024

• 13:0813:08, 14 March 2024 diff hist 0 m Netley Hospital →Decline: Copy edit. Tag: Visual edit

3 March 2024

• 02:1902:19, 3 March 2024 diff hist −11 m Ludwig Rabus →Works: Copy edit. current Tag: Visual edit
• 02:1602:16, 3 March 2024 diff hist +25 Ludwig Rabus Copy editing to improve some phrasing and correct a typo. Tag: Visual edit

1 March 2024

• 18:5518:55, 1 March 2024 diff hist +1 m Last universal common ancestor →Root of the tree of life: Insert missing comma. Tag: Visual edit