Talk:Soviet destroyer Shaumyan/GA1
Latest comment: 5 years ago by Ed! in topic GA Review
GA Review
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Reviewer: Ed! (talk · contribs) 03:42, 24 January 2019 (UTC)
Giving a look. —Ed!(talk) 03:42, 24 January 2019 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written:
- Pass External links, dup links and dab links look good. Copyvio detector returns green.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable:
- Pass offline references accepted in good faith, with a cursory look on Google finding generally backing up what's written.
- It is broad in its coverage:
- Suggestions
- Nothing on 1935-1941 history or location when with the Black Sea fleet?
- Some further explanation needed on "priorities": "The gun was installed on the new Gnevny-class destroyers but not on Shaumyan due to its weight and the priorities of the Soviet Navy."
- Strange some engagement have exact numbers of shells fired but much of the early history doesn't. Are the records just generally inconsistent on the Russian post-Barbarossa history?
- Re: evacuations: Any idea how many soldiers she ferried to safety?
- Would think the unit cost could see the addition of a {{inflation}} but that's generally up to user preference.
- Suggestions
- It follows the neutral point of view policy:
- Pass No problems there.
- It is stable:
- Pass No problems there.
- It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate:
- Pass Image tagged PD as appropriate.
- Other:
- Pass Leaving some suggestions but seeing nothing substantial enough to hold the article up. Thanks as always! —Ed!(talk) 01:09, 29 January 2019 (UTC)