Sample Paper
Sample Paper
Fiz A. Cist†
University of Florida Department of Physics
(Dated: August 4, 2011)
This part, the abstract is an essential part of a scientific paper—often the only component freely
viewable from search engines. It should briefly summarize the background, the purpose, the method,
and most importantly, the quantitative results with errors. Based on those, a conclusion may be
drawn. In this paper, we present a LATEX template for formal reports in PHY4803L. It is based
on the REVTEX document class from the American Physical Society—a standard for the Physical
Review journals as well as many others. Your paper should demonstrate your mastery of the entire
experiment. It should be neat in appearance with correct English. It should be concise; four single-
spaced pages including figures should suffice. Not included in the four-page limit, appendices can
be used to present data that is summarized in the main body, for derivations referred to in the main
body, and for answers to questions posed in the experimental guides.
1. INTRODUCTION AND THEORY The source files1 for this document may be used as
a template for your Advanced Lab papers. Spending a
few hours studying and altering the sample-paper.tex and
The introduction typically places the current work in sample-paper.bib files will allow you to develop sufficient
context with prior work and explains what new physics mastery of LATEX to easily generate all manner of techni-
is involved and why the article is worth reading. For cal documents. Specific instructions for compiling LATEX
your articles, use one or more paragraphs to succinctly documents on Windows operating systems are contained
explain the motivation, purpose and relevant background in the appendices.
to the experiment. This should be done at a level so that
The writing process involves at least three distinct
another lab student could follow your development.
steps: prewriting or outlining, drafting, and revising or
A full theory section should not normally be needed editing. Given the tight time constraints in Advanced
for our advanced lab experiments. So use the introduc- Lab, students are advised to begin the drafting process
tion to present the main physics variables and formulas before finishing their lab sessions. Most of the first draft
you will use. Trace their origin to the physics involved. can be accomplished during the latter sessions of an ex-
Don’t provide derivations, but do describe what new as- periment.
sumptions are needed. Formulas involving measurement The essence of expository writing is the communica-
conversions, instrument settings or other apparatus de- tion of understanding through a clear and concise pre-
tails should be relegated to the apparatus and experiment sentation of predominately factual material.[2, 3] Most
section. people cannot compose successful expository prose un-
Here we will use the introduction to discuss technical less they put the need to communicate foremost among
writing issues. their priorities. Two things predominate in generating
understanding in the reader:
One resource for developing into a strong technical
writer is the UF Reading and Writing Center[1]. Stu- Organization: The reader must be provided with an
dents can even receive free consultations on their written overview or outline, know how each fact fits
reports through this office! into that overall picture, and must be specifically
An important part of your education as a physicist is alerted about any especially important fact. Fur-
learning to use standard tools for sharing your work with thermore, the facts must be presented in a logical
others. In Advanced Lab, we will instruct you in the order—so that fact 17 is not important for under-
use of LATEX for writing scientific papers in a widely ac- standing fact 12.
cepted professional style. Articles submitted for publica-
tion in a professional journal must be suitably formatted Depth: Bearing in mind the preexisting knowledge of
according to the journal guidelines. Physical Review Let- the reader, the writer must budget the length of
ters and many others adhere to the APS Physics Review discussion allotted to each topic in proportion to
Style and Notation Guide. The REVTEX homepage has its importance.
additional reference material. Writing a journal-like article for the lab report is great
practice for improving your technical writing. Thus we
urge you to concentrate on your overall presentation, not
∗ This document was adapted from the original—written for MIT
Junior lab students, web.mit.edu/8.13/www/
† Electronic address: [email protected]; URL: http://www.phys.
ufl.edu/courses/phy4803L/ 1 www.phys.ufl.edu/courses/phy4803L/sample-paper.zip
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only on the facts themselves. We strongly recommend s a m p le tu b e
that you: c a p a c ito r
d ire c tio n a l R F c o m p u te r
c o u p le r o s c illa to r
1. Base your report on an outline.
2. Begin each paragraph with a topic sentence which a m p lifie r
expresses the main area of concern and the main
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conclusion of the paragraph. Put less important
material later in the paragraph.
Point 2 is frequently absent in novice reports; topic sen- s ta tic fie ld
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tences are your mechanism for telling the reader what is
under discussion and where it fits into the overall picture.
You can check your topic sentences by reading them in FIG. 1: Figures should be inserted into the text in their nat-
order, i.e., omit all the following sentences in each para- ural positions. Command options can be used to crop, scale,
graph; this should give a fair synopsis of your paper. or rotate the figure. The size of this graphic was set by the
width command. The aspect ratio defaults to 1.0 if the height
If you are writing up results you obtained with a
is not also set. When creating figures, choose large font sizes
partner, use we for work performed together and I for in graph labels and other figure information; the figure should
work performed alone. Use the past tense for your pro- be legible when scaled to fit in a single column. This part—the
cedure and analysis, and the present for your results. caption—should be clear and comprehensible. Use the cap-
“LiF xray diffraction angles were measured to ±0.2◦ tion to elaborate on specific issues, features, complications, or
and are consistent with an FCC lattice with a spacing operating procedures. Adapted from [4, 5].
a0 = (4.035 ± 0.014) nm.” Note that units are in normal
(not math) fonts; the source file shows how to make this
happen while inside the LATEX math mode. physics of the experiment. And in some cases, it is proper
Lastly: Remember to proofread your paper for to describe procedures in this section. When it aids the
spelling and grammar mistakes. Few things are logical flow of the paper, keep procedures, data, analysis,
as offensive to a reviewer as careless writing and and results together.
such mistakes will count against you! Either here or in the previous section, be sure to dis-
play representative raw data. Where there is an abun-
dance of data, consider using an appendix to present it.
2. APPARATUS AND EXPERIMENT See, for example, Fig. 5.
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schematic of the equipment and perhaps include the most
important signal processing steps. The figure should be 60
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their captions to help you stay within the four page limit. 20
Energy Splitting = 36.1±0.3nm
Example first sentence of an experimental sec-
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tion: The experimental apparatus consists of a specially 50 100 150 200 250
prepared chemical sample containing 13 CHCl3 , an NMR Wavelength [bin]
spectrometer, and a control computer, as shown in Fig. 1.
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FPM Fabry-Perot FPM PD2
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Rb cell
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laser
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FIG. 4: This is a two-column figure using the figure* environment. Two column figures can’t be on the first page and LATEX
often has trouble with their placement.
Physics (Academic Press, 2003), chap. 5, pp. 179–184, 2nd Other output files such as a sample-paper.log file are also
ed. made during compilation.
[6] P. Bevington and D. Robinson, Data Reduction and Error Use the LaTeX=>PDF Output Profile in the
Analysis for the Physical Sciences (McGraw-Hill, 2003). TEXnicCenter toolbar to directly create pdf files
from LATEX source files. The toolbar includes ‘Build
current file,’ ‘View Output,’ and ‘Build and view current
APPENDIX A: LATEX UNDER WINDOWS
file’ options. The first and last recompile the source into
a pdf file. The middle simply views the most current
MiKTEX (pronounced mik-tech is a freely available, PDF. Typically two or three repeated calls to build
implementation of TEX and related programs avail- the PDF output file are necessary to resolve any nested
able from www.miktex.org. Note that MiKTEX it- references.
self runs from a command line prompt and is not The \bibliography{sample-paper} command gener-
terribly convenient. A very nice LATEX editor/shell ates the bibliography at that point in the document. It
called TEXnicCenter is also freely available from www. invokes the ‘bibtex’ macro package that reads in the bib-
texniccenter.org. liography file ‘sample-paper.bib’ allowing citation refer-
Once you’ve installed the above software, you will need ences to be resolved. Additional files get regenerated
to download sample-paper.zip and extract files listed be- when you build your PDF document.
low to their own directory in order to ‘rebuild’ this doc- TEXnicCenter, includes a spell checker that ig-
ument from scratch. You should probably build your nores most LATEX commands. Be sure that you
report starting from bare-paper.tex which will lessen the spell check and check grammar before handing in
amount of material that needs to be deleted. your paper!
APPENDIX B: PDFCREATOR AND LATEX
sample-paper.tex The main paper.
sample-paper.bib The text file where reference infor- Excel and MatLab are the most common analysis tools
mation is located. used by Advanced Lab students for data analysis and
graphing. LabVIEW is our most commonly used soft-
figure files The files sample-fig1.pdf through sample- ware for experimental control and display. All lab soft-
fig4.pdf files are PDF-viewable figures requested in ware printable output can be saved directly into a ‘PDF’
the sample-paper.tex file. They can be created with format by printing to the PDFCreator printer driver. If
the PDFCreator printer available on the lab com- the output is a full 8.5 × 11 inch PDF page, and you only
puters. want an area, it can be cropped when inserted into the
sample-paper.pdf This is the PDF file created by the LATEX file. See the source file for the syntax. This has
LATEX compiler. been done on Fig. 4. This figure uses the two-column
figure* environment for a figure that needs the extra
bare-paper.tex A nearly bare template. width.
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FIG. 5: For very large plots where important detail might be lost if too compressed, it can be convenient to use the ‘turnpage’ environment for displaying in landscape
mode. e.g., any experiment where a data set is acquired at several angular positions (21cm, e/m, Rutherford) or is time varying (Physics of Alpha Decay and Pulsed
NMR.) These full page graphics are usually best kept in appendices so as not to impede the flow of the paper. Note that large tables can also be presented in this
landscape environment if desired