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Pat D2

Wednesday, December 4, 2024 6:16 PM

Pat, while your submission didn’t meet the exact requirements of the
assignment, what you provided demonstrates a solid understanding of
several important concepts of effective email communication. Here’s
feedback on your work.

You highlighted the importance of communicating the purpose of an email


clearly, and you correctly identified that staff need to know the purpose of
the training sessions. This reflects a good grasp of the role of purpose in
professional communication.

You understand how to make information accessible to readers! You


noted the importance of consistent word choice to avoid confusion. This is
a great observation and reflects your awareness of precision in language.
Love this. Your recommendation to consider tone demonstrates an
understanding of audience-focused communication. The suggestion to
use friendly phrasing to foster engagement is insightful and relevant!

While you discussed tone and structure well, you didn’t address the
importance of clarity in scheduling (dates, times) or how the message
could have been more motivational for employees.

Your submission reflects a thoughtful understanding of how to write


effective emails. You grasp key concepts like purpose, clarity, tone, and
structure, which are foundational to professional communication!

I appreciate that misunderstandings happen, so I'm not penalizing you for


this work, especially given how it indicates you have a strong
understanding of much of what we have discussed in class!

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