writing task 1
writing task 1
The graph below shows the different modes of transport used to travel to and
from work in one European city, in 1950, 1970 and 1990.
This bar chart exemplifies the different modes of transport used to travel to and
from work. The horizontal axis represents the years of 1950, 1970 and 1990. The
vertical axis represents the percentage of total travelers. In 1950, about 35% of
people went to work on foot. Very closely following that, the number of bike
travelers was 30% in comparison with the number of car travelers at 5%. However,
in 1970, the bus became a more popular mode of public transport. As a result, the
number of travelers by bus was the highest at that time, with a figure which was
almost 30%. Moreover, the number of car travelers increased dramatically from just
over 5% in 1950 to over 30% in 1970 due to the popularity of cars (and a period of
stable economy and prosperity for more people). By 1990, the number of car
travelers led the graph with the highest percentage of 35.
To sum up, over the period, while the number of car travelers increased
dramatically, the number of walking travelers decreased steeply. Nowadays, the car
has become the most important public transport to and from work.
Ex2)
This bar chart illustrates the quantity of leisure time enjoyed by both sexes of
different employment status between 1991 and 1992. It can be seen from the chart
that whereas males employed full time spend almost 80 hours on their leisure,
women spend about 78 hours on that. Very closely following that figure,
We can see that the number of hours of leisure time for retired people is almost
identical and very close for both sexes. Another significant point is that females
employed part time could have exactly 40 hours leisure time, which is more that
employed full time females 38 hours. (Be careful here John, is this fact so
interesting? Of course part time workers would be expected to have more leisure
time than full time workers, yes?) Furthermore, males at home spend almost 58
hours on their leisure more than employed full time males.
Overall, males can spend more time on their leisure than females. This is
because females have to do housework instead of enjoying the leisure for them in
their rest time.
Ex 3)
These pie charts illustrate the post-school qualifications held by Australians in the
age groups 25 to 34 and 55 to 69. First of all, the number of people who hold a
degree has increased dramatically from 104,800 of the younger group to 347,500 of
the older group. There has been a significant rise in the number of science, maths
and computers graduates from 10.11 of older group to 18.19 of younger group. In
addition, the number of administration students has increased from 14.98 to 19.08.
However, there was a dramatic decrease in the number of engineering from 19.27
to 9.39 which is a decrease of 50%. Very closely followed this, the number of
medicine students decreased from 11.35 to 7.4. Nevertheless, the number of
student of education and social sciences has remained.
Overall, we can see a dramatic increase of people who hold post-school
qualification and also a significant change in the subjects they chose to study. The
old group preferred to study engineering, compare with the young people’s
preference. Nowadays, many young people want to study in university and also
prefer to study science, math sans computers.
Ex 4)
The diagram describes how plastic is produced and then broken down continuously.
Firstly, cereal crops are harvested and are sent to the factory in order to be used for
making plastic bottles. Secondly, the cereal crops are made into Glucose which is
converted into PHB polymers in a Bacterial fermentation chamber. At this stage, the
PHB polymers are used as materials for plastic bottles such as shampoos and
detergents.
Finally, although some of these plastic bottles could be recycled, nevertheless many
of them are burned or are buried in landfill sites. During this process, oxidation
products are released slowly into the air. This carbon dioxide in the atmosphere falls
back to earth as rain, hail or snow. After the rain has fallen on the land, it is
absorbed by soils and plants such as cereal crops.
The diagram shows Carbon dioxide circle. Despite knowing this problem, the plastic
products are expected to be produced and to be used.
Pencil making
Pencils have two parts. The leads are made of graphite and the cases, of
into graphite rods by a forming presser. Afterwards, the graphite rods have
to be cut to an exact size. Later, these will be put into the pencil.
Secondly, as the wood is cut and is made into wooden slats, it is made
grooves. At this stage, the lead can be put into the grooves. The same two
pieces of wooden slats are glued, then, they made into a sandwich of slats.
Finally, this sandwich of slats is cut into a pencil shape by creating smooth
made.
The graph shows the trends in consumption of fast foods. The horizontal axis shows
the year between 1970 and 1990 and the vertical axis shows grammes. In 1970, the
consumption of ‘fish and chips’ exceeded just over 300 grammes. It reduced
gradually until 1985 and then after 1985, it increased slightly. However, the
consumption of hamburgers increased dramatically, it exceeded fish and chips in
1982 and it reached over 500 grammes by 1990. The consumption of pizza
increased minimally until 1985, after then rose suddenly and exceeded the
consumption of fish and chips in 1988.
Overall, it would seem that peoples’ choice of food has changed dramatically since
1980. It is expected that the consumption of hamburgers will continue to rise.
This line chart shows how John's weight (kg) varied from 1991 to 1995. The
horizontal axis shows the year and its divisions. The vertical axis shows the
weight in kilograms.
John's weight suddenly increased by 2kg from 1991 to 1992. This increase
continued into 1993 with an addition of another 4kg. After this time, John's
1993. But there was a slight reduction of 1kg from 1994 to 1995.
Nevertheless, John's weight in 1995 was heavier by 5kg than his weight in
1991.
John seems to have relaxed his attention between 1991 and 1993. But it
would seem that he had controlled his weight since 1993. His effort to reduce
his weight also seems to have continued during 1994. If John had exercised
daily between 1991 and 1993, he would not have reached a weight of 6kg.
(EK)
This line graph shows the average value of a pickup truck versus the
mileage on the truck. The horizontal axis shows the mileage and its divisions.
The heat of the sun causes water to evaporate from seas, rivers and
lakes. In addition, water vapour is released from the soil and from planets.
As the water vapour then rises into the atmosphere, it cools and condenses
into clouds. The clouds are blown by winds until they reach high ground. At
this stage, the water droplets fall back to earth as rain, hail or snow. After
rain has fallen on land, it either evaporates into the air or it is absorbed by
soils and plants. Some of it also run into rivers and lakes and eventually
factories and cars then rises in the atmosphere, cools and is contained into
clouds. The clouds are blown by winds until they reach high ground. At this
stage, the water droplets containing carbon dioxide fall back to earth as
After carbon dioxide fallen on land, it either evaporate into the air or plants
take in it. Herbivorous animals then feed the plants containing carbon
dioxide and inhale the air containing it as well. When contaminated plants
and animals die, their remains containing carbon dioxide decay under
Eventually, these natural materials are used for fuel. By this continuous
process, the carbon dioxide engender again.
This bar chart shows the amount of money per week spent on fast foods in Britain.
The horizontal axis shows three parts are divided by income groups. The vertical
axis shows the number of pence per person per week. It is clear that the most
favorite food of high income group was hamburgers and each person spent more
than 40 pence on the consumption of hamburgers per week. However, in low
income groups the most consumptive food was fish and chips and the group which
consumes hamburgers most was average group.
The graph shows the trends in consumption of fast foods. The horizontal axis shows
the year between 1970 and 1990 and the vertical axis, grammes. In 1970 the
number of consumption of ‘fish and chips’ exceeded just over 300 and reduced
gradually until 1985 and since 1985 increased slightly. However, the consumption of
hamburgers increased dramatically and exceeded over 500 grammes in 1990. The
consumption of pizza increased minimally until 1985, after then rose suddenly and
in 1988 after all, exceeded the consumption of fish and chips.
It would seem that peoples’ choice of food has changed dramatically since 1980.
The consumption of hamburgers will be risen continually.
This diagram shows that the movement of water in a continuous cycle. The heat of
the sun causes water to evaporate from seas, rivers and lakes. In addition, water
vapour is released from the soil and from plants. As the water vapour then rises into
the atmosphere, it cools and condenses into clouds. The clouds are blown by winds
until they reach high ground. At this stage, the water droplets fall back to earth as
rain, hail or snow. After rain has fallen on land, it either evaporates into the air or it
is absorbed by soils and plants. Some of it also run into rivers and lakes and
eventually reaches the sea.
Over the period 1971 to 1997 as a whole, there was a steady decrease in the
consumption of butter and margarine and ad dramatic increase in the consumption
of low-fat spreads. Butter was the most popular fat at the beginning of the period,
and consumption reached a peak of about 150 grams per person per week in about
1975. Since then, there has been a slight decrease in 1981, the consumption of
margarine exceeded that of butter for the first time, but since 1987 there has been
a decline in the consumption of margarine, which seems set to continue. Low-fat
spreads were introduced since 1984, and there has been a dramatic increase in
their consumption since then, so that by about 1994 they were more popular than
either butter or margarine.
This diagram shows how to collect the information on the weather and
information from satellite, radar and drifting buoy. The satellite sends
satellite photo taken of the changing of the pressure in the sky, the radar
shows information about the direction and strength of the wind on the
screen and the drifting buoy send the information of the wave of the sea,
which can be shown on the synoptic chart, to the main computer system in
the Bureau of meteorology. The computer can classify and make chart and
graph the information. These should be broadcast on TV and radio, and also
some useful weather information for our normal and leisure life.
The data shows the differences of participation between developing
1990.
The first bar chart compares the average years of schooling between
schooling in developing countries, was 2.5 in 1980 and just over 3 in 1990
was fourfold.
The second chart shows the similar trend, which shows the number of
number was just 10 in 1980 and 18 in 1990, whereas the number was 42 in
Finally, the third graph shows the money spending on research and
countries spend 160 billion $ in 1980 and 350 bn in 1980, which increased
dramatically.
Overall, the industrialised countries invest the more money for education
pollutions are then carried by the wind and deposited far away as acid rain.