Writing 1

Task 2
IELTS INTERMEDIATE
What do you
know about the
Writing Test?
Overview of the Writing Test

Task 1 Task 2
- 20 mins
- 40 mins
- At least 150 words
- At least 250 words
- Diagram/Tables
- Present solution to a problem
- Organize, present, possibly compare
- Present and justify an opinion
data
- Compare and contrast evidence,
- Describe the stages of a process or
opinions and implications
procedure
- Evaluate and challenge ideas, evidence
- Describe an object or event or sequence
or an argument.
of events.
How we calculate
What is the examiner looking for?

- Task Response
- Coherence and Cohesion
- Lexical Resource
- Grammatical Range and Accuracy
Writing Band Descriptor - Task 1
Writing Band Descriptor - Task 2
Writing Task 2
 Sample Answer 5
Jumbled paragraphs

Sample Essay 1 - Comparative

On the other hand, databases provide a very useful tool. Large databases which contain information in many
individuals can enable more effective decisions to be made. Institutions such as government departments and
police rely on data collection in order to operate efficiently, and hospitals use computerized records to help in
their fight against disease.

In summary, although it is possible that unauthorized access of incorrect information may endanger the
rights of individuals, the benefits outweigh these risks. Consequently, data collection on individuals can be
justified, although all possible measures should be taken to minimize the risks.

Data collection is a fact of modern life. Some argue that data collection is endangering the rights of
individuals, though others see it as a useful tool which increases efficiency. This essay will discuss both sides
of this issue.
A further problem with data stored on computer is accuracy. Information stored in a computer may be out-of-date, or simply
wrong. This can seriously affect a person’s rights if decisions are made on the basis of false information.

Databases stored on computer can also be very efficient. Information can be rapidly updated or added, and
retrieval of information is extremely fast. Moreover, data which has been collected in one area can be sent
anywhere in the world almost instantly.

Data collection can violate the right to privacy, When data about a person is collected and stored in a
computer then it is open to misuse. For example, the information may be sold to unauthorized persons such
as credit agencies or insurance companies.
 Sample Answer 6
Jumbled paragraphs

Sample Essay 2
The special needs of people with disabilities must be taken into account by the education system. The visually
impaired would benefit from access to computers which convert text to voice. The hearing impaired may need
special tutors skilled in sign language. The goal, however, would be the integration of the disabled into the regular
school system while maintaining these services.

Thus, conditions for the physically disabled can be improved in a number of ways including providing financial
support, adequate educational services and equal employment opportunities. Through the pursuit of these goals,
society can ensure that life for the disabled is rewarding and fulfilling.

Employment is a third factor which must be considered. In order that disabled people can be given equal
opportunity to work and contribute to society in every possible field, the government could establish quotas for
disabled workers in large companies. Moreover, financial incentives such as tax rebates could be offered to
smaller companies who hire disabled workers.

Disabled people living in our cities daily face challenging and potentially difficult situations which society must
consider. This essay will offer suggestions as to how conditions may be improved for people with a physical
disability.
One of the most important ways in which life can be improved for disabled people is the provision of financial
support. Some disabled people may have difficulties due to the cost of special equipment or care which they
require. The government could offer assistance through a range of measures including tax deductions for
equipment such as wheelchairs, or loan assistance for major purchases.
Structure of an Essay
Introduction (about 40-60 words)
❏ General statement about the topic
❏ Writer’s position Body (about 80 words)
❏ Preview the topic
❏ Topic sentence (TS)
❏ Supporting Sentence 1 (SS1)
❏ Developing Sentence 1 (DS1.1)
❏ Supporting Sentence 2 (SS2)
❏ Developing Sentence (DS2.1)
Conclusion (about 30-45 words)
Basic Template

Writing task 2
Introduction

“Government investment in the visual arts, the kind you commonly see in
art galleries, is a waste of money. Governments must invest this money
in public services instead. “
To what extent do you agree with this statement?
Introduction

Paraphrase this statement :

“Government investment in the visual arts, the kind you commonly see in
art galleries, is a waste of money. Governments must invest this money
in public services instead. “
To what extent do you agree with this statement?
Introduction
Body Paragraphs
Body 1
Body 2
Concluding Paragraph
Concluding Paragraph
Practice
“It is very important that children
should study hard at school. Time
spent playing sports is time wasted. “

Do you agree?
How to plan the
essay
The 4 common
questions
• Agree/disagree
• 2 opposing views
• 2 questions
• Problem - solution
 The Plan (5 minutes)
View 1 View 2
Question 1 Question 2
Disagree
Agree Problem Solution

Write short Write short

reasons and/or reasons and/or
examples here examples here
Write your response in the next slide (30 minutes)

“It is very important that children

should study hard at school. Time
spent playing sports is time wasted.
“

Do you agree?
(type here)
Thank you