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The document outlines the structure and vocabulary for writing about prison populations and gym attendance in European countries over specified time periods. It includes detailed sections on how to introduce, overview, and analyze data trends for male and female prisoners, as well as gym attendance by different age groups. Additionally, it provides sample sentences and vocabulary to aid in the writing process.

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Task 1

The document outlines the structure and vocabulary for writing about prison populations and gym attendance in European countries over specified time periods. It includes detailed sections on how to introduce, overview, and analyze data trends for male and female prisoners, as well as gym attendance by different age groups. Additionally, it provides sample sentences and vocabulary to aid in the writing process.

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https://writing9.com/search/the-line-graph-shows-the-prison-population-in-european-
country-between-1911-and-2001/0

Đề bài 1

The graphs below shows the prison population in a European country


between 1911 and 2011.

Dạng bài: Mixed chart/ dynamic chart

Cấu trúc miêu tả

 Lấy số làm chủ ngữ: In 1911, approximately 19000 males were sent
to prison in this particular nation

 Dùng chữ “con số-number”: In 1911, the number of male prisoners


in this European nation was around 19000
Dàn bài chi tiết

 Đoạn 1 / Introduction: Paraphrase đề bài

 Đoạn 2 / Overview: Viết overview:


- Thời gian – main trend
- Nói xu hướng của nam tăng, nữ giảm. Và tỷ lệ nam vào tù luôn lớn
hơn nữ.

 Đoạn thân bài 1 / Main 1: Số lượng nam đi tù năm đầu tiên, và sự


thay đổi theo thời gian

 Đoạn thân bài 2 / Main 2: Số lượng nữ đi tù năm đầu tiên, và sự


thay đổi theo thời gian

Sample

 Introduction:

Đề: The line graphs below show the prison population in a European
country between 1911 and 2011.

Paraphrase: The line charts provide information about the numbers of


male and female prisoners in an European nation in an period of roughly a
century from 1911 to 2001.

 Overview:
- Xu hướng của nam tăng, nữ giảm

Overall, the number of male individuals who were sent to prison in this
nation increased in this period, while the reverse was true for the figure
for females.

- Tỷ lệ nam vào tù luôn lớn hơn nữ

Notably, throughout the entire timeline, the numbers of male inmates


significantly surpassed that of female inmates

 Main 1 – Male :
- 1911 - 1971

Between 1911 and 1971, the number of male inmates mostly remained
at around 20000, except for in 1931 and 1941, when it dropped to only
about 10000.

- 1971 – 2001
Nevertheless, a reversal in momentum happened at 1971, which
records a sudden surge in this number, eventually leading to it
reaching a peak of about 45000 in 2001.

 Main 2 – Female :
- 1911 – 1941

On the other hand, the figure for woman prisoners was significantly
lower than the number of males in this same nation. Although about
3500 females were sent to prison in 1911, the highest level in this
period, it plunged significantly to about 500 in 1941

- 1941 – 1961

A brieft increase in in the number occurred afterwards as it reached


1500 in 1961

- 1961 – 2001

It then decreased back to 600 before surging again to 1800 in 2001


Đề bài 2

The chart below gives information about European people of different age
groups who went to gyms once a month or more between 1990 and
2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main
features and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.

Dạng bài: Mixed chart/ dynamic chart

Từ vựng:

Cấu trúc miêu tả

 Lấy số làm chủ ngữ: In 1900, around 8% of all people from 18 to 24


years old went to the gym at least one time per month.
 Dùng tên đồ thị làm chủ ngữ: In 1990, people who went to the gym
at least one time per month accounted for/comprised (chiếm)
around 8% of all people from 18 to 24 years old.

 Dùng chữ “the percentage/proportion/share”: In 1990, the


percentage of people from 18 to 24 years old who went to the gym
at least one time per month was around 8%.

Dàn bài chi tiết

 Đoạn 1 / Introduction: Paraphrase đề bài

 Đoạn 2 / Overview: Viết overview:


- Thời gian – main trend
- Nói xu hướng tăng chung

 Đoạn thân bài 1 / Main 1: Tỉ lệ tăng của 2 nhóm lớn nhất

 Đoạn thân bài 2 / Main 2: Tỉ lệ tăng của 2 nhóm nhỏ nhất

Sample

 Introduction:

Đề: The chart below gives information about European people of different
age groups who went to gyms once a month or more between 1990 and
2010.

Paraphrase: The line chart provides information about the percentages


of people in four different age groups in European nations who went to the
gym at least one time per month from 1990 to 2010.

 Overview:
- Xu hướng tăng chung

Overall, the proportions of people in all these age groups who went to the
gym one time a month increased significantly over the years.

 Main 1 – Tăng nhiều (2 nhóm lớn nhất) :


- Tỉ lệ cao nhất

Throughout this period, the shares for people who belonged to the
younger age groups who went to the gym at least one time per month
were always the highest.

- Mô tả tỉ lệ tăng lên theo thời gian


In 1990, around 9% to 10% of people from 18 to 24 and 25 to 34 years old
paid a visit to a gym one time per month. However, these rates
skyrocketed, eventually peaking at 60% and 50% in 2010, respectively.

 Main 2 – Tăng ít (2 nhóm nhỏ nhất):


- 35-44

Although older people tended to go to the gym in smaller proportions,


there were massive improvements among the group of individuals from
35 to 44 years old. While only around 5% people in this age group who
exhibited this behavior in the surveyed period in 1990, the percentage
escalated by more than eight times, reaching a peak of 40% in 2010.

- Over 45

Among the groups of people whose age was over 45, only 4% of them
went to the gym at least one time per month; however, in 2010, the
percentage surged to 20%.

Từ vựng:

 Prisoners = People who were imprisoned = Detainees = Inmates


 Male/Female = men/women
 Aproximately = around = about = roughly: khoảng
 Escalated = skyrocket = plunge = surge exponentially = increase
rapidly
= noticeable increase
 a reversal in momentum = trái lại
 chart = graph
 the number of N = the N population = the figure for N
 individuals = danh từ chỉ người số nhiều
 show = provide = illustrate = compare = give
 country = nation
 in this period = throughout the entire timeline = in the
surveyed/given period
= over the period shown
 notably = especially
 in an period of roughly (khoảng thời gian) starting from … to …
= between … and … = from … until
 go to = pay a vistit to
 the spending/expenditure/enpense on = the amount of money spent
on
 yearly = annual
 just over: khoảng hơn >< nearly: gần
 onwards: trở đi
 stand at: ở mức
 the starting point: thời điểm bắt đầu
 a downward trend >< an upward trend
 the remaining figure: các nhóm còn lại
 prevalent = widespread

Cấu trúc:

 Introduction: Graph name + V(present simple) + what + where +


when

 Overview: Overall, it is clear that + [subject’s unit] + witnessed an


upward trend, while the opposite/reverse was true for… [others
unit]. (Additionally, during most of the period, the lowest/highest
can be seen in …)

 Mô tả tỉ lệ thời điểm ban đầu: the percentage of people who


watched new programs on TV was nearly 70% in 1995

 Mô tả cái gì cùng giảm: the figures for newspapers and radios


experienced similar downward trends, declining to about 30% (còn
30%) in 2020

 Mô tả cái gì tăng: the Internet quickly became prevalent in the


next 20 years, with 40% of people using it

 Mô tả sự giảm xuống (dù có tăng nhẹ): the figure then


decreased gradually to 55% in 2020, despite a slight rise of 3% in
2010

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