Lecture 16

We’ve covered 3 C’s in the previous Lecture. In this Lecture, we will proceed with the rest.

16.1. Concreteness
Concreteness literally means something real, particular or solid. This C, too, is an important part of 7 C’s
of communication. In the context of communication, concreteness requires us to be specific in giving
information instead of being generic or general with reader or audience. Thus, concreteness is an aspect
of communication that means being specific, definite, and vivid rather than vague and general.
Communication is concrete if it uses specific facts and figures.

An impact (strong effect) must be created by the sender so that the receiver feels comfortable to
provide a positive response. This C is connected with the C’s of clarity, conciseness and consideration.
This is because concreteness depends on facts and figures, which should come up with interpretation.

Since concreteness refers to the quality of being correct, it must be kept in mind that communication
must be clear by providing factual information with grammatical precision, so that your audience don’t
ask you for any other information. We should avoid vague words, particularly with similar meanings. For
example, “several” and “multiple” give us only part of information and are not to the point.
Furthermore, both may be synonymous but there are situations in which the meanings differ.

Another aspect to consider regarding concreteness is the avoidance of avoid non-reliable sources.
Always go for valid, reliable, authentic and credible sources for giving any type of information. We
should use the right level of language keeping in mind the standards of languages.

To achieve concreteness, we may follow these four rules:

1) Use specific facts and figures:

Only the important information should be provided to the receiver. If extra information is included, then
the receiver would lose the concentration and important information may be overlooked or ignored by
the receiver. Relevant and important facts or information must be included so that the receiver gets the
whole idea and no query remains unanswered. Answer of all the questions like “when, where, why,
who, whom, what” should be included.

2) Put action in your verbs:

Sometimes, if verbs are not used in Active form, they take the shape of Noun. e.g., “She compiles
the data.” Here, the verb “compiles” is in Active form but if we rewrite this sentence, then the
verb transforms into a noun as follows: “Data compilation is done by her.” Here, “compilation” is a
noun and the information becomes a bit complex.

Consider the following examples to hit this point home:

Action hiding in a “quiet” noun Action in the verb

 The function of this office is the collection of This office collect payments and compiles
payments and the compilation of statements. statements.
Professor H. will give consideration to the report. Professor H. will consider the report.
The proposal has a requirement for Concept X The proposal requires Concept X
Students held a meeting in the office Students met in the office.

3) Choose vivid (brilliant), image-building words:

Use attractive words or terms, which can stay in the memory of the receiver. If some new idea or
mode of expression is used, then automatically the receiver would focus on it and positive
response would be generated.

Flawed Example Better Example

“Hilltop Resort is the best resort. Do come “Hilltop Resort is the jewel of the western hills.
to us on your next holiday” Take a break from your work. Escape from life’s
chaos and stress. Relax and rejuvenate yourself at
Hilltop. Go back fresh and energized!”
Source: www.invensislearning.com/blog/7-rules-of-effective-communication-with-examples/

This example on the left is flawed because it is a vague ad message. It is made to sound like just
another resort advertisement among a hundred others. The audience will never remember this ad
message. There are no concrete details to take away from this message.

4) Be accurate

Check the accuracy (exactness) of figures, facts and words. This requires the information you
provide to be correct and exact. As an example, consider the case that a single 0 can create
problems: there is great difference between Rs. 100 and Rs. 1,000.

Secondly, grammar and punctuation are another important aspect. Place the commas, questions
mark and other punctuation on their proper place.

Facts may change with time, so before writing about anything, verify that your fact still holds. For
example, C++ used to be the most used programming language but now other programming
languages have taken the place. So, this fact that “C++ is the most used programming language” is
not true now, even if this was valid for a period after its release.

Wrong placement of words can also cause problems. There are many words which are used at the
place of each other because they have similar sounds or they have somehow similar meanings.
But in Report writing, be careful while using the words; confirm the exact meaning of the word.
Consider this example, “Most of the time, travelers worry about their luggage.” Now delete the
comma after the fourth word to totally change the meaning of this sentence: “Most of the time
travelers worry about their luggage”.
16.2. Consideration
Consideration generally means to show importance or respect or to show some care. For the purposes
of communication, importance must be shown to the receiver and, in this regard, a popular rule of
thumb is the “you-attitude”. In this approach, instead of using “I”, “you” is used to make the receiver
feel important. This, however, should not be blindly adopted. In some cases, “I-attitude” may be
preferred over the “You-attitude” as it can be harsh in such situations. For example, the sentence “You
have not paid the bill this month” not only sounds impolite but may be a downright accusation. The
consideration C requires that this sentence be paraphrased in line with the “I-attitude” as follows: “I am
waiting for the bill this month”.

In general, it is better to use “I” when:

➢ You disagree with someone.

➢ You refer to the mistake of the receiver.
➢ You are irritated and want to hide that irritation or frustration.

With the help of the Consideration C, you may be able to attract the receiver towards your new project
or business, show some benefits to the receiver so that the receiver understands his/her place or
importance in that project or business and decides to provide you positive response.

To show consideration, give positive and friendly response to the receiver. In this regard, use polite
language so that even a harsh message does not disappoint or hurt the receiver.

What can be done What should be avoided

Show possibilities Avoid discouragements
Introduce other options Don’t end up with the only option
The following examples illustrate these points:

Flawed Example Better Example

Dear Mr. Sadan Dear Mr. Sadan
I'm sorry that we are presently out of stock of black Thank you for ordering a black hand bag.
hand bags and will be unable to fill your order now. The color you chose proved to be very popular, and
An order has been placed with the manufacturer in we quickly sold all we had in stock. However,
the color you want. We will receive shipment after we've placed a rush order for more and are
ten days. promised delivery within ten days. Yours will be
I trust this delay will not inconvenience you. shipped the same day our new supply arrives. I
Sincerely, know you'll be delighted with the unique carry-on
Mudassir bag Mr. Hassan. It's not only very handsome, but
incredibly inexpensive.
Sincerely,
Mudassir
You will be (or customers will be) able to do We are happy to announce that transaction can be
transactions after office hours, at the Teller counter made even after 3.00 PM till 5.00 PM at the teller-
till 5.00 PM. counter.
It is not possible for us to extend locker facility to Extending locker facility will be attended to as soon
you since you do not have a fixed/term deposit in as we receive an investment in fixed/term deposit
our bank. from you.
16.3. Courtesy
True courtesy involves being aware not only of the perspective of others, but also their feelings.
Courtesy stems from a sincere you-attitude. It’s not merely politeness with mechanical instructions of
“please” and “thank you” although applying socially accepted manners is a form of courtesy. Rather, it is
politeness that grows out of respect and concern for others.

In addition to following the guidelines discussed under “consideration”, courteous communicators

generate a special tone in their writing and speaking.

The following are suggestions for generating a courteous tone.

● Be sincerely tactful, thoughtful and appreciative.

● Use expressions that show respect.
● Choose nondiscriminatory expressions.

Be sincerely tactful, thoughtful and appreciative

Though few people are intentionally abrupt or blunt, these negative traits are a common cause of
discourtesy. Sometimes, they stem from a mistaken idea of conciseness, sometimes from negative
attitudes, sometimes from not knowing the culture of a country or even groups of people.

Inconsiderate, Blunt Considerate

Stupid letter; I can’t understand any of it. It’s my understanding that…
Clearly, you didn’t read my latest fax. Sometimes, my wording may not be precise.
I rewrote the letter three times. Let me try again
Point I’m sorry the point wasn’t clear; here is another
version.

Offensive Considerate
Hey man, what’s this I hear about the good news? Warm congratulations on your wedding!
You sure pulled a fast one this past weekend – and Well, you certainly took us by surprise. In fact, just
they didn’t tell any of us about. Give my regards to a few of us even suspected you were taking off to
the little lady, and wish her the best; she’ll need it. get married. But even though we didn’t hear about
it until later, we my wife and I wish you the best.
Give our regards to your new partner.
Hi Ali, Hi Ali,
I really do not appreciate how your IT team ignores I understand that the IT team is swamped with
the requests of my team, alone. My team is an work and gets requests from every department in
important function in this organization, too, and we the organization. My team, however, is working on
have our own IT requirement. Can you ensure that a high-priority project and I would greatly
your team responds promptly to my team’s appreciate if you could ask your team members to
requests hereon? respond to my team’s queries promptly and help
Regards us complete this project on time. Please do let me
Muzammil know if you need anything from me.
Regards
Muzammil
Note: Some examples are taken from Business Communication 7th Edition Herta A. Murphy, Jane P.
Thomas and Herbert W. Hildebrandt