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Reviewer: Hog Farm (talk · contribs) 15:31, 14 April 2020 (UTC)
Criteria
edit1. Prose ✓ Pass
2. Verifiability ✓ Pass
3. Depth of Coverage ✓ Pass
4. Neutral ✓ Pass
5. Stable ✓ Pass
6. Illustrations ✓ Pass
7. Miscellaneous ✓ Pass
Comments
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- Is the queen in "Queen regnant" capitalized? I've seen both ways and I'm not sure which one is technically correct
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- "resistance government in the Raiatean rebellion (1887–1897) " - I may be wrong but my gut instinct suggests during instead of in
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- Wikilink Opoa if that's the correct place
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- "After Tehauroa's death, a civil war nearly broke out between two rivals for the throne." - Do we know a year on this?
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- "In 1887 or 1888" - I think it might read better as "In either 1887 or 1888", but if you don't like that, ignore it.
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- Wiklink Consul to Consul (representative)
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- "1878 Kanak in New Caledonia" - Kanak is linked to a people group, but the context makes it sound like a rebellion. I think the same thing came up in the Teraupo'o review
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- "Teraupo’o" - Wrong '
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- "two French warships, the Duguay Trouin and L'Aube arrived" - Comma between L'Aube and arrived
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- "the rebel chief's captured after two months of" - I think it should be capture not captured
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- "The casualty of the six-week campaign was nearly fifty deaths mainly on the side of the Raiateans" - I think it should be casualties and were instead of casualty and was
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- Wikilink francs
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- Can we get a translation for the French quote towards the end?
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- I see no issue with the family tree and WP:NOTGENEALOGY, since it's a royal family and is important to the background of the story
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- Ref 14 needs the year and the page number, if available.
- The date is not available. I've try looking for it to no avail. It’s an online encyclopedia without any dates for its entries.
- Makes sense, all fine in that area then.
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Placing on hold. One ref formatting issue and a handful of minor prose issues. Good work. Hog Farm (talk) 17:23, 14 April 2020 (UTC)
- @Hog Farm: See changes. KAVEBEAR (talk) 21:03, 14 April 2020 (UTC)
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