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Eka Yunita Rahayu Rosselyne Tampubolon Ronaldo Ahmad Sidik Nisrina Korin

The document discusses how weather changes can negatively impact humans and agriculture. It notes that weather can change faster than climate change, with weather changing within 24 hours and climate change taking 11-30 years. It then explains how erratic temperatures, unpredictable rain patterns, global warming and rising averages are causing weather changes. These changes can harm health, increase disease risks, and damage agriculture through crop failures and confusing farmers. The document concludes by stating that weather changes overall create negative effects.

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Eka Yunita Rahayu Rosselyne Tampubolon Ronaldo Ahmad Sidik Nisrina Korin

The document discusses how weather changes can negatively impact humans and agriculture. It notes that weather can change faster than climate change, with weather changing within 24 hours and climate change taking 11-30 years. It then explains how erratic temperatures, unpredictable rain patterns, global warming and rising averages are causing weather changes. These changes can harm health, increase disease risks, and damage agriculture through crop failures and confusing farmers. The document concludes by stating that weather changes overall create negative effects.

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June

1. Eka Yunita Rahayu


2. Rosselyne Tampubolon
3. Ronaldo Ahmad Sidik
4. Nisrina Korin

Mathematicts Education A
Weather
Paragraph 1
I. Weather, natural Have you ever heard
activities change that what weather about is ?
occurring in certain Weather is natural
regions activities change that
occurring in certain
a. Predict a weather
regions. Somebody
change faster than predict that a weather
predict climate change can change faster than
b. The time a weather predict climate change.
and climate change The time a weather and
i. weather change climate change there are
needs 24 hours weather change needs
24 hours and climate
ii. climate change
change needs 11-30
needs 11-30 years years.
Paragraph 2
II. The weather changes like Then as you know the weather
unfriendly with human changes like unfriendly with
a. Erratic temperature human what can support this
i. the temperature feels too hot suspected ? First, Erratic
at mid-day temperature that the
ii. too cold at night temperature feels too hot at
iii. maybe rain at the day after mid-day can you feel it?, too
b. At past, rain goes down cold at night, and maybe rain at
between October until April the day after. And the second at
i. Today is November, but rain past, rain goes down between
just goes down for several days October until April, next Today is
December, but rain just goes
d. Cause changes in the weather
down for several days. Many
i. global warming
cause why changes in the
ii. an increasing average weather there are global
temperature process warming, and an increasing
-atmosphere average temperature process
-sea there are atmosphere, sea, and
-land in the Earth land in the Earth
Paragraph 3
These weather changes
III. These weather changes create negative effect for
create negative effect for many aspects first
many aspects negative effect for health
a. Negative effect for health and agriculture, second
and agriculture makes the body easy to
b. Makes the body easy to prone diseases , and third
prone diseases the diseases that usually
c. The diseases that usually appear among others
appear
headache or migraine, flu,
i. headache or migraine
nosebleed, out of breath,
ii. flu
and respiratory disorders.
iii. nosebleed
The last is the easy
iv. out of breath
diseases still disturb our
v. respiratory disorders.
activities over all weather
d.The easy diseases still
changes create negative
disturb our activities.
effect.
Paragraph 4
IV. The weather changes Furhthermore the
harm the agricultural in weather changes harm
Indonesia the agricultural in
a. Make farmers confused Indonesia. In between
and crop failure first make farmers
b. human save the nature confused and crop
and not destroy failure human save the
nature and not destroy,
c. If the temperature
if the temperature
doesnt change, so the
doesnt change, so the
weather never change
weather never change.
Suitability Main Idea
Inparagraph 1 : synchron between
outline and paragraph

Inparagraph 2 : synchron between


outline and paragraph

Inparagraph 3 : synchron between


outline and paragraph

Inparagraph 4 :there are two points in


outline of the out of topic
Comment
Why the title of article is weather, why
not weather change ? Because in
paragraph 1 to 4 is discuss all about
weather change.

In paragraph one, its no problome.

But, ini paragraph two, there is a


sentences that doesnt fit. In outline
Today is November, necessearily This
month is November
In paragraph two, there is different
between outline and paragraph. In outline
said, Today is November but in
paragraph said Today is December

Next, in paragraph three, be found in


paragraph ...... and third the diseases
that usually..... but in the fact the
diseases that usually appear among is
explain sentences before, the body easy
to prone diseases not to be a new point
in outline.
Stillin paragraph three, there are closing
sentences said over all weather changes
create negative effect must be before the
word over all give punctuation coma (,) or
dot (.)

The last in paragraph four, there are mistyping


Furhthermore necessarily Furthermore

In paragraph four again, there are two last


sentences not synchron. Paragraph four
discuss about weather changes harm the
agricultural but in two last sentences not
related to them.

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