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Lost and Dangling Modifiers

The document discusses different types of modifiers and how to identify and fix misplaced and dangling modifiers. It defines modifiers, adjectives, adverbs, and modifier phrases. It provides examples of misplaced and dangling modifiers and explains how to revise sentences to correctly position modifiers and identify the words they modify.

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Lost and Dangling Modifiers

The document discusses different types of modifiers and how to identify and fix misplaced and dangling modifiers. It defines modifiers, adjectives, adverbs, and modifier phrases. It provides examples of misplaced and dangling modifiers and explains how to revise sentences to correctly position modifiers and identify the words they modify.

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Lost and Dangling Modifiers

Q: What is a
modifier?
A: a word or phrase that qualifies (modifies)
a word, phrase or clause

Types:
– adjectives (modify nouns and pronouns) (for
example: the RED house)
– adverbs (modify verbs) (for example: he ran
QUICKLY)
– modifier phrases (modify an action or an
actor) (LOOKING AT THE CLOCK, he noticed
that he was late)
Q: What is a misplaced
modifier?
A: a misplaced modifier is a
word or word group whose
placement suggests that it
modifies one word or phrase
when it is intended to modify
another.
Misplaced Modifiers
i. More beautiful than any human being,
the explorer noticed the mermaid.
ii. Wild and untamed, Jack entered the
jungle.
iii. Moaning in haunting voices, the house
contained many ghosts.
Q: How do I fix it?
A: Revise the sentence, taking
care to put modifying words,
phrases, and clauses in a
position that clearly identifies the
headword and that does not
awkwardly interrupt a sentence.
HINT: Usually, you can just
expand the main clause.
Examples:
Incorrect: More beautiful than any
human being, the explorer
noticed the mermaid.

Correct: The explorer noticed the


mermaid, which was more beautiful
than any human being.
Examples:
Incorrect: Wild and untamed, Jack entered
the jungle.

Correct: Jack entered the wild and


untamed jungle.
Examples:
Incorrect: Moaning in haunting voices,
the house contained
many ghosts.

Correct: The house contained many


ghosts that moaned in
haunting voices.
Q: What is a
dangling
modifier?
A: A dangling modifier is a word
or phrase that cannot logically
describe, limit, or restrict any
word or word group in the
sentence.
Dangling Modifiers
i. Using a variety of pedagogical
techniques, the students were taught
grammar.
ii. To improve his essay, each page was
proofread.
iii. While reading the novel, the pages that
contain important information should be
marked.
Q: How do I fix it?
A: Add a word or word group
that the dangling modifier can
logically modify.
HINT: You must usually change
the subject of the main clause.
Examples:
Incorrect: Using a variety of pedagogical
techniques, the students were taught
grammar.

Correct: Using a variety of pedagogical


techniques, the teacher taught
the students grammar.
Example:
Incorrect:
To improve his essay, each
page was proofread.

Correct:
To improve his essay, David
proofread each page.
Examples:
Incorrect:
While reading the novel, the
pages that contain important
information should be marked.

Correct:
While reading the novel, you
should mark the pages that
contain important information.
Self Test:

What is wrong with the following


sentences?
1. The professor posted the
notes for the students
covered in class.
2. Changing the oil every
3,000 miles, the car
seemed to run better.
3. Bright and full of flowers,
Jenny entered the meadow.
4. With three minutes to write,
the exam was nearly finished.
5. Careful not to make a tear, the
delicate paper was wrapped
around the gift.
Visit the Writing Centre:
LIB 272 B

Telephone: 416-979-5000 ext. 7192


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Email address: [email protected]

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