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02:0702:07, 16 December 2023 diff hist −335‎ Age of Revolution ‎ →‎Industrial Revolution: Removed irrelevant insertion about climate change. The revolutionary period followed the Industrial Revolution. Climate change also followed the Industrial Revolution as it facilitated rapid human development which included innovations that we now know are drivers of climate change. All true but that does not justify inclusion in an article about the Age of Revolution which had nothing to do with climate change, a phenomenon not yet recognizable during this era. Tag: references removed

02:3702:37, 28 September 2023 diff hist +1‎ Kaliningrad Oblast ‎ →‎German culture and Germanization: corrected misspelling, i.e. "streghtening" corrected to "strengthening"

19:5019:50, 5 April 2023 diff hist +463‎ Shooting of Jacob Blake ‎ →‎Public: changed "the following day" to "less than 2 hours after the shooting, shortly before 1:30 a.m. the following day" to correct misleading description of the time the Rittenhouse shooting occurred and the time Rittenhouse turned himself, added source with this specific clarification

10:0910:09, 13 February 2023 diff hist +84‎ Nord Stream 2 ‎ →‎US sanctions and subsequent waiver and negotiations: missing period added, re-arranged sentence to avoid beginning with numerals, added further context from source..
09:3209:32, 13 February 2023 diff hist +3‎ Nord Stream 2 ‎ →‎US sanctions and subsequent waiver and negotiations: Ungrammatical "Biden's decision sanctions waiver" changed to "Biden's decision to waiver sanctions"

11:4011:40, 21 January 2023 diff hist −5‎ DDR5 SDRAM ‎ →‎Intel: removed unnecessary inclusion of "that"
11:3411:34, 21 January 2023 diff hist +3‎ Steam Deck ‎ →‎History: Added suffix "-ing" to "bring" in the final sentence of this section
11:3111:31, 21 January 2023 diff hist +3‎ Steam Deck ‎ →‎History: added the word "of" to complete sentence, "By June 2022, Valve stated they were able to double the number of..."
11:1311:13, 21 January 2023 diff hist 0‎ Video game console ‎ →‎Console unit: fixed misspelling; "memory cashes" changed to "memory caches"

09:4709:47, 19 December 2022 diff hist +33‎ Saw (franchise) ‎ →‎Box office performance: In the list of highest grossing horror franchises I noted the franchises behind the Saw franchise, as it is mentioned at the beginning of the list, not in the order of the list.

12:4112:41, 19 November 2022 diff hist −10‎ Harem ‎ Removed "imaginary" from the following sentence: "In the Western world, Orientalist imaginary conceptions of the harem as a hidden world of sexual subjugation where numerous women lounged in suggestive poses have influenced many paintings...."
12:2212:22, 19 November 2022 diff hist +1‎ Imperial Chinese harem system ‎ →‎Han: I corrected the misspelling of "miscellenous" with "miscellaneous".

05:3605:36, 29 October 2022 diff hist 0‎ World population milestones ‎ USCB estimates previously listed an estimated population of 7 billion in 2012 and 8 billion in 2022 which was incorrectly listed as 15 years after the previous billion marked in 2012. I simply replaced 15 with 10 as 2022 is 10 years after 2012.

15:1815:18, 22 June 2022 diff hist +9‎ Tommy Suharto ‎ →‎Oil: answered {{who|date=March 2022}} by including info from the previously cited Time article which states, "a former business associate of Tommy and Bambang says there were extra, unofficial markups". This sentence previously included only a closing quotation mark so I inserted the opening quotation mark preceding the word 'unofficial" to correctly quote the part that was taken directly from the previously cited Time article

08:3308:33, 5 June 2022 diff hist 0‎ Transylvania ‎ I corrected the misspelling of "inspired" which was spelled "imspired" in the last sentence of the introduction.