Talk:Bottle Pop/GA1

GA Review

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Nominator: MrHyacinth (talk · contribs) 00:19, 17 September 2024 (UTC)

Reviewer: Sammi Brie (talk · contribs) 17:54, 9 January 2025 (UTC)

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable, as shown by a source spot-check. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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Minor copy changes, but I found a chart error! Ping when addressed. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 18:10, 9 January 2025 (UTC)

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Copy changes

Lead

• It is an electronica song that uses sexual innuendo, and has been compared to works There's one subject: "It". Remove the comma (WP:CINS)
• In the latter country, a remix, featuring rapper Devolo was released replacing Dogg for its local release. This is an incomplete appositive, but I think an appositive is not called for. Try In the latter country, a remix featuring rapper Devolo was released, replacing Dogg for its local release.
• An accompanying music video for the song was directed by Thomas Kloss, and features the Pussycat Dolls performing the song in extravagant make-up and outfits. Remove comma CINS

Recording

• Remember your MOS:GEOCOMMAs. (I fixed this since there was a missing space in the same section)
• MOS:'S Unlike AP Style, we would do "Spears's". (I fixed this as well)

Release

• MOS:LOGICAL When quoting a sentence fragment that ends a sentence, use logical quotesetting, e.g. ...can't resist".
• Change "Vancouver Province" to "The Province", its actual title.
• Remember your MOS:DATECOMMAs.

Sourcing and spot checks

Reviewed: 5, 21, 25, 38, 41

• I'm not sure how to find the chart result on [38].
• [41] is linking to the 2008 end-of-year report instead of 2009 and is missing Bottle Pop.

Images

The cover art has an NFUR. Encouragement: Add alt text.