AndyVinz Summarizes (Chapter2)
AndyVinz Summarizes (Chapter2)
What is a paragraph?
1. My hometown is famous for its wide Wheaton River and steep Wheaton
Hill.
2. There are two reasons why some people like to buy cars with automatic
transmission and two reasons why others like manual transmission.
3. The shapes of clouds are determined by various factors.
1. There are two reasons why some people like to buy cars with automatic
transmission.
2. There are two reasons why some people like cars with manual
transmission.
Supporting Sentences
▪︎The paragraph discusses Wheaton, a town famous for its wide and
beautiful Wheaton River and steep Wheaton Hill. The paragraph is indented
on the first line, allowing readers to expect the rest of the paragraph to
answer the question "What are the natural features that make Wheaton
famous?" The second and third sentences are called supporting sentences,
explaining the topic sentence. At least five to seven sentences should be
included in the paragraph. The paragraph also includes a supporting
sentence about the Big Old Tree, which stands two hundred feet tall and is
likely about six hundred years old. This lesson will discuss supporting
sentences in detail in the next section.
Details in Paragraph
▪︎The short paragraph about Wheaton lacks details about its natural
landmarks, such as the wide and beautiful Wheaton River, steep Wheaton
Hill, and the Big Old Tree. These landmarks are famous for their beauty and
are covered in golden snow in autumn. To improve the paragraph, additional
details could be added, such as the river's width and its significance.
Supporting details, such as the meat, cheese, and lettuce, are crucial for the
paragraph's overall interest and the overall quality of the text. This would
help readers understand the significance of these natural features and make
the paragraph more engaging.