Language of Trends
Language of Trends
7. Fluctuated
1. Rose/increased steadily
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Stood at
This means ‘not moving’. So avoid using it
once you have begun
Remained constant/ unchanged /stable at …./ This is used if a ‘flat’ point arises where the
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Leveled off/evened out at … data is neither increasing nor decreasing for
a period of time
Fluctuated To rise and fall or vary irregularly
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In 1991, the number of arrests for illegal drug use stood at 55. However,
over the following two years, there was a sharp fall to 20 per year. The
number then rose significantly from 1995 to 1996 to 50 per year. 1996 to
1999 saw a fluctuation in the arrest rate, which was followed by a sudden
increase at the end of this period, with the rate reaching a peak of 80 in
2000. Next, the number of arrests plunged to a low of 15 in 2001. It
remained stable for the following year, but then increased gradually to 20,
leveling off at this rate for the remainder of the period.
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Jump
Rise
Rise
Rocket
A tenth A third Slightly more than a fifth Slightly less than a third Three quarters Nearly half
Just over three The vast
A half q quarter quarters A fifth majority/almost all Over half
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1. “plunge” and “plummet” do not take adverbs
because what they mean is a big decrease.
We can say “decreased
considerably/sharply/dramatically/significantly/substantially”
or “plunged”, or “plummeted”.
But, we must not say,
“plummeted
considerably/sharply/dramatically/significantly/substanti
ally” or “plunged
considerably/sharply/dramatically/significantly/substanti
ally”
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before increasing/ the figure remained stable before increasing/
the figure remained unchanged before increasing/ the figure
remained constant before increasing”. However, we cannot
use “stabilized or levelled off” in this case. Stabilized and
levelled off always happen after another trend.
For example, sales fluctuated before they levelled of / sales
fluctuated before they stabilized.
Fluctuation
You can say fluctuated significantly/ fluctuated wildly (big
changes) or fluctuated slightly (small changes).
The birthday fluctuated significantly/wildly
between 2000 and 2005.
5. Reached a low
“Reach” always happens after a movement.
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The number of people who were unemployed reached a peak
of 2000 people in 2015. The number of tourists reached a
peak of 15 million in 1995.
7. Stood at
You can use “stood at” at anywhere on the graph you want (at the
beginning it stood at,
afterward it stood at, then it stood at”, then it stood at, then it stood
at something else). “Stood at” works for anything on the graph.
The number of sales stood at 4 million in 2010.
The number of people travelling to London stood at 26 million in
2005.
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10. Dipped/decreased slightly
Expenditure on furniture dipped slightly from 9% to 7% between
2002 and 2005. Coffee sales decreased slightly between June and
August.
Examples:
Coffee sales began at 50 thousand dollars, then decreased slightly
to 48 thousand dollars. Subsequently, sales plunged and reached a
low of 40 thousand dollars between June and August. Afterwards,
coffee sales rocketed to a high of 70 thousand dollars. Sales
remained stable before decreasing and stabilizing at…
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increase
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1. Milk consumption fell sharply during June and July.
.……………………………………………….
2. There was a slight dip in food prices at the start of the year.
Food prices………………………………………
January………………………………………………………
There…………………………………………………………
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below:
- The graph shows (information about) /indicates /illustrates
highlights (the data about)…
- As the graph shows
- It is clear from the graph (that)
- As shown by the graph
- It can be seen from the graph (that)
- As can be clearly seen from the graph,
- From the graph, it is clear (that)
- As illustrated by the graph,
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- Over a ten-year period
- After that/ then
- Until
- Throughout the year/ throughout the period/
each month of the year - Subsequently
- For the rest of the year
- In January/ at the beginning of the year/ at the beginning
of the period
- In December/ the end of the year
LANGUAGE OF ESTIMATION
· Just over
· Nearly
· About
· Around
· Almost
· Approximately
· Just about
· Very nearly
· Just over
· More than
· Less than
USEFUL LANGUAGE
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indicates/depicts/reveals/illustrates…
· Sales = income = revenue = turnover = how much money
was made.
· The income rate = the income level = the level of income =
the rate of income = the level of revenue = the revenue rate
= the revenue level
· New York City bookstore = bookstore in New York City
· Proportion = percentage = rate
· The proportion of = the percentage of = the figure for.
· From 2000 to 2005 = between 2000 and 2005 = Over
a period of (5) years. ·
Note:
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The figure for X
What is X? Whatever you are talking about.
For example: the figure for novel sales, the figure for action
films, the figure for whatever it said on the diagram.
Or you can use “X’s figure”. For example, romance film’s
figure
The contribution of X
“Contribution” means how much do you give to something,
how much do you give to the whole/ the total. “Contribution”
works when we talk about percentages because “percentage” is
looking at the whole (100%). So, here I can say:
The contribution of romance films stood at more than 50%
in 1990. Romance film’s contribution stood at more than
50% in 1990.
Romance films contributed more than 50% in 1990.
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This just means you do not paraphrase the summary enough.
That’s a big problem. Be sure you paraphrase the summary
as much as you can.
3. Question mark
4. Your main point lacks either comparison or trend
language, and you cannot get a 7.0+ in task achievement
without it.
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