Talk:Pikachu/GA3
Latest comment: 1 day ago by DoctorWhoFan91 in topic GA Review
GA Review
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Nominator: Pokelego999 (talk · contribs) 21:26, 19 September 2024 (UTC)
Reviewer: DoctorWhoFan91 (talk · contribs) 08:19, 6 October 2024 (UTC)
I'll take this one. It's a long article, so I'll go heading by heading. Expect initial comments in 48-72 hours. DoctorWhoFan91 (talk) 08:19, 6 October 2024 (UTC)
- @Pokelego999 btw, I was wondering if you could review any of the four Doctor Who articles I have GAN'ed; I have seen people asking such things when they review GANs, and you seem to have a lot of experience reviewing articles. DoctorWhoFan91 (talk) 11:54, 7 October 2024 (UTC)
- @DoctorWhoFan91 I can probably take one of them on this week. Has one ever considered Magneton? Pokelego999 (talk) 20:07, 7 October 2024 (UTC)
- @Pokelego999: Thank You! (They have varying sizes, so you can choose per your wish.) DoctorWhoFan91 (talk) 05:28, 8 October 2024 (UTC)
- @DoctorWhoFan91 I can probably take one of them on this week. Has one ever considered Magneton? Pokelego999 (talk) 20:07, 7 October 2024 (UTC)
@Pokelego999: Pre-review remark- Please divide the article into more paras, espcially but not limited to the critical reception; they almost feel like walls of text, it gets hard to read at times. DoctorWhoFan91 (talk) 17:43, 6 October 2024 (UTC)
- @DoctorWhoFan91 could you clarify a bit on how you want these split/divided? Just want to make sure I understand exactly what you want. Has one ever considered Magneton? Pokelego999 (talk) 21:24, 6 October 2024 (UTC)
- @Pokelego999: However you think it seems fit; for example for the second para of the reception an appealing design. She further stated, a split can be made here, in the fourth para and the narrative. The anime's expansion, here- basically, if the paras are really long, divide by subtopic if necessary, per MOS:Paragraph. DoctorWhoFan91 (talk) 06:40, 7 October 2024 (UTC)
- @DoctorWhoFan91 I did some slight tweaking and re-arranging of a few sentences and paragraphs, aiming for a more consistent size across them for flow and to make reading easier. How is that looking to you now?--Kung Fu Man (talk) 14:49, 7 October 2024 (UTC)
- @Kung Fu Man: it does look better; I'll make my initial comments in the next 24 hours. DoctorWhoFan91 (talk) 05:28, 8 October 2024 (UTC)
- @DoctorWhoFan91 I did some slight tweaking and re-arranging of a few sentences and paragraphs, aiming for a more consistent size across them for flow and to make reading easier. How is that looking to you now?--Kung Fu Man (talk) 14:49, 7 October 2024 (UTC)
- @Pokelego999: However you think it seems fit; for example for the second para of the reception an appealing design. She further stated, a split can be made here, in the fourth para and the narrative. The anime's expansion, here- basically, if the paras are really long, divide by subtopic if necessary, per MOS:Paragraph. DoctorWhoFan91 (talk) 06:40, 7 October 2024 (UTC)