Lesson 2 - Basic Tools For Writing
Lesson 2 - Basic Tools For Writing
TOOLS FOR
WRITING
Prepared by: Nabillah Rafidah binti Abdul Kadir
structures
• A simple sentence contains a subject and a verb.
• It expresses a single complete thought that can stand
on its own.
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The baby cried for food.
There is a subject and a verb that expresses a complete
thought.
Sentence After eating lunch at The Cheesecake Factory, Tim went to the
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gym to exercise.
The independent clause is ‘Tim went to the gym to exercise.” The
subordinating clause before it is dependent on the main, independent
clause. If one were to say “after eating lunch at The Cheesecake
Factory,” it would be an incomplete thought.
Opinionated women are given disadvantages in societies that
privilege male accomplishments.
The subject is “opinionated women” and the verb is “are given.” The
first part of the sentence “opinionated women are given disadvantages
in societies” is an independent clause that expresses a complete
thought. The following “that privilege male accomplishments” is a
relative clause that describes which types of societies.
The woman who taught Art History 210 was fired for stealing
school supplies.
The dependent clause in this sentence is “who taught Art History 210”
because if removed, the rest of the sentence would stand as an
independent clause. “Who taught Art History 210” is an adjective
clause that provides necessary details about the subject, woman.
Sentence
structures
After the two soccer players lost their game, they
joined their other teammates for lunch, and they went
to the movies.
If we remove the dependent clause “after the two soccer
players lost their game,” we have a compound sentence.
The dependent clause makes this sentence compound-
complex.
The man believed in the system, and he knew that
justice would prevail after the murderer was sent to
jail.
Types • Imperative
• Exclamatory.
• Interrogative
The use of Use commas to separate words and word groups in a simple series
of three or more items.
comma (,)
of the adjectives is interchangeable.
Example: He is a strong, healthy man.
We could also say healthy, strong man.
Example: We stayed at an expensive summer resort.
We would not say summer expensive resort, so no comma.
Another way to determine if a comma is needed is to
mentally put and between the two adjectives. If the result
still makes sense, add the comma. In the examples
above, a strong and healthy man makes sense, but an
expensive and summer resort does not.
comma (,)
together by using a comma instead of a period. This
results in the dreaded run-on sentence or, more
technically, a comma splice.
Incorrect: He walked all the way home, he shut the door.
There are several simple remedies:
Correct: He walked all the way home. He shut the door.
Correct: After he walked all the way home, he shut the
door.
Correct: He walked all the way home, and he shut the door.
comma (,)
connectors such as and, or, but, etc., put a comma at the
end of the first clause.
Incorrect: He walked all the way home and he shut the
door.
Correct: He walked all the way home, and he shut the door.
Some writers omit the comma if the clauses are both
quite short:
Example: I paint and he writes.
comma (,)
a comma is generally unnecessary.
Example: He thought quickly but
still did not answer correctly.
But sometimes a comma in this situation is necessary to
avoid confusion.
Confusing: I saw that she was busy and prepared to leave.
Clearer with comma: I saw that she was busy, and
prepared to leave.
Without a comma, the reader is liable to think that "she"
was the one who was prepared to leave.
comma (,)
with an independent clause followed by a dependent
clause.
Example: Let me know now if you are not sure about this.
comma (,)
commas.
Examples:
Freddy, who has a limp, was in an auto accident.
If we already know which Freddy is meant, the description is not
essential.
comma (,)
sentence, such as well, yes, why, hello, hey,etc.
Examples:
Why, I can't believe this!
No, you can't have a dollar.
comma (,)
endearment, or title of a person directly addressed.
Examples:
Will you, Aisha, do that assignment for me?
Yes, old friend, I will.
Good day, Captain.
comma (,)
year, and—what most people forget!—always put one
after the year, also.
Example: It was in the Sun's June 5, 2003, edition.
comma (,)
remember to put one after the state, also.
Example: I'm from the Akron, Ohio, area.
comma (,)
comma follows the last name: Martin Luther King, Jr. This
comma is no longer considered mandatory. However, if a
comma does precede Sr. or Jr., another comma must
follow the entire name when it appears midsentence.
Correct: Al Mooney Sr. is here.
Correct: Al Mooney, Sr., is here.
Incorrect: Al Mooney, Sr. is here.
comma (,)
with names.
Example: Al Mooney, M.D., is here.
comma (,)
sentence, it might not need a comma.
Examples:
Is "I don't care" all you can say to me?
Saying "Stop the car" was a mistake.
comma (,)
Use a comma to separate a statement from a question.
Example: I can go, can't I?
comma (,)
Use a comma to separate contrasting parts of a sentence.
Example: That is my money, not yours.
comma (,)
Use a comma before and after certain introductory words
or terms, such as namely, that is, i.e., e.g., and for instance,
when they are followed by a series of items.
Example: You may be required to bring many items, e.g.,
sleeping bags, pans, and warm clothing.
(‘) • We also add ’s to plural words that don’t end in ‘s’: women’s
books, people’s opinions.
• For plurals that do end in ‘s’, we simply put an apostrophe at the
end of the word: the animals’ owner, my parents’ house.
• For singular words ending in ‘s’, you can add either ’s or – for
more formal writing – just the apostrophe: Tess’s phone number,
Ben Holmes’s friend, Dickens’ novels.
• We often use apostrophes at the end of the names of jobs when
we are talking about the place where they work: go to the
doctor’s, the greengrocer’s.
• In contracted forms, the apostrophe shows where one or more
letters has been left out. For example, I’d can mean I had or I
would, and they’re means they are. These forms are not suitable
for very formal writing, where it is better to write the words in
full.
• Another very common contraction is n’t, which is short for ‘not’
and is used to make negative words such
as isn’t, wouldn’t, and haven’t
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Apostrophe it’s and who’s.
• These are contractions and are short for it/who
splices and
writers. Students should learn that for two independent
clauses to be joined, they require a comma and a
run-on
coordinating conjunction or simply a semicolon.
sentences
splices and
sentences (independent clauses) are joined with no
punctuation.
Joseph Cornell was an innovative American artist known for
run-on his shadow boxes and collages his art became more famous
after his death in 1972.
splices and
sentences.
Joseph Cornell was an innovative American artist known for
run-on
his shadow boxes and collages. His art became more
famous after his death in 1972.
splices and Joseph Cornell was an innovative American artist known for
his shadow boxes and collages; his art became more famous
sentences
Using I Before E
• Use i before e, except after c, or when sounded as "a"
as in "neighbor" and "weigh."
• Examples: believe, chief, piece, and thief; deceive,
receive, weigh, and freight
• Common exceptions: efficient, weird, height, neither,
ancient, caffeine, foreign
Changing a Final Y to I
• Change a final y to i before a suffix, unless the suffix
begins with i.
• Examples:
defy + ance = defiance
party + es = parties
pity + ful = pitiful
try + es = tries
try + ing = trying
copy + ing = copying
occupy + ing = occupying
• Common exceptions: journeying, memorize