Academic IELTS Writing Task 1 Question
Academic IELTS Writing Task 1 Question
Example :
1. The diagram shows employment rates among adults in
four European countries from 1925 to 1985.
5. The bar graph and the table data depict the water
consumption in different sectors in five regions.
Conclusion:
Conclusion (General statement + Implications, significant
comments)
[The conclusion part is optional.]
Tips:
1. Write the introduction and General trend in the same
paragraph. Some students prefer to write the 'General Trend'
in a separate paragraph and many teachers suggest both to
be written in a single paragraph. Unless you have a really
good reason to write the general trend in the second
paragraph, try to write them both in the first paragraph.
However, this is just a suggestion, not a requirement.
2. Your 'Introduction (general statement + overall trend/
general trend) should have 75 - 80 words.
"A glance at the graphs reveals that 70% of the male were
employed in 2001 while 40 thousand women in this year had
jobs."
Gradual an upward
increase ------------ trend / an
upward
tendency / a
ceiling trend
Gradual a downward
decrease ------------ trend / a
downward
tendency / a
descending
trend
Examples:
1. The overall sale of the company increased by 20% at the
end of the year.
Tips:
1. Use 'improve' / 'an improvement' to describe a
situation like economic condition or employment status. To
denote numbers use other verbs/nouns like increase.
2. Do not use the same word/ phrase over and over again. In
fact, you should not use a noun or verb form to describe a
trend/change more than twice; once is better!
Example:
1. The economic inflation of the country increased sharply by
20% in 2008.
Example:
1. The price of the goods fluctuated during the first three
months of 2017.
Tips:
1. 4. DO NOT try to present every single piece of data
presented in a graph. Rather pick 5-7 most significant and
important trends/ changes and show their comparisons and
contrasts.
2. The question asks you to write a report and summarise the
data presented in graphs(s). This is why you need to show
the comparisons, contrasts, show the highest and lowest
points and the most striking features in your answer, not
every piece of data presented in the diagram(s).
Types of Changes/ Differences and
Vocabulary to present them:
Great change / Huge difference:
Adjectives Adverbs
Overwhelming Overwhelmingly
Substantial Substantially
Enormous Enormously
Fractions:
4% = A tiny fraction.
24% = Almost a quarter.
25% Exactly a quarter.
26% = Roughly one quarter.
32% Nearly one-third, nearly a third.
49% = Around a half, just under a half.
50% Exactly a half.
51% = Just over a half.
73% = Nearly three quarters.
77% = Approximately three quarter, more than three-
quarter.
79% = Well over three quarters.
Proportions:
2% = A tiny portion, a very small proportion.
4% = An insignificant minority, an insignificant proportion.
16% = A small minority, a small portion.
70% = A large proportion.
72% = A significant majority, A significant proportion.89% =
A very large proportion.
89% = A very large proportion.
Words/ Phrases of Approximation -
Vocabulary:
» Approximately
» Nearly
» Roughly
» Almost
» About
» Around
» More or less
» Just over
» Just under
» Just around
» Just about
» Just below
» A little more than
» A little less than.
What criteria would a band 9 graph
response satisfy?
Task Achievement:
A) Fully satisfies all the requirements of the task.
B) Clearly presents a fully developed response.
What will be assessed by the examiner?
a) How appropriately, accurately and relevantly you fulfil
your task requirements.
b) How accurately you write your report and how
appropriately you present the data (compare/ contrast/ show
the most striking trends/ features/ data.)
Tips:
1. Do not incorporate more than 3-4 paragraphs.
2. Do not use a single paragraph to describe everything.
3. The conclusion part is optional. If you think that you have
already written more than 170 words and have nothing to
say, you can skip the conclusion.
Lexical Resource:
A) Uses a wide range of vocabulary with very natural and
sophisticated control of lexical features.
B) Rare minor errors occur only as "slips".
What will be assessed by the examiner?
a) The range of vocabulary you have used in your writing.
b) How accurately and appropriately you have used words/
phrases while presenting the graph(s) as a report.