Misplaced and Dangling Modifiers Modifier Errors
Misplaced and Dangling Modifiers Modifier Errors
The sentence above fails to clarify whose hand was injured, in return, we must
rewrite the clause in order to understand whose hand was injured.
CORRECTED SENTENCE:
• Having injured his dominant hand, John had difficulty to write in the exam.
DANGLING MODIFIER EXAMPLES:
METHOD 1
• Smiling from ear to ear, finally giving one last smile, the contest concludes
silently
The sentence here fails to inform the reader who gave the last smile, in return,
we must rewrite the clause.
CORRECTED SENTENCE:
• Smiling from ear to ear, Ivan finally gives one last smile as the contest
concludes silently.
The corrected sentence informs that Ivan was the one giving the smile.
DANGLING MODIFIER EXAMPLES:
METHOD 2
METHOD 2 REVISING THE MODIFIER: The second method in fixing
Dangling modifiers are changing the modifier, and leaving the clause as it is. (as
shown in the example.)
• While driving back home, a car accident caused a traffic jam on the highway.
The sentence above fails to clarify who was driving, in return, we must rewrite
the modifier.
CORRECTED SENTENCE:
• While Jessica was driving back home, a car accident caused a traffic jam on
the highway.
DANGLING MODIFIER EXAMPLES:
METHOD 2
• While drinking coffee, something happens from outside the café.
The sentence above fails to inform who exactly is drinking coffee, and in return,
we will ONLY rewrite the modifier it to make it make sense.
CORRECTED SENTENCE:
•While Nicole drank her coffee, something happens from outside the café.
The corrected sentence informs that Nicole was drinking her coffee, until
something happened from outside the café.
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