4 - Quoting, Paraphrazing, Summarizing
4 - Quoting, Paraphrazing, Summarizing
What is plagiarism?
Plagiarism is the act of taking another person's writing, conversation, song,
or even idea and passing it off as your own. This includes information from web
pages, books, songs, television shows, email messages, interviews, articles,
artworks or any other medium.
Students have been kicked out of college for being found guilty of
plagiarism. Some schools use turnitin.com and others, which automatically runs
your essay against every other essay on the web.
Example of plagiarizing
Plagiarized Version:
In examining technology, we have to remember that computers are not
the first technology people have had to deal with. The first technology was the
primitive modes of communication used by prehistoric people before the
development of spoken language. What line was plagiarized?
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Quoting:
Quoting is the act of directly using someone else's exact words in your
writing, enclosed in quotation marks, to highlight their significance or authority.
When quoting, it’s important to accurately reproduce the original wording and
provide proper citations to credit the original author. Quotes are often used to
emphasize a striking idea, provide evidence, or lend credibility to your argument
by showing that it is supported by an authoritative source.
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Example of Quotation:
Common phrases and expressions that are often used when introducing
quotations in writing. These phrases help seamlessly integrate quotes into your
work:
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In a direct quote, the words are exactly the same as they appear in the
original source and the quoted part is put in quotation marks.
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b) Indirect quoting
e.g. Yang and Cheung (2003) argue that teaching grammar to ESL/EFL
students may sometimes involve mechanical drills and that even drills should
require students to think.
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Exercise 1: Look at the sentences below carefully and choose the most appropriate
answer.
1. Chan (2013) urges the authority to take immediate action to stop the spread of
the virus.
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2. Brown (2000) suggests that schools should adopt the new assessment system.
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3. Johnson (2003) argues for the use of green materials in the construction of
buildings.
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Paraphrase:
A paraphrase is a restatement of someone else's ideas or information in
your own words while preserving the original meaning. It is typically used to
clarify or simplify the original text, integrate it seamlessly into your writing, or avoid
overusing direct quotations. Paraphrasing requires rephrasing both the structure
and wording of the source material, but it still requires proper attribution to the
original author to avoid plagiarism.
In other word, paraphrasing means putting information from a source into
your own words. A paraphrase is generally the same length or slightly shorter
than the original source. For this example, let’s try paraphrasing the following
section.
Characteristics of a Good Paraphrase:
• Maintains the Original Meaning: It conveys the same idea as the
original text without changing the intent or significance.
• Uses Different Words and Structure: The phrasing and sentence
structure should be noticeably distinct from the original.
• Is Attributed to the Source: Even though the words are your own, you
must credit the original author.
Paraphrasing involves rewriting someone else's ideas in your own words
while maintaining the original meaning.
Read and Understand the Original Text
• Read the text carefully to grasp its full meaning.
• Identify the key points or main ideas you need to paraphrase.
Take Notes Without Looking at the Original
• Close the source and write the main points in your own words from
memory.
• This helps ensure you don’t accidentally copy the original phrasing.
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Example of Paraphrase:
Original Text:
"The increase in global temperatures over the past century has been primarily
driven by human activities, such as the burning of fossil fuels, deforestation,
and industrial processes, which have significantly elevated greenhouse gas
concentrations in the atmosphere." (Smith & Taylor, 2020)
Paraphrased Version:
Smith and Taylor (2020) argue that human actions, including the use of fossil
fuels, deforestation, and industrial activities, are the main contributors to rising
greenhouse gas levels, which have caused a steady rise in global temperatures
over the last 100 years.
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Original Text:
"Collaborative learning strategies enhance critical thinking skills and improve
academic outcomes because students engage in discussions, solve problems
together, and learn from diverse perspectives." (Johnson et al., 2019)
Paraphrased Version:
According to Johnson et al. (2019), methods that promote group collaboration
are effective in boosting academic performance and critical thinking by
encouraging students to share ideas, work on problem-solving collectively,
and benefit from varied viewpoints.
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Original Text:
"The development of new dialects is often influenced by geographical
isolation, social interactions, and exposure to different cultural norms." (Garcia,
2020)
Paraphrased Version:
Garcia (2020) explains that geographical separation, social dynamics, and
cultural influences contribute significantly to the creation of new dialects.
There are several useful phrases and strategies that can help when
paraphrasing, especially in academic writing. These phrases can assist in
restating ideas clearly while maintaining the original meaning and avoiding
plagiarism.
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Exercise 2: Choose the best answer for each blank to paraphrase the original
sentences provided.
1. South America has great mineral wealth. It has about 20% of the world’s iron
ore. South America also has large quantities of oil and natural gas.
South America has great mineral (a.)___________ . It has about (b.)___________
of the world’s iron ore. South America also has large (c.) ___________ of oil and
natural gas.
2. Egypt reached the pinnacle of its power in the New Kingdom, after which it
entered a period of slow decline. A number of foreign powers, including the
Nubians, the Assyrians and the Persians, attacked or occupied Egypt. The
Greek Kingdom ruled Egypt until 30 BC when it fell to the Roman Empire.
After reaching its (a.)_____________ in power in the New Kingdom, Egypt
began to decline. During the course of its history, Egypt (b.)________________ by
a number of foreign powers, including the Nubians, the Assyrians, as well as the
Persians, and it was (c.)________________ the Greek Kingdom until 30 BC, when
it was conquered by the Roman Empire.
3. One of the educational fields where visuals are often used is language
education. The difficulties of working with abstract concepts in language can
be reduced or eliminated by the use of visuals. Visuals can help provide a
meaningful context, present the network of concepts, summarise the
relationships between concepts, motivate students and facilitate teaching.
Images are also effective means to illustrate concepts with examples.
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Summarizing:
Summarizing is the process of condensing a larger text or passage into a
shorter version while retaining the main points and key ideas. The goal of
summarizing is to give a clear and concise overview of the original content
without including all the details, examples, or redundant information. A summary
should focus on the essence of the material and be expressed in your own
words.
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How to Summarize:
• Read and Understand the Text: Before summarizing, you must fully
understand the material.
• Identify Main Ideas: Identify the primary concepts, arguments, or
events in the text. Highlight key points or themes.
• Use Your Own Words: Rewrite the main ideas in your own words,
keeping the focus on clarity and brevity.
• Keep it Short and Focused: A summary should be significantly shorter
than the original text while still conveying the main ideas.
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Example of Summarizing:
Original Text:
"The Amazon rainforest is one of the most vital ecosystems on Earth. It is
home to millions of species, many of which have not yet been discovered. The
rainforest is also crucial for regulating the Earth's climate and producing
oxygen. However, the Amazon faces severe threats from deforestation,
logging, and agriculture, which contribute to the loss of biodiversity and
exacerbate climate change."
Summary:
The Amazon rainforest is a critical ecosystem that regulates the climate,
produces oxygen, and supports diverse species. However, it is under threat
due to deforestation, logging, and agriculture, leading to biodiversity loss and
contributing to climate change.
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Original Text:
"Active learning is an instructional approach that engages students in the
learning process by encouraging them to take an active role in their own
learning, rather than passively receiving information. Techniques like group
discussions, problem-solving, and hands-on activities allow students to apply
what they have learned, leading to better retention of knowledge and
improved critical thinking skills. Numerous studies have shown that active
learning increases student engagement and academic performance across
various subjects, especially when integrated with technology." (Johnson & Lee,
2020)
Summary:
Johnson and Lee (2020) highlight that active learning involves students
actively engaging with content through activities like group discussions and
problem-solving, which enhances knowledge retention and critical thinking.
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There are several useful phrases that can be employed when summarizing
text. Below are some commonly used phrases in summarizing:
Phrases for Restating Ideas
• This means that …
• This suggests that …
• This implies that …
• The main point is …
• The key idea is …
• This indicates that …
• The central idea is …
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• The focus is on …
• The core argument is …
• The takeaway is …
Phrases for Showing Relationships
• As a result, …
• Therefore, …
• Consequently, …
• Thus, …
• In this way, …
• As mentioned above, …
• As previously stated, …
• In light of this, …
Phrases for Generalizing
• It can be concluded that …
• It is clear that …
• It is evident that …
• It can be inferred that …
• One can observe that …
• This suggests …
• This shows that …
Phrases for Condensing Information
• This covers …
• This encapsulates …
• This summarizes …
• This condenses …
• This outlines …
• This represents …
Phrases for Connecting Ideas
• In other words, …
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• That is to say, …
• To put it another way, …
• Simply put, …
• To clarify, …
• In simpler terms, …
Exercise 3: Summarise the following sentences using any appropriate strategies.
1. Tropical cyclones in the Philippines can occur any time of the year, with the
months of June to September being the most active. Approximately 20 tropical
cyclones enter the Philippine Area of Responsibility yearly, an area which
incorporates parts of the Pacific Ocean and the Philippine Archipelago (with the
exception of Tawi-Tawi province).
2. The import of chicken, goose and duck meat has to be suspended after
Thailand reported an outbreak of highly pathogenic H5 bird flu earlier this week.
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