Talk:World Cup workers walk off the job
Review of revision 1044085 [Failed]
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Revision 1044085 of this article has been reviewed by Microchip08 (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 18:49, 14 June 2010 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: The article is short, at just over 750 un-normalised characters. This would be better suited to Wikinews:News briefs. — μ 18:49, June 14 2010 (UTC) Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews. |
Revision 1044085 of this article has been reviewed by Microchip08 (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 18:49, 14 June 2010 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: The article is short, at just over 750 un-normalised characters. This would be better suited to Wikinews:News briefs. — μ 18:49, June 14 2010 (UTC) Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews. |
How do I make a wikinews brief?Soapy (talk) 18:51, 14 June 2010 (UTC)
- Instructions for briefs are at Wikinews:News briefs. Here is a link to create a 'briefs' article: http://en.wikinews.org/w/index.php?title=Wikinews_Shorts:_June_15,_2010&action=edit&preload=Template:New_Wikinews_Shorts I copied that link from the right hand column of the newsroom, about half way down.
- Meanwhile, the article is now twice as long as when it failed its first review, so it no longer needs to be a brief.
Review of revision 1044804 [Passed]
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Revision 1044804 of this article has been reviewed by C628 (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 16:58, 15 June 2010 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: Looks good to me. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer. |
Revision 1044804 of this article has been reviewed by C628 (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 16:58, 15 June 2010 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: Looks good to me. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer. |
Quotation
[edit]C628, thanks for passing this. Why did you cut the quote?
{{QuoteLeft|People will and must be allowed to raise their issues but we will not tolerate anybody either threatening and disrupting the World Cup.|source=Ttemba Maseko, South African government spokesperson}}
To me, direct speech is the key to lively and interesting news.