Writing Task 1 Academic - Condensed
Writing Task 1 Academic - Condensed
TASK 1
ACADEMIC
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CRITERIA
✔ Task Achievement
✔ Coherence and
Cohesion
✔ Lexical Resource
✔ Grammatical Range
and Accuracy
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TASK ACHIEVEMENT
◤ overview
- No clear - There is an overview - Clear overview
- Key features not - Highlights key - Clearly highlights key
adequately covered features adequately features
- Too much detail - Information is well- - No inaccurate
- No data to support selected information
statements
- Inaccurate information
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COHERENCE AND
COHESION
Band 5 Band 6 Band 7
LEXICAL RESOURCE
- Limited range of - Uses both simple and complex - Uses a variety of complex
sentence structures sentence structures sentence structures
- Tries to use
◤ complex - Some errors in grammar and - Many error-free sentences
sentences but with punctuation - Good control over
limited success - Communication is clear grammar
- Frequent errors in
grammar and
punctuation
PARTS OF THE TASK 1 ESSAY:
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INTRODUCTION
▪ 2 sentences
▪ Sentence 1: What does the chart / graph / diagram
show? (paraphrase the question/title)
TASK: PARAPHRASED:
TASK: PARAPHRASED:
Sample Answers:
Sample Answers:
• A comparison on the yearly expenditures of
local authorities in Someland, in three decades:
1980, 1990 and 2000, are depicted in the pie
charts.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the The diagram illustrates
main features, and make comparisons where relevant. the rates of household
recycling in the UK,
France and Germany.
Overall, recycling
rates of UK and
Germany showed a
steady but significant
rise over the period,
while percentage of
recycled waste in
France experienced a
downward trend.
The line graph below shows changes in the amount and type
of fast food consumed by Australian teenagers from 1975 to
2000.
The changes in the amount
and type of fast food
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,
and make comparisons where relevant. consumed by Australian
teenagers from 1975 to
2000 are shown in the line
graph. Overall, the
consumption of fish
and chips declined
over the period,
whereas the amount
of pizza and
hamburgers that
were eaten increased.
More Examples
PARTS OF THE TASK 1 ESSAY:
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BODY PARAGRAPH
▪ Give more specific detail in the body paragraphs, and you
must make reference to the data given.
GROUPING
OF DATA
- Per category (1 paragraph for pizza, 1 for fish and chips, 1 for hamburgers)
The line graph below shows changes in the amount and type of
fast food consumed by Australian teenagers from 1975 to 2000.
- Per similar trend (1 paragraph for data showing a similar pattern, 1
paragraph for data showing a different pattern)
In 1975, the most popular fast food with Australian
teenagers was fish and chips, being eaten 100 times a year.
This was far higher than pizza and hamburgers, which were
Pattern 1: the consumption of fish and
consumed approximately 5 times a year. However, apart chips declined
from a brief rise again from 1980 to 1985, the consumption Pattern 2: the amount of pizza and
hamburgers eaten increased
of fish and chips gradually declined over the 25-year
timescale to finish at just under 40 times per year.
The product that was downloaded the least was Net. This
began at slightly under 40,000, and, in contrast to the other
two products, fell over the next two weeks to reach a low
of approximately 25,000. It then increased sharply over
the following two weeks to finish at about 50,000, which
was well below that of ActiveX.
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LANGUAGE
OF
CHANGE
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VERBS OF MOVEMENT (UP)
Climbed (to)
Skyrocketed (to)
Recovered (to)
Subside (to)
Pitched (at)
Sank (to)
Plummeted
Collapsed
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TOPS AND BOTTOMS
Peaked (at)
Topped (at)
Bottomed (at)
WEAK STRONG
LANGUAGE
OF
COMPARISO
N
Similar About / almost / nearly / roughly / around / just about / very nearly /
Examples: approximately
COMPARATIVES SUPERLATIVES Examples:
1. The fast food items in uptown restaurants were comparatively SIMILAR
IDENTICAL DATA cheaper DATA than
Just over Just above
that of/ city
just over / just bigger /just beyond / just across
restaurants.
1. Cheaper ofThe cheapest womenIdentical
2. The
The number
largest
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high-level
proportion of water
The largest was used executives
in the to / withis well
agriculture sectorbeneath
Almost
onthe same
most than
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Equal to / with Nearly the same as
the countries
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of
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best in this
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percentage
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Just short of water
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The happiest
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below/ industrial
just work
The
beneath purposes.
same insort
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as / just underlevels.
/ justasa little
More striking
3. Customers The happier
were most striking
now, according to the
Precisely thesurvey,
same as the priceidentical
Almost was /
2. About 1,000
More common people died
The most common in the highway
Absolutely
carthe
accident
same
in 2003similar
which is
cheaper in 1992.
More profitablewell above
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most profitable theexpensive
statistics of2014
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4. Custom-made cars were more than they arethe same as
now.
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temperature wasdomestic
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betterabove violence
in the/ well abovecases
mid-April /but was /just
wellinbeyond
mid-July, below
wellit over
became/ well500
across
worse. in
March which is a little over than the previous months.
4. The average rainfall in London in 2014 was just above than the
Much less Well below
average / wellother
of two under /cities.
well short / well beneath
5. The salaries of male executives in three out of four companies were
well above than the salaries of female executives in 1998.
TYPES OF DATA IN TASK 1
LINE GRAPH
BAR GRAPH
PIE CHART
TABLE
MAP / PLAN
PROCESS DIAGRAM / FLOW
CHART
WRITING
◤ TASK 1
Line Graphs
Bar Graphs
- show (bigger) changes over a period of
time
- has two axes (X and Y)
- used to show differences and similarities
The bar chart illustrates the average hours that men and women spend
per week on various activities around their homes. At first glance, it is
evident that, with the exception of reading, women spend more time
on household chores than men, while men spend more time on leisure
activities.
The highest percentage of those who favor cycling say that this is because
riding a bicycle to work is healthier than driving. 30% of them gave this as a
reason. The same amount of people, 30% say that they cycle to work because
it causes less pollution. 13% of people cycle to work because it is cheaper
than driving. Surprisingly, a similar amount of people said that they cycled to
work because it is faster than travelling by car.
In general, it seems that the majority of people who cycle to work do this for
health and environmental reasons. By contrast, those who travel by car want
to have a more comfortable journey over longer distances.
WRITING TASK 1
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You should spend about 20 minutes on this
task.
3 2 Action signsComedy
Romance Horror Totals
India
4
- Data
8 is displayed
7.5 in rows2.5and
6.5 24.5
It can be immediately noted that action films have the greatest number of movie goers, at a
staggering 29.9 million, compared to horror which only appeal to 15.8 million viewers—this is almost half
the figure of the former. In each of the four given countries, there are about an average of 7 to 8 million
people who watch action films. Romance ranks second, with an average of 4 to 7 million viewers from
each of the four nations. On the other hand, only 4 to 6.5 million people are reported to watch comedy
films, which brings it down to the third most favoured genre. Incidentally, not many people like watching
horror films at the cinema compared to the other genres of film.
Among all the countries shown on the table, India is reported to have the highest number of
movie viewers, whereas Japan has the least. There is an estimated 7 million difference between both
figures. It is also interesting to note that India, Ireland and New Zealand each have over 20 million
cinema watchers, while Japan’s figure falls below this.
Generally, out of all the four genres, action films predominate in the box office, which are
patronized mostly by Indians.
Data regarding the number of movie viewers who watch the
cinema is tabulated on the chart. It is further detailed according to the
four given genres watched◤ in four different countries: India, Ireland,
New Zealand, and Japan.
It can be immediately noted that action films have the greatest
number of movie goers, at a staggering 29.9 million, compared to horror
which only appeal to 15.8 million viewers—this is almost half the figure
of the former. In each of the four given countries, there are about an
average of 7 to 8 million people who watch action films. Romance ranks
second, with an average of 4 to 7 million viewers from each of the four
nations. On the other hand, only 4 to 6.5 million people are reported to
watch comedy films, which brings it down to the third most favoured
genre. Incidentally, not many people like watching horror films at the
cinema compared to the other genres of film.
Among all the countries shown on the table, India is reported
to have the highest number of movie viewers, whereas Japan has the
least. There is an estimated 7 million difference between both figures.
It is also interesting to note that India, Ireland and New Zealand each
have over 20 million cinema watchers, while Japan’s figure falls below
this.
Generally, out of all the four genres, action films predominate
in the box office, which are patronized mostly by Indians.
WRITING TASK 1
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You should spend about 20 minutes on this
task.
✔ Write an Introduction
✔ Write an Overview
✔ Select key points
✔ Organize and Group data
✔ Observe proper usage of
language identifying location
or position
Language: Prepositions of Location /
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Points on a Compass
The map illustrates the changes that have occurred in
Templeton, a seaside resort, over a 15-year period, beginning
in 1990 and ending◤ in 2005.The most noticeable change is the
replacement of many green areas with several major
infrastructure projects.
To begin, there were several major changes to
transport in the town. An airport has been built beside the
river on the outskirts of the town. In addition to this, a ferry
port was constructed on the far east coastline, with a new
railway extension line passing by the ferry port, continuing
along the coast and crossing over a new bridge so it connects
to the west side of town.
There have also been changes to the business sector
in Templeton. A factory can be seen in the south east of the
town behind the new railway line, and a supermarket has been
built over the river in the west of Templeton, running alongside
a new road.
The residential landscape has also altered, particularly
on the west side of town, where large apartment blocks now
stand in place of the houses.
WRITING TASK 1
Afterward
The diagram presents the manufacturing process of two types of
tea, pu-erh raw tea and pu-erh ripe tea. Although the first three
stages are the same for both teas, it can be seen that the
methods of production differ in the final stages, which accounts
for the resulting variations in the two teas.
First, the tea leaves that have been picked are pan fried in order
to inactivate the enzymes. Following this, the tea is rolled and
afterwards spread out on a round mat so that it can dry under the
sun. Once it has been dried, the loose raw tea is ready to be
turned into either ripe tea or raw tea. This is where the process
diverges.
a. Overall, it can be seen that car ownership was lower in Great Britain than in the
other two countries throughout half the time frame.
b. Overall, it can be seen that car thefts were far higher in Great Britain than in
the other three countries throughout the whole time frame.
c. Overall, it can be seen that car thefts were far higher in Canada and Sweden
than in Great Britain and France throughout the whole time frame.
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A. OVERALL, IT CAN BE SEEN THAT BOTH DECREASED AS A PERCENTAGE OF IT, BUT GDP
REMAINED A LOWER RATE THROUGHOUT THIS TIME.
B. OVERALL, IT CAN BE SEEN THAT BOTH INCREASED AS A PERCENTILE OF SI, BUT IT REMAINED
A HIGHER RATE THROUGHOUT THIS TIME.
SUMMARY
information.
ILLUSTRATION
Overall 2. Use a range of linking
In the case of
In this case Finally
For one thing Thus devices.
To demonstrate Therefore
To clarify In conclusion 3. Avoid mistakes with
For instance Consequently
As a result
As an example
To sum up linking words.
VERB + ADVERB
1. Use vocabulary for presenting accurate data.
Increased significantly 2. Understand collocations (matching adjectives
Rose steeply with nouns / verbs with adverbs).
Improved considerably
Jumped suddenly 3. Avoid spelling mistakes.
Fell rapidly 4. Don’t use the wrong words or informal
Dropped dramatically
Dipped sharply
language
ADJECTIVE + NOUN
A dramatic improvement
A rapid rise
A steady growth
A slight fluctuation
A gradual decrease
A sharp decline
A steep drop
1. Use a range of sentence structures.
2. Use the right tense for the chart given to you.
3. Use the right word order.
(adjective noun / verb adverb)
4. Use the right prepositions and word forms.
5. Check your punctuation.
The graph shows / showed how the populations of India and China changed / have changed since 2000 and how they will change /
change in the future.
In 2000, there were / have been more people living in China than in India. The number of Chinese was / is 1.25 billion, while India's
population was / is about 1 billion. Between 2000 and the present, there has been / have been a 0.2 billion rise in the number of Indian
citizens. Over the same period, China's population has increased / increased by 0.1 billion to reach over 1.35 billion.
According to the graph, the population in India will increase / will have increased more quickly than in China, and experts say that by
2030, both countries will have / have the same population of 1.45 billion. After this, China's population is / will likely to fall slightly to
1.4 billion in 2050, while India's population will probably increase and reach 1.6 billion.
Thus, over the 50-year period, India is going to experience / has experienced steady growth in its population and it will overtake /
overtook China. On the other hand, China's population will peak in 2030 and then begin to fall.
The graph shows / showed how the populations of India and China changed / have changed since 2000 and how
they will change / change in the future.
In 2000, there were / have been more people living in China than in India. The number of Chinese was / is 1.25 billion,
while India's population was / is about 1 billion. Between 2000 and the present, there has been / have been a 0.2 billion rise
in the number of Indian citizens. Over the same period, China's population has increased / increased by 0.1 billion to
reach over 1.35 billion.
According to the graph, the population in India will increase / will have increased more quickly than in China, and
experts say that by 2030, both countries will have / have the same population of 1.45 billion. After this, China's
population is / will likely to fall slightly to 1.4 billion in 2050, while India's population will probably increase and reach 1.6
billion.
Thus, over the 50-year period, India is going to experience / has experienced steady growth in its population and
it will overtake / overtook China. On the other hand, China's population will peak in 2030 and then begin to fall.
1991 2001
The table shows changes in / on the spending patterns of an
average Australian household since / between 1991 and 2001. In Australian
general, Australian household spending was high in 2001 than in 1991 Dollar Per
but the difference was not significant (AUD $715 per month and AUD
Month
$675 per month, respectively).
The amount of / with monthly spending on / to electricity and Food 155 160
water saw a dramatic increase between / over the 10-year period
Electricity
from $75 to $120. Yet in terms of the expenditure on non-essential 75 120
goods and services, the rising trend was less obvious with / over a
and Water
minor increase of $20. At the same time, the amount of money spent
Clothing 30 20
for / on food and housing rose only slightly from / by $155 to $160
and $95 to $100, respectively.
Housing 95 100
However, there was a decrease in / on expenditure on the other two
items. Australians spent one third less on clothing, which fell unto / Transport 70 45
from $30 to $20. Similarly, expenditure on / at transport dropped
from $70 in 1991 to $45 in / on 2001. Other
goods and 250 270
It seems that food and “other goods and services” were the two services*
biggest items of / for expenditure. Altogether, they accounted by /
for more than half of the total household spending. By / With
comparison, Australians spent little on dressing up. Total 675 715
*Other goods and services: non-essential goods and services
IELTS Tip
You cannot include all the data in your answer, so you need to
select the most interesti
1991 2001
The table shows changes in / on the spending patterns of an average
Australian household since / between 1991 and 2001. In general, Australian
Australian household spending was high in 2001 than in 1991 but the Dollar Per
difference was not significant (AUD $715 per month and AUD $675 per Month
month, respectively).
Food 155 160
The amount of / with monthly spending on / to electricity and water
saw a dramatic increase between / over the 10-year period from Electricity
$75 to $120. Yet in terms of the expenditure on non-essential goods 75 120
and Water
and services, the rising trend was less obvious with / over a minor
increase of $20. At the same time, the amount of money spent for / Clothing 30 20
on food and housing rose only slightly from / by $155 to $160 and
$95 to $100, respectively.
Housing 95 100
However, there was a decrease in / on expenditure on the other two
items. Australians spent one third less on clothing, which fell unto / Transport 70 45
from $30 to $20. Similarly, expenditure on / at transport dropped
from $70 in 1991 to $45 in / on 2001. Other
goods and 250 270
It seems that food and “other goods and services” were the two biggest services*
items of / for expenditure. Altogether, they accounted by / for more
than half of the total household spending. By / With comparison,
Total 675 715
Australians spent little on dressing up.
*Other goods and services: non-essential goods and services
The tables below give information about the amount
EXERCISE:
◤ of beer and fruit juice consumed per person per year
in different countries.
Beer* Fruite juice*
7 Australia 89 litres
8 United Kingdom 29.3 litres
SAMPLE ANSWER:
• Overall, the graph highlights a considerable growth in
Iranian and Turkish enrolments but reduction in Greek
enrolments.
SAMPLE ANSWER:
• It is clear that there are six distinct stages in this
process, from the initial collection of waste paper to
the eventual production of usable paper.