2018 NAPLAN Year 9 State Report With Answers
2018 NAPLAN Year 9 State Report With Answers
Literacy______________________________________________ 6
Writing ................................................................................................................ 6
Stimulus (writing prompt) Years 7 & 9 ....................................................................... 6
About the task ........................................................................................................... 6
Performance ............................................................................................................. 7
Sample script ............................................................................................................ 9
Commentary on sample script ................................................................................ 11
Language conventions ..................................................................................... 12
Spelling .............................................................................................................. 12
Results and item descriptions .............................................................................. 12
About the test ....................................................................................................... 13
Performance ........................................................................................................ 13
Implications for teaching ...................................................................................... 14
Grammar and punctuation ................................................................................. 16
Results and item descriptions .............................................................................. 16
About the test ....................................................................................................... 17
Performance ........................................................................................................ 18
Implications for teaching ...................................................................................... 18
Reading ............................................................................................................ 19
Results and item descriptions ................................................................................. 19
About the test .......................................................................................................... 21
Performance ........................................................................................................... 22
Implications for teaching ......................................................................................... 24
Numeracy ___________________________________________ 26
Results and item descriptions ................................................................................. 26
About the test .......................................................................................................... 28
Performance ........................................................................................................... 29
Implications for teaching ......................................................................................... 29
Preface
State reports are issued by the QCAA about the performance of Queensland students on the
National Assessment Program — Literacy and Numeracy (NAPLAN) paper tests. State reports
provide system-level information and are publicly available. This report for Year 9 students in
2018 contains:
• the Queensland performance on each item
• the national performance on each item
• the item descriptors
• a commentary on the state results
• some recommendations for teaching.
SunLANDA Online
Since 2015, student data has been released on the QCAA School Portal using the SunLANDA
Online interface. Access to SunLANDA as application software is also still available on the QCAA
website.
SunLANDA Online provides class and school information in an electronic form that permits
customised spreadsheet generation by users. In addition, it shows representative samples of
students’ incorrect responses to constructed responses where applicable. Hyperlinks from within
SunLANDA Online lead to the QCAA’s test item analysis. Information on how to use this service
is available at: www.qcaa.qld.edu.au/p-10/naplan/test-reporting-analysis/sunlanda/accessing-
navigating-sunlanda.
School reports
The QCAA issues NAPLAN school reports giving information about each school’s performance.
They provide a summary of year-level performance as well as performance by gender, language
background and Indigenous status in the following fields:
distribution of scaled scores
distribution of achievement bands
school and state means
participation of the group.
The school report positions a school’s performance within the state on a graph that is shaded to
show the range of performance for the middle 60% of Queensland students together with the
state mean.
Class reports
The QCAA issues NAPLAN class reports that show the performance of every student on every
item. Under the name of each student is recorded the items they had correct and incorrect. They
also show students’ responses to constructed-response items.
The class report also gives the:
percentage correct for each item for the class and state, and by gender
ACARA reports
As well as the Queensland reports from the QCAA, national reports are available from the
website of the Australian Curriculum Assessment and Reporting Authority (ACARA). The
NAPLAN National Summary Report and the NAPLAN National Report allow states and territories
to place the achievement of their students in relation to their peers across the nation. This is
system-level information and is publicly available.
The prompt was relatively open-ended, allowing students to base their writing on one or more of
the images provided, or compose their text around their own idea.
Markers for this Writing test were trained using the national persuasive writing marker training
package, delivered as part of ACARA’s national assessment program. Markers were recruited
and trained in accordance with national protocols. Registered Queensland teachers marked the
NAPLAN Writing test scripts. All markers applied the 10 criteria and related standards from the
marking rubric. Writing test scripts were marked on screen in all states and territories. Stringent
quality-control measures were applied to the marking of student scripts, including a prescribed
percentage of scripts to be double-marked, and the daily application nationally of control scripts
for all markers. As part of the Queensland marking operation for 2018, referee marking continued,
further ensuring marking reliability. There was also provision for appeal over individual Writing
test scores after the results were released.
An earlier version of the NAPLAN Persuasive writing marking guide is available at:
www.nap.edu.au/_resources/Amended_2013_Persuasive_Writing_Marking_Guide_-
With_cover.pdf
Performance
The 2018 writing prompt was particularly suited to many students in Years 7 and 9 as technology
is something they know about, have an interest in and have seen develop throughout their life.
For many students it would be something they have looked at in their STEM subjects and studies.
The prompt did provide some examples of technology for students and did also allow students to
select a topic of personal interest with which they had some familiarity. It appears that few
students had difficulty in finding a subject on which their text could be based, and the majority of
students went with suggestions from the prompt, particularly self-driving cars and fingerprint locks
for bikes.
Students typically introduced their subject (e.g. a piece of technology that will make life better) in
an opening paragraph, stating broadly why this piece of technology would make life better, then
provided information regarding the uses and benefits of the technology. The danger here was that
following the introduction, some students tended to move into informative text rather than
persuasive text. Conclusions then tended to focus on simple re-statements of main points
referred to in the body of the text. Often there was a very close parallel between the wording of
the introduction and conclusion.
If students did follow the informative line, without taking a stance on the subject in question, they
were deemed to be ‘off genre’, an outcome that may have had considerable impact on their
scores. Some students, particularly Year 9 students, adopted a ‘review’-type response, tending to
provide information rather than persuasive argument, defending their choice of technology.
Typically, this information was sandwiched between an introduction and conclusion which
reflected some persuasive elements. These students were deemed to be ‘on-genre’, though their
final scores were impacted by the absence of persuasive elements throughout their texts.
In most cases, students in Year 9 showed competence with the persuasive form. Introductions
provided more natural orientation for the reader, with quite passionate statements of position
often presented.
Performance
Compared to the national average, Year 9 students in Queensland performed only slightly lower
on most words. They did marginally better on the words research, subscription, incredible and
grievances. Compared to previous Queensland cohorts, this year’s Year 9 students performed
slightly better in Spelling.
Between 10% and 15% of students omitted any response to the last eight words. The reading
load and vocabulary demand in these items was high.
Test-wiseness
Ignore supplied errors: Students should avoid being influenced by the supplied misspelling of a
word. Instead, they should focus on their own spelling knowledge and strategies.
Word study
Students need to build a mature vocabulary. Word study belongs in all subjects, not just English.
Students should learn:
the pronunciation of advanced words and their look on the page
the meaning of their component morphemes (word parts)
other words built from the same stem.
Students may learn to avoid inappropriate ‘sounding out’ strategies if they know that suffixes and
inflections have grammatical effects and stable spellings. For example, they should be able to
reason that the final syllable of specialist contains the agent noun suffix -ist, not the superlative
adjective suffix -est.
In the light of the poor facility with the word infectious, teachers in subject English might focus on
the regular patterns for suffixes. For example, the suffix -ous belongs with other suffixes that form
adjectives, such as -y, -able, -acious, -ic, -al, -ish, and -est. From another angle, -ous words can
be divided into those with a /sh/ sound, e.g. suspicious, and those without, e.g. indigenous.
Exceptions, rarities and oddballs should be noted as well as the general patterns.
Proofreading
Proofreading skills should be taught as an authentic writing skill. This will incidentally help
students read test questions carefully and avoid being misled by supplied errors.
QCAA resources
Full analysis of student performance and error patterns for each item is published in the
SunLANDA program: https://www.qcaa.qld.edu.au/p-10/naplan/test-reporting-
analysis/sunlanda/accessing-navigating-sunlanda and as PDF documents:
In 2018, about one half of the questions were focused on students’ knowledge of the terminology
of grammar and punctuation terms (the ‘metalanguage’). The number and complexity of
metalanguage questions has been increasing over the years.
Students needed to know the terms for the parts of speech to answer the following questions:
Item 37, Item 39, Item 41 and Item 46 on adverbs
Item 50 on noun groups.
These questions sometimes also referred in the distractor options to the names of other parts of
speech, e.g. preposition, conjunction, adjective, verb, noun.
Students needed to know the terms for structural parts of sentences to answer the following:
Item 31 on clause order (i.e. a relative clause follows the subject noun)
Item 44 on adjectival (relative) clauses
Item 49 on active/passive voice.
These questions sometimes also referred in the distractor options to the names of other structural
elements, e.g. adverbial clause, main clause, adverbial group and adjectival phrase
Students needed to know the terms for punctuation marks to answer the following questions:
Item 28 on quotation marks for direct speech and attribution
Item 42, Item 34 and Item 47 on colons and on semicolons (in complex lists)
Item 43 on dashes (i.e. em rules separating a parenthetical phrase).
The following questions could be answered without knowledge of metalanguage:
Item 26 and Item 36 on conjunctions
Item 29 on subordinate clauses (as fragments needing a main clause)
Item 30 on pronoun reference
Item 32 on punctuating and attributing direct speech
Item 35 on list commas
Performance
Year 9 students in Queensland performed marginally higher than the national average in many
items. Compared to previous Queensland cohorts, Year 9 students performed a little better.
Many students, including many of the high-performing ones, struggled with the metalanguage
questions. The reasons for this vary. In the case of Item 42, the terms ‘colon’ and ‘semicolon’ do
not themselves create the low facility but the lack of the important knowledge of how to use these
signs. However, the low facility for Item 49 is likely due to the special grammar analysis task it
sets. In the case of Item 50, even many students who understood the terms ‘noun group’ and
‘main clause’ did not know how to interpret this example. The low facility and the weak statistical
‘fit’ for Item 46 (on parts of speech) may also have been due to the item format. Few students
omitted responses to any items, except for Item 45.
The Australian Curriculum English allows for the progressive teaching knowledge and
understanding of grammatical concepts and punctuation conventions. Teaching the curriculum
implies teaching the terminology of grammar (metalanguage) where this helps the effective use of
language to communicate in different contexts and for different purposes.
QCAA resources
Full analysis of student performance and error patterns for each item is published in the
SunLANDA program: https://www.qcaa.qld.edu.au/p-10/naplan/test-reporting-
analysis/sunlanda/accessing-navigating-sunlanda and as PDF documents:
https://www.qcaa.qld.edu.au/p-10/naplan/test-reporting-analysis/test-item-analysis. A school BIC
and password is required to access each year level document.
Dear Mr Mitchell
1 C 95.53 95.97 Identifies the author of a persuasive letter.
Graffiti – is it art?
13 A 88.32 89.57 Identifies the reasoning behind an author's point
of view in an argument.
The forging
25 C 84.11 85.9 Interprets the purpose of text structures and
language features in a narrative.
Nonsense rules!
44 A 47.35 48.31 Analyses the effect of how the writer introduces a
topic in a complex essay.
Performance
The level of difficulty increased as students progressed through the Reading test, with the first
units having slightly higher facility rates than the following units. This was more pronounced in
other year levels than the Year 9 Reading test. Performance in link items from The forging and
Lost for words ranged from 0.4% to 13.12% higher when compared to Year 7 performance.
The first two units, Dear Mr Mitchell and Our world of weird and wonderful plants, contained a
range of question types and were generally quite easy for many Year 9 students except for Item
4. Item 4 required students to evaluate the purpose of the use of italics which required a context-
based inference. Therefore, part of the difficulty is that it requires higher-order inference. Another
reason this was quite difficult for students is that one of the distractors was very difficult to
eliminate. Even though this item appeared to refer to one very specific part of the text, any
context-based inferential question requires an understanding of the whole text. This is a point
which many of the students appeared to miss.
The third unit, Graffiti – is it art?, was more difficult than the first two units. This unit had two items
that required creative thinking (question type). One of these, Item 16, proved to be the most
challenging in this unit. Several variables contributed to the difficulty of this item. Options were
drawn from both texts, Graffiti is art and Graffiti is vandalism. Students were required to know
what is meant by ‘emotive language’ and how to apply it in the context of the text. The item
analysis shows that able students struggled with this item. They had difficulty with the fact that to
identify language as emotive requires reading that language and its context. Many students
attempted to apply this in a lexical sense without referring to the context. Once again, the
implication is that students should respond to Reading test questions using the text.
Calculator-allowed items
Non-calculator items
Non-calculator items
In each of the 8 items in the Non-calculator paper, Queensland students performed below the
national cohort of Australian students. This suggests that working through mathematical problems
without using calculators is an area where Queensland students could improve.
There are times when the calculations required in a problem are too complex or the values
involved have many decimal places. In these instances, a calculator may be essential. However,
there are many situations where a calculator is not needed. For example, in straightforward
number problems and patterns, in some problems involving fractions and percentages, and in
money problems where change or discounts have to be calculated.
Where appropriate, teachers should encourage their students to perform the calculations required
in solving mathematics problems without using calculators, at least initially. Students could then
be encouraged to use calculators as a means of checking their own manually obtained answers.
This practice would also be beneficial for students as a life-skill, as a means of estimating
answers or quantities and for those times when a calculator is not available. Another benefit from
manually calculating answers would be to help students decide on the reasonableness of
answers that are obtained when they do use a calculator.
Word problems
In the 2018 Year 9 Numeracy test, the Non-calculator items were mostly word problems while
44% of the Calculator-allowed items were word problems; overall, this is a significant proportion
of the test. Therefore, it is important that students have frequent exposure to mathematics
problems presented in sentence form, interspersed with numbers. Students need to practise
reading written text in numeracy contexts, interpreting the information and deciding what is
required to be done.
Problem solving
Students need frequent exposure to challenging problems to develop the confidence and skills to
find the solutions. Teachers should consider teaching and learning through presenting students
with problems that range from simple to complex, familiar to unfamiliar and single-step to
multistep. Problem solving should be incorporated into learning activities, not treated as a
separate or add-on activity. It should be included in a range of learning experiences, both in real-
life and purely mathematical contexts. Where possible, teachers are encouraged to pose student
maths problems that are derived from different curriculum areas.
It is possible to equip students with approaches to apply when a numeracy problem is
encountered. This will give them confidence to attempt and develop solutions. Students can be
equipped with problem-solving approaches where they feel enabled to:
Identify the problem (What am I being asked to do?)
Analyse the problem (What do I have to work with?)
Take appropriate action (Select and apply procedures to solve the problem)
Reflect on the answer (Check my answer — Does it work? Is my answer reasonable? Are
there other correct answers?).
While all steps are important, ‘Does my solution work?’ and ‘Is my answer reasonable?’ are
particularly beneficial in test situations, especially when students are asked to construct a
response.
Students should be habitually asked to consider the reasonableness of their answers. See for
example Calculator-allowed Items 8, 26, 33 and 38 where the constructed responses could
readily be checked for reasonableness. Knowing a problem-solving strategy will help when
students are required to provide constructed responses. The items with the highest omission
rates in the 2018 Numeracy test were those involving constructed responses.
Test-wiseness
Teachers should instruct students to answer all multiple-choice items. Even if this involves
guessing some answers before the test time runs out, it is better practice to answer these items
than not answering at all. An educated guess may sometimes be correct.
As well as the multiple-choice questions, students should expect constructed-response items to
be included in the test. They need to have the confidence to commit to providing their own
numerical answers. Students can develop their mathematical confidence by regularly engaging
Difficult items
Teachers are encouraged to closely inspect the items that Queensland students found the most
difficult. Generally, this would be the items where the Queensland facility rates were below 30%.
Teachers should consider whether it was the content covered and/or the style of these questions
that made them difficult and what the implications are for their students.
QCAA resources
Full analysis of student performance and error patterns for each item is published in the
SunLANDA program: https://www.qcaa.qld.edu.au/p-10/naplan/test-reporting-
analysis/sunlanda/accessing-navigating-sunlanda
and as PDF documents: https://www.qcaa.qld.edu.au/p-10/naplan/test-reporting-analysis/test-
item-analysis.
A useful reference for the teaching of spatial reasoning and geometric properties is given here:
QSA, 2005, Mathematics: About space,
https://www.qcaa.qld.edu.au/downloads/p_10/kla_maths_info_space.pdf