Business Communication HND II
Business Communication HND II
Course Instructor
Dr.
BONGAJUM S.N
General Objectives
- Provide students with detailed knowledge on business communication
- Acquire practical and oral skills
- Acquire skills in report writing
- Acquire/use communication skills in different business situations.
Syllabi
UNIT I: Effective communication in Business
Characteristics-process -importance of communication in business -
different kinds of communication -features of communication.
UNIT II: Process of preparing effective business message
Planning –Steps- Organisation Plan
UNIT III. Effective communication principle
-Styles: completeness, clarity, consciousness, correctness, concreteness
-Gesture: consideration, Manners: Courtesy, presentation and follow-up
UNIT IV. Business letters
-Direct request, inquiries, claims and request for adjustment
-Request regarding routine business or public causes, invitation, orders,
reservation, favourable replies, unsolicited favourable messages, request
sales
- Evaluating your achievement, market research, making preliminary career
decisions resume, job application letter.
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UNIT I: EFFECTIVE COMMUNICATION IN BUSINESS
Communication is relevant not only to human beings, but also to other
living beings. It is the most important link that connects all living organisms.
Communication takes place not only among people, but also between people
and animals and among animals. The dog owner, the horse rider, the
ringmaster in the circus and the fortune-teller communicate with their
animals and birds.
The word communication, which as discussed has its origin in the Latin word
‘communis’, evokes many images in one’s mind. It could be a process, a
network, a technique or a form of entertainment. It could be personal or
business- related communication, and as we have seen, it has developed its
modes, channels, instruments and gadgets over the years.
The word ‘communication’ in the singular form is different from the plural,
‘communications’. When we attempt to define communication, we are
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looking at a dynamic and evolving subject. It is no surprise, therefore, that
communication, over the years, has seen numerous dimensions.
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7. Communication is the means by which power is exerted (Schacter).This
brings out the dominant role played by communication in empowering
people in their individual and organizational endeavours.
8. Communication maintains and animates life, it creates a common pool of
ideas, strengthens the feelings of togetherness through exchange of
messages and translates thought into action (UNESCO, Many Voices
One World). This definition underlines what communication strives to
achieve, especially through information sharing, relationship building and
action orientation.
Each of these definitions thus rightly highlights the important facets or key
thoughts concerning communication. It is seen as an interchange, an
expression, a transmission, a dynamic process, a connecting link, a means to
power and a force that maintains and animates life.
Communication is both an art and a science. It may be an inborn quality or a
talent as it is when we say ‘the gift of the gab’. On the other hand, it is a
discipline amenable to systematic study and mastery. It has an element of
creativity, as well as an element of precision. It calls for mastering of skills as
well as techniques.
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I.2 Purpose of Communication
Inform
The first and foremost objective of any communication is to inform. In today’s
world, information is power. Communication brings power through
information. The dissemination of information covers a wide range of areas,
both internal and external. People within the organization have to be kept
informed about the organizational goals, objectives, procedures, processes,
systems, plans, priorities and strategies. Equally important is the objective of
ensuring effective external communication—with customers, prospects,
competitors, suppliers and the public, about products, services, plans,
happenings, events and achievements. The information needs within the
organization take on different nomenclatures—market- related information,
product-related information, client-related information, employee
information, executive information and management information.
Educate
Another objective of communication in an organization is to educate, i.e., to
disseminate knowledge and develop skills and attitudes among the people
working in the organization. There is also a need to familiarize them with the
systems, procedures and processes. This process of education may extend to
customers as well. This may be done through product literature, publicity,
presentations and demonstrations.
Train
Communication is an integral component of any training program. Business
organizations need to train people to achieve proficiency in specific skills.
They have to provide working knowledge and attitudinal inputs through
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training programs to employees at various hierarchical levels. Training
sessions involve teaching, instruction, demonstration, practice and
discussion. The process of communication is integral to each of these.
Motivate
People in any business organization have to be motivated to pursue goals
and achieve higher levels of performance. High levels of morale and
motivation are a must to ensure high levels of productivity and efficiency on
a sustainable basis.
Communication provides the means to keep the motivation levels high. Talks,
lectures, films, meetings, workshops and non-verbal messages are among
the means used to motivate people.
Integrate
Large business organizations have different business units, departments and
territorial divisions. Each of them pursues different goals, sub-goals and
target sections.
Promote
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Promotional efforts are a must for any organization to fully achieve its
objectives. One of the Ps of marketing (the others being Product, Price and
Placement), promotion relates to various activities such as advertising,
publicity, public relations and communication, which aim at customer
information, customer education, customer communication and customer
retention. In the marketing concept, the customer is said to move from stage
to stage till the transaction is completed. They move progressively from the
state of awareness of the need for a product to the knowledge of the product
and thereafter to a state of product preference. The needs of the customers
develop into effective demand for products, resulting in the purchase of the
product or availing of the service. Promotional aspects of the service are
particularly relevant in a service industry like banking or insurance, where
the product, i.e., the service, cannot be readily ‘seen’. Financial service
providers essentially sell benefits. For this, they have to organize effective
promotional measures, which seek to inform, educate, persuade and
actualize the clients/markets. Communication constitutes the basic plank on
which promotional strategies are built.
Entertain
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clarification, confirmation and evaluation. Communication—both oral and
written—facilitates decision making in any business organization.
Helps networking
Better staffing
Mutual trust
Better mutual trust between employees and management is very crucial for
effective functioning of the organization. When there is better and effective
communication it reduces misunderstanding and develop better trust.
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1.4 Process of Communication
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These, in fact, are the essential elements or ingredients, which facilitate the
communication process. Each element plays an important role in making the
communication effective:
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A channel is the vehicle through which a message is carried from the
communicator to the receiver. The channels of communication are many-
written, spoken, verbal, non-verbal, mass media like TV, radio,
newspapers, books, etc. choosing the appropriate channel, one most
suitable for the message as well as the receiver, is a complicated task.
Success and failure of communication depends on the selection of the right
channel. For example, if you have prepared a campaign on ‘National
Integration’ what media would you choose to reach the intended audience?
And even after selecting the media you have to decide if it is feasible cost
wise, taking into account the number of people and the kind of people who
will be exposed to your message, and certain other factors. Actually your
intention or desire would be to reach out to the maximum number of people
but for efficient communication your attempt should be to minimize time and
cost in the total information exchange effort.
The receiver, at the other end of the communication, is the recipient of the
message and must possess the same orientation as the communicator. If the
receiver does not have the ability to listen, to read, to think, he will not be
able to receive and decode the messages in the manner the communicator
want him to. For effective communication, the receiver is the most important
link in the communication process.
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Noise is an interruption that can creep in at any point of the communication
process and make it ineffective. Environment is one major cause that
interferes with message reception: like noises from the roadside, constant
chattering of individuals outside the communication act, blaring loudspeaker,
faulty transmission, etc. noise can occur in other forms also; poor
handwriting, heavy accent or soft speech, communication in a poorly lit
room, etc. in fact, these are barriers to effective communication. For smooth
and effective communication, it is necessary to eliminate or reduce noise as
far as possible.
Oral Communication
Oral communication refers to the spoken word. It takes the form of sounds
and words. Starting out as a struggle by the early man, oral communication
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has had a long journey. It has developed across different regions, cultures,
countries and continents. The development of numerous languages across
the world has empowered oral communication.
Oral communication plays a vital role in everyday life, both for individuals
and organizations. It is, indeed, the most commonly used method of
communication both at the social level and at the organizational level.
Everyone makes copious use of oral communication in their transactions and
interactions. For the individual, talking and speaking provide a very
dependable means of communication within the family and in social groups.
Oral communication is also extensively and gainfully used within
organizations and business entities as well.
MERITS DEMERITS
1. It can be readily used 1. It is not very effective when the
2. It is instantaneous target group is spread out.
2. It is constrained by language,
3. It can be persuasive
accent and vocabulary.
4. It is cost effective 3. It is also constrained by noise and
5. It facilitates effective exchange. other physical barriers.
4. It is not normally recorded or
6. It works very well in small groups
documented.
7. It can be supplemented by non- 5. It does not permit repeated
verbal messages reference person-to-person
6. It cannot be erased
7. It is often dependent on memory
Written Communication
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power of writing is eloquently expressed in the saying ‘the pen is mightier
than the sword’. The author of this book is also communicating with the
readers through this piece of writing.
After experimenting with writing on sand, stone and leaves, man invented
paper, pen, books and printing. Newspapers and journals developed as the
media of mass communication.
Written communication is, more often than not, well structured. The words
are carefully chosen to suit the message and the context. Be it a letter, a
circular, a memo, a brochure or a report, the subject matter is carefully
presented keeping in view the receptivity of the reader. This is how it ought
to be. Progressive organizations make conscious efforts to ensure that people
across the organization acquire well-developed writing skills. It is possible
and necessary to collect all relevant facts and figures beforehand so that the
communication is properly structured.
MERITS DEMERITS
1. It has an extremely wide reach. 1. It takes time to reach its target.
2. It creates a record and is easily 2. It is less interactive.
documented.
3. It can be erased and rewritten. 3. It depends on word power.
4. It is amenable to a high level of 4. It takes more time to get feedback.
planning and structuring.
5. It facilitates repeated reference. 5. It depends on the messenger and the mode
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of transmission.
6. It depends less on memory since 6. It is constrained by language, handwriting and
efficiency
facts and figures can be mobilized of the tools used.
before hand.
Non-Verbal Communication
Visual Communication
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words’. Pictures, graphs, charts and diagrams often convey the intended
message quite effectively.
Audio-Visual Communication
Such communications are, generally speaking, very effective and carry high
retention
1. Priests and elders convey their blessings by placing their hands on the
heads of people bowing to them. (sign of blessing)
2. A player raises two of his fingers in a V sign after a game. (sign of victory)
3. A teacher puts her finger on her lips in a nursery class. (sign that says,
‘keep silent’)
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4. Disciples and youngsters touch the feet of teachers and elders. (sign of
reverence)
Such signs are sometimes group specific and are accepted as a matter of
convention. A sign may also relate to a written mark conventionally used to
convey specific meaning. Such signs may be general, as in the case of road
and traffic signs or subject-specific signs, specific to a profession or body of
knowledge. In mathematics, there are numerous signs specific to arithmetic,
algebra and geometry also in science and medicine.
Silence
Apart from the different methods and channels of communication, one can
also look at various types of communication. Communication can be
categorized into different types depending upon the level at which it takes
place, the direction it takes or by its very nature. Some of the commonly
referred to types of communication are:
5. Lateral communication
6. Interactive communication
7. Mass communication
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8. Global communication
9. Supportive communication
11. Grapevine
Personal Communication
Internal Communication
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Newsletter
Employee
Email
Mail Table
Staff meeting
Staff evaluation
External Communication
Catalog
Email
Business letters
Press Releases
Press conferences
Assistance service
Publicity
Online content
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Commercials
Social media presence
Brochures
Plenary assemblies
Meetings
Upward Communication
Downward Communication
Downward communication moves from top to the bottom, i.e., from the CEO
downwards. It travels through senior executives to junior-level functionaries,
from the controlling office to the branch, from the head of the division to the
head of the unit. Corporate goals, business priorities, motivational letters,
work-related instructions, newsletters, letters from the CEO/General
Manager’s desk are all typical examples of downward communication.
There may be some communication which would move both upward and
downward. A typical example of this is performance budgeting, which is a
two- way process. It is a top-to-bottom as well as bottom-to-top exercise.
Formal Communication
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agreements and reports are some of the channels that facilitate the flow of
formal communication in business organizations.
Informal Communication
Lateral Communication
Interactive Communication
Mass Communication
Global Communication
Supportive Communication
Social Communication
Grapevine Communication
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spreads by way of gossip and rumours. It travels through informal networks
and quite often travels faster than the formal messages. Sometimes, it gets
more powerful and becomes more receptive than the formal communication.
The prevalence of this type of communication in an organization has to be
recognized and accepted. A skilled communicator can derive benefits from
such a communication as well. It may not always be possible to control the
grapevine, but, nevertheless, an able communicator knows how to influence
it. Like any other type of communication, this one too has its merits and
demerits.
Commercial communication
Institutional communication
1. Practical in nature
2. Factual in nature
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clarification of the information. It helps to understand the message of the
sender effectively.
5. Pre-planned target
6. Persuasive in nature
Planning steps:
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2. Analyze your audience;
The next step is to choose the ideas for your message. The ideas you
include depends on the type of message you are sending, the situation
and the cultural context.
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If you are answering a letter, jot down the main points to discuss.
Suppose you are sending an unsolicited or complex message, then list
down your ideas as they come to you and then select the best ideas for
your receiver.
After having decided what you wish to include, determine if you require
specific facts, figures, quotation or other forms of evidence to support your
message.
Always check your data for correctness such as names, dates, rates,
addresses and statistics for precision.
Before you write your first draft, outline your message. The order of the
presentation of your message is as important as the ideas themselves.
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Direct-Request Plan & Good-News Plan use the Direct or Deductive
approach. •Bad-News Plan & Persuasive-Request Plan use the Indirect or
Inductive Approach. DIRECT OR DEDUCTIVE APPROACH .The direct approach
can be used when your audience will have a favourable or neutral reaction to
your message. So,
You can begin with the main idea or best news. After the opening, include all
necessary explanatory details in one or several paragraphs and end with an
appropriate, friendly closing. .Use the direct-request plan when the main
purpose of the message is to make a request that requires less persuasion.
This can be used to grant requests, announce favourable or neutral
information, and exchange routine information.
a)-Main idea or good-news subject first when the reader will consider the
information favourable or neutral.
b)-Buffer first if the news is not favourable
C)-Attention getting statements first when the news is a persuasive
request.
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2. Make theopening considerate, courteous, concise, and clear.
3. Check for completeness
CLOSING
Whenever you talk about communication, the first thing that comes in our
mind is the principles of communication or the 7cs of communication. With
these principles, we come to know how to make communication effective. So
that it could be easy to understand for the targeted group of people.
Communication must be effective because in business, individuals have to
communicate with their workers, with customers, with buyers and sellers and
so on.
7CS of Communication
Completeness
Conciseness
Consideration
Concreteness
Clarity
Courtesy
Correctness
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1-Completeness
Completeness refers to the fact that the information sent by the sender
should be complete in every aspect. So that it will result in an effective
communication. The sender should analyze the receiver’s mind and send him
that message according to his intellectual level. Firstly, the sender should
send the message by considering all the facts and figures and should convey
all the relevant information. Moreover if he fails to do so he should answer
every question of the receiver by providing extra details. Let’s quote a simple
example here. Suppose if you are working with a company and you are
dealing with the engineering area.
One of your customers ask about the A.C mechanism. You are supposed
to provide him extra details to make him satisfy this will result in effective
communication. If you failed to provide the relevant information in a short
period of time. Then it means the business communication between you
and your customer has failed, and he might shift to some other company.
Example:
“You haven’t completed the task that I set you,” is a message full of
ambiguity. Instead, make sure you include all relevant facts:
“The data analysis for client ABC that I asked for on March 5 should have
been completed by today. Will you have it finished this afternoon?”
2-Conciseness
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communication helps to save money too. Remember that the basic aim of a
business is to provide to the point information.
In fact without using jumbo and repetitive words that takes time. For
example, if your customer asks you to provide the details of your clients. You
should provide him with the list of the names of the clients. Providing
business and personal details are useless and just a waste of time. Always
use abbreviations like I.T, W.H.O, to save the time too.
Example:
“As a matter of fact, during the month of June, all employees must ensure
that they wear appropriate clothing to ensure they stay cool while the air-
conditioning is being repaired.”
3-Consideration
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Example:
Imagine that you are unable to pay a promised bonus. How do you
communicate this?
“We are unable to pay bonuses now. The business is awaiting payment from
a major client. Once this payment is received, we can consider paying
contractual bonuses as soon as is practicable.”
4-Concreteness
Example:
Give your employee concrete direction with evidence and an active voice:
“Your sales conversion rate is below 50%. You must improve this to the team
average of 65% or higher.”
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5-Clarity
Clarity means to be clear in the goal rather than chasing too many goals
at a specific time. In business communication the messages sent should be
clear with exact wordings that are short, to avoid misunderstandings.
For effective communication, easy to understand words should be used. Easy
wordings help in understanding the ideas and thinking of the sender. While
communicating the sender should be clear of the purpose of communicating.
If not so then the receiver will not understand his message. Receivers are not
capable of assuming what the sender wants to say. Therefore it is necessary
to make easy and precise messages.
Example:
6-Courtesy
It means not only knowing the receiver’s ideas and thoughts, but also to
know his feelings. It means that the sender is sending the message by
respecting the feelings of the receiver. Therefore, the sender should be
polite and caring while writing a message. Courteous messages strengthen
relations. Senders should use the words that show respect and care for the
audience. He can frequently use “thank you” and “please” to show respect
for the feelings of receiver.
Example:
“I don’t appreciate how your team ignores requests for collaboration from my
team. The work we do is equally as important as your work. Could you make
certain that your team collaborates more readily from now on?”
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Such a message is unlikely to encourage a negative response. Instead, a
more effective approach would be:
“I understand that your team is extremely busy and receives many requests
to collaborate on project work. However, my team is working a highly urgent
project with enormous mutual benefits. I would greatly appreciate if you
could ask your team to collaborate more effectively with mine to move this
project forward faster. If there is any help that we can provide to make this
happen, please let me know.”
7-Correctness
Example:
“You may enter the building during opening hours but must show relevant
I.D.”
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Correctness in this communication is conveyed by saying, “You may enter
the building during the opening hours of 9am to 5pm daily, but must show
your employee identity card.”
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11. Written communication, very importantly, creates records and reference
sources.
12. Written communication, when presented in an appealing manner can
create the right impression.
The advantages of written communication far outweigh its limitations and
this method of communication is extensively used in the business world.
Business letters are extremely popular because they have all these
advantages which a written correspondence enjoys.
4.1 Business letter and its importance
A bad letter stands out like a sore thumb for any of its deficiencies, which
might be any of the following:
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Business is all about creating goodwill, favourable impressions, attracting
attention, creating interest, wooing customers, reaching prospects and
building relationships.
3. Scope: The scope of business letter is wide and contains various types of
business information. The scope of personal letter is limited and contains
only personal information.
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9. Language: The language of business letter should be easy and simple.
The language of personal letter may be easy, poetic, emotional etc.
10. Copy: Copy of business letter is preserved. Copy of personal letter may
not be preserved.
11. Method: Business letter uses direct and persuasive method. Personal
letter uses only direct method.
A letter has many parts—outside, inside, top, bottom, middle, left, right,
first page, second page, enclosures and annexure. Each one of these parts
has a certain significance and carries a definite place in the context of letter
writing. All these external and internal features concerning a business letter
carry a time-tested position and significance. All the same, when we refer to
a position or placement, we are not necessarily referring to a very rigid
position for all times. Over a period of time, business writers have brought in
flexibility and improvisations resulting in certain choice of positioning as well.
Thus, notwithstanding the various types and places relevant to a business
letter, it is possible to have different styles in writing a business letter.
Letterhead
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Reference Line
Business letters have reference details which help in clearly tracing the letter
to its source and context. When the business is large, in terms of functions
and customers covered, it becomes necessary to compartmentalize the
activities into different regions and functions. A separate file can be
maintained for each customer.
Date Line
The date line follows or stays close to the reference line and clearly mentions
the date, month, and the year of the letter. The date is mentioned in many
ways—22.05.2017 or 22 May 2017 or May 22, 2017. The most appropriate
way of stating the date would be the second one, i.e., 22 May 2017 for its
lack of ambiguity.
Inside Address
Inside address refers to the addressee or the person to whom the letter is
addressed. It may be an individual, a functionary, a group or an institution.
The letter may be addressed by name or by designation. The inside address
need not give the full postal address which has to be necessarily furnished
outside. It is generally restricted to the name and/or the designation, the
department and the office, since this position is well recognized. The word
‘to’ may be avoided for greater elegance.
Salutation
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Salutation is a must for every letter. It relates the letter to the reader. It can
takemany forms such as ‘Dear Sir’ or ‘Dear Madam’ or ‘Dear Mr so and so’ or
‘Dear Shri so and so’ or ‘Dear Mrs so and so’ as the case may be.
Subject Line
After the salutation, the next part of the letter is the subject. The subject
of the message is stated clearly and boldly at the centre of the letter. This
helps to draw and focus the attention of the reader on the specific subject or
topic or area which the letter covers. The subject should be stated clearly yet
briefly, i.e., in a few words. Often the receiver of the letter looks at the
subject and decides as to how important or urgent its contents are for him. A
skilled letter writer learns to state the subject in a manner that attracts
attention. The subject should fairly reflect the essence of the letter.
Message
The message is the body of the letter which comprises the opening line and
the message to be conveyed. The message is organized into appropriate
paragraphs in order to convey thoughts sequentially. The paragraphs are so
designed as to cover related thoughts and facts. The opening line usually
starts with an acknowledgement or introduction. It may draw reference to
earlier correspondence, if any. The opening line or the introductory
paragraphs endeavor to put the message in perspective. In the next
paragraph or paragraphs, as the case may be, the message of the relevant
communication is dealt with.
Closing Line
The closing line paragraph is very important for the letter. It should sum
up the message and emphasize the action intended. Good writers take pains
to make the closing line as effective as possible.
The complimentary closing line comes after the message and before the
signature. It is ‘Yours faithfully’ or ‘Yours sincerely’ or ‘Faithfully yours’ or
‘Sincerely yours’ as the case may be. When the salutation is ‘Dear Sir’ or
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‘Dear Madam’, the closing line is ‘Yours faithfully’, and when the salutation is
‘Dear Shri’ or ‘Dear Mrs’, the closing line is ‘Yours sincerely’. It is also
common to see the closing line ending with plain ‘Cordially’ or ‘Sincerely’,
omitting Yours. The business writer should choose the style appropriate to
the context.
Good Business Letters have to have good appeal, appropriate content, proper
style, clear impact and keen review and editing.
APPEAL: Is the letter appealing? – quality paper, good font, proper margins
and alignment and short paragraphs.
(i) business letters, as all other types of correspondence, should follow the
structure of a beginning, a middle and an end.
(ii) the first paragraph would be the introduction and should state the reason
for the correspondence.
(iii) the middle should add detail to the information in the introduction.
(iv)the ending is the conclusion and should state clearly what action one
hopes or expects the recipient to take.
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(v) words should be effectively used so as to appeal to the level and
sensibilities of the recipient.
Businesses are of numerous types. They may be big or small, old or new,
local or national, public or private, proprietary or partnership, monopolistic or
competitive and manufacturing or service units. Nevertheless, big and large,
all these businesses have certain common concerns and approaches within
any given business environment. They deal with people internally as well as
externally. They have their stakeholders in owners, employees, customers
and the community. Businesses are also organized into various functional
areas such as personnel, marketing, sales, purchase, accounts,
administration and secretarial. Some of the types of business letters include
collection letters, sales letters, agency letters, banking letters, insurance
letters, letters of enquiry and so on. These letters are discussed in detail in
the subsequent paragraphs.
Collection and recovery letters are plain speaking and sometimes sternly
worded. The letter writer should know which approach would be appropriate
under each circumstance. Some organizations follow the practice of sending
a reminder even before the due date. Obviously, such letters should be very
polite and make for a pleasant reading. Similarly, even after the due date,
the first set of letters will have to be polite and warmly worded. It is a
common practice to send a simple pre- printed reminder using a well-worded
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format, duly filling up the name, address and due date. It is possible that the
addressee has forgotten or overlooked to make the payment or has been out
of station or any such genuine reason. Under no circumstance should such a
person be embarrassed or undermined. While collection of dues is important,
as far as possible it should be done with due sensitivity and without hurting
the feelings of the person from whom the amount is due. The letter writer
should discriminate between a wilful or intentional and an unintentional
defaulter. The letter writer should also discriminate between the first time
defaulter and a habitual or hardened defaulter. The customer is important
and the business will have to deal with them in future too, as long as the
relationship is worthwhile. The letter should not hurt the feelings of the
addressee and result in a severing of the business relationship, unless such
an extreme situation is warranted.
2-Sales Letter
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Similarly, if the sales letter concerns a service which is essentially intangible,
the service-related features such as courtesy, promptness, employee
attitude, physical facilities, customer identification/recognition, speed, clarity,
communicative and interpersonal skills, as relevant, are to be highlighted.
3-Agency letters
4-Banking letters
Banks and financial institutions are an integral part of the world of business.
Given their primacy, it is inconceivable for any business organization to do
business without a bank account or a banking transaction. In other words,
every organization, whatever be its structure, has to have bank dealings. Be
it a partnership or proprietorship, private limited company or a public limited
company, a government department or a society or trust, it has to have
banking-related transactions in the course of its business. The nature and
variety of dealings, of course, depend upon the activities and expanse of
business. It is against this backdrop that banking-related correspondence
assumes significance.
1. Deposit facilities
2. Credit facilities
3. Remittances and payments
4. Export, import and foreign exchange facilities
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5. Investment banking and wealth management
6. Ancillary services
1. Number or quantity: Given the economies of scale, the cost would vary
depending upon the quantity or volume of work order. Moreover, some
businesses may not evince interest if the quantity or size of the job is small
or uneconomical. The letter calling for quotations or inviting tenders should
therefore clearly state the size of the order or quantity of supply.
4. Additional unit: While calling for quotations, quite often, apart from
mentioning the fixed number or quantity, quotes are also sought for every
additional unit. For example, if it is an order for printing a booklet, the
quotation called for will be, say, for thirty-two pages, and also plus or minus
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every four pages so that calling for fresh quotations, in case there is a small
variation in the order size, is avoided.
Tenders
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avoidable confusion, complaints and legal action. Important points that need
to be covered in a tender are as follows:
3. Captions such as (a) Tender notice; (b) Tender notification; (c) Notice
inviting tenders; (d) Sealed tenders invited
4. Who can apply—sealed tenders are invited from; (a) Class I civil
contractors; (b) Established contractors having customs house agency
license; (c) Manufacturers or their authorized agents, etc.
5. Experience/requirement
(a) With experience in completing similar work, (b) Satisfying the eligibility
criteria mentioned below, (c) Who have supplied the tendered items
successfully to other govern organizations, etc.
14. Other relevant details such as: (a) Amount of tender; (b) Average
turnover (annual) for the last 3 years; (c) Technical bids and commercial bids
and (d) Website.
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Letters of enquiry cover various types of enquiry made by a wide cross
section of clientele and prospective customers regarding the availability of
various products, services and other related aspects of the business. Most
such enquiries nowadays do take place orally and telephonically and the
volume of correspondence has decreased as compared with the past. Modern
and computerized organizations in metropolitan centres, in particular,
provide tele-contact facility, self-help terminals, kiosks and websites which
obviate the need for written correspondence.
Apart from promptness, it is also necessary to ensure that not only is the
required information provided, but also as a matter of concern for the
enquirer, all related information is also made available. Although the letter
itself may be precise and formal, appropriate rate charts, brochures, reports,
lists and tables should be enclosed. Such gestures and prompt responses not
only help in business development, but also in creating a favourable
impression on the minds of those seeking information. The person making
the enquiry is happy that the organization is prompt and keen on doing
business. In a competitive environment, it is often the prompt response
which can make a difference in gaining or retaining customers.
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‘Please send us the following items’
‘We are pleased to place an order with you for the supply of’
2. Description: The order should clearly state the type of items or material,
make or capacity, number of items or quantity and related details
unambiguously.
3. Rate: The rate at which the order is being placed should be clear and
should relate to units or quantities referred to on the quotations as far as
possible. Mention clearly specific details such as rate per piece, rate per
metric ton, rate per 1,000 ml and rate per box of 10 pieces, whatever is
relevant. Mention whether any tax or packaging charges would need to be
paid or whether the rate/amount is all-inclusive.
5. Delivery Schedule: Clearly mention when, where and in which lots the
items ordered are to be delivered. This is especially significant when there
are penalties for delayed delivery. Further, the delivery may not be at one
place and instead may be at different centres/offices. For example, an
organization that is placing orders for calendars or diaries may place a
centralized order but may instruct that the delivery be made to various
offices/branches.
7. Validity: Any purchaser would like to have the items or goods within a
specific time period, especially when the goods are perishable or seasonal.
The period for which the order is valid has to be stated for ensuring clarity.
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opportunity. The organization being recommended is usually one that has
previously conducted business with the referrer over a period of time and
one that matches the profile required by the business. A trade reference
letter briefly encompasses how the writer is acquainted with the organization
being recommended, as well further details about its policies and how was
his/her experience with the organization as a whole. The letter should also
mention why the writer suggests that the reader consider the organization
over other firms.
The words enquiry and inquiry mean almost the same and are used
interchangeably. Enquiry relates to the act or process of seeking information.
In everyday correspondence, people in business have to deal with numerous
letters of enquiry. When people need information about products, services,
terms and conditions, margins and discounts, opening and closing, and a
host of such relevant details from banks, insurance companies, traders,
suppliers, transporters and the like, letters have to be sent or calls made. It
could be a traditional letter or an e-mail. Similarly, organizations which
receive such letters of enquiry have to respond by providing the information
sought swiftly and courteously. Two such common types of enquiries in the
world of business are credit and status enquiries. Drafting of such enquiry
letters is indeed quite simple and such letters are considered to be routine
letters.
The main objective in writing such letters is to seek information. The letter
should necessarily be polite and specific about the details sought. Come
straight to the point and state what you want to know. If you want a quick
response, say something nice about the organization or the product. In other
words, make sure your letter of enquiry ends on a note of goodwill. Here are
some examples of credit enquiries:
- ‘Please let me know if you have credited our account for the supplies we
made vide our Bill No. 86/2017 dated October 10, 2017.’
- ‘We shall be thankful to know from you if the maturity proceeds of our fixed
deposit receipt for 50,000 that matured on 6 April 2018 have been credited
to our current account.’
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-‘Will you please let us know if the cheque drawn on Canara Bank, Model
Town, Bhopal dated 16 March 2018 for 25,000 sent for collection has been
realized and credited to our savings account no. 3625 with your branch.’
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