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- Intro: The line graph illustrates the quantity of people migrating to three distinct nations over a

10-year period, starting in 1991.


- Overview: Overall, while the quantity of adoptive citizens to the USA followed an downward
trend, decreases and stabilities were witnessed in that of Canada and Australia.
Moreover, it is noticeable that the USA attracted the highest number of newcomers over the
given period.
Describing changes:
- While about 1.4 million people migrated to the USA in 1991 and
reached a peak of 1.8 million people in 1992, this quantity then
witnessed a drastic drop to just over 0.8 million in 2001.
- A twofold increase was witnessed in the amount of travellers to
Australia from the UK, increasing from 800000 in 1995 to over 1.4
million in 2005.
- There was a decrease of 600 thousand people in the number of
immigrants to the USA, from 1400000 in 1991 to 800000 in 2001.
- 1,4 million people migrated to the USA in 1991….
- Experiencing a dramatic increase in its immigrants pattern was the
USA, with its figure reducing from 1400000 in 1991 to 800000 in 2001.
Range of subjects:
1. The number/amount/rate of ….
2. An increase/decrease of … => 1 su thay doi
3. Thoi gian/Dia diem/Subject…
Vd: 2005 witnessed an increase of … in the ….
4. There ….
Vd: There witnessed an increase of ….
5. A specific value ….
6. Reversion
Experiencing an increase of … was ….

Lưu ý: Mọi câu đều phải có dữ liệu và thời gian rõ ràng, tăng là từ bn của năm nào
lên bn của năm nào
The line graph shows the number of
immigrants to 3 different countries
from 1991 to 2001.
Describing changes:
• Using VERBS describing changes:
+ Increase: rise, grow, raise, ascend, boost, scale up, jump, rocket, peak,
reach a peak
+ Decrease: reduce, drop, decline, fall, descend, plummet
+ On dinh: remain unchanged/stable/static/constant, stabilize, level off
+ Bien dong: fluctuate, vary
• Using ADJECTIVES describing changes:
+ Manh: dramatic, drastic, significant, considerable, noticeable
+ Tu tu: gradual
+ Nhe nhang: slight, minimal, mild
+ Khong dang ke: inconsiderable
Overview:
- Main trends: While the rate
of birth among women in 30-35
and 35-39 age group followed
an upward trend, the opposite
was true for those of the
remaining age groups, with the
exception of the 25-29 group
whose birth rates fluctuated
over the given period.
- Main features: Moreover, it is noticeable that the reproduction rate of
UK’s female aged 25-29 kept being the highest over the recorded
period.
Describing changes:
The line chart depicts the
number of ENGLISH women
per 1000 females giving birth of
different/distinct age groups
over a 35-year period, starting
in 1973.

The line chart illustrates the


shifts in the birth rates of The line chart compares English
English females of six distinct female of six age groups in terms of
age ranges over a 35-year their birth rates over a 35-year period,
period, starting in 1973. starting in 1973.
Draft information:
- Important information:
+ usa: highest – 1992 reached
its peak – biggest change
+ aus: lowest – no change

- Draft information:
+ Paragraph 1: USA
Highest all
1992 reached its peak
1999 – 2000 reached its bottom - 1991: over 1400, highest => increase to
Overall: decline - biggest reach its peak of 1800 in 1992.
change - Next => declined to 800 in 1996 before
fluctuating until 2001, ending with over 800,
kept being the highest figure.
Report changes:
- Describe change
- Include all important
information: highest/ lowest/
biggest change/no
change/similar values
- 1 body contains 2 paragraphs:
+ Group 1: USA: fluctuate =>
decline
+ Group 2: Canada up; Aus –
no change
- Group divided by time/trend

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