Magic Bullets
Magic Bullets
Magic Bullets: Step-By-Step Template Guide for Creating Mouth Watering Bullets and Sales Copy
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Contents
Introduction........................................................................................................................... 5
Laddering Benefits All the Way to the End Emotional Benefit ................................................ 14
1. How to BENEFIT..........................................................................................................................24
11. Benefit + Name Dropping (Can be used with the other formulas) ........................................26
15. The single most important _____ you’ll ever need for _____. ..................................................26
Introduction
I
f you’re serious about building
wealth, one of the most valuable
skills you can develop is persuasion.
This includes speaking to people one-
on-one over the phone or presenting on
webinars and live conferences. But for
the majority of us, it comes down to
writing copy for our websites and sales
videos.
If you can’t persuade a visitor to trade
their hard earned money for the benefits
you offer, you’ll never make it out of the
gate. No money changes hands until
something is sold. Sure, you could make
a few bucks plastering Adsense all over
your website, but you’ve still got to ‘sell’
people on clicking over to your site in the
first place.
CPA networks such as Neverblue and Maxbounty will pay you for sending clicks and
leads to their advertisers’ sites. But again, you’ve got to persuade visitors why they
should take time out of their busy day and fill in the lead generation form on their
websites. Whether you realize it or not, you’re always selling something. You’re
asking for someone to click your link, join a list, or buy a product.
One of the reasons I’ve survived and thrived for the past 20 years online is I focused
my attention on copywriting skills early on. Yes, you need traffic. And you need
products and services to offer your audience. But winning traffic strategies will
change in the future. I’ve coached dozens of clients who relied on organic search
engine optimization for years and were eventually forced to switch to paid advertising
including Google and Facebook.
As you know Facebook ads are becoming more difficult and more expensive every
year. Your competition is increasing. Facebook reviewers are becoming pickier. And
both clickthrough rates and opt-in rates have decreased in the past year. Yes, you
can still make it work…but leads are only going to get more expensive in the future.
Profiting means staying on top of this trend and discovering how to earn more from
each click to your website.
That’s where it comes back to the offers you make and the copy you write. Every
single one of my six, seven, and eight figure clients knows how to write effective copy.
Some of them hire out a portion of the writing, but they know how to do it themselves.
That’s not true of website design. Several clients wouldn’t have a clue how to put a
website up. They don’t know how to design graphics or edit videos. They don’t even
know how to manage their own Adwords account. Team members do all that.
But even when they hire out a portion of their copywriting, they still know how to do
it themselves. You might pay a few hundred dollars for a simple website design, but
you won’t hire top copywriters at that price. Several clients have a copywriter they
pay a monthly retainer plus either set fees for copy or bonuses/royalties on results.
We’re talking multiple thousands of dollars per month. I personally paid $25,000 to
a copywriter one year for the copy on several websites. And he was worth every
penny!
I’ve also spent tens of thousands of dollars on copywriting training, paid for numerous
copy reviews from other copywriters, and paid to be a member of John Carlton’s
copywriting coaching for a year. I’ve invested more money and time developing this
skill than anything else online. Because it’s one of the skills that determines just how
far you go in this business…
Great copy persuades your audience to take action. Nothing more. Nothing less. An
ad may call out your ideal audience and persuade them to click your link and share it
with their friends. They come to your website and you persuade them to opt-in to
your list. After they join your list, you persuade them to click the links in your emails.
From there is varies based on the response you desire. Maybe you sell your product
or service directly on your website. Or perhaps you ask them to register for a webinar
or fill out an application to speak to you on the phone. Each step is leading them
gently to the next.
But how do you motivate people to take action now? It’s NOT by appealing to their
logic. That’s the temptation I constantly struggle with. If I had my choice, I’d rather
simply write out what I have, and why it’s the most obvious action. But that rarely
works, because we as human beings don’t just make decisions based on logic.
Instead we make decisions based on emotion first, and justify it with logic.
Let’s take a quick detour into a court of law. You’re a lawyer who has been assigned
a case to defend a man from the murder charge. You know in your heart the man is
innocent. You do your research. You interview witnesses. You look through every
piece of the evidence the police have against your client.
You find out where your client was, why they couldn’t have committed the murder,
and every ounce of proof you can muster.
But you won’t stop there. You have proof to back up your case, but you know the
district attorney wouldn’t bring the case unless they had a strong argument on their
side also. And it’s NOT what you believe that’s important. A man’s life is in your hands.
You have to persuade 12 strangers to your way of thinking. Yes, you’ll present all the
proof you’ve found, but there’s more to winning the case than this. You may win or
lose the case based on whether the jury connects and trusts you personally.
Often cases are determined during the jury selection itself. Everyone who walks into
the courtroom has previous life experiences and attitudes they’ve developed from
those experiences. A few years ago I served on a jury in a DUI case. After selecting
a bunch of potential jurors, they led us up to the courtroom and gave each of the
lawyers the opportunity to interview us.
The first questions they asked were related to whether any of the potential jurors had
previous experience with a drunk driving incident. One lady had a family member
who had been injured by a drunk driver. She was not picked to be on the jury. Other
questions were about whether we knew anyone involved in the case, what we did for
a living, whether we drank alcohol, where we worked, etc. The lawyers were looking
for anyone who may have a bias for or against the case so they could remove them
from the jury.
This was a small case, but it still took close to two hours for 6 jurors to be interviewed
and selected. In a murder trial, jury selection alone can go on for days or even weeks.
Back in the OJ Simpson case, jury selection took two months. Jurors were required
to fill out a 79 page, 294-question form before they were each individually
interviewed. The defense had a separate consultant who poured over their answers
and their body language looking for those who may be sympathetic to the defense.
Getting the ‘right’ jury can determine the verdict of the case before any evidence is
presented. And knowing everything they can about the jury can help determine how
the lawyers present their case. From the first opening comment, the lawyers are
trying to connect with the juror’s previous life experiences. They want to enter into
their world. They must connect with the jurors on their level.
“If you would win a man to your cause, first convince him
that you are his sincere friend. Therein is a drop of honey
that catches his heart, which, say what you will, is the
great high-road to his reason, and which, when once
gained, you will find but little trouble in convincing his
judgment of the justice of your cause.” - Abraham Lincoln
That’s why almost all ad copy leads with EMPATHY. If you want to influence
someone’s logic, you first have to connect on a personal level. That’s where emotions
come in. That’s why the Golden Glove method starts with the desperate problem.
Your audience has a desperate problem they’re willing to pay money to solve. You
demonstrate that you understand the problem and you have a solution for it.
If we jump back to our court case, the prosecution is going to present a story...a movie
of what happened. They’ll share it through their opening remarks, the witnesses they
call, and the evidence they share. This is their version of what happened. The defense
lawyer is going to present a totally different story. In this movie, the defendant isn’t
the guilty party. They were somewhere else and for whatever reason they are being
prosecuted for something they didn’t do. The previous life experience of the jurors
and the discussion they have amongst themselves will determine which story they
believe.
In copy, you will present a story. You could say it’s a movie brought to life for your
audience. You have to choose the correct audience. And you want to present a story
they can identify with. They’re experiencing a desperate problem. You delve into
their world and make it as real as possible. You connect with their emotions and pain.
And then you deliver them from the problem into the unique promise you offer.
Again, you paint a picture of what their new life can be like with your product or
service. Great copy is able to make both of these connections and show your product
or service as the bridge between the two points.
So far, I’ve talked about the importance of great copy, choosing the right audience,
demonstrating empathy, and telling stories. Where do bullets fit in? Unlike lawyers
in a court case, you don’t have a captive audience. Your customer is distracted and
overwhelmed. They have the TV on in the background. Their mobile is buzzing with
text messages. And Facebook is tempting them with another tantalizing tidbit about
one of their friends.
Customers don’t read sales copy initially. They scan it. They jump around. On a letter,
they may look at the last page to see what the offer is and how much it costs. On a
website, they simply scroll to the bottom and click your order link to find out the price.
That’s one of the reasons it’s so important to have your core offer, guarantee, and
often a few bullets on the order form to ‘sell’ the reader on going through your
website. That’s also one of the reasons video sales letters often out-produce written
copy, because it can stop the scanning process.
When your customers scan, you have to use everything in your arsenal to grab their
attention and pull them in. One bullet that speaks to their most desperate desire may
jump off the page and force them to start reading. They read another one. Then they
start back at the beginning to find out more about what you’re talking about. Some
of your prospects will buy simply because you grabbed their attention with one of the
bullets in the copy. I know this, because I’ve had customers ask me where they could
find specific bullets inside of an information product they purchased.
Bullets are also a great starting point for your copy. Good copy today is a fast moving
thrill ride. It’s similar to a rollercoaster that keeps someone’s excitement all the way
through. It’s not just a logical presentation, although the flow should be a logical
process from the problem to the promise to the proof into your offer and the reason
to act now. It’s also a series of opportunities to connect with your prospect’s
emotions.
My process for writing is to first map out the Golden Glove. With an information
product, I’ll create that outline before I ever create the product itself. That’s the
thousand-foot view. The next step is writing ALL the bullet benefits throughout my
copy. If I’m selling an ebook, I will go page by page looking for each tip and secret I
share. With an audio or video, I’ll listen to the presentation. I’m digging all the gold
out of the product and turning them into bullets.
Some of those bullets will be used in traditional bullet form such as:
• The insider secret to getting customers to pursue you and literally beg you to
take them on as a client...and why great positioning makes selling virtually
unnecessary.
• The Single Most Effective Source of Paid Traffic that often produces returns on
investment of 3:1, 5:1, 8:1, or even higher.
• How to create unique content that attracts hungry buyers in just 20 minutes
per month using this proven “Push Button” content system.
The strongest bullets could be pulled out and tested as a headline. Subheads will
often come out of other bullets. A few of the bullets will be expanded out into
multiple paragraphs of copy. But they started out their life as an individual benefit
rich bullet. More than 80% of your copywriting is ALREADY finished once you’ve
created all your bullets. They are the basic foundation for everything else.
Let’s transition into an information product. Maybe your online video course contains
20 videos that are 3 to 8 minutes long. That’s a feature. Nobody really cares about
that on its own. Why did you create 20 short videos? The benefit is you created these
videos for easy reference…and users can implement your system one step at a time
while they follow along with you. That’s a starting point, but we haven’t uncovered
the full benefit yet. What is the end result of implementing your system? They can
have their first website up and running in less than 60 minutes. They can also go back
through any videos they need for reference and create their next site in 15 minutes or
less.
But the physical attributes of an information product are just the beginning. The real
benefits are the tips & secrets you share throughout the course. That’s why you want
to go page-by-page through written documents and listen to any audios & videos,
pulling out all the benefits you find. What will this course do for them? On page 22
you teach how to put an end to stress eating. The benefit here would be they can
eliminate stress eating & losing weight will become almost effortless. No longer will
they be tempted by late night cravings, and they’ll be able to keep the weight off
forever.
You continue going through your course looking for each and every benefit. The
more benefits you find, the better. Let’s say you take notes on over 200 benefits.
Some of them are duplicates and there are only so many ways to promise the same
benefit, so you cut some of those. And you can cut out the weaker ones which don’t
fit into the flow of your site. In the end, you only list the most powerful benefits,
creating a fast moving thrill ride for your customers. Finding ‘more than enough
benefits’ allows you to focus on the home runs!
I screwed myself out of thousands of dollars back when I did copywriting for hire.
One time I charged a set fee of only $4,000 to write the copy for a real estate
investment course. Four thousand sounds like good money, right? But the course
included over 30 hours of audio! Just listening to the course and writing bullets for it
took me over 40 hours (sometimes you have to stop the audio and replay it to catch
what was said). Plus, I had to comb through the book, reports, and other gifts in the
package. Combine that in with organizing the bullets, interviewing the expert for his
story, coming up with the theme, and editing the rough draft. If this was my own
product, it would have been much faster because I would have known what was in
the course!
Every feature (what your product is or does) leads into a benefit (what your product
does for the customer). This is where many entrepreneurs and copywriters stop, but
you can keep digging all the way to the ‘core’ reasons why your prospects buy from
you. People buy because of how it makes them feel about themselves. For example,
let’s take weight loss since I have multiple clients in that market. Those who buy
weight loss products are doing so because it makes them feel better about
themselves. While they may be doing it for health reasons, underlying emotions are
almost always the desire to feel sexier, more attractive, and even more respected.
Let’s take a possible feature & benefit combo from that market. While going through
your ebook, you talk about how your eating plan helps them balance their blood
sugar levels naturally. That sounds like a benefit but let’s apply the “So What” test.
Does someone sit around worrying, “If only I could balance my blood sugar level
naturally?” Probably not. Instead they’re terrified about all the health problems that
come with diabetes, frustrated with how tired they are, and feeling like just the sight
of food makes them gain pounds.
Here’s another question to help you root out the emotional benefit, “What is the benefit
of that?” What is the benefit of balancing your blood sugar levels naturally? You can
avoid daily pills, injections, and all the other invasive medical procedures. What’s the
benefit of avoiding these ‘medical’ solutions? You don’t have to experience all the
side effects and diminishing returns of medications (yes, once you’re on drugs you
often have to keep increasing the dosage to receive the same effect). What’s the
benefit of avoiding these side effects? You feel in control of your life and destiny.
You’re no longer a prisoner in your own body (notice how I tried to integrate in a visual
image of a prisoner).
We’re looking for the feeling you experience. We could go back to the beginning and
take a different route from the initial question. What’s the benefit of balancing your
blood sugar naturally? You won’t be so tired all the time. What’s the benefit of not
being tired all the time? You can exercise and get more done. What’s the benefit of
getting more done? You feel more productive. You can continue this process with
all the potential benefits to find each of the possible end emotional benefits.
We could create multiple bullets based on different themes and emotions all out of
this one original concept of balancing your blood sugar naturally. Will you use every
one in the final copy? Maybe not. But just like we don’t want to go to trial with ‘just
enough evidence,’ we don’t want to market with just enough benefits. We want more
than enough because additional unused ideas could show up in emails and other
follow-up.
To help you think about emotional benefits, Dr. Glenn Livingston has a list of 37 of
them in this free PDF: http://www.payperclicksearchmarketing.com/PDF/Self-
Esteem-And-Purchase-Behavior-Cheat-Sheet.pdf
Glenn focuses on the positive emotions your product or service creates, but these
emotions can also be used in reverse to demonstrate the problem itself. For example,
what is the opposite of ‘feeling free?’ Captivity and dependence. I focus heavily on
the theme of the Internet Lifestyle which includes that feeling of freedom. At times I
also reverse this and talk about being held captive to a job that sucks the life out of
you. I tell my story of working one dead-end job after another. There has even been
a successful product in the internet marketing field called, “Day Job Killer.”
‘Feeling financially secure’ is a positive emotional end benefit. But most financial
promotions lead with the opposite…the fear of going broke. Greedy Wall Street Fat
Cats, Democrats/Republicans, or some other group is conspiring to rip you off.
They’ll also have bullets that focus on the positive side and proof that their system
works, but they capitalize on the fear to grab attention for their message.
One of the famous ads in direct response from John Caples is, “They Laughed When I
Sat Down at the Piano, But Then I Started to Play!” The introduction text to that ad is
how he is being goaded into playing with the intention of mocking him. But he gets
the last laugh, because he plays better than they expect. He’s tapping into the
emotion of ‘feeling respected,’ but he’s tapping into that fear of shame and
embarrassment in front of a group. The story revolves around getting the last laugh.
I’d prefer just to focus on positive emotions, but often negative emotions are more
powerful. That’s one of the reasons the Golden Glove starts with a Desperate
Problem. There are only two motivations in life: to gain pleasure or avoid pain. And
pain is much more effective for generating action. We want to escape those negative
feelings. Remember, change is hard. Sure, it looks more exciting over there, but it’s
not quite painful enough here to move yet. By painting a picture of both the negative
depths of despair and the positive possibilities, you can twist the knife enough to
motivate people to get off their duffs and finally take action.
Based on what I shared, let’s see if you can guess which of these headlines won in a
split test (originally shared by Dan Kennedy):
Love Secrets, How to Keep Your Husband Interested in You Even After Years of
Marriage
TELL-TALE SIGNS: How to Decode the Secret Clues That Your Husband is Thinking
About Asking for a Divorce
The second was the runaway winner. It taps into a fear of loss. And the fear of loss
usually trumps the desire for gain. People buy your offer based on what it does for
them and how it makes them feel.
• How to turn OFF your fat genes – for permanent weight loss! Spanking new
research from the Human Genome Project identifies 6 fat switches! One of
them shows you how to eat more to weigh less!
• If you want to get rid of your “spare tire” and “love handles” DON’T DO SIT-UPS!
New discovery gives you an easier way to stronger abs and a flatter tummy.
LOOK AND FEEL BETTER IN NO TIME!
• SHOCKER! Eating fat does NOT make you fat... raise your cholesterol or
triglycerides—but this will! See page 2 of your special report!
Two of these bullets even have the word “new” in them while the third starts with
“Shocker.” Let’s dissect the first bullet. “Turn off” your fat genes. It’s definitely not
your fault because it’s in your genes and you can turn off those fat genes for
permanent weight loss (keeping it off is a major weight loss theme). The “Human
Genome Project” sounds like someone credible on genes. They identified 6 fat
switches, which gives makes it specific and gets us curious about what these switches
are. One of them even shows us how to eat more to weigh less, exactly opposite of
what we’d expect.
You want to introduce concepts that are achingly incomplete if the reader doesn’t
find out more. Once they see your website, they can’t go about their day without
thinking about one of your bullets. You’ve opened up a question in their mind and
they have to find out more.
Mel Martin, who used to write for Boardroom, was a master of writing curiosity
inducing bullets for information products. In his hands, they even took on a new name
of Fascinations. Here is a little taste from one of his letters:
My bullets are often longer than this, but this Mel Martin demonstrates how it isn’t the
length that matters. These bullets are packed with curiosity and each one also targets
a benefit (or at least implies a benefit behind the secret).
Here’s a strategy I learned from John Carlton. You give a benefit in your bullet, and
then immediately expand on that benefit with an additional benefit. Or you add
credibility. Or paint a word picture for your reader. You’re loading one benefit after
another. Here are some examples from his ads…
• Your single best “one answer” move in any confrontation – if you never learn
anything else from Chris, this move will assure you survive almost any one-on-
one fight you get into…even with trained fighters! (And it’s so simple you don’t
even have to practice it very much!)
• How to use the devastating ‘pop up’ push taken from the way tigers hunt in the
wild…so effective, a 90-lb woman can use it to send a sumo wrestler tumbling!
• The one mistake even pro golfers make that kills the power in their
downstroke…and how to use a simple, easy “adjustment” that will instantly
increase your power by 200% or more! (Imagine consistently hitting 300 yard
drives, and nailing greens from 150 yards out with a nine iron!)
• Exactly where each of the six simple segments of the Triple Coil Swing begin
and end – so you’ll be able to spot-check your progress…and master the swing
faster than anything else you’ve ever attempted in sports! (And repeat your
perfected swing every time, without a shred of second guessing!)
• Amazing trick that instantly eliminates “performance anxiety” in men! (Used for
centuries by the most daring and successful lovers in the world…see page 112).
You can also see the word pictures in these bullets. It’s like having eyes in the back of
your head. It’s so effective a 90 pound woman can send a sumo wrestler tumbling.
You’re getting distance you only dreamed about before. Imagine consistently hitting
300 yard drives, and nailing greens from 150 yards out with a nine iron! The women
are giving “Come Hither” sexual signals (you get the image of her waving her finger at
you telling you to come over).
The one-two punch can also be used to drill in the concept that these techniques
work for ANYONE…no matter just how bad your situation is currently. Everyone feels
their problems are unique, and your product won’t work for someone in this bad of a
situation.
• The thrilling “18 Hour” plan developed by sex experts to re-ignite the passion
between the two of you…no matter how fatigued you’ve been, no matter how
long you’ve been in a rut! (Life-changing strategy – pages 338 – 341.)
• How to use the secret of “choking down” to master any club in your bag…no
matter how horrible you were with it before!
• Immediately increase the frequency and pleasure of your sex life with the
ingenious “Bic Cure” created by sex therapists! (Especially critical for busy
parents!) Page 165.
This 18 hour plan re-ignites the passion no matter how fatigued you’ve been or how
long you’ve been in a rut. You can master any club in your bag no matter how horrible
you were with it before. You can put your speed “over the top” even if you haven’t
got an athletic bone in your body. And this is especially critical for busy parents! The
code phrases you can use for these kinds of bullets are “no matter how,” “no matter
if,” “even if”, and “especially.”
• What to watch when you’re eight feet apart (it’s NOT his eyes – a terrible
mistake most fighters make that gets them hurt)…and what to watch inside the
two feet “crunch time” zone…to keep you a precious step ahead of even
superbly-trained fighters!
Someone would immediately guess to watch the other person’s eyes, so that
“guess” is called out and eliminated. It’s a terrible mistake most fighters will
make. The mystery and drama behind this bullet is kept intact by calling out
the obvious and letting you know how important the correct answer is.
You can also drop in few ‘give-away’ bullets to increase your credibility. You’re
giving away one of your secrets. This is like giving someone a ‘taste’ of your
information similar to how samples of new products are often given out in
grocery aisles. Here’s an example from Ben Settle:
• How to use simple cartoons to explode your sales…no matter what you sell or
who you sell to. (For example, you’d be amazed at how easily a picture of a
phone operator with her headset on can jack up your response!)
Someone who reads that bullet and catches the free tip will pay even more
attention to your other bullets looking for more free information. You’ve just
trained them to read your copy carefully. If you make your ad valuable enough,
they might even print it out to read every word.
You could also do a partial give-away like another bullet from Ben Settle:
• Two proven “cures” for writers block. (The first one is simply doing a lot of
research. The second one is much easier… and can be found at your corner
grocery store.)
This give-away isn’t very useful on its own. It’s not there to add credibility like
a full give-away bullet. Instead, it’s adding additional curiosity for the real
answer. This secret is easier than research, and can be found at your corner
grocery store. Not only are you being promised a cure for writers block, but
you’re being given a method that’s quicker and easier than research (that
doesn’t eliminate the need for research – it just gives you a quicker way to get over
writer’s block).
• The one mistake even pro golfers make that kills the power in their
downstroke…and how to use a simple, easy “adjustment” that will instantly
increase your power by 200% or more! (Imagine consistently hitting 300 yard
drives, and nailing greens from 150 yards out with a nine iron!)
If we were in a similar market such as tennis, it would be easy to model…
• The one mistake even pro tennis players make that kills the power in their
serve…and how to use a simple, easy “adjustment” that will instantly increase
your power by 200% or more! (Imagine consistently hitting 115 mph serves, and
nailing the corners during your second serve!)
Now let’s take it into a totally unrelated market such as stock market day trading…
• The one mistake even professional day traders make that kills their returns…and
how to use a simple, easy “adjustment” that will instantly increase your returns
by 65% or more! (Imagine consistently earning 8% per month on your
investments while slashing market risk).
Both of those were modeling the original bullet very closely, but more often you just
want to use other bullets as idea starters. One of classic bullets is “How to.” Here’s
an example from Gary Halbert…
• How to add 1,500 new subscribers to your email list…without spending a penny!
It’s easy to fall into a rut of starting all your bullets with “How to.” I’ve written out
hundreds of bullets for one of my products before, and over half of them started with
“How to.” Here are 21 bullet templates along with an example for each…followed by
additional bullet starter phrases you can use to add variety to your copy and website.
1. How to BENEFIT
How to attract hordes of free visitors by positioning yourself as a trusted authority in
the market (and why just giving away “free content” is NOT the way to build a buying
audience).
3. 4 Ways/Methods/Secrets/Unusual to BENEFIT
4 Ways to “Program” your customer’s subconscious to spend money with you and get
better results from anything they buy.
11. Benefit + Name Dropping (Can be used with the other formulas)
How Gerald Butler and the cast of 300 built ripped bodies in just 12 weeks using a
forgotten workout routine from 1923.
15. The single most important _____ you’ll ever need for _____.
The single most important super-food for putting on muscle quickly. And you won’t
find it in any nutrition store.
• What is the benefit of that (the emotional benefit behind this promise)?
• Can I make this promise any more specific (add additional credibility)?
• Is there a mechanism for delivering the promise (make my promise stand out
as unique)?
How do you find ‘power words’ that fit your audience and emotion? Once you know
what emotions you want to appeal to, you pull out your trusty thesaurus. I’ll write out
my initial bullets with whatever words come to mind at the time. Then I’ll go back
through each one looking for words that can be strengthened with both my physical
thesaurus open and searches on Google for synonyms.
I’ll be on the phone with a client, and we’ll try out half a dozen different words in the
same bullet at times, especially if we’re planning to use it for a headline, subhead, or
one of the first bullets in a series. We’ll read the bullet out-loud each time until we
find the word that gives the emotional impact we’re hunting for. Instead of a single
word, it could be a metaphor we’re after. For example, you could describe something
slow as being “as slow as your first dial-up modem.”
There might even be code words or jargon you want to integrate into your message.
If you were speaking to a primarily Christian audience, you might integrate in words
like blessed, born-again, salvation, grace, repentance, faith, etc. In golf you might talk
about the back nine, bogies, birdies, slices, the rough, and bunkers. You recognize
these words because you’re so deeply immersed in the market you’re involved in.
Maybe you are your own customer or you’re passionate about the customers.
• What an “exclusionary letter” is and how I created one that netted me $30 per
visitor to my web site and over $100,000 over one weekend! (…and how you can
use the same principle to put your prospects in heat to buy your product or
service!)
I Actually Had to Take the Copy OFF of the web site Because I Couldn’t Take
Any More Customers!
Authority Bullets
Not every bullet on your page has to be a feature/benefit combination. You could
also use a series of bullets to build credibility for your message. Here is a short
sequence of bullets I use on one of my websites to demonstrate why you must
position yourself as an authority in overwhelmed markets…
Every single minute:
• Unique open rates were 17.5 percent in Q1 2015, slightly ahead of 17.3 percent
in 2014.
Terry Dean went from delivering pizzas for $8 an hour to creating a full-time income
online in 1996. He has been called one of the grandfathers of Internet marketing and
was one of the first online marketers to demonstrate the power of email, generating
$96,250 from one email to his list in front of a live audience.
In the past 20+ years, he has personally helped thousands of clients set-up profitable
Internet Lifestyles in hundreds of different markets through both his private and group
coaching programs. He helps small business entrepreneurs attract high quality
clients, spot conversion cracks on their websites, and multiply their profits even from
small email lists.
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