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AP English Language and Composition

What is syntax?

SYNTAX

The term syntax refers not only to the structure of sentences, their types, their uses, their
connection, and the variations authors choose, but also to smaller structures within
sentences. Phrases (any group of words) and clauses (groups of words that contain a
subject and a verb) are also syntactic elements that require a reader’s attention.

Syntax affects the pace of a piece.

 Short, clipped phrases, sentences and clauses tend to create a feeling of quickness,
decisiveness, and speed to a piece. It is important to be aware of the content of a piece and
look for connections to syntax. Pay attention to how pacing relates to the action and purpose
of a particular piece.
 Long, convoluted sentences, especially with subordinate clauses at the beginning tend to slow
the pace of a piece. Often they are connected to a contemplative section, a heavy or serious
subject and the writer wants to emphasize it. Sometimes, however, they are placed in a piece
for the purpose of demonstrating the ramblings of a character, the ludicrousness of an idea, or
the ridiculousness of a situation. Watch for occasional satire or irony in these long sentences.
Key Questions:
 How does syntax contribute to and enhance the meaning and effect of language?
 How does syntax contribute to tone?
1. “Syntax” refers to the ways words and phrases are arranged to form sentences. The
reader must identify an author’s syntax and discuss the relationship it has to the
content of the passage. Authors may use:
a. specific patterns of phrases and sentences
b. divisions within a piece with different syntax for each
c. parallel structure
d. different sentence types
e. specific kinds of punctuation
f. other syntax techniques
2. To begin studying syntax, follow the following steps:
a. Number the sentences in the passage. This will help analyze each sentence
and discuss it efficiently.
b. Make observations about the content and syntax of each sentence or group of
sentences. Look for elements listed above or others observed.
i. Does the sentence length fit the subject matter?
ii. Why is the sentence length effective?
iii. What variety of sentence lengths is present?
iv. Sentence beginnings – Variety or Pattern?
v. Arrangement of ideas in sentences
vi. Arrangement of ideas in paragraph – Pattern?
c. Write down what is observed. These observations will be the paper’s examples.
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Sentence Structure
 Examine sentence beginnings. Is there a good variety or does a pattern emerge?
 Examine the arrangement of ideas in a sentence. Are they set out in a special way for a purpose?
 Examine sentence patterns.

Describe the sentence structure by considering the following:

1. Examine the sentence length. Are the sentences telegraphic (shorter than 5 words in length), short (approximately 5 words in
length), medium (approximately 18 words in length), or long and involved (30 or more words in length)? Does the sentence
length fit the subject matter? What variety of lengths is present? Why is the sentence length effective?

Sentence lengths
telegraphic shorter than 5 words in length
short approximately 5 words in length
medium approximately 18 words in length
long long and involved – 30 words or more length

2. Examine sentence beginnings. Is there a good variety or does a pattern emerge?

3. Examine the arrangement of ideas in a sentence. Are they set out in a special way for a purpose?
4. Examine the arrangement of ideas in a paragraph. Is there evidence of any pattern or structure?
 the beginning and ending of the passage
 a particular sequence that is important
 a noticeable chronology
 prominent literary techniques
 a focus or emphasis on any one part that makes it stand out
5. Examine the sentence patterns. Some elements to consider are listed below:

Types of
sentences
declarative The king is sick. makes a statement assertive
imperative Cure the king! gives a command authoritative
interrogative Is the king sick? asks a question questioning
exclamatory The king is dead; long live the king! makes an exclamation emotional
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Sentence Structures
simple sentence contains one subject and one verb
has only one main, complete thought
The singer bowed to her adoring audience.
compound sentence contains two independent clauses joined by a coordinate
conjunction (and, but, or) or by a semicolon
has two or more main, complete thoughts. Two or more simple
sentences are joined, usually with or, but, or and.
The singer bowed to the audience, but she sang no encores.
complex sentence has one simple sentence and one or more clauses. These clauses are
connected to the simple sentence with words like because, while,
when, if, as, although, since, unless, after, so, which, who, and that.
contains an independent clause and one or more subordinate
clauses
After she bowed to the audience, the singer sang an encore.

compound-complex sentence a combination of the above

contains two or more principal clauses and one or more
subordinate clauses
The singer bowed while the audience applauded, but she sang
no encores.

Loose sentence makes complete sense if brought to a close before the actual ending
We reached Edmonton/that morning/after a turbulent flight/and
some exciting experiences.
Periodic sentence makes sense only when the end of the sentence is reached
That morning, after a turbulent flight and some exciting
experiences, we reached Edmonton.
Balanced sentence the phrases and clauses balance each other by virtue of their likeness of structure,
meaning, or length
He maketh me to lie down in green pastures; he leadeth me beside the still waters
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The Cumulative or Loose Sentence

A cumulative or loose sentence is a type of parallel sentence which builds through parallel constructions (dependent phrases or clauses)
after a main clause. Remember: in the cumulative sentence, the main clause (with the subject and verb) comes first.

Formula: Main clause + Parallel Dependent phrases or clauses

A loose or cumulative sentence is one in which the main idea (independent clause) comes first, followed by dependent clauses and
phrases; therefore, a loose sentence makes complete sense if brought to a close before the actual ending: e.g., “We reached Edmonton
that morning after a turbulent flight and some exciting experiences, tired but still exhilarated, full of stories to tell our friends and
neighbors.” The sentence could end before the modifying phrase without losing its coherence. Loose sentences are the most natural for
English speakers, who almost always talk in loose sentences: even the most sophisticated English writers tend to use loose sentences
much more often than periodic sentences.

The brilliant assembly filed past us, the marshals with their batons and ceremonial red hats, the professors draped in their
doctoral hoods, the graduates in somber black that contrasted with their jubilant mood.

Nothing could deflect that wall of water, sweeping away trees and boulders, engulfing streets and villages, churning and
roaring like a creature in pain.

Then I saw that the child had died, never more to enjoy getting into trouble with his friends, never again to tell innocent lies
to his parents, never to look with hopeful shyness at a girl he desires.

Cumulative sentences add parallel elements at the end. These sentences are especially effective for description, even if they use only a single
detail at the end.

The student sat quietly, trembling at the thought of writing an essay. [using a single detail]

The hounds continued to bray—uncontrollably, maddeningly, horribly. [using multiple details]

Famous Cumulative Sentence

George was coming down in the telemark position, kneeling, one leg forward and bent, the other trailing, his sticks hanging like
some insect’s thin legs, kicking up puffs of snow, and finally the whole kneeling, trailing figure coming around in a beautiful right
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curve, crouching, the legs shot forward and back, the body leaning out against the swing, the sticks accenting the curve like points of
light all in a cloud of snow.

[An example of a complex cumulative sentence from Hemingway’s In Our Time --quoted in Miles, Bertonasco and Karns, Prose
Style: A contemporary Guide (1991)

The Periodic Sentence

A periodic sentence is a type of parallel sentence which builds through three or more parallel constructions (dependent phrases or clauses) to
a main clause.
Remember: in the periodic sentence, the main clause (with the subject and verb) comes last.

Formula= Parallel Dependent Clauses and Phrases + Main Clause

A periodic sentence (also called a period) is a sentence that is not grammatically complete until its end. Periodicity is accomplished by
the use of parallel phrases or clauses at the opening or by the use of dependent clauses preceding the independent clause; that is, the
kernel of thought contained in the subject/verb group appears at the end of a succession of modifiers: e.g., “That morning, after a
turbulent flight and some exciting experiences, we finally reached Edmonton.” The periodic sentence has become much rarer in
formal English writing over the past hundred years, and it has never been common in informal spoken English (outside of bad political
speeches). My own biased opinion is that this is a result of our fast-food approach to contemporary life and all aspects of culture,
including both non-fiction and literature. In fact, I think this is regrettable, because periodicity is a powerful rhetorical tool. An
occasional periodic sentence is not only dramatic but persuasive: even if the readers do not agree with your conclusion, they will read
your evidence first with open minds. If you use a loose sentence with hostile readers, the readers will probably close their minds
before considering any of your evidence. Therefore, when it is used to arouse interest and curiosity, and to hold an idea in suspense
before its final revelation, a periodic sentence is most effective.

But if life hardly seems worth living, if liberty is used for subhuman purposes, if the pursuers of happiness know nothing about the nature of
their quarry or the elementary techniques of hunting. these constitutional rights will not be very meaningful. (E. Warren)

As long as politicians talk about withdrawal while they attack, as long as the government invades privacy while it discusses human rights, as
long as we act in fear while speak of courage, there can be no security, there can be no peace. If students are absorbed in their own limited
worlds, if they are disdainful of the work of their teachers, if they are scornful of the lessons of the past, then the great cultural heritage
which must be transmitted from generation to generation will be lost.
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The Balanced Sentence

A balanced sentence is a type of parallel sentence in which two parallel elements are set off against each other like equal weights on a scale.
In reading the sentence aloud, one tends to pause between the balanced parts, each seeming equal. When writing a balanced sentence, be
certain that both parts of the sentence have the clear parallels of form, that they appear parallel grammatically.

In a balanced sentence, the phrases or clauses balance each other by virtue of their
likeness of structure, meaning, or length: e.g., “He maketh me lie down in green
pastures; he leadeth me beside still waters.”

George Bernard Shaw said of writers: The ambition of the novice is to acquire the Literary Language; the struggle of the adept is to get rid
of it. [Each part of the sentence follows the same pattern: subject, verb, infinitive phrase.]

Content of a Balanced Sentence

Balanced sentences are particularly effective if you have an idea that has a contrast or antithesis. Balanced sentences can emphasize the
contrast so that the rhetorical pattern reflects and supports the logical pattern.

No man has ever seen anything that Burne-Jones cannot paint, but many men have painted what Burne-Jones cannot see.
(Shaw)
And so my fellow Americans—ask not what your country can do for you, ask what you can do for your country.
(Kennedy)

If a free society cannot help the many who are poor, it cannot save the few who are rich.
(Kennedy)

It is not that today’s artists cannot paint, it is that today’s critics cannot see.
(Rothko)
Some of the above examples illustrate not only balanced sentences but also a device called “antimetabole,” in which the order of words is
reversed in one of the parallel structures to produce a clever effect. The following are examples of antimetabole:
When the going gets tough, the tough get going.
You can take the gorilla out of the jungle, but you can't take the jungle out of the gorilla.

The Balanced Paragraph

One can also develop an entire paragraph by balance. This is particularly useful if you are developing a series of contrasts.
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I felt myself in rebellion against the Greek concept of justice. That concept excused Laius of attacking Oedipus, but condemned Oedipus for
defending himself. It tolerated a king’s deliberate attempt to kill his baby son by piercing the infant’s feet and abandoning it on a mountain,
but later branded the son’s unintentional killing of his father as murder. It held Oedipus responsible for his ignorance, but excused those
who contributed to that ignorance. (Krutch)

Natural order of a involves constructing a sentence so the subject comes before the
sentence predicate
Oranges grow in California.
Inverted order of a involves constructing a sentence so the predicate comes before the
sentence (sentence subject (this is a device in which normal sentence patterns are
inversion) reversed to create an emphatic or rhythmic effect)
In California grow oranges.
Split order of a sentence divides the predicate into two parts with the subject coming in the
middle
In California oranges grow.

Juxtaposition a poetic and rhetorical device in which normally unassociated ideas, words,
or phrases are placed next to one another, creating an effect of surprise and
wit
The apparition of these faces in the crowd; /Petals on a wet, black bough.
Parallel structure refers to a grammatical or structural similarity between sentences or parts
(parallelism) of a sentence; it involves an arrangement of words, phrases, sentences, and
paragraphs so that elements of equal importance are equally developed and
similarly phrased
He was walking, running and jumping for joy.
Repetition a device in which words, sounds, and ideas are used more than once to
enhance rhythm and create emphasis
“…government of the people, by the people, for the people, shall not perish
from the earth”
Rhetorical a question that expects no answer; it is used to draw attention to a point and
question is generally stronger than a direct statement
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If Mr. Ferchoff is always fair, as you have said, why did he refuse to listen
to Mrs. Baldwin’s arguments?
Rhetorical a sentence fragment used deliberately for a persuasive purpose or to create
fragment a desired effect
Something to consider.
Anaphora the repetition of the same word or group of words at the beginning of
successive clauses
“We shall fight on the beaches, we shall fight on the landing-grounds, we
shall fight in the fields and in the streets, we shall fight in the hills.”
Asyndeton a deliberate omission of conjunctions in a series of related clauses
“I came, I saw, I conquered.”
Chiasmus/ a sentence strategy in which the arrangement of ideas in the second clause
Antimetabole is a reversal of the first
“Ask not what your country can do for you; ask what you can do for your
country”
Polysyndeton the deliberate use of many conjunctions for special emphasis to highlight
quantity or mass of detail or to create a flowing, continuous sentence
pattern
The meal was huge – my mother fixed okra and green beans and ham and
apple pie and green pickled tomatoes and ambrosia salad and all manner of
fine country food – but no matter how I tried, I could not consume it to her
satisfaction.

Zeugma the use of the verb that has two different meanings with objects that
complement both meanings
He stole both her car and her heart that fateful night.

Punctuation
Ellipses a trailing off; equally etc.; going off into a dreamlike state
Dash interruption of a thought; an interjection of a thought into another
Semicolon parallel ideas; equal ideas; a piling up of detail
Colon a list; a definition or explanation; a result
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Italics for emphasis

Capitalization for emphasis
Exclamation Point for emphasis; for emotion

This is an assignment in two parts: First, analyze the second Bradbury paragraph. Then use the mad libs paragraph to write
an imitation.
Assignment: Write a syntactic analysis of a paragraph, using Ray Bradbury's paragraph and the analysis of it as an example/model.
Also, write an imitation paragraph and post it.

Goal: To improve your ability to identify syntactical techniques.

To use your knowledge of those techniques to analyze the tone and meaning of a passage.

Process:
1. Use the first Bradbury paragraph and the analysis paragraph as a model.
2. Then write your own analysis of the second paragraph about Mr. Ramirez's solitary evenings. Discuss how the style and syntax
help communicate tone.
3. Next, write an original imitation paragraph (mad libs). Also use a tone word to describe the tone you were attempting.

First paragraph and analysis as model:

Bradbury paragraph:
She remembered a visit she had once made to some Mexican border towns--the hot days, the endless crickets leaping and falling or
lying dead and brittle like small cigars in the shop windows, and the canals taking river water out to the farms, the dirt roads, the
scorched seascape. She remembered the silent towns, the warm beer, the hot, thick food each day. She remembered the slow, dragging
horses and the parched jackrabbits on the road. She remembered the iron mountains and the dusty valleys and the ocean beaches that
spread hundreds of miles with no sound but the waves--no cars, no buildings, no nothing.

Analysis model:
The unique syntactical techniques used here by Ray Bradbury create a drowsy, nostalgic, hypnotic tone. The many types of repetition,
including anaphora, impress the reader with the similarity of each day in the character’s past, the way each day seems to resemble the
last. The wavelike triadic patterns (sets of three) of the last few phrases are resonant with the sound of the sea and bring to mind a life
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in which every day has the same pattern as the waves—slightly varied, but monotonous in its regularity. The uses of polysyndeton
also reinforces the feeling of fullness and lethargy created by the images of “hot thick food,” “warm beer,” the “parched jackrabbits,”
and the “slow dragging horses.”

Exercise #1 - Your paragraph to analyze:

Soon after Mr. Ramirez had arrived, he bought a radio for his little room; evenings, he turned it up very loud and enjoyed it. And he
had bought a wrist-watch and enjoyed that, too. And on many nights he had walked silent streets and seen the bright clothes in the
windows and bought some of them, and he had seen the jewels and bought some of them for his few lady friends. And he had gone to
picture shows five nights a week for a while. Then, also, he had ridden the streetcars--all night some nights--smelling the electricity,
his dark eyes moving over the advertisements, feeling the wheels rumble under him, watching the little sleeping houses and big hotels
slip by. Besides that, he had gone to large restaurants, where he had eaten many-course dinners, and to the opera and the theatre. And
he had bought a car, which later, when he forgot to pay for it, the dealer had driven off angrily from in front of the rooming house.

Questions to ask yourself before you write your paragraph:

1. What sort of syntactical techniques does Bradbury use in the second paragraph?
2. What sort of tone is implied because of those techniques?
3. What does it tell you about the story/character/setting?

Now write your analysis paragraph.

Exercise #2 Imitation (mad libs):

She remembered the (adj) (plural noun), the (adj) (noun), the (adj) (adj) (noun) each day. She remembered the (adj) (verb+ing)
(plural noun) and the (adj) (plural noun) on the road. She remembered the (adj) (plural noun) and the (adj) (plural noun) and the
(adj) (plural noun) that (verb past tense) hundreds of miles with no (noun)-no (plural noun), no (plural noun), no (noun)

Example (mad libs):

Setting: Arizona camp site.
Tone: Solitary, wistful
She remembered the (endless) (mountain peaks), the (soft) (burbling) (creek), the (warm) (Arizona) (breeze) each day. She
remembered the (black) (seething) (concrete) and the (dried, cracked) (weeds) along the road. She remembered the (chirping)
(crickets) and the (chilled) (nights) and the (lonely) (silence) that (spanned) hundreds of miles with no (interruption)--no (cars), no
(trucks), no (humans).
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