Tone and Mood
Tone and Mood
riences. When readers read a persuasive text, they often connect the arguments made
to counterarguments and opposing evidence of which they are aware. They use these
connections to infer meaning.
EXAMPLE
After World War I, political and social forces pushed for a return to normalcy
in the United States. The result was disengagement from.the larger world
and increased focus on American economic growth and personal enjoyment.
Caught in the middle were American writers, raised on the values of the prewar
world and frustrated with what they viewed as the superficiality and materialism
of postwar American culture. Many of them fled to Paris, where they became
known as the “lost generation,” creating a trove of literary works criticizing their
home culture and delving into their own feelings of alienation.
10. Which conclusion about the effects of war is most likely true, according to
the passage?
A) War served as an inspiration for literary works.
B) It was difficult to stabilize countries after war occurred.
C) Writers were torn between supporting war and their own ideals.
D) Individual responsibility and global awareness declined after the war.
Diction, or word choice, helps determine mood and tone in a passage. Many readers
make the mistake using the author's ideas alone to determine tone; a much better
practice is to look at specific words and try to identify a pattern in the emotion they
evoke. Does the writer choose positive words like ambitious and
DID YOU KNOW? confident? Or does he describe those concepts with negative words
To decide the connotation like greedy and overbearing? The first writer’s tone might be described
of a word, the reader
examines whether the as admiring, while the more negative tone would be disapproving.
word conveys a positive
or negative association in When looking at tone, it’s important to examine not just the
the mind. Adjectives are
literal definition of words. Every word has not only a literal meaning
often used to influence
the feelings of the reader, but also a CONNOTATIVE MEANING, which relies on the common
such as in the phrase
emotions and experiences an audience might associate with that
an ambitious attempt to
achieve. word. The following words are all synonyms: dog, puppy, cur, mutt,
EXAMPLES
Day had broken cold and grey, exceedingly cold and grey, when the man
turned aside from the main Yukon trail and climbed the high earth-bank, where
a dim and little-travelled trail led eastward through the fat spruce timberland.
It was a steep bank, and he paused for breath at the top, excusing the act to
himself by looking at his watch. It was nine o'clock. There was no sun nor hint
of sun, though there was not a cloud in the sky. It was a clear day, and yet there
seemed an intangible pall over the face of things, a subtle gloom that made the
day dark, and that was due to the absence of sun. This fact did not worry the
man. He was used to the lack of sun. It had been days since he had seen the
sun, and he knew that a few more days must pass before that cheerful orb, due
south, would just peep above the sky-line and dip immediately from view.
—from “To Build a Fire” by Jack London
Reading 13
411. Which of the following best describes the mood of the passage?
A) exciting and adventurous
B) unhappy and anxious
C) bleak but accepting
D) grim yet hopeful
Similarly, authors may include an EXAMPLE CLUE, providing an example phrase that
clarifies the meaning of the word: