Story Sample
Story Sample
Setting: Ravenswood Manor stood in the middle of a foggy countryside. It was an old house covered in ivy, with many
spooky stories surrounding it. The nearest village, Ashford, was a small and quiet place where people often talked
about the house in whispers.
Characters:
Eleanor Whitmore – A brave young woman who comes back to her family home to uncover its secrets.
Mr. Graves – The serious butler who has worked at Ravenswood Manor for many years.
Daniel Harper – A curious journalist who wants to learn the truth about the manor.
Lady Beatrice Whitmore – Eleanor’s late grandmother, whose diary holds important secrets.
Rising Action: Eleanor arrives at the manor on a stormy night. She brings her grandmother’s old diary, which
mentions a hidden room under the house. It is said to hold a terrible family secret.
Strange things begin to happen—crying sounds in empty rooms, shadows moving on their own, and candles flickering
without reason. Mr. Graves warns Eleanor to stop searching, but Daniel, eager for a story, convinces her to continue.
One night, Eleanor and Daniel find a hidden door behind a bookshelf in the library. They go down a spiral staircase and
discover a small room. In the center is an old iron chest with Lady Beatrice’s initials on it.
Climax: As Eleanor touches the chest, the door slams shut. The air becomes heavy, and a ghostly voice fills the room.
Lady Beatrice’s spirit appears, warning them not to open the chest. Eleanor is scared, but Daniel insists on opening it.
Inside, they find letters revealing a shocking truth. Lady Beatrice had sent away a secret family member out of greed.
This unfair act had trapped her spirit in the house, waiting for justice.
Falling Action: Eleanor reads the last diary entry, where Lady Beatrice writes about her deep regret. The ghost, now
looking sad instead of scary, whispers a final plea before disappearing. The house becomes quiet.
Mr. Graves, standing at the door, admits he knew the secret all along but had promised to keep it. Eleanor decides to fix
the past by finding the lost family member.
Resolution: A few weeks later, Eleanor finds a descendant of the missing family member—a humble schoolteacher in
Ashford. She welcomes them back into the Whitmore family, making things right.
With the past resolved, the strange events at Ravenswood Manor stop. Eleanor feels at peace, knowing she has restored
justice. Daniel writes about the story, but some details remain a secret, known only to those who were in the hidden
room that night.