Dynamic graph
Dynamic graph
over 20 years.
… over 2 decades.
… over a 20-year period.
… over a 20-year time span.
… between 1990 and 2010.
… from 1990 to 2010
Например:
1) The line graph illustrates the amount of international students + from
different continents + at a UK university + across a 30-year time period.
2) The line graph explains the number of students from overseas + at a
university in the UK + over a 30-year time span.
3) The line graph shows how many students + from Asia, Africa, Europe
and North American attended + a British university + from 1995 to
2015.
4) The line graph illustrates the rate of obesity + among 4 age groups +
over 34 years.
5) The line graph shows obesity rates + between 18 to 74 year olds +
over a 34-year time span.
6) The line graph outlines the percentage of obese people + in 4 different
age groups + between 1971 and 2005.
Overview:
Целью абзаца с общим обзором является краткое изложение
основных характеристик. Так как динамические графики содержат
данные за многие годы, основными общими характеристиками
обычно являются изменения. Эти изменения включают наиболее
заметные увеличения или уменьшения за определенный период
времени.
Или не говорите: “The numbers rose from [1,000 to 2,000]. Say: “The
number [doubled].”
Notable increases:
- “Overall, we can see that the number of people taking the bus to work
increased significantly.”
– “Overall, we can see that Asian students doubled over the time
period.”
Notable decreases:
- “Overall, we can see that the sales of Japanese cars fell by more than
half over the 20-year period.”
– “Overall, we can see that employment levels decreased steadily
throughout the 3 decades in the graph.”
Основные характеристики:
Increases: Asia, North America
Decreases: none
Contrasts / Other features: Europe, Africa
– Overall, we can see that enrollments by students from Asian
countries doubled throughout the time period, while North American
students also grew. However, student numbers from Europe and Africa
remained relatively consistent over the 2 decades.
Main features:
Increases: every group – 30-44 and 45-64 grew the most continuously
Decreases: none
Contrasts / Other features: 18-29 and 65-74 didn’t change after 1999
– Overall, we can see that every single age group saw an increase in
obesity to some extent, with 30-44 year-olds and 45-64 years-olds both
increasing continuously and reaching more than double by the end of the
time period. Meanwhile, those within the 18-29 and 65-74 age groups
also experienced significant rises, though at least their rates seemed to
level off from 1999 onwards.
– Overall, we can see that there was a notable increase in obesity
among all age groups in the graph. In particular, 18-29 year-olds saw a
three-fold rise over the time period, though at least the trend somewhat
stabilised after 1999. Meanwhile, those aged 30-44 and 45-64
experience a more than two-fold increase throughout the time period.
Lastly, the eldest age range, the 65-74 year-olds, jumped by a similar
amount, but they too levelled off from 1999 onwards.
You try! – Write an overview paragraph for this dynamic task. Use the
table above to help you. The main features have been highlighted for
you.
The table shows average calorie intake in the United States over a
period of time.
Main features:
Increases: total, grains, added fat the most || added sugar, fruit, meat,
eggs and nuts slightly
Decreases: dairy, vegetable decreased minimally
Contrasts / Other features: none
You try! – Write an overview paragraph for this dynamic task. Use the
table above to help you. The main features have been highlighted for
you.
The table shows average calorie intake in the United States over a
period of time.
Main features:
Increases: total, grains, added fat the most || added sugar, fruit, meat,
eggs and nuts slightly
Decreases: dairy, vegetable decreased minimally
Contrasts / Other features: none
Hide (144 Less Words)
Overall, we can see that the majority of the food groups contributed
towards a higher total calorie intake over the whole time period. The
foods to see the biggest rise include grains and added fat, both rising by
around a third. Added sugar, fruit, meat, eggs and nuts also added to the
average intake. Only two categories accounted for fewer calories by the
end of the time period, which were the dairy and vegetable food groups.
Overall, we can see that the total calorie intake rose, with almost all food
groups accounting for a higher calorie total by the end of the 40-year
period. The most significant increases were by grains and added fat,
while added sugar, fruit, meats, nuts and eggs also contributed, although
to a lesser extent. The two exceptions were the dairy and vegetable food
groups, whose contributions had dropped by 2010.
You try! – Write the body paragraphs for this dynamic task. Use the
examples above to help you.
The table shows average calorie intake in the United States over a
period of time.