Jane Doe II
Jane Doe II
Written by
Bryan Foxx
© 1-11-25
FADE IN:
EXT. BARN
All but melted snow glistens on the grass surrounding it, the
pale glow of the moon catching the edges of footprints
leading toward the barn doors.
And...
Then ANOTHER.
It’s almost like a blur- gliding over the snow like a shadow.
INT. BARN
A pause.
JANE DOE- steps into the barn, her brown hair damp from the
gloomy weather. Tied around her usual hoodie is a serving
apron.
Oh no.
SURPRISE!
3.
Why is he here?
Isaac’s ex-girlfriend...
RUNS forward, past Nell- throwing her arms around Jane Doe’s
neck like their best friends.
ZZZZZT!
Before she can- a string of lightning ZIPS down from the open
hay-bail hatch, lighting the candles.
Who else but FLASHLIGHT floats down from in the air, his glow
illuminating the room.
4.
FLASHLIGHT
(smiling)
Sorry if i’m late.
(beat)
Someones cat decided to
run away.
DEB
(walking to Jane Doe)
(motioning)
Alright, everyone come over here.
Lets sing happy birthday or
something.
(joking- sarcastic)
She’s one month old!
JANE DOE
NOOOOO- no, no, no, no.
(beat)
No one will be singing happy
birthday to me. This isn’t a reason
to celebrate.
JAMIE
C’mon Jane- you have threatened to
leave in weeks.
(beat)
Admit it- this is home.
NELL
She’s right.
FLASHLIGHT:
I like the whole, barn setup you’ve
got here. Could use a bit more
light, though.
JANE DOE
Right now- I could use less light.
ISAAC
Hey, can we talk?
ISAAC (CONT’D)
(hesitant)
So-
(swallowing)
I’ve been going over the data.
Running the numbers.
JANE DOE
And?
ISAAC
(looking around before
speaking)
(whispering)
I think... what we’ve been doing...
you know?
(beat)
—it might be doing more harm than
good.
JANE DOE
What’s that suppose to mean?
ISAAC
...we still on tomorrow? I can give
the details then.
JANE DOE
Why’d you say it like that?
ISAAC
Like what?
JANE DOE
Like- we have ‘plans’? You make it
sound like a date.
6.
ISAAC
Wel- I mean, n- NO...
(fidgeting)
Its not a date.
JANE DOE
You’re right. It’s not.
ISAAC
(teasing)
Now you’re just making it weird.
JANE DOE
You made it weird first.
(shrugging)
I just wanna get my memory back.
Isaac grins.
ISAAC
But- seriously. Just... think about
what I said, alright?
CUT TO:
CHU-CHU!
Cornfields on the left side of the train WHIP back and forth
as the wind rushes past the stalks.
INT. TRAIN
EXT. TRAIN
It disappears.
INT. TRAIN
He locks eyes with the teenage girl, who does the same-
holding one of her airpods out of her ear, curious as to
whats going on.
The man gaze shifts back to the window. His reflection stares
back, and for a second- he notices something.
Something MOVES.
What is that?
But... out the corner of her eyes she sees it too. She turns-
As she hits the car floor with a THUD- the older man sitting
across from her SNAPS awake, his eyes blinking open. He
looks around, confused, seeing the girls body beside him.
He looks up...
A shadow drips down the man like a liquid- but it’s not. It
consumes him... swallows him whole, until joining his own
shadow on the train floor.
WHIP TO: the disheveled man in the back. ZOOM IN: his eyes
widen in horror, as everything around him turns to black.
CUT TO:
OPENING CREDITS
INT. CAMPUS
One of them-
Jane Doe, emerges near the back of the group, her satchel
slung casually over her shoulder.
TIGHT ON: one of the textbooks peaking out of her bag. Across
the top of its face, it reads: ‘Criminal Justice’.
She steps into the flow of foot traffic, her boots STOMPING
against the floor.
Good Morning.
TIGHT ON: Jane Doe as she walks down the road, her boots
splashing through a shallow puddle of melted snow. For a
moment, she pauses, glancing up at a complete group of
strangers. Their eyes are on her.
Almost tripping.
HONK!
MAILWOMAN
(cheerfully)
Morning, Jane!
(beat)
Looks like someone’s been busy—
electric bill, bank statement,
and...
(teasing)
...a letter from Isaac. I think I
saw him hand-delivered it to the
post office. Romantic, huh?
EXT. DOWNTOWN
Voices echo down the tracks, along with the clear crackle of
police radios.
OFFICER:
Ma’am, i’m going to have to ask you
to step back. You can’t be here-
this is an active investigation.
JANE DOE
...what happened?
OFFICER
(stepping further in front
of her, blocking her
view)
I’m afraid I can’t answer that.
JANE DOE
(looking off)
Right.
(beat)
Sorry.
He turns-
Nothing.
Just a police officer guarding the spot where Jane Doe stood
just moments ago.
TECH
Sir, we’ve been running preliminary
scans on the wreckage. You’re going
to want to see this.
TECH (CONT’D)
(excitedly)
Whatever caused this— it didn’t
just strike one area. The force was
distributed simultaneously across
the entire structure. That kind of
damage... it’s almost like the
train collided with something... as
big as the train.
FLASHLIGHT
So another train?
TECH
You would think so- but...
FLASHLIGHT
(finishing his sentence)
But- theres no debris, no collision
path...
TECH
Exactly.
(looking up at Flashlight)
(having to blink at his
brightness)
And wheres the other train?
(beat)
It’s like- the train derailed
itself.
He stares at it in thought.
He steps away from the crime scene tech and everyone else,
looking around before FLICKING OFF- returning to his human
form and reaching in his pocket.
WHOOSH!
CUT TO:
GRAY
(dramatically)
You can’t stop me! I’m the
strongest villain in the galaxy!
NELL
Strongest villain, huh? Pretty sure
heroes always win, though.
GRAY
Not this time. The hero’s been
captured, and now the villain gets
what he wants.
NELL
(curious as to his answer)
What does he want...?
GRAY
TO RULE THE WORLD!
NELL
(teasing)
Don’t let your dad hear you say
that.
She leans over and grabs a mug of tea from a coffee table
beside the couch, her gaze softening as she watches the boy.
KNOCK! KNOCK!
FLASHLIGHT
(grinning)
You starting wars in here again,
junior?
GRAY
(excited)
Dad! I created the strongest
villain in the galaxy!
FLASHLIGHT
Oh, really?
FLASHLIGHT (CONT’D)
Thanks for keeping an eye on him.
NELL
No trouble at all. He’s keeps me
company-
(beat)
(leaning down and patting
his back)
Isn’t that right, Gray?
His eyes scan the living room again, landing on the chaotic
battlefield of action figures.
FLASHLIGHT
(teasing)
Strongest villain, huh? Think
you’re ready for the big leagues?
18.
GRAY
(wide-eyed)
REALLY?!
NELL
(worrying)
Be careful.
FLASHLIGHT
Nothing too crazy- just letting him
stretch his wings a little.
NELL
Uh-huh. I mean it. Be careful, both
of you.
GRAY
(laughing)
Bye, Miss Nell!
Nell watches them go, shaking her head, unsure of how to feel
as she turns and steps back inside.
CUT TO:
INT. GARAGE
TAP-TAP-TAP.
She sees a wrench on one of the tables, flicking her brow and
grabbing it. WHAM! She CLANKS it across one of the metal
beams holding the garage door above them.
Isaac grins.
ISAAC
I was just about to start without
you.
JANE DOE
Guess i’m right on time.
(teasing)
Wouldn't want to miss our...
‘sessions’.
ISAAC
Coffee's fresh. Sit.
Jane Doe looks up- two steaming cups of joe and a half-dozen
doughnuts sit beside his computer.
Either way, she grabs the cup- not wanting to let it get
cold.
She sits down- settling onto the stool beside Isaac as types
away. As he does- she looks past the computer, to a small
piece of cloth covering up some sort of metallic tube.
She reaches out- lifting the cloth trying to take a peak but-
ISAAC (CONT’D)
That’s not for you.
(grabbing something else)
-this is.
ISAAC (CONT’D)
Now- ARE YOU SURE about this?
JANE DOE
Isaac.
(beat)
... Come on.
21.
He SIGHS.
ISAAC
Fine- FINE!
(beat)
(standing up)
But next time you’ll have to sign a
waiver.
Jane Doe adjusts herself on the stool, crossing her legs and
fixing her posture as Isaac secures the device on her head-
his face inches away from hers as he straps a buckle under
her chin.
ISAAC (CONT’D)
If this fries your brain, I’m not
responsible.
Jane scoffs.
JANE DOE
Yeah right- nerd.
ISAAC
Alright.
(beat)
Starting low frequency transcranial
stimulation in-
JANE DOE
(interrupting)
-you mean the brain zapper?
ISAAC
Sure- the brain zapper.
22.
Jane Doe’s eyes flutter closed, her hands gripping the edges
of the stool tightly as her breathing slows.
Isaac says something but his voice fades into the distance,
disappearing as her consciousness shifts.
FLASHBACK
A child’s room.
Just a shadow.
TIGHT ON: her bare feet SLAPPING the cold floor as she climbs
out of bed. The wooden boards beneath her CREAKING as she
runs out of the room.
23.
INT. HALLWAY
She tip-toes toward another door down the hall- her small
hand reaching up for the doorknob, turning it slowly.
INT. BEDROOM
BOY
Bug? Why are you awake?
(rubbing his eyes)
You okay?
YOUNG JANE
Can I sleep with you? I’m- I’m
scared...
BOY
Yeah, I guess...
(beat)
Come on. But don’t hog the blanket
this time.
24.
Jane Doe smiles- rushing over and climbing into his bed,
curling up beside him.
END FLASHBACK
INT. GARAGE
Her hands and fingers are blood red from gripping the stool.
ISAAC
(concerned)
What happened? What did you see?
ISAAC (CONT’D)
(stepping closer)
Jane?
JANE DOE
Nothing.
(beat)
I saw nothing.
ISAAC
Yeah, right. You obviously did.
JANE DOE
I’ve got to go to work.
She moves toward the door, but Isaac steps in her path again,
but this time she pushes him back, heading outside.
25.
He turns- flustered.
ISAAC
(shouting as she walks
away)
You don’t have to lie to me, you
know?
CUT TO:
Annoyed- she takes off one of her heels and tosses it at him.
It SMACKS his chest, causing him to sit up, groggily.
JAMIE
(twirling)
What do you think?
JAMIE (CONT’D)
(snapping)
Hello? Earth to Zachary?
KYLE
Huh? Oh, yeah. Looks great, babe.
JAMIE
(dryly)
Thanks for the detailed input.
EXT. DOWNTOWN
She lifts it- and its swept away- SMACKING a large window on
the building beside them.
A neon ‘OPEN’ sign swings on the door beside the window, its
red light blinking weakly, illuminating her face.
INT. DINER
Jane Doe stands behind the counter, wiping down the surface
absentmindedly.
JAMIE
JANE!
Damnit.
JANE DOE
(trying to sound excited)
(it comes out flat)
Hey... Jamie.
JAMIE
Has-
(finding the words)
Isaac asked about me?
JANE DOE
I wish...
It moves-
CUT TO:
The sun drifts toward the horizon, hanging low and casting
long shadows over a freshly mowed section of cornfield miles
outside of town.
His boots dig into the damp soil- steam rising faintly as the
snow melts around him.
FLASHLIGHT
Nice!
(relaxing)
(smiling proud)
That was good, Gray.
GRAY
(excited)
Did you see that? I hit the cloud,
Dad!
FLASHLIGHT
I saw.
(grinning)
You’ve got a good aim, Junior...
but you’re still pulling back at
the last second. You’ve gotta
commit-
(motioning with hand)
Follow through.
GRAY
Follow through? You mean like in
baseball?
FLASHLIGHT
Right. You wouldn’t swing a bat and
stop halfway, would you?
(beat)
It’s the same thing here. When you
feel the charge- feel the spark
running up your arm... Let it guide
you. Don’t fight it.
GRAY
(thoughtfully)
....but what if I mess up?
FLASHLIGHT
(serious)
That’s why we’re out here, junior.
To mess up- figure it out- get
better.
(beat)
Mistakes are what separate us from
the bad guys.
(tapping head)
We think ahead- and try and not
make them when it counts.
FLASHLIGHT (CONT’D)
(standing up)
Alright.
(beat)
Let’s try it again. This time- full
power. No holding back.
Gray plants his feet firmly in the dirt, his small body
trembling- coursing with power as he raises his hand.
FLASHLIGHT
Rule number one- don’t look down
unless you have to.
GRAY
(laughing)
What’s rule number two?
FLASHLIGHT
(grinning)
Keep your balance!
WHOOSH!
GRAY
(shouting)
THIS IS AMAZING!
FLASHLIGHT
Feel that shift? Use it— lean with
me, not against me.
FLASHLIGHT (CONT’D)
(encouraging)
That’s it! You-
32.
He spoke to soon.
He SCREAMS:
GRAY
(screaming)
DAD!
FLASHLIGHT
(slightly out of breath)
Rule number three— always trust
your pilot.
Later...
Gray steps down onto the roof with caution, his legs
trembling as he takes a deep breath.
FLASHLIGHT
Scared you, huh?
GRAY
(trying to act tough)
I wasn’t scared!
FLASHLIGHT
I know, son.
GRAY
Okay, maybe just a little...
FLASHLIGHT
Hey, listen. What happened up
there? That’s part of learning.
Things won’t always go perfectly,
and that’s okay.
(beat)
Okay?
GRAY
(unsure of himself)
Do you think i’ll ever be as good
as you?
FLASHLIGHT
Better.
(beat)
You’ll be better than me.
CUT TO:
PAN UP: it’s the disheveled man from the train, his clothes
singed and ripped, his face smeared with soot. His breathing
is labored, as if he’s been flirting with death.
He reaches for his gun, patting and fiddling with its holster
as man from the train stares at him with his bloodshot eyes.
He stumbles forward, gripping the edge of the desk to steady
himself.
or someone.
MAN
(hoarse whisper)
...it’s co... coming.
OFFICER
What?
The man sways slightly, his grip tightening on the desk. His
eyes widen with fear, his voice trembling:
MAN
(louder)
(at the top of his lungs)
IT’S COMING!
CUT TO:
INT. DINER
The last few customers shuffle out, leaving the diner empty
once again... except Jane Doe, who stands behind the counter,
wiping it down for what must be the hundredth time that
night.
35.
DEB
(yawning)
I’d ask if you can do the dishes,
but i’ve been up since four and
don’t think I could sleep if I
wanted too.
JANE DOE
(double checking)
You sure?
DEB
Honey, i’ll be fine-
DEB (CONT’D)
That’s yours. Make sure Nell eats,
alright?
JANE DOE
Thanks.
DEB
(calling out)
Text me when you get home.
EXT. ROAD
Or maybe not.
Her breath fogs in the cold air as she pauses, glancing down
the empty street.
She saw something out the corner of her eye- but what was it?
Nell looks up, peaking around the kitchen door into the
living room.
NELL
(calling out)
Jane?
NELL
Thats perfect! Far Better than
anything I could cook.
(beat)
...I haven’t tried since-
(trailing off)
Jane Doe sets the trays down in the middle of the table, each
beside each other, opening them up-
She sits down beside her, watching as Nell places the picture
of her family face down across from the food, not
acknowledging it.
As Nell grabs some food- Jane Doe empties her pockets and
satchel, untying the ponytail atop her head and pulling out-
The flyer for the missing cat she found earlier... glancing
down at it, she balls it up and decides to stuff this one
back into her hoodie.
She places them all beside her, taking a deep breath as she
relaxes into the chair.
NELL (CONT’D)
How was school? How was work?
JANE DOE
Boring.
NELL
You’re always bored.
(beat)
Same reason you use to go city-to-
city, small town-to-small town
across the country.
JANE DOE
I guess.
She stares at this- her steady rocking back and forth in the
chair pausing mid-air.
NELL
Something on your mind?
JANE DOE
Nah. Just tired.
It’s cute though- one of those goggly eyed cards; this one- a
clipart picture of a person in a ski-mask, or ‘thief’ on the
front, the words on the inside reading: ‘you stole my heart’.
Jane Doe lazily leans down from her chair to pick it up,
groaning as she sits back in her chair
BUG
CUT TO:
OFFICER
No wallet- no ID- no fingerprints
to even run through our system.
(beat)
If he really did survive that train
wreck- then its possible the
explosion it caused seared them
right of his skin.
FLASHLIGHT
And you’re sure he’s the only one?
The officer nods grimly- his eyes drifting to the man in the
room.
OFFICER
Far as we can tell. Search crews
are still out there, but... if
there’s anyone else.
(beat)
They’re hiding.
MAN
...dark... it was... dark. They
came from... nowhere.
Flashlight grins.
FLASHLIGHT
What happened on the train?
MAN
(whispering)
Shadows... moving... alive.
FLASHLIGHT
Can you tell me what you saw?
Suddenly, the man STANDS up- KICKING his chair out from under
his feet. He leans in as close as he can get to Flashlight’s
face through his cuffs.
MAN
(desperate)
YOU DON’T UNDERSTAND— IT WAS
WATCHING ME. WAITING-
(beat)
IT... IT-
FLASHLIGHT
Listen to me.
(beat)
Whatever you saw, it’s over. You’re
safe now.
The man finally looks up, his gaze locking with Flashlight’s.
For the first time, his voice steadies.
MAN
(firm)
(unwavering)
It’s coming.
FLASHLIGHT
Who? Who is coming?
MAN
It... It-
(swallowing)
It wants HER.
Flashlight stares.
FLASHLIGHT
(confused)
Her?
(questioning)
Who are you talking about?
Jane Doe.
CUT TO:
The kitchen light is off, leaving only the one above the
table on- the rest of the house dark in preparedness for bed.
She leans back in her chair again- her arms crossed tightly
as if guarding herself.
NELL
(teasing)
You’ve been spending a lot of time
with that boy lately. Should I be
planning a wedding?
JANE DOE
Please. He’s helping me.
(shaking her head)
Why does everyone think that?
NELL
If the shoe fits...
NELL (CONT’D)
SO- whats he been helping you with.
Homework?
NELL (CONT’D)
Go on- spit it out.
(beat)
I’m not getting any younger.
43.
JANE DOE
He’s...
(beat)
He’s trying to help me get my
memories back.
NELL
Oh. Really?
(unsure of how to respond)
And...? Any luck?
JANE DOE
Yeah. Some.
NELL
Well- you going to tell me about
it?
JANE DOE
Flashes. Just flashes.
(beat)
Me... as a little girl. In this
small house.
NELL
Bug? Is that like a nickname?
JANE DOE
I don’t know.
(hesitating)
But...
She pulls out the envelope addressed to her from her lap,
sliding it across the table in front of Nell.
44.
NELL
Is he family?
JANE DOE
I think he’s my-
Jane Doe stands up, her chair SCRAPING against the floor.
CRACK!
NELL
What in the-
On the wall.
A shadow-
A silhouette.
45.
Jane Doe backs toward Nell, her voice low and urgent.
JANE DOE
When I say so. Run.
NELL
(holding onto the back of
Jane’s shirt)
Jane. You’re scaring me.
Nell SCREAMS.
But CRASH! It hits the floor on the other side, the wood
SPLINTERING on impact.
She looks up, horrified as the shadow looms over Nell, like
an incoming tidal wave.
Jane Doe grabs Nell by the arm- dragging her to her feet as
the shadow twists and grows larger behind them.
Jane Doe glances back, her teeth clenched as she pushes Nell
ahead of her.
Nell goes as fast as she can, her usual limp causing her legs
to tremble as she ascends the steps, her hand clutching the
banister for support.
Inside- she pushes Nell into the room before SLAMMING it shut
behind them. She runs to opposite wall and pulls the bed out
from the wall, PUSHING it into the doorknob, her chest
heaving as she backs away.
Not giving up- Jane Doe spots a lamp across the bed. She HOPS
across it, grabbing the lamp, accidentally FLIPPING it on.
CLICK!
Jane Doe- noticing this, JUMPS back over the bed and steps in
front of Nell, gripping the lamp like a weapon.
NELL (CONT’D)
(shouting)
The window! Go!
(shoving her)
NOW!
JANE DOE
No- Nell! I’m not leaving you—
NELL
(cutting her off)
Go, damn it! I’ll be right behind
you!
Jane Doe tumbles out onto the slanted roof, catching herself
with her hands. The cold air bites at her skin as she whirls
around, immediately reaching back through the window for
Nell.
JANE DOE
(shouting)
Come on!
Their so close...
SLLPPHT!
...no-
She LUNGES toward Nell, grabbing her hand- her feet kicking
at the shadow, but it’s futile.
The darkness pulls Nell back into the room, her lifeless body
disappearing into a void of black.
WHOOSH!
A streak of golden light ZIPS into the room, the sheer force
of it causing Jane Doe to shield her face.
FLASHLIGHT
GET DOWN!
Jane Doe stands up, speed-limping to the edge of the roof and
JUMPING off as Flashlight throws his hands forward, releasing
a surge of electricity that SLAMS into the shadow.
The light causes the shadow to retreat, curling back into the
room.
INT. HOUSE
Before he can take it all in, the shadow slips behind him,
attacking his blindside.
The light in the room dims further as the shadow tightens its
grip on the space, pulling all the darkness toward itself.
Outside- on the ground, Jane Doe crawls through the dirt and
snow, looking up as-
BOOM!
The shadow looms over the barn where Flashlight landed, its
tendrils stretching out, preparing to do to him what it did
to Nell.
50.
She spots a faint light inside the barn, running towards it.
INT. BARN
She stumbles into the barn, her knees buckling as she FLIPS
on the string lights hanging.
A lantern.
EXT. FARM
The shadow begins to creep along the barn walls, its form
expanding as it swallows the light inside.
There, standing right outside the barn, Jane Doe stands tall,
gritting her teeth, fumbling with the lantern in her hand.
Her fingers numb from the cold- but grips its handle anyway.
TIGHT ON: her other hand- where she holds a gas can at her
waist.
Next- she RIPS the lid off the gas can and tosses it in a
spiral of liquid that causes an EXPLOSION.
51.
For now.
CUT TO:
The front porch creaks under its own weight, the once-
inviting wraparound now a disheveled mess of broken railings
and discarded evidence markers.
Her hood covers her head, casting shadows across her face-
pale, streaked with tears that she doesn’t bother to wipe
away, hair clinging to her cheeks.
Her breath fogs in the air as she clenches her jaw, staring
at it- her knuckles whitening as she SQUEEZES the picture.
CRACK! Accidentally, SHATTERING its glass.
CUT TO:
The back of their head untied- brown hair flowing their back
in unkempt waves.
However-
STUDENT
(softly)
(whispering)
Hey... you okay?
JANE DOE
(murmuring)
What?
STUDENT
I asked if you’re okay.
(beat)
Do you need anything?
Jane stares at her for a moment- then shakes her head, not
hiding her unemotional grin.
JANE DOE
I’m fine.
The girl looks like she wants to press further, but the
professor’s voice rises slightly, pulling her attention back
to the lecture.
All the eyes around her seem to focus in, crawling up her
skin.
WHAM! She stands up- pulling her satchel around her shoulder
after dropping her notebook and pen inside, weaving in and
out of the desks, STORMING past the professor and out the
door.
She sits alone on the top row of the bleachers, her hood
pulled over her head. Her phone sits in her lap, screen dark,
while she stares at the pitcher’s mound.
MEOW.
She freezes. Her head snaps down- there, at her feet, a small
orange cat brushes against her leg. Its fur matted in several
places, its ribs visible underneath its thin frame.
The cat looks up at her with wide, trusting eyes, its tail
flicking. It meows again, louder this time, before nuzzling
against her palm.
She sits up, reaching into her hoodie pocket. From inside,
she pulls out the crumpled flyer she found yesterday— the one
about the missing kitten.
The cat doesn’t seem to care about its newfound fame- it just
continues rubbing against her leg again, PURRING loudly.
Behind her-
Footsteps approach.
56.
ISAAC
(softly)
You wanna talk about it?
JANE DOE
What’s there to say?
Isaac’s eyes drift from her face to the cat, which he grins
at- wiggling his nose.
ISAAC
(trying to lighten the
mood)
You’re a cat person now?
JANE DOE
I don’t know what I am.
Isaac studies her for a moment, then nods toward the cat.
ISAAC
Where’d you find it?
JANE DOE
It found me.
Jane Doe looks down at the cat, her fingers pausing mid-
stroke.
ISAAC
(sitting up)
What did you see?
Jane hesitates.
JANE DOE
...the same thing I saw last night.
ISAAC
Wait- you mean?
JANE DOE
Yeah...
ISAAC
Who is bug?
JANE DOE
Me.
ISAAC
You think this...
JANE DOE
Open it.
He unfolds it, his eyes scanning the words written across it.
ISAAC
(reading aloud)
‘Bug, I finally found you.’
ISAAC (CONT’D)
Signed... Gabriel.
ISAAC (CONT’D)
Who is Gabriel?
JANE DOE
(looking up)
I think he’s my brother.
Jane takes the note from him, her fingers brushing against
the address. She turns it over in her hands- looking back at
the name ‘Gabriel.’
ISAAC
It’s not far. An hour- maybe.
59.
JANE DOE
(standing)
We’re going.
ISAAC
(looking up)
We?
JANE DOE
(flatly)
Yeah. You’re getting us a ride.
ISAAC
What? I don’t drive.
ISAAC (CONT’D)
Are you bringing the cat?
CUT TO:
It’s a fourplex.
Its once-bright red paint running up the walls has long since
been faded by Gravity’s unpredictable weather.
Jane Doe pauses in front of one of the doors, the number ‘3A’
barely hanging on by one crooked nail. Isaac lingers behind
her, foot TAPPING the ground anxiously.
KNOCK! KNOCK!
60.
ISAAC
How do we know she’s home.
KNOCK! KNOCK!
She wraps Jane Doe in a quick hug before pulling back, her
eyes watering... nose SNIFFLING, starting to cry as she turns
and looks at Isaac, wiping her tears, flashing him an
uncomfortable smile.
She looks in Jane Doe’s arms, petting the cat in them atop
the head. She looks up:
JAMIE
What are you guys doing?
(beat)
(trying to think)
Were we all suppose to... hang out?
ISAAC
Just uh- was in the area. Thought
we’d...
JANE DOE
(interrupting him)
We need to ask you a favor.
VOICE
(muffled)
Jamie? Who is it?
JAMIE
(turning slightly)
It’s-
ZACHARY
Who the hell are they?
...really?
EXT. ROAD
VROOM!
ZOOM OUT: it’s a two-door muscle car, barreling down the road
like a... a bat out of hell.
INT. CAR
The cramped backseat feels more like a prison cell— too small
for two people, let alone Jane Doe and Isaac, one of their
egos big enough for the both of them.
JANE DOE
(grumbling)
Why is this thing so bumpy?
Isaac long legs are awkwardly folded into the limited space.
ISAAC
(just as annoyed)
Maybe because it’s held together by
duct tape.
JAMIE
(looking back)
(smiling)
You guys doing okay back there?
JANE DOE
WHAT?
JAMIE
You need a puke bag?
JANE DOE
I’d rather leave it on the seat.
ZACHARY
(smirking in the rearview
mirror)
Don’t worry. She’s got a V8. You’ll
get used to it.
63.
JANE DOE
(muttering to herself)
I should’ve walked.
Another sharp turn sends Jane Doe sliding into Isaac again,
her shoulder jabbing into his ribs.
ISAAC
(teasing)
Would you stop? You’re making this
weird.
JANE DOE
Don’t start.
Then- peaking out from under her hoodie, the orange cat pokes
his head out, looking around. It snuggles up to Jane Doe,
PURRING aloud.
ISAAC
(shrugging)
I thought it could come in handy.
You might want to see some more...
(glancing up the front)
(looking back, whispering)
...memories.
JANE DOE
That’s none of your business.
JAMIE
(smiling)
Hey! Road trips are supposed to be
fun. Everyone lighten up.
The car HITS another bump, JOLTING them forward before the
rickety muscle car ROARS down the road again.
CUT TO:
The booths along the window are dotted with regulars, their
coffee cups steaming as they chat idly or scribble into a
crossword puzzle.
The bell above the door JINGLES. She glances up and her
expression shifts— surprised.
DEB
Well, look what the cat dragged in.
You clean up nice.
They walk over to Deb, who greets them with a smile, SLAPPING
a couple menus on a table to the side and gesturing for them
to sit.
FLASHLIGHT
(to Deb- smirking)
I figured we’d stop in for a bite.
Heard this place had some pa-zaz.
DEB
(smiling)
Well- you heard right.
(beat)
Go on, take a seat.
65.
DEB (CONT’D)
So, what’s it going to be?
Pancakes? Eggs?
(beat)
We can do lunch too.
GRAY
DAD, I WANT PANCAKES!
FLASHLIGHT
Yeah- get him a stack of pancakes.
(beat)
(looking up)
I’ll just have a burger if thats
okay with you. Plain.
DEB
(teasing)
Got it. Like’s his food ‘plain’.
I’ll remember that.
She looks him up and down, the two almost gauging each other-
the sparks waiting to be lit.
FLASHLIGHT
Thanks, Deb.
DEB
I’ll be right back with your food-
(leaning in- looking
around)
(whispering)
...flashlight.
CUT TO:
EXT. NEIGHBORHOOD
Meanwhile...
As she approaches the next house, where toys litter the front
yard- and a dog usually barks behind the backyard fence. She
looks for them-
She pulls open their mailbox either way, slipping their mail
inside and SHUTTING it close.
Then-
The tree above her sways faintly in the wind, but the shadow
beneath it doesn’t move.
As she walks to the next house, she doesn’t take her eyes off
of it.
Before long- her other foot slips into the shadow, sinking
down like it’s quicksand. She FLAILS- SCREAMING, as the
shadow surges up, covering her mouth, then entire body.
EXT. TOWN
The man leans over, planting a soft kiss on his wife’s cheek.
She laughs, her wrinkles deepening as she swats at him
playfully.
ZOOM OUT: to the road. Which is oddly less populated than the
day before.
Where is everyone?
WOMAN
Did you feel that?
MAN
Feel what?
The shadow GRABS the mans arm- pulling him backwards. She
gabs on to him, trying to save him. But, in the blink of an
eye, both of them are gone- swept into a black void without a
sound.
68.
...it moves.
PROFESSOR
(under his breath)
What on earth?
What is it?
But this time, he uses his whole hand. It sinks into the
blackness, down to his elbow.
He SCREAMS.
Gravity, Iowa.
Emptier.
Cars sit parked along the curbs, some even left abandoned in
the street.
CUT TO:
INT. CAR
JAMIE
(sharply)
You didn’t even TRY- Isaac!
ISAAC
(rolling his eyes)
Oh, here we go. I didn’t try?
(scoffs)
Really?
70.
JAMIE
I’m just saying— you don’t get to
blame me for braking up with you
when all you cared about was—
ISAAC
(interrupting)
When all I cared about was what,
Jamie? My future? You mean
something other than you?
Jane Doe’s head tips toward the small window, opening her
eyes- tuning them out entirely.
Their here.
INT. CAR
ISAAC
(sarcastically)
(to Jamie)
Yeah, this is the perfect time to
rehash all of this.
71.
JAMIE
(to Isaac)
You’re impossible.
(beat)
Right Jane?
Isaac scoffs, looking out his own window as Jane Doe finally
speaks up, her tone flat.
JANE DOE
Shut up. Both of you.
JAMIE
(turning to her)
(voice softening)
Sorry.
Jane Doe flicks her brow, letting the comment hang as she
shifts her focus back to the window.
The car veers off the exit onto a narrower street, the
skyscrapers giving way to an older, poorer part of the city.
EXT. BUILDING
INT. CAR
JAMIE
This place looks like a horror
movie.
ZACHARY
(to Jane Doe)
I think you got cat-fished.
JAMIE
Just go.
ZACHARY
(defensively)
(pointing to the gate)
There’s a gate right there. Unless
you want me to drive through it.
She- in the backseat, reaches into the front over the driver
side door, pulling the handle.
Before Zachary can protest, she pulls the lever on the side
of his seat and SHOVES it forward, SQUISHING him against the
steering wheel.
EXT. CAR
She glances over her shoulder into the car at Isaac, Jamie
and Zachary staring at her.
Zachary lets off the break, and the car ROLLS through.
CUT TO:
INT. BUILDING
Cobwebs drape the high arching beams hanging from the ceiling
like forgotten decorations. Mildew and dust float in the air,
making it thick and hard to breathe.
Someone COUGHS.
JAMIE
(tightly)
You sure we need to do this?
ZACHARY
(to Jamie)
You scared?
Jamie crosses her arms, turning away from him and stepping
beside Jane Doe, who shines her own flashlight between the
staircases.
ISAAC
Place probably looked nice. Once.
(standing up)
(shining his flashlight)
The only thing scary about this
place is asbestos.
A beam of light enters one room, looking over it. Jane Doe
steps inside, glancing at the walls.
They’re... colorful.
Jane Doe reaches in, picking up a small doll with one missing
eye and shakes her head.
75.
Creepy.
ISAAC
(shouting)
(urgent)
JANE- you need to come look at
this. NOW.
TIGHT ON: one, as Jane Doe steps beside Isaac, who gestures
to it. It’s an old black-and-white photo... of children
standing beside each other like picture day.
It says something:
‘LITTLE’S ORPHANAGE’
CUT TO:
Flashlight, still in his human form- sits with his son, Gray,
finishing the last bites of their meal. Gray licks syrup off
his fingers, his stack of pancakes wiped out.
DEB
Well, I hope that hit the spot.
FLASHLIGHT
(smiling)
Plainest burger I’ve ever had.
DEB
Is that a compliment?
GRAY
He’s lame.
DEB
(teasing)
Yeah... I think I’m going to have
to agree with you there.
GRAY
(whispering)
You like her, don’t you?
FLASHLIGHT
(scoffing)
What are you talking about?
GRAY
You should ask her out.
FLASHLIGHT
Gray—
GRAY
I’m just saying! She’s totally into
you.
77.
FLASHLIGHT
I’ve got a lot more things to worry
about.
EXT. DINER
The sidewalks are empty, save for a few parked cars and the
occasional RUSTLING leaves.
The late afternoon sun does little to push back the growing
shadows cast along the storefronts.
GRAY
(practically begging)
You should do it, Dad.
FLASHLIGHT
Do what?
GRAY
Ask her out. You’re always saying
you have to be brave.
FLASHLIGHT
You’re not gonna let this go, are
you?
FLASHLIGHT (CONT’D)
Tell you what-
(beat)
If I do this... you have to fly
tomorrow. By yourself.
GRAY
DEAL!
Flashlight SIGHS.
FLASHLIGHT
Okay. Stay right here.
EXT. DINER
TIGHT ON: the bell above the door RINGING once again.
Silence.
FLASHLIGHT
(yelling into the kitchen)
DEB?
Nothing.
She’s gone.
CUT TO:
79.
INT. BUILDING
Jane Doe sits on the floor- back leaning against the wall,
her arms crossed tightly over her knees pulled to her chest.
She stares ahead blankly.
JAMIE
(half-whispering)
I told you this was a bad idea.
ISAAC
(sarcastic)
Yeah, because your ideas always
work out so great.
JAMIE
Excuse me?
ISAAC
You heard what I said.
JAMIE
(to Isaac)
Maybe if you stopped acting like
you know everything—
ISAAC
(cutting her off)
And maybe if you stopped running
your mouth—
JANE DOE
(whipping around)
(snapping)
WOULD YOU TWO QUIT IT?
Her voice cuts through the dusty air like a whip, startling
them both into silence.
ISAAC
What now?
JANE DOE
(to Isaac)
I want to use it.
ISAAC
(confused)
What?
JANE DOE
The... the brain zapper.
(beat)
Go, get it.
ISAAC
Are you sure?
JANE DOE
(100%)
(wanting to find answers)
Yes.
The orange cat circles her feet, brushing against her legs
before settling just out of reach, its vertical slit eyes
fixed on her.
ISAAC
(half-joking)
Last chance to back out.
JANE DOE
Isaac. Stop.
JAMIE
What exactly are you going to do to
her?
ISAAC
(buckling strap under Jane
Doe’s chin)
The device on her head
sends low-frequency electrical
impulses to the hippocampus and
amygdala areas of her brain, those
associated with memory and
emotional processing.
(gesturing to the wires)
By stimulating those regions, it
theoretically can trigger latent
memories or even amplify those
already present in her
subconscious.
(pausing, looking at
Jamie)
Think of it like jump-starting a
car.
JAMIE
(raising an eyebrow)
Will it hurt?
JANE DOE
I’ll be fine, Jamie.
82.
ZACHARY
Can I try?
JAMIE
(whispering)
Is it working?
ISAAC
Give it a second...
FLASHBACK
INT. KITCHEN
YOUNG GABRIEL
(teasing)
Slow down, Bug, or you’ll choke.
Their LAUGHTER fills the room, but it’s abruptly cut off—
A distant SLAM.
83.
YOUNG JANE
(whispering)
Is it him?
YOUNG GABRIEL
(sternly)
Stay here.
YOUNG JANE
Do you see him?
YOUNG GABRIEL
Run.
END FLASHBACK
Jane Doe is unconscious- her eyes rolled back into her head.
Her body JERKS in the chair, her fists nearly SNAPPING the
wooden arms off of it.
ISAAC
It’s overheating—
84.
JAMIE
(about to cry)
TURN IT OFF!
JANE DOE
(still unconscious)
NO!
(a deep breath)
Keep going...
FLASHBACK
INT. HOUSE
What happened?
YOUNG GABRIEL
(whispering)
Bug...?
Gabriel takes a shaky step back, his bare feet leaving faint
red imprints on the carpet.
ADULT (O.S.)
WHAT DID YOU DO?!
He’s lying.
Then-
In it- CRASH!
SILENCE.
86.
END FLASHBACK
The helmet powers down with a faint WHINE, smoke rising from
its overheating circuits.
ISAAC
What did you see?!
JANE DOE
Gabriel.
CUT TO:
Gabriel.
Right at us.
CUT TO:
INT. STORE
Gray lingers behind him, his small legs doing their best to
catch up.
GRAY
(whispering)
Where is everyone?
FLASHLIGHT
Stay close.
The fluorescent lights above them shine down on them like any
other day.
88.
GRAY
(softly)
I’m tired. Can we go home?
FLASHLIGHT
Soon, Junior. I promise.
Gray frowns.
INT. GARAGE
Behind him, Gray stands in the doorway- holding his arm out
in front of him, his hand outstretched.
Flashlight.
He sees it.
89.
GRAY
What is it?
FLASHLIGHT
(not taking his eyes off
it)
Something I had Isaac working on
for me.
INT. ATTIC
FLASHLIGHT
These lights will keep you safe.
Nothing can touch you here.
GRAY
(quietly)
What about you?
FLASHLIGHT
Don’t worry about me. Just remember
what I told you.
FLASHLIGHT (CONT’D)
(pointing to a button)
If you see this move...
(pointing to his shadow on
the wall)
...press this button. Okay?
GRAY
Dad?
GRAY (CONT’D)
Don’t let the villain capture you.
Flashlight smiles.
FLASHLIGHT
I won’t.
CUT TO:
THUD!
It’s Flashlight.
It’s here.
It stops.
FLASHLIGHT
What do you want?
GABRIEL
You know what I want.
FLASHLIGHT
Why?
(beat)
Who is she to you?
GABRIEL
That’s none of your business,
glowstick.
FLASHLIGHT
Where are they?
GABRIEL
Who?
FLASHLIGHT
(raising his voice)
You know damn well who i’m talking
about.
(glowing brighter the more
he gets angry)
You slaughtered a whole town.
GABRIEL
They’re not dead.
92.
GABRIEL (CONT’D)
But I can change that.
FLASHLIGHT
Try me.
GABRIEL
Oh- I could.
(beat)
We both know how that went lsat
time.
GABRIEL (CONT’D)
How about I make you a deal?
Flashlight scoffs.
GABRIEL (CONT’D)
Bring me my sister and I’ll let
them go.
FLASHLIGHT
How do I know you’re not bluffing?
GABRIEL
Because we wouldn’t be having this
conversation.
He’s right.
FLASHLIGHT
(considering it)
I... I don’t even know where she
is.
GABRIEL
She’s on her way.
Whatever it is-
93.
It HISSES.
BOOM!
Gabriel reforms amidst the dancing flames, his own human form
an after thought.
But, he does.
He SOARS into the sky, holding onto the black shadow with all
his might. Then- as he rises above the clouds-
He drops him.
94.
Flashlight ZIPS toward him, his glow cutting through the cold
night like a comet. Electricity CRACKLE off his body,
spiraling outward as he accelerates.
He drives it across his face, all the way into the ground,
creating a massive crater.
He looks up-
FLASHLIGHT
Gray? WHAT ARE YOU DOING HERE?
FLASHLIGHT (CONT’D)
RUN!
Flashlight ROARS.
SLLPPHT!
GABRIEL
You should’ve took the deal.
Gabriel freezes.
About time.
His dark pupils narrow as he turns toward the voice. His grip
on Flashlight loosens- distracted, causing the hero to drop
down onto the snow, GASPING for air.
96.
Behind her, Isaac and Jamie SPRINT into view, breathless and
frantic.
GABRIEL
Hey, Bug.
JANE DOE
Don’t call me that.
GABRIEL
(mocking)
Okay- ‘JANE’.
GABRIEL (CONT’D)
Look at you-
(beat)
You’re all grown up now.
GABRIEL (CONT’D)
I wasn’t sure you’d come.
(laughing)
Really didn’t think you’d go all
the way to Des Moines- god I hate
that city. Wish we never got sent
there.
JANE DOE
I know what you did.
GABRIEL
Oh? And here I thought you lost
your memory.
(beat)
Go ahead then- tell me.
(another beat)
What did I do?
JANE DOE
You killed our parents.
97.
GABRIEL
(chuckling)
You’re half right.
(beat)
But I didn’t do it because i’m some
psycho-path who... who gets off on
this shit.
GABRIEL (CONT’D)
I did it for you.
JANE DOE
You have some incest fantasy?
GABRIEL
You’ve changed.
(looking her up and down
again)
Whatever- ‘happened’
(tapping his head)
to you. It sharpened your tongue.
JANE DOE
I’m not a little girl anymore.
GABRIEL
You are to me, Bug.
JANE DOE
I said don’t call me that.
GABRIEL
What are you going to do? Arrest
me?
(referring to her chosen
college degree- criminal
justice)
JANE DOE
You deserve much worse than that.
GABRIEL
(yelling)
FOR WHAT?
(beat)
Protecting you?
98.
GABRIEL (CONT’D)
I was trying to protect you that
night.
(beat)
I- I didn’t do it- I told them
that.
Jane Doe watches as his eyes grow dark, his pupils flooding
with a black shadowy substance.
GABRIEL (CONT’D)
But who’s going to believe an 8
year old kid?
(beat)
That’s why I had to. Or else he’d
do it again and I wouldn’t be there
to save you.
His words hang in the air- his words, painful and venom.
JANE DOE
Doesn’t give you the right to hurt
the people I care about.
GABRIEL
BUT I’M YOUR FAMILY! NOT THEM.
(beat)
YOU- YOU FORGOT I EVEN EXISTED! YOU
ABANDONED ME.
GABRIEL (CONT’D)
You know, it wasn’t hard to find
you.
(smirking)
At first I couldn’t believe it. My
long lost sister made the front
page news in some backwater town
just down the road.
(MORE)
99.
GABRIEL (CONT’D)
(beat)
I call that luck.
GABRIEL (CONT’D)
But then I found you...
JANE DOE
Sorry to disappoint.
GABRIEL
My sister might as well be dead.
(beat)
What a lovely idea I thought.
JANE DOE
So- you’re just going to forget
about the whole ‘i’m not a serial
killer’ bit.
Gabriel smiles.
GABRIEL
...just like you forgot me.
Jane Doe dives into the field, right next to Isaac and Jamie.
100.
JANE DOE
(gesturing to Gray)
Is he okay?
ISAAC
I hope.
ISAAC (CONT’D)
Push the button.
(beat)
Trust me.
WHOOSH!
EXT. ROAD
Meanwhile...
101.
EXT. CORNFIELDS
Disappearing.
FLASHBACK
INT. HOUSE
Young Jane Doe giggles as she chases Young Gabriel around the
cluttered room.
YOUNG JANE
TAG! Your it.
(beat)
Bet you can’t catch me.
INT. KITCHEN
YOUNG GABRIEL
You’re a weirdo.
YOUNG JANE
(grinning)
Takes one to know one!
INT. HALLWAY
END FLASHBACK
104.
EXT. CORNFIELDS
GABRIEL
Bug...
JANE DOE
You know what you have to do.
It’s Deb.
She looks around, her eyes lighting up as she sees Jane Doe,
Jamie and Flashlight.
Then- behind her, Isaac falls out, falling flat on his face
in the snow.
The professor.
GRAY
Dad?
ISAAC
His body’s overloading.
FLASHLIGHT
What do you mean?
(beat)
He should be able to do what I do.
ISAAC
From what I can see, it’s different
with him.
(beat)
As where you received a direct
blast from the explosion that gave
you these abilities- he did not.
(beat)
He was still in the womb, correct?
FLASHLIGHT
Yeah. Why does that matter?
ISAAC
His body can store the energy like
yours can.
FLASHLIGHT
(muttering to himself)
That’s why it just hovers around
him...
ISAAC
He...
(finding the right words)
Won’t be able to hold it in much
longer.
FLASHLIGHT
What happens when he can’t.
FLASHLIGHT (CONT’D)
I’m take him into the sky.
ISAAC
(walking forward)
(desperate)
Not even you can survive that much
energy!
FLASHLIGHT
(quietly)
But i’ll die saving this town.
GABRIEL
No.
GABRIEL (CONT’D)
I’ll take him.
GABRIEL (CONT’D)
It’s the least I can do.
(beat)
My shadows should be able to absorb
the majority of his blast.
GABRIEL (CONT’D)
I couldn’t grow up with you, A-bug-
ail. But I can save you now.
Abigail.
The use of her real name sends a shiver down her spine.
GABRIEL (CONT’D)
(to Gray)
You’ll be okay, kid.
He looks up one last time, his eyes locking with Jane Doe’s.
GABRIEL (CONT’D)
Take care of her for me.
CUT TO:
INT. DINER
Blushing?
ZOOM OUT: as the cat JUMPS in her lap and Deb walks over,
sliding a plate of pancakes onto the table.
As Jane Doe pokes one with her fork, setting it on her plate,
she looks up at the wall.
CUT TO BLACK:
THE END
110.