UHL 2432 English For Professional Communication: Week 6
UHL 2432 English For Professional Communication: Week 6
Expected Outcomes
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You may need a job desperately, but the more desperate you seem, the faster opportunity will run from you. Be warm and don not over explain everything.
No Signature
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Sign your name at the close of your cover letter using black pen. Script fonts on the computers are lovely, but they are no substitute for your own hand written
signature.
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Maybe you eventually want to become a massage therapist but for now you need work in advertising. Your prospective employer does not need to know that in
your cover letter. In fact, listing unrelated career goals is one reason so many cover letters and resumes are screened out.
The Convincing Cover Letter
Why Cover Letters Get Screened Out
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Employers do not need to know the details of your personal life unless they relate to the job at hand. e.g. you’re a parent
applying to a children’s aid organization and want to demonstrate that your empathy comes from your personal experience.
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Write your cover letter in first person. That means referring to yourself with the pronoun “I” rather than
“she” or “he”. Writing in first person makes you sound confident and direct.
The Convincing Cover Letter
Why Cover Letters Get Screened Out
It is True, Sort Of
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While , we all should put our job experience in the best possible light, never make up qualifications. At best, you will feel guilty and undeserving of the job when
you do get it; at worst it could cost you the job and your reputation if your new employer discovers the inaccuracy.
Wrong Tone
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Your prospective employer will likely form his or her first impression of you from tone of your cover letter. Have a friend read your letter to be sure the tone is
positive and pleasant.
Deadly Typos
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Don’t misspell the hiring contact’s name or title in the address in the greeting or on the envelope. In fact, don’t misspell anything at all
Types of cover letter
1. hard copy correspondence that are divided into three general types:
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The application letter which responds to a known job opening
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The prospecting letter which inquires about possible positions
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The networking letter which requests information and assistance in your job search
2. e-mail correspondence
Format of a Cover Letter (hard copy correspondence)
Contact Information
Date
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a) proper salutation
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b) the purpose of applying for the position
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c) the details applying for the position
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a) elaboration on your skills for the position
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b) your education for the position
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c) your experience for the position
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d) your training exposure
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e) your explanation on how you will be valuable to the company
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a) little explanation on your resume
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b) your requests for interview with specific contact details (state either address or hand
Sample format Incorporating
of a Cover Letter Fully Blocked
for UHL2432- Style with Open
email format Punctuation in
(test format in writing a cover
Week 7) letter
Subject :
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State the purpose / position that you are applying
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Details of application ( the name of the source + the date the ad has been advertised)
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Details on education: UMP + Degree in... + CGPA (Optional)
From :
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1 Technical skills (from ad) with evidence / elaboration
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1 Soft skill ( from ad) with evidence / elaboration
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1 technical (mentioned or not mentioned in the ad) / 1 soft skill (mentioned or not mentioned in the ad) with evidence or elaboration
To :
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Mention of resume attached / video resume (provide link)
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Request for interview
Date :
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Full name
Phone number
Email address
LinkedIn URL [optional]
CC/BCC : [Optional]
First Paragraph
2nd paragraph
Closing paragraph
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When you're looking for a job, it's a good idea to set up an email account just for job searching. That way your professional email won't get mixed in with your personal mail.
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Be sure you have an email account name that is appropriate for business use, i.e. [email protected] rather than [email protected].
3. Use this email account for all your job search communications.
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Use this account to apply for jobs, post your resume, and connect with your contacts. Be sure to check your account frequently so that you can respond immediately to
employers who are interested in hiring you. Also set up your job search email on your smartphone so you can get notifications instantly.
Email Etiquette Tips for Job Seekers
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Many companies monitor email communications, and you don't want to get caught job searching from work. Don't use your work email address for job searching
or networking.
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Avoid ornate, difficult-to-read fonts. Use a basic font like Times New Roman, Arial, Cambria or Calibri. Don’t use color in your text, either. Use size 10 or 12 point, so
that the email is easy to read, without being too big.
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When possible, send your email to a contact person, rather than a general email box.
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Address your email to Dear Mr./Ms. + Name .
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If you don't have a name, address your email to Dear Hiring Manager or simply start with the first paragraph of your message.
Email Etiquette Tips for Job Seekers
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Your email message needs a subject line. If you leave the subject blank, the email is probably going to end up in a spam mailbox or be deleted.
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Make sure you list the position you are applying for in the subject line of your email message, so the employer knows what job you are applying for.
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In less than 60 characters, you might want to include your full name and the job title in the subject as well. Examples of appropriate subject lines:
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Subject Line: Chemical Engineer Position / Your Name
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Subject Line: Application of IT Engineer Position
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Subject Line: Application for Internship Placement
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Subject Line: Application for the Post of Site Engineer
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Be clear about why you are writing and the purpose of your email message. Include this information early on in
the email. The reader is much more likely to respond if they know, at a glance, why you’re reaching out to them.
Email Etiquette Tips for Job Seekers
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In general, your email messages should look a lot like business letters. They should include words, not acronyms, slang or emoticons. The email letters should be written in full sentences and
paragraphs. Begin with a salutation, and end with a send-off and your signature.
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The only difference between an email and a business letter is that in an email you don’t need to include the employer’s contact information, the date, and your information in the top left corner.
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People tend to skim, or even ignore, very long emails. Keep your email brief and to the point.
Email Etiquette Tips for Job Seekers
11. When you apply for a job via email, copy and paste your cover letter into the email message or
write your cover letter in the body of an email message.
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If the job posting asks you to send your resume as an attachment, send your resume as a PDF or a Word document.
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Choose a file name that includes your name so that it will be easier for them to track and manage it.
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Example: Type of the file + Full name
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Resume_Yasmin Hashim
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Cover Letter_Yasmin Hashim
Email Etiquette Tips for Job Seekers
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Include an email signature with your contact information, so it's easy for the hiring manager to get in touch with you. Including a link to your LinkedIn profile is a good way to
give the hiring manager more information on your skills and abilities.
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Below is a sample professional email signature:
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FirstName LastName
Email Address
Phone
LinkedIn Profile URL (Optional)
Email Etiquette Tips for Job Seekers
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Make sure you proofread your email for grammar and spelling errors. Clear writing is just as important in an
email as it is in a business letter.
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Before you send your email, send the message to yourself to check that the formatting works. Also, make sure
that any files you attached are easy to open. If everything looks good, resend the email to the employer.
Email Etiquette Tips for Job Seekers
• Sources / Taken and adapted from:
• https://www.thebalancecareers.com/email-etiquette-tips-for-job-seek
ers-2062199
• https://www.monster.ca/career-advice/article/formal-language-in-job
-hunting-emails
• https://www.thebalancecareers.com/how-to-name-your-resume-and-
cover-letter-2063300
• https://www.indeed.com/career-advice/resumes-cover-letters/how-t
o-send-an-email-cover-letter-with-example
Incorporating
Sample Fully Blocked
format of a Style with Open
Cover Letter Punctuation in
writing a cover
for UHL2432
letter
Applicant’s address
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Name (optional)
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Address
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Contact number
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Professional E-mail address
Date
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Ms. / Mr. + Full name
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Position/post
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Department (optional)
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Company’s address
Recipient’s address
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State the purpose / position that you are applying
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Details of application ( the name of the source + the date the ad has been advertised)
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Details on education: UMP + Degree in... + CGPA (Optional)
First Paragraph
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Signature
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Name
2nd paragraph
Closing paragraph
The fully blocked layout is now the Open punctuation is often Although fully blocked layout is
most widely used method of used with the fully blocked used by many organisations,
display for all business documents. some still prefer to adopt their
layout. Again this reduces
This style has been commonly used own in-house style for document
since the mid 1970s. It is thought typing time because there is
no need for any unnecessary layout. That is fine too, as long as
to look very business-like and
you remember the golden rule of
sleek. This layout reduces typing full stops and commas. Open
consistency. It is not a good
time as there are no indentations punctuation means missing
for new paragraphs or the closing practice to use one layout today
out all non-essential full stops and another one tomorrow, or
section. Fully blocked layout simply
and commas, for example at leave one line space between
means that every line is aligned to
the left margin. No paragraphs are the end of each line of the paragraphs in some letters and
indented, no headings are centred address, after the salutation two in others. Be consistent.
– everything starts at the left. and closing section. Consistency is good.
Activity 2
Study the sample layout of a business letter and answer the questions that follow.
If you have a company or employer in mind, do some research regarding their policies
and principles.
Review websites, brochures, pamphlets and any other pertinent materials you can find
about the company.
Before you begin writing your letter, take some time to brainstorm. Make a list of
reasons why you’re the ideal candidate.
A Few Things to Keep in Mind
The point of the cover letter is to flesh out your resume’s selling points not to
repeat the same things that appear in your resume.
Begin with…
Proper salutation
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It is important to include an appropriate salutation at the beginning of the cover letter.
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Real name: En. Ahmad bin Nazri ~ Dear En. Ahmad / Dear Mr. Ahmad
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Real name: Mr. Lee Wee Liew ~ Dear Mr. Lee
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Real name: Ms. Kalpana A/P Vijay ~ Dear Ms. Kalpana
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Real name: Pn. Fatiha Atika binti Ramlan ~ Dear Pn. Fatiha Atika / Dear Ms. Fatiha Atika
By any means necessary, find the name of the recipient/the person you should write to. If you do not know the
name, you may use: Dear Human Resource Manager (*but as last resort option only)
Opening Paragraph
Explains the position you are Explains details applying over the
applying for. job position.
I am interested in the assistant position advertised in
XXX. I am currently employed as Legislative
Director for Assemblywoman XXXX, Chairperson of
the NYS Assembly XXX. I accepted this position
because of the emphasis on the writing and research
skills which are applicable to your requirements for
an author’s assistant (establishes a purpose). My
experience in the NYS Assembly has afforded me the
opportunity to become familiar with the consolidated
and unconsolidated laws of the State of New York. I
also have extensive experience in legal and policy
research (forms details applying for the position)
Body Paragraph(s)
Elaborates on skills for the position
Mentions resume
Ask for an interview with specific contact details. State either address or
hand phone number
To further acquaint you with the specifics of my background I am
enclosing my resume (mentions resume). I hope you will consider me
for this position as I can be reached at the above address or by phone
at (019) 2710000 (request for interview with specific contact details).
I look forward to meeting with you and discussing my qualifications
in more detail.
W6 2nd Meeting
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a) I am writing to you in response to your advertisement in the Washington Post, dated May 13th, 2015.
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b) As you can see from my enclosed resume, my experience and accomplishments match this position’s requirements.
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c) I would like to point out......(add text that is most relevant to the position.)
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d) During my 5 yrs. with XXX, I initiated extensive improvements that resulted in garnering 30 more clients for the period ending....
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e) I would appreciate the opportunity.... to meet with you to discuss my qualifications for your position, OR,...to speak with you in person.
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f) Please accept this letter as an expression of my interest in the position of...
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g) A copy of my resume has been enclosed for your review.
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h) I believe that my skill-set matches perfectly with your requirements.
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i) I possess the right combination of nursing skills to be an asset to your organisation.
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j) I would welcome the opportunity to meet with you to discuss my potential contributions to your company.
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k) I look forward....to hearing back from you....OR.....to your reply.
Activity 7
The cover letter below is Circle the letter of
divided into ten parts.
Each part has three the best statement
statements choices. for each part.
Activity 8
Good verbs can go a long way towards
giving your accomplishments. Incorporate
some of these powerful action verbs to
make your cover letter more appealing
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Use your keywords to build success
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