Patterns of Development
Patterns of Development
Purpose of Paragraphs
Writers are very careful to structure their texts for both connection to
the audience and meeting a specific purpose.
Explains the subject logically, uses transitions that mark the sequence
of major steps, stages, or phases of the process
Process Analysis Example
The next summer Hayes headed into the field. He loaded a refrigerated
18-wheel truck with 500 half-gallon buckets and drove east, followed
by his students. He parked near an Indiana farm, a Wyoming river, and
a Utah pond, filled his buckets with 18,000 pounds of water, and then
turned his rig back toward Berkeley. He thawed the frozen water,
poured it into hundreds of individual tanks, and dropped in thousands
of leopard-frog eggs collected en route. To find out if frogs in the wild
showed hermaphroditism, Hayes dissected juveniles from numerous
sites. To see if frogs were vulnerable as adults, and if the effects were
reversible, he exposed them to atrazine at different stages of their
development.
Elizabeth Royte, “Transsexual Frogs”
Exemplification
Provides a series of examples – facts, specific cases, or instances – to
turn a general idea into a concrete one
Many times it is only used for a paragraph or two, but entire essays can
be dedicated to defining a concept
Definition Example
Good families prize their rituals. Nothing welds a family more than
these. Rituals are vital especially for clans without histories because they
evoke a past, imply a future, and hint at a continuity. No line in the seder
service at Passover reassures more than the last: “Next year in
Jerusalem!” A clan becomes more of a clan each time it gathers to
observe a fixed ritual (Christmas, birthdays, Thanksgiving, and so on),
grieves at a funeral (anyone may come to most funerals; those who do
declare their tribalness), and devises a new rite of its own. Equinox
breakfasts can be at least as welding as Memorial Day parades. Several
of my colleagues and I used to meet for lunch every Pearl Harbor Day,
preferably to eat some politically neutral fare like smorgasbord, to
“forgive” our only ancestrally Japanese friend, Irene Kubota Neves. For
that and other things we became, and remain, a sort of family.
Don’t assume that there is only one cause or one result; don’t mistake
an effect for an underlying cause.
Cause and Effect Example
Great novels can help us master the all-too-rare-skill of tolerating – of
being able to hold in mind – ambiguity and contradiction. Jay Gatsby
has a shady past, but he’s also sympathetic. Huck Finn is a liar, but we
come to love him. A friend’s student once wrote that Alice Munro’s
characters weren’t people he’d choose to hang out with but that reading
her work always made him feel “a little less petty and judgmental.”
Such benefits are denied to the young reader exposed only to books
with banal, simple-minded moral equations as well as to the students
encouraged to come up with reductive, wrong-headed readings of
multilayered texts.