Assignment 2.

Academic Writing Skills Access to Higher Education Diploma (Nursing)

Access to Higher Education Diploma (Nursing)

Assignment 2.
Academic Writing Skillls
Task 1. By: Ilona Petrenyi

Date: 25/09/2022

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Table of content

Within NHS there are many employees works behind the scenes. 350
different job roles 3

NHS is waiting for new employees 4

NHS can be your future 5

Give a gift for yourself 7

You can make an impact 8

NHS welcome everyone who is working with the key values 10

NHS will always greeting you 11

NHS will give every support in your way 13

NHS cares about employees, just like cares of every patients 14

References 16

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1. Within NHS there are many employees works behind the scenes. 350
different job roles
PARAPHRASE EXAMPLE 1
Original text
“Not everyone in the NHS works on the front line. There are 350 different carers in
the NHS, probably more than in any other organisation in the world.” NHS (2020)
My example
Within NHS there are many employees works behind the scenes. NHS give works in
350 different job roles, NHS is a unique organisation in the word who provide many
more carers path than other firms. NHS (2020)

PARAPHRASE EXAMPLE 2
Original text
“You’d be surprised how many of them don’t require a degree, aren’t directly patient-
facing, or aren’t clinical or hands on.” NHS Health Careers (2020)
My example
You are able to work for NHS without any diploma , even if you are do not want to
deal directly with patients, or you don’t need to be a clinical practitioner or to touch
patients. NHS Health Careers (2020)
Reference
NHS Health Careers (2020), “The information service about the range of 350 or so
careers available in health.”[online] Available at:
https://ldatom.epearl.co.uk/vle/_store/course/assignment_content/3315-
350%20careers,%20one%20NHS,%20your%20future.pdf
(Accessed: 23. September, 2022)

QUOTATION EXAMPLE 1
Original text
“everything that everyone does is for patients, their families, carers and the public,
we can all contribute in different ways. We can all make a difference and help
others.”
My example
NHS emphasises, everything that everyone does is for patients, their families, carers
and the public, we can all contribute in different ways. We can all make a difference
and help others.

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QUOTATION EXAMPLE 2
Original text
“Search NHS careers and see the range of careers and entry requirements on our
website.” NHS Health Careers (2020)
My example
NHS says that, anyone who is interested in can search NHS careers and see the
range of careers and entry requirements on our website.
Reference
NHS Health Careers (2020), “The information service about the range of 350 or so
careers available in health.”[online] Available at:
https://ldatom.epearl.co.uk/vle/_store/course/assignment_content/3315-
350%20careers,%20one%20NHS,%20your%20future.pdf
(Accessed: 23. September, 2022)

2. NHS is waiting for new employees

PARAPHRASE EXAMPLE 1
Original text
“The NHS is recruiting now. Here’s the start of your health career.” NHS Health
Careers (2020)
My example
Now, NHS looking for new employees. Your career is on the beginning of the health
path!
PARAPHRASE EXAMPLE 2
Original text
“There are careers here that you’ve never heard of and opportunities you haven’t
imagined are suitable for you.” NHS Health Careers (2020)
My example
Within NHS you can find many opportunities to fulfil your careers. Those kinds of
careers which you may not imagined and fit into your life.
Reference
NHS Health Careers (2020), “The information service about the range of 350 or so
careers available in health.”[online] Available at:
https://ldatom.epearl.co.uk/vle/_store/course/assignment_content/3315-
350%20careers,%20one%20NHS,%20your%20future.pdf
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(Accessed: 23. September, 2022)

QUOTATION EXAMPLE 1
Original text
“Take a look at the benefits of working in this diverse, fast/moving and rewarding
service. Your future career can sometimes feel a long way off.”
My example
The NHS Health Careers encourages you to take a look at the benefits of working in
this diverse, fast/moving and rewarding service. Your future career can sometimes
feel a long way off.
QUOTATION EXAMPLE 2
Original text
“Your future career can sometimes feel a long way off. This booklet could bring it
closer. When you’re ready for us, we’re ready for you.”
My example
NHS also ask you to consider that, Your future career can sometimes feel a long
way off. This booklet could bring it closer. When you’re ready for us, we’re ready for
you.
Reference
NHS Health Careers (2020), “The information service about the range of 350 or so
careers available in health.”[online] Available at:
https://ldatom.epearl.co.uk/vle/_store/course/assignment_content/3315-
350%20careers,%20one%20NHS,%20your%20future.pdf
(Accessed: 23. September, 2022)

3. NHS can be your future

PARAPHRASE EXAMPLE 1
Original text
“Be part of something big. An introduction. Our NHS – your future.” NHS Health
Careers
My example
NHS is calling you to be part of them big organisation. As an overture. NHS can be
your future.
PARAPHRASE EXAMPLE 2

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Original text
“We’ve been around for 70 years and we’re here to stay. We have more than 350
different careers available and one of those careers could be right for you.”
My example
NHS’ history going back for 70 years and it’s going to be here in your future. They
have 350 different kinds of jobs available to choose from and one of that roles can
be your next career.
Reference
NHS Health Careers (2020), “The information service about the range of 350 or so
careers available in health.”[online] Available at:
https://ldatom.epearl.co.uk/vle/_store/course/assignment_content/3315-
350%20careers,%20one%20NHS,%20your%20future.pdf
(Accessed: 23. September, 2022)

QUOTATION EXAMPLE 1
Original text
“We offer a fair and transparent pay structure with competitive and flexible benefits.
We have one of the most generous pension schemes on offer.”
My example
You need to know that at NHS we offer a fair and transparent pay structure with
competitive and flexible benefits. We have one of the most generous pension
schemes on offer.
QUOTATION EXAMPLE 2
Original text
“you’ll get your reward knowing that you’re making lives better. The NHS is growing
and developing and we want you to come on this journey with us.”
My example
It is also important for NHS to tell, you’ll get your reward knowing that you’re making
lives better. The NHS is growing and developing and we want you to come on this
journey with us.
Reference
NHS Health Careers (2020), “The information service about the range of 350 or so
careers available in health.”[online] Available at:
https://ldatom.epearl.co.uk/vle/_store/course/assignment_content/3315-
350%20careers,%20one%20NHS,%20your%20future.pdf
(Accessed: 23. September, 2022)

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4. Give a gift for yourself

PARAPHRASE EXAMPLE 1
Original text
“There’s pretty much something for everyone in the NHS. Surprise yourself. Whether
you’ve always wanted to work in health or have never thought about it before, the
huge range of jobs in the NHS will amaze you.” NHS Health Careers (2020)
My example
NHS give for every employee something extra. Give a gift for yourself. If you’ve ever
been thinking about to be part of NHS team or to be contact with the health industry,
you will be surprised how big the amount of job roles have, within the NHS.
PARAPHRASE EXAMPLE 2
Original text
“We are so much more than doctors, nurses, midwives and physiotherapists. There
are clinical and non/clinical careers. You could be on the front line on a ward or
never see a patient and still make a difference to people’s lives.” NHS Health
Careers (2020)
My example
NHS workers are different from what the people usually thinking of. It is including not
only the clinical doctors, nurses and those careers who are contacting directly the
patients. Within NHS you could be a non/clinical careers behind the scenes, who
never meet with patient and still contribute to the people’s health.
Reference
NHS Health Careers (2020), “The information service about the range of 350 or so
careers available in health.”[online] Available at:
https://ldatom.epearl.co.uk/vle/_store/course/assignment_content/3315-
350%20careers,%20one%20NHS,%20your%20future.pdf
(Accessed: 23. September, 2022)

QUOTATION EXAMPLE 1
Original text
“From the person who manages the finances to the clerk who books in an operation,
everyone is making a contribution to vital services. It all comes down to skills,
attitude and teamwork.”
My example

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It is good to know that about NHS, from the person who manages the finances to the
clerk who books in an operation, everyone is making a contribution to vital services.
It all comes down to skills, attitude and teamwork.

QUOTATION EXAMPLE 2
Original text
“We need everyone form biochemists to bricklayers and receptionists to
rehabilitation specialists. It’s not always easy, but it is rewarding.”
My example
In the NHS Health Careers always speared that: We need everyone form
biochemists to bricklayers and receptionists to rehabilitation specialists. It’s not
always easy, but it is rewarding.
Reference
NHS Health Careers (2020), “The information service about the range of 350 or so
careers available in health.”[online] Available at:
https://ldatom.epearl.co.uk/vle/_store/course/assignment_content/3315-
350%20careers,%20one%20NHS,%20your%20future.pdf
(Accessed: 23. September, 2022)

5. You can make an impact

PARAPHRASE EXAMPLE 1
Original text
“Make a difference. Want to leave work every day knowing that what you do really
matters?” NHS Health Careers (2020)
My example
You can make an impact when you work for NHS. Do you want the end of the day,
all your work has been appreciated?
PARAPHRASE EXAMPLE 2
Original text
“The following pages give you a flavour of the careers on offer in the NHS. We have
grouped them into 14 colour/coded categories, each with its own icon.” NHS Health
Careers (2020)
My example

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In the next pages you can see the kind of jobs are available at NHS. NHS has put all
the 14 categories into groups with assorted colours, marked them also with icons
one by one.
Reference
NHS Health Careers (2020), “The information service about the range of 350 or so
careers available in health.”[online] Available at:
https://ldatom.epearl.co.uk/vle/_store/course/assignment_content/3315-
350%20careers,%20one%20NHS,%20your%20future.pdf
(Accessed: 23. September, 2022)

QUOTATION EXAMPLE 1
Original text
“You’ll find a selection of different careers in these categories in the alphabetical
listing. Those marked “A” may be suitable for apprenticeship.
My example
In the NHS information materials, You’ll find a selection of different careers in these
categories in the alphabetical listing. Those marked “A” may be suitable for
apprenticeship.
QUOTATION EXAMPLE 2
Original text
“Remember that these are just some of more than 350 careers available in the NHS.
For more information on these and many other opportunities visit:
healthcareers.nhs.uk/explore-roles or search online for ‘NHS careers’.”
My example
In the NHS’ information booklet anyone can read and remember that these are just
some of more than 350 careers available in the NHS. For more information on these
and many other opportunities visit: healthcareers.nhs.uk/explore-roles or search
online for ‘NHS careers’.
Reference
NHS Health Careers (2020), “The information service about the range of 350 or so
careers available in health.”[online] Available at:
https://ldatom.epearl.co.uk/vle/_store/course/assignment_content/3315-
350%20careers,%20one%20NHS,%20your%20future.pdf
(Accessed: 23. September, 2022)

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6. NHS welcome everyone who is working with the key values

PARAPHRASE EXAMPLE 1
Original text
“The NHS has a career for anyone who shares our values. Take a look: Working
together for patients. Teamwork across the NHS makes life better for the people we
serve.”
My example
NHS welcome everyone in them career path, who is working with the key values in
them every day duties. This means that, you are able to work as a team with your
colleague for the patients. Working together within NHS it is an effective way to
serve and satisfy patients, to make people happy in them life.

PARAPHRASE EXAMPLE 2
Original text
“Respect and dignity. It’s a quality not a qualification to be able to treat our patients
with respect.”
My example
When you work with patients it is one of the important value to respect patients and
give them a quality care. Also, doesn’t need to have a diploma for supporting
patients’ dignity, during care.
Reference
NHS Health Careers (2020), “The information service about the range of 350 or so
careers available in health.”[online] Available at:
https://ldatom.epearl.co.uk/vle/_store/course/assignment_content/3315-
350%20careers,%20one%20NHS,%20your%20future.pdf
(Accessed: 23. September, 2022)

QUOTATION EXAMPLE 1
Original text
“Commitment to quality of care. Whatever NHS career you choose, we want people
with high standards. We want people who really care to come and work for us.”
My example
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NHS also express other key values what they are looking for in people. Commitment
to quality of care. Whatever NHS career you choose, we want people with high
standards. We want people who really care to come and work for us.

QUOTATION EXAMPLE 2
Original text
“You can make patients’ lives better, whether you’re a secretary or a surgeon.
Everyone counts. Each and every person working and volunteering in the NHS is
making a difference and helping people, whatever career they’re in.”
My example
In the NHS organisation You can make patients’ lives better, whether you’re a
secretary or a surgeon. Everyone counts. Each and every person working and
volunteering in the NHS is making a difference and helping people, whatever career
they’re in.
Reference
NHS Health Careers (2020), “The information service about the range of 350 or so
careers available in health.”[online] Available at:
https://ldatom.epearl.co.uk/vle/_store/course/assignment_content/3315-
350%20careers,%20one%20NHS,%20your%20future.pdf
(Accessed: 23. September, 2022)

7. NHS will always greeting you

PARAPHRASE EXAMPLE 1
Original text
“The great benefit of the NHS is that you can join at any stage of your life. You may
be at school choosing options or you could be looking to change your career path
after bringing up a family.”
My example
A strong advantage of NHS: doesn’t matter how old you are or what you are doing
right now! You can be sure NHS will always greeting you whenever you want to do
something new in your life and career.
PARAPHRASE EXAMPLE 2
Original text

My example

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Reference
NHS Health Careers (2020), “The information service about the range of 350 or so
careers available in health.”[online] Available at:
https://ldatom.epearl.co.uk/vle/_store/course/assignment_content/3315-
350%20careers,%20one%20NHS,%20your%20future.pdf
(Accessed: 23. September, 2022)

QUOTATION EXAMPLE 1
Original text
“Some roles have a specific training route and need academic qualifications. For
others, you can study a range of different subjects and apply them to a jobs in the
NHS.”
My example
NHS as a huge organisation informs public about that, within NHS some roles have
a specific training route and need academic qualifications. For others, you can study
a range of different subjects and apply them to a jobs in the NHS.

QUOTATION EXAMPLE 2
Original text
“We are looking for people with transferable skills who can bring life experience and
insight from working in other sectors. Don’t rule yourself out just because you have a
non-traditional background, or because you don’t have clinical or degree-level
questions.”

My example
NHS cannot emphasis enough times that: We are looking for people with
transferable skills who can bring life experience and insight from working in other
sectors. Don’t rule yourself out just because you have a non-traditional background,
or because you don’t have clinical or degree-level questions.
Reference
NHS Health Careers (2020), “The information service about the range of 350 or so
careers available in health.”[online] Available at:
https://ldatom.epearl.co.uk/vle/_store/course/assignment_content/3315-
350%20careers,%20one%20NHS,%20your%20future.pdf
(Accessed: 23. September, 2022)

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8. NHS will give every support in your way

PARAPHRASE EXAMPLE 1
Original text
“Everyone counts in the NHS and that applies to staff as much as patients. We’ll look
after you and help you fulfil your potential.” NHS Health Careers (2020)
My example
NHS’ employees are matters the same way as important every patients. NHS will
give every support in your way to bring out the maximum from yourself.
PARAPHRASE EXAMPLE 2
Original text
“Just because you come in with one set of qualifications (or none at all), doesn’t
mean you can’t move across and up into other careers over time. The NHS is a great
place to grow and learn.” NHS Health Careers (2020)
My example
If you apply for a job in NHS with any degree or without a degree, NHS will always
give you the opportunity to go for any careers you choose. That’s why NHS is one of
the best choice for developing yourself and your knowledge.
Reference
NHS Health Careers (2020), “The information service about the range of 350 or so
careers available in health.”[online] Available at:
https://ldatom.epearl.co.uk/vle/_store/course/assignment_content/3315-
350%20careers,%20one%20NHS,%20your%20future.pdf
(Accessed: 23. September, 2022)

QUOTATION EXAMPLE 1
Original text
“There are development opportunities and access to training courses for all full- and
part-time staff. The pace of change and technological development brings a constant
demand for new skills and experience.”
My example
NHS also wants the applicants know that, there are development opportunities and
access to training courses for all full- and part-time staff. The pace of change and
technological development brings a constant demand for new skills and experience.
QUOTATION EXAMPLE 2

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Original text
“Our pay progression is based on gaining knowledge, experience and skills, so
there’s an incentive to be the best NHS employee you can be.”
My example
Whenever people wants to work for NHS, they need to know our pay progression is
based on gaining knowledge, experience and skills, so there’s an incentive to be the
best NHS employee you can be.

Reference
NHS Health Careers (2020), “The information service about the range of 350 or so
careers available in health.”[online] Available at:
https://ldatom.epearl.co.uk/vle/_store/course/assignment_content/3315-
350%20careers,%20one%20NHS,%20your%20future.pdf
(Accessed: 23. September, 2022)

9. NHS cares about employees, just like cares of every patients

PARAPHRASE EXAMPLE 1
Original text
“Compassionate care comes from staff who are well looked after and the NHS is a
well- respected national employer. We have one of the most competitive and
supportive benefits packages offered anywhere in the UK, including length of
working week, holidays and career progression.” NHS Health Careers (2020)
My example
NHS is appreciate those employees, who are emphatic, give continuous quality and
value care for patients. NHS has a great reward system for all staff, what is one of
the best in UK compare to other organisation. This encouraging wages are helping
employees to plan them working shifts whenever they want to work on weekends, or
going to annual leave and also helps with them career planning.

PARAPHRASE EXAMPLE 2
Original text
“Our flexible working options and benefits such as childcare mean that we can help
you with your work/life balance and maintain wellbeing for you and your family. Our
pay and terms and conditions are fair and transparent.” NHS Health Careers (2020)
My example

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NHS support the employees with the many available working times; also care about
them families with benefits. Makes available help for everyone to find the best
balance between work and them family life. NHS paying good wages which are
visible for every employees and makes available the related terms and conditions.
Reference
NHS Health Careers (2020), “The information service about the range of 350 or so
careers available in health.”[online] Available at:
https://ldatom.epearl.co.uk/vle/_store/course/assignment_content/3315-
350%20careers,%20one%20NHS,%20your%20future.pdf
(Accessed: 23. September, 2022)

QUOTATION EXAMPLE 1
Original text
“Our pension scheme is excellent and as an NHS employee you’ll have access to a
health service discounts scheme. You can see the most up-to-date position by
searching online for ‘Agenda for Change’.”
My example
NHS can proudly claims that, our pension scheme is excellent and as an NHS
employee you’ll have access to a health service discounts scheme. You can see the
most up-to-date position by searching online for ‘Agenda for Change’.

QUOTATION EXAMPLE 2
Original text
“The Health Careers team is here to help if you can’t find what you’re looking for
online. Email [email protected] or call 0345 60 60 655. We’re ready
when you are.”
My example
For further information, the Health Careers team is here to help if you can’t find what
you’re looking for online. Email [email protected] or call 0345 60 60 655.
We’re ready when you are.
Reference
NHS Health Careers (2020), “The information service about the range of 350 or so
careers available in health.”[online] Available at:
https://ldatom.epearl.co.uk/vle/_store/course/assignment_content/3315-
350%20careers,%20one%20NHS,%20your%20future.pdf
(Accessed: 23. September, 2022)

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