Talk:Until the Whole World Hears (song)/GA1

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Reviewer: Status (talk · contribs) 18:09, 16 June 2012 (UTC)

You are at the top of the list once again, my friend. Statυs (talk) 18:09, 16 June 2012 (UTC)

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Lead / Infobox

• I'm not seeing a source for Christian rock as the genre of the song.
  • Removed. Toa Nidhiki05 21:47, 16 June 2012 (UTC)
• An arena rock song with a crunchy guitar lick accompanied by blasting guitar chords and the throaty growl of Mark Hall's vocals, the song lyrically revolves around speaking the truth into a culture that doesn't want to hear it --> Should be split into two different sentences. The first in which, needs to be rewritten. I'm not too sure "throaty growl of Mark Hall's vocals" is proper to say. Edit: reading along, I see specific person said that. Quotation marks are needed and it will be fine.
  • Fixed. Toa Nidhiki05 21:47, 16 June 2012 (UTC)
• "Until the Whole World Hears" received positive reception from critics and has been used as both an opening and closing song in concert. --> Two completely different ideas. Specify as music critics and maybe say what they said about the song? And then have how it was used as the opening and closing song during their concert; which one?
  • Fixed. Toa Nidhiki05 21:47, 16 June 2012 (UTC)
• No need to say they also performed the song at the event.
  • Alright, fixed. Toa Nidhiki05 21:47, 16 June 2012 (UTC)
• It peaked atop the Billboard Hot Christian Songs, Hot Christian AC and Christian AC Monitored charts, at number four on the Billboard Christian CHR chart, at number ten on the Billboard Christian Digital Songs chart and at number twenty-three on the Billboard Heatseekers Songs chart. --> It peaked atop the Billboard Hot Christian Songs, Hot Christian AC and Christian AC Monitored charts. It also peaked at number four on the Billboard Christian CHR chart, number ten on the Billboard Christian Digital Songs chart and number twenty-three on the Billboard Heatseekers Songs chart.
  • Done. Toa Nidhiki05 21:47, 16 June 2012 (UTC)
• Can a bigger version of the cover be uploaded? The default size of the single template is about 220px, and the image is only 170. 300px would be a good size, as that is what is most commonly used; to cover all grounds.
  • Uploaded one with 300px. Toa Nidhiki05 21:52, 16 June 2012 (UTC)

Composition

• I forgot about this on "East to West", but can you upload a sample of the song?
  • Added a 23-second audio sample. Could have done 30 but oh well. Toa Nidhiki05 22:58, 16 June 2012 (UTC)
• The link to the sheet music says that the song is a half step lower, however, it has not been transposed on the Wikipedia. I will fix it. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 24.180.235.150 (talk) 18:07, 22 June 2018 (UTC)

Recording

• Doesn't really mention much about recording of the song. Production would be a better title, no?
  • Yep. Toa Nidhiki05 23:16, 16 June 2012 (UTC)

Chart performance

• No need to state when it was released here. This should probably be mentioned in the lead.
  • Fixed. Toa Nidhiki05
• Advanced is used a bit too often. I'm not really sure what other word you could use though. "The following week it reached a new position of...", maybe?
  • Fixed, added some of your suggestions and used some other words. It's really tough to word that type of stuff. Toa Nidhiki05 23:16, 16 June 2012 (UTC)

Other uses

• Not really enough for its own section.
  • Agreed, removed. Toa Nidhiki05 23:16, 16 June 2012 (UTC)

Live performances

• I don't think that first sentence really needs to be stated.
  • Removed. Toa Nidhiki05 23:16, 16 June 2012 (UTC)
• Any info on the dates they performed said performances?
  • Added dates. Toa Nidhiki05 23:16, 16 June 2012 (UTC)

References

• Billboard.biz
  • Fixed. Toa Nidhiki05 23:16, 16 June 2012 (UTC)
• Ref 3 missing a publisher, Apple Inc.
  • Corrected. Toa Nidhiki05 23:16, 16 June 2012 (UTC)
• The publisher and work should only be listed once.
  • Not sure what you mean. Which source has the issue? Toa Nidhiki05 23:16, 16 June 2012 (UTC)
    • Like, Billboard, for example. It is linked in every reference, when it should only be linked once. But actually, I think it's OK if you link them all or just one, so it's all good. Statυs (talk) 23:23, 16 June 2012 (UTC)
• Ref 10 should be cite news
  • Fixed. Toa Nidhiki05 23:16, 16 June 2012 (UTC)
• Allmusic should not be italicized
  • Allmusic refs are gone, so issue resolved.. Toa Nidhiki05 23:16, 16 June 2012 (UTC)

• All issues have been addressed. I am passing the article! Keep up the great work! Statυs (talk) 23:23, 16 June 2012 (UTC)