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SULIT 1119/1
PEPERIKSAAN PERCUBAAN
SIJIL PELAJARAN MALAYSIA
NEGERI PERAK
2011
SKEMA PEMARKAHAN
BAHASA INGGERIS
KERTAS 1
1119/1 SULIT
SULIT 1119/1
MARK SCHEME FOR
Section A: Directed Writing
ASSESSMENT OBJECTIVES
To test the candidates’ ability to:
 read and comprehend the rubric
 use the information to fulfill the task
 write with useful ideas within the framework of the question
 use clear and accurate Standard English, using a style and tone appropriate to the task
The objectives above are rewarded as follows:

FORMAT - 3 marks
CONTENT - 12 marks
LANGUAGE - 20 marks
TOTAL - 35 marks
1. AWARDING MARKS FOR CONTENT

Content marks should be identified by the letter ‘C’ followed by the content number and circled.
a) FORMAT - 3 marks
 F1 – Greeting 1 mark
 F2 – Purpose of speech 1 mark
 F3 – Suitable ending 1 mark
b) CONTENT - 12 marks
C1 greenhouse gas emission 1 mark

C2 air pollution 1 mark
C3 water pollution 1 mark
C4 increasing energy consumption 1 mark
C5 deforestation 1 mark
C6 practise 3Rs - reduce, reuse, recycle 1 mark
C7 use public transport 1 mark
C8 say no to plastic 1 mark
C9 stop felling of trees 1 mark
C10 use natural products 1 mark
C11 no open burning 1 mark
C12 use environment-friendly products 1 mark
2. AWARDING MARKS FOR LANGUAGE

Marks are awarded for:
(i) Accurate English
(ii) Style and Tone appropriate to the task.
**Candidates need not use exact words given in the stimulus. However, own language must convey the
same meaning
1119/1 SULIT
SULIT 1119/1
CRITERIA FOR MARKING LANGUAGE
Question 1: Directed Writing
 Language is accurate except for first draft slips

 No grammatical mistakes
A  Effective use of varied sentence structures
19 – 20  Vocabulary is sophisticated and precise
Excellent  Spelling and punctuation are accurate and helpful
 Paragraphs have unity and are well-linked
 Language is almost always accurate
B  Sentence structure is varied and interesting
16 – 18  Wide vocabulary
Good  Spelling and punctuation are accurate
 Paragraphs have unity
 Appropriate tone and style
 Language is largely accurate
 Simple structures are used without errors
C  Errors occur in complex sentences
13 – 15  Vocabulary is adequate
Satisfactory  Spelling and punctuation are generally accurate
 Written in paragraphs but ideas may not be linked
 Language is sufficiently accurate
 Patches of clarity when simple structures are used
D  Some variety in sentence structure
10 – 12  Adequate vocabulary but lacks precision
Fair  Spelling of simple words and punctuation are generally accurate
 Paragraphs have some unity
 Tone and style are sometimes appropriate
 Meaning is never in doubt
 Errors are sufficiently frequent and serious
E  Some simple structures may be accurate
7–9  Vocabulary is limited and simple but not precise
Unsatisfactory  Spelling errors in difficult words
 Paragraphs lack planning
 Tone and style inappropriate
 Meaning is fairly clear
 Many serious errors – mainly SWE (single word error)
U (i)  A few simple structures are used correctly
4–6  Errors in spelling of simple words
Poor  Paragraphs may not be used
 Tone and style hidden in density of errors
U (ii)  Meaning is blurred
2–3  Multiple word error (MWE)
U (iii)  Almost unrecognizable as pieces of English
0–1  Whole sections may make no sense.
SULIT 1119/1
1119/1 SULIT
SECTION B : Continuous Writing
MARKING SCHEME FOR QUESTION 2

ASSESSMENT OBJECTIVES
To test candidates’ ability to:
 Write a piece of continuous prose in accurate Standard English.
 Respond with relevance and creatively to a task chosen.
MARKING METHOD
The whole composition should be read slowly, indicating all errors and placing ticks for good use of
language or subject matter. Examiners must judge which level best fits the grade descriptions.
BAND DESCRIPTIONS FOR THE ASSESSMENT OF CONTINUOUS WRITING

Section B: Continuous Writing
 Language is accurate except for first draft slips
A  No grammatical mistakes
44 – 50  Effective use of varied sentence structures
Excellent  Vocabulary is sophisticated and precise
 Spelling and punctuation are accurate and helpful
 Paragraphs have unity and are well-linked
 Language is almost always accurate
B  Sentence structure is varied and interesting
38 – 43  Wide vocabulary
Good  Spelling and punctuation are accurate
 Paragraphs have unity
 Language is largely accurate
 Simple structures are used without error
C  Errors occur in more complex structures
32 – 37  Vocabulary is adequate
Satisfactory  Spelling and punctuation are generally accurate
 Written in paragraphs but ideas may not be linked
 Language is sufficiently accurate
 Patches of clarity when simple structures are used
D  Some variety in sentence structures
26 – 31  Adequate vocabulary but lacks precision
Fair  Spelling of simple words and punctuation generally accurate
 Paragraphs have some unity
 Tone and style are sometimes appropriate
 Meaning is never in doubt
 Errors are sufficiently frequent and serious
E  Some simple structures may be accurate
20 – 25  Vocabulary is simple and limited but lacks precision
Unsatisfactory  Paragraphs may not be used
 Tone and style inappropriate
5
U (i)  Meaning is fairly clear
14 – 19  Many serious errors – mainly SWE
Poor  A few simple structures are used correctly
 Simple words are spelt correctly
 Paragraphs lack planning
 Tone and style hidden in density of errors
U (ii)  Meaning is usually blurred but reader is able to get some sense.
8 – 13  Multiple word errors (MWE)
U (iii)  Almost unrecognizable as pieces of English
0–7  Where occasional patched of clarity occur, marks should be awarded.
PERATURAN PEMARKAHAN TAMAT
1119/1 SULIT
SULIT 1119/1
PEPERIKSAAN PERCUBAAN
SIJIL PELAJARAN MALAYSIA
NEGERI PERAK
2011
SKEMA PEMARKAHAN
BAHASA INGGERIS
KERTAS 2
Section A
1. 2 3 4 5
C D A A D
6. 7. 8 9 10
C B C C B
11 12 13 14 15
A D D B B
Section B
16. Lee Su Kim (1 mark)

17. ( the culture of the) Babas and the Nyonyas / life of the Peranakans (1 mark)
18. Marshall Cavendish (Spelling must be correct.) (1 mark)
19. Babas and Nyonyas of Jonker Street (1 mark)
20-21. interesting characters / unexpected twists and turns / cultural rituals / beliefs and
superstitions / poignant events in the life of the Peranakans (Accept any two answers.)
(2 marks)
22-23. (beautiful pictures of) kebayas (with their intricate designs and embroidery) / beaded
shoes / kerongsang / brooches (that fasten the kebayas) / belts / jewellery (Accept any
two answers.) (2 marks)
24-25. amusing / interesting / heart-warming (Accept any two answers.) (2 marks)
Section C
26 (a) 11 years old [1 mark]
(b) to further learn his craft [1 mark]
27 (a) The Vogue magazine dedicated an 8-page article on him [1 mark]
(b) His name was turned into a global brand /he became famous [1 mark]
28 (a) (i) Jimmy Choo’s creativity/craftsmanship [1 mark]
(ii) Tamara Mellon’s connections/gift for public relations [1 mark]
(b) ‘(a ) household name’ [1 mark]
29 given awards / title -Dato’ [1 mark]
30 Jimmy Choo has become successful (accept any reasonable answer related to Jimmy
Choo’s success ) [2 marks]
31 Content points for summary writing [1 x 10 = 10 marks]

1. shoe became famous among celebrities / must-have on celebrities lists
2. meeting with Tamara Mellon
3. turn his name into global brand
4. received financial help from Tamara Mellon’s father / Tommy Yeardye
5. Tamara and Jimmy became partners
6. set up Jimmy Choo Ltd.
7. Jimmy Choo’s creativity and craftsmanship
8. (and) Mellon’s connections and gift for public relation
9. established shoe empire
10. dedicates (himself) to making shoes
11. TV sitcom made (Jimmy Choo London) a household name
12. awarded an OBE
13. awards and a Dato’ title in own country.
*(Note – content must be in order set)
Section D
Nature
32 (a) It is full of water / The water is flowing fast

(b) bare / fallow
(c) mango blossom / logwood blossom / sounds of bees / scent of honey / tall grass sways /
buttercups
(d) Yes/No. Any acceptable corresponding reason.
Q33.
MARK CONTENT MARK LANGUAGE
RANGE RANGE
9 – 10 A consistently relevant 5 The language is accurate and is
convincing response to the task very well organised
with detailed and well
developed textual evidence.
7–8 Response is relevant to the task 4 The language is largely accurate

with some developed textual and well organised
evidence
5 -6 Response is intermittently 3 Meaning is never in doubt but
relevant to the task with little errors are frequent and is fairly
textual evidence well organised
3–4 Reponse of little relevance to 2 Frequent errors with some

the task with little textual blurring in meaning and is
evidence poorly organised
1-2 Response has no relevance to 1 Makes little or no sense at all

the task and lacks organization

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The objectives above are rewarded as follows:

1. AWARDING MARKS FOR CONTENT

C1 greenhouse gas emission 1 mark

2. AWARDING MARKS FOR LANGUAGE

 Language is accurate except for first draft slips

MARKING SCHEME FOR QUESTION 2

BAND DESCRIPTIONS FOR THE ASSESSMENT OF CONTINUOUS WRITING

PERATURAN PEMARKAHAN TAMAT

16. Lee Su Kim (1 mark)

26 (a) 11 years old [1 mark]

(b) to further learn his craft [1 mark]

27 (a) The Vogue magazine dedicated an 8-page article on him [1 mark]

28 (a) (i) Jimmy Choo’s creativity/craftsmanship [1 mark]

(ii) Tamara Mellon’s connections/gift for public relations [1 mark]

(b) ‘(a ) household name’ [1 mark]

29 given awards / title -Dato’ [1 mark]

31 Content points for summary writing [1 x 10 = 10 marks]

32 (a) It is full of water / The water is flowing fast

7–8 Response is relevant to the task 4 The language is largely accurate

3–4 Reponse of little relevance to 2 Frequent errors with some

1-2 Response has no relevance to 1 Makes little or no sense at all

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