180 Days of Writing For Sixth Grade Ebooks
180 Days of Writing For Sixth Grade Ebooks
180 Days of Writing For Sixth Grade Ebooks
Level
Author
Wendy Conklin, M.A.Ed.
Standards
For information on how this resource meets
national and other state standards, see pages
4–6. You may also review this information by
scanning the QR code or visiting our website at
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the on-screen directions.
Publishing Credits
Corinne Burton, M.A.Ed., President; Emily R. Smith, M.A.Ed., Content Director; Jennifer Wilson, Editor; Grace Alba Le, Multimedia
Designer; Don Tran, Production Artist; Stephanie Bernard, Assistant Editor; Amber Goff, Editorial Assistant
Image Credits
pp. 61, 71, 79, 117–118, 95, 135–138, 151, 193: iStock; All other images Shutterstock
Standards
© Copyright 2010. National Governors Association Center for Best Practices and Council of Chief State School Officers. All
rights reserved. (CCSS)
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Introduction
The Need for Practice
To be successful in today’s writing classrooms, students must deeply understand both concepts
and procedures so that they can discuss and demonstrate their understanding. Demonstrating
understanding is a process that must be continually practiced for students to be successful. Practice
is especially important to help students apply their concrete, conceptual understanding of each
particular writing skill.
Understanding Assessment
In addition to providing opportunities for frequent practice, teachers must be able to assess students’
writing skills. This is important so that teachers can adequately address students’ misconceptions,
build on their current understandings, and challenge them appropriately. Assessment is a long-
term process that involves careful analysis of student responses from a discussion, project, practice
sheet, or test. When analyzing the data, it is important for teachers to reflect on how their
teaching practices may have influenced students’ responses and to identify those areas where
additional instruction may be required. In short, the data gathered from assessments should be
used to inform instruction: slow down, speed up, or reteach. This type of assessment is called
formative assessment.
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How to Use This Book
With 180 Days of Writing, creative, theme-based units guide students as they practice the five steps
of the writing process: prewriting, drafting, revising, editing, and publishing. During each odd week
(Weeks 1, 3, 5, etc.), students interact with mentor texts. Then, students apply their learning by
writing their own pieces during each following even week (Weeks 2, 4, 6, etc.). Many practice pages
also focus on grammar/language standards to help improve students’ writing.
The chart below indicates the writing and language standards that are addressed throughout
this book. See pages 5–6 for a breakdown of which writing standard is covered in each week.
Note: Students may not have deep understandings of some topics in this book. Remember to assess
students based on their writing skills and not their content knowledge.
Weekly Setup
Write each prompt on the board throughout the appropriate week. Students should reference the
prompts as they work through the activity pages so that they stay focused on the topics and the right
genre of writing: argument, informative/explanatory, and narrative. You may wish to print copies
of this chart from the digital resources (filename: G6_writingprompts.pdf ) and distribute them to
students to keep throughout the school year.
Imagine that you are taking a trip that goes Imagine you are witnessing a peasant
terribly wrong. Describe the experience, approach a lord during the medieval
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including where you went and what time period. Describe the events of
went wrong. what happens.
Imagine that you have just taken a trip of a Imagine you are a peasant living during the
2 lifetime. Describe the experience, including medieval time period. Describe one day,
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where you went and what you did. including whom you speak with and the
events that take place.
Greeks used mythology for several reasons.
3 Explain some of the reasons and why the Think about a Renaissance artist. Write
reasons are important. a narrative about the artist and his or her
11
work. Include details about how the artist
Create your own myth about a natural felt at the time.
4 phenomenon. Include details about what
makes the phenomenon happen. Imagine you are living during the
Renaissance. Write about a Renaissance
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Do you think fairy tales are more for invention, and describe how it can change
5 children or for adults? Include reasons to the way people live or learn.
support your argument.
Imagine you are a pirate on an adventure.
Do you think fairy tales would or would not 13 Write a narrative that describes your
be better if they were told from the villains’ adventure and what you discovered.
6
perspectives? Include reasons to support
your argument. Imagine you are an explorer. Write a
14 narrative that describes your adventure
Who do you think is responsible for the and what you discovered.
7 crime, Chet or Ginger? Include reasons to
support your claim. Explain the differences between beam,
15
suspension, truss, and arch bridges.
Do you think a ghost delivered the cupcake
8 in the story on page 49? Use details to Explain the differences between round,
16
support your argument. ribbon-ring, ram-air, and square parachutes.
Do you think Groundhog Day should be Do you think equal rights are still
17 celebrated? Provide details to support being talked about today? Write your
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your argument. argument and include details to support
your argument.
Do you think daylight saving time is
18 necessary? Provide details to support Do you think diversity is important in a
your argument. 30 classroom? Write your argument and
include details to support your argument.
Choose a superhero. Describe the
19 superhero and include facts about how the Explain how the game of lacrosse is
superhero came to be. 31 played. Include details to make it easy
to understand.
Explain how super powers are beneficial to
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superheroes and everyday citizens. Explain how the game of rugby is
32 played. Include details to make it easy
Describe what black holes are. Include to understand.
21 details about their sizes and where they
are located. There are many reasons people have
33 domestic pets. Write a paragraph
Explain some of the preparations NASA is explaining what owning a pet entails.
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making for future space travel.
Choose an exotic pet. Then, write a
Write a theater script. Be sure to focus on 34 paragraph explaining the characteristics of
23 that animal.
one event and include multiple characters.
Write a script for a scene in a new television Some people think eating healthy is a must,
24 show. Be sure to focus on one event and while others think it is not something
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include multiple characters. to worry about. Explain which side you
support and why.
Create a comic strip. Be sure to include
25 at least two characters, a problem, a Some people think exercising is a good
solution, and a moral. thing, while others think it is not a good
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thing. Explain which side you support
and why.
Think about a movie you have seen. Write
a review for it. Be sure to state your opinion
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of the movie and provide evidence to
support your opinion.
using mentor texts. On even weeks, students use 1 Name: _____________________________ Date:___________________
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The Writing Process can be found on page 212 and in Step 1: Prewriting
the digital resources (filename: G6_writing_process.pdf ). Think about the topic. Brainstorm ideas, and plan what
you want to include in your writing.
Step 2: Drafting
Students can reference each step of the writing process Use your brainstormed ideas to write a first draft.
Don’t worry about errors. This will be a rough draft.
Step 3: Revising
as they move through each week. Read your rough draft. Think about the vocabulary you
used and how your writing is organized. Then, make the
appropriate changes to improve your written piece.
Step 4: Editing
Reread your revised draft. Check for errors in spelling,
punctuation, and grammar. Use editing marks to correct
the errors.
Step 5: Publishing
Create a final version of your piece, including the
corrections from the edited version. Be sure to reread
your work for any errors.
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(filename: G6_peer_checklist.pdf ).
Writing Signs for each of the writing genres Writing Tips pages for each of the writing
are on pages 217–219 and in the digital genres can be found on pages 214–216
resources (filename: G6_writing_signs.pdf ). and in the digital resources (filename: G6_
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two‑week units to remind students which appropriate Writing Tips pages as they work
type of writing they are focusing on. through the weeks.
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Diagnostic Assessment
Teachers can use the practice pages as diagnostic assessments. The data analysis tools included
with the book enable teachers or parents to quickly score students’ work and monitor their progress.
Teachers and parents can quickly see which writing skills students may need to target further to
develop proficiency.
After students complete each two-week unit, score each students’ even week Day 5 published piece
using the appropriate, genre-specific rubric (pages 206–208). Then, complete the Practice Page
Item Analysis (pages 209–211) that matches the writing genre. These charts are also provided in
the digital resources (filenames: G6_argument_analysis.pdf, G6_inform_analysis.pdf, narrative_
analysis.pdf ). Teachers can input data into the electronic files directly on the computer, or they can
print the pages and analyze students’ work using paper and pencil.
• The weeks in which the particular writing genres are the focus are indicated across the tops of
the charts. Note: Students are only assessed on the even weeks, therefore the odd weeks are
not included on the charts.
• For each student, record his or her rubric score in the appropriate column.
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Whole-Class Support
The results of the diagnostic analysis may show that the entire class is struggling with a particular
writing genre. If these concepts have been taught in the past, this indicates that further instruction
or reteaching is necessary. If these concepts have not been taught in the past, this data is a great
preassessment and may demonstrate that students do not have a working knowledge of the
concepts. Thus, careful planning for the length of the unit(s) or lesson(s) must be considered, and
additional front-loading may be required.
Digital Resources
Reference page 221 for information about accessing the digital resources and an overview of
the contents.
Standards are designed to focus instruction and guide adoption of curricula. Standards are
statements that describe the criteria necessary for students to meet specific academic goals. They
define the knowledge, skills, and content students should acquire at each level. Standards are also
used to develop standardized tests to evaluate students’ academic progress.
Teachers are required to demonstrate how their lessons meet state standards. State standards are
used in the development of all of our products, so educators can be assured they meet the academic
requirements of each state.
The activities in this book are aligned to today’s national and state-specific college and career
readiness standards. The chart on page 4 lists the writing and language standards used throughout
this book. A more detailed chart on page 5–6 correlates the specific writing standards to each week.
1 Name:______________________________ Date:____________________
Directions: Think about how a narrative text is different from an informative/explanatory text.
Then, place check marks in the circles that describe a narrative text.
Places I’ve Been
Prewriting
can have
sequences of can have
events that tell tables of
about adventures contents
can include describing
real or imagined deserts
travel to new
places
can include
novels about can be
sailing on oceans short stories can have
about going to glossaries
can include
headings and can have
captions that diagrams to show
explain travels how to get to the
on trains airport
can have
can have settings to show
beginnings, where adventures
middles, and ends take place
to adventures
Name:______________________________ Date:____________________ 2
Directions: Read the paragraph. Find at least three places where more details are needed to
make the story more exciting. Underline these areas, and make notes in the margins about what
you might add to the story.
We always stop for food and gas at the same places. We never have
to ask how much longer because we know all the markers on the
highway. We see the same sights on our journeys . . . until last year.
That was the year that they closed the highway, and we had to find
another route. The first place we stopped at was the gas station. The
restroom was not even in working order! That was bad news because
all the snacks in our car were ruined when my little brother spilled his
ended up eating bland fast food. Then, the worst thing happened, but I
have lived through that adventure and hoping to never repeat it again!
Cursive Practice
Directions: Use cursive to write at least two sentences that tell how you would
feel if you experienced the adventure above.
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3 Name:______________________________ Date:____________________
Directions: Read the sentences. Use numbers to reorder the sentences so that the story
makes sense. Then, answer the questions.
Revising
Places I’ve Been
_____ Only then did it dawn on her that she might not be able to find her way
back to the village.
_____ When she pulled on the cord, the balloon began to rise far into the sky.
_____ Farther and farther she flew until she couldn’t see her village anymore.
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2. What feelings do you think the character might be experiencing throughout the story?
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Name:______________________________ Date:____________________ 4
Directions: Use the symbol to replace the underlined pronouns in the sentences below
and make them correct.
1. If a student really wants to have fun, they can go to the back yard for an
3. Whenever one spends time in the rainforest, you has to be ready for the rain
showers at any moment.
4. The train zoomed past she and him so fast that their tickets blew from
their hands.
5. When Emily went to the secret garden, they had to be careful of the
poisonous flowers.
5 Name:______________________________ Date:____________________
Directions: Read the paragraph. Use what you have learned this week to make the story more
exciting. Revise the story by adding details on the lines provided.
Publishing
Places I’ve Been
Nothing exciting ever happens when we travel to Grandma’s house. We always stop for
food and gas at the same places. We never have to ask how much longer because we know
all the markers on the highway. We see the same sights on our journeys . . . until last year.
That was the year that they closed the highway, and we had to find another route. The first
place we stopped was a gas station with a worn out store that had nothing but __________
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_____________________________________________________________. The restroom
was not even in working order! That was bad news because all the snacks in our car were
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Name:______________________________ Date:____________________ 1
Directions: Read the titles. Write reasons why each one would or would not make a good title
for a narrative.
Titles Reasons
Places I Want to Go
Prewriting
Adventures Are Always
Fun for Everyone
He Never Believed He
Would See the Ocean
2 Name:______________________________ Date:____________________
Directions: Imagine that you have just taken a trip of a lifetime. Describe the experience,
including where you went and what you did.
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Drafting
Places I Want to Go
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Remember!
A strong narrative paragraph:
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• includes an introductory and
Cursive Practice
Directions: Use cursive to write how you would feel while visiting the place you
described above.
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Name:______________________________ Date:____________________ 3
Directions: Think about the transition words that can help others understand the sequence of
events in your narrative. Read the ones listed below, and add four more of your own.
Then, write two sentences about an adventure using at least two of the words from the list.
Places I Want to Go
Revising
Transition Words
Then So
At first First
1. _____________________________________________________________
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2. _____________________________________________________________
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Time to Improve!
Revisit the paragraph you wrote on page 20 about a trip of a lifetime. Add transition words to
your sentences to make the sequence of events clearer for the reader.
4 Name:______________________________ Date:____________________
Directions: Add the appropriate pronouns to the sentences. Be sure to avoid inappropriate
pronoun shifts.
Places I Want to Go
Editing
The most exciting adventure _____ ever had was when _____ visited Machu
Picchu. _____ climbed and climbed until _____ feet ached at night. _____ breaths
shortened as _____ ascended the mountain. _____ thought _____ would never
reach the top. But finally, _____ could see the sun rise above _____ illuminating the
old dwellings of people from long ago. Being so high up gave _____ the idea that
_____ could see the beginning and the end of the earth.
Time to Improve!
Remember!
Revisit the paragraph you wrote on
page 20 about a trip of a lifetime. Inappropriate pronoun shifts happen when a
Edit your text to make sure that sentence shifts between first person (I, we)
you used pronouns appropriately. to second person (you) or third person (he,
If you did not use any pronouns, she, they).
find places to add them to
your paragraph.
Name:______________________________ Date:____________________ 5
Directions: Imagine that you have just taken a trip of a lifetime. Describe the experience,
including where you went and what you did.
Places I Want to Go
Publishing
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1 Name:______________________________ Date:____________________
Directions: Place check marks in the circles that include ideas that could be found in an
informative/explanatory paragraph about Greek gods and heroes.
Prewriting
Gods and Heroes
People love
reading about
the Greek hero, Odysseus and
Odysseus. his men encountered
the Cyclops, the
one-eyed son of
My favorite goddess the god Poseidon.
is Hera because
she is dramatic.
Aphrodite is the
beautiful goddess
of love.
The Greeks
Poseidon is the used myths for
best Greek god. entertainment.
Greek mythology is
more interesting than
Norse mythology.
A centaur is
a mythological
The Trojan horse
creature that has
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about how Greek
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large wooden horse.
Name:______________________________ Date:____________________ 2
Directions: Read the paragraph. Circle the main topics, and underline the supporting facts
and details.
beliefs of the ancient Greeks. The Greeks worshiped the gods, including Zeus (god
of the sky), Poseidon (god of the sea), and Hades (god of the underworld). The gods
spoke to the Greeks through oracles, or priests, who told them about the future. The
Greeks also used myths to explain the things they did not understand about their
world. For example, Pandora’s Box explains how evil came into the world. Heroes
emerged from many of these stories. The Greeks used myths for entertainment and
performed plays about these myths in amphitheaters. One example is the journey
of Odysseus from Troy to his home. In this story, he encounters a Cyclops and the
Land of the Dead. But after years of trials, this hero makes it home to his wife and
kingdom. Today, myths still entertain in the form of books, plays, and movies.
Cursive Practice
Directions: Use cursive to write one interesting thing you learned from the paragraph above.
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3 Name:______________________________ Date:____________________
Directions: Think about how you can revise these introductory sentences to make them more
appealing to readers. Write your new sentences under the examples.
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2. This paragraph will talk about Poseidon, the god of the sea.
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3. I think Greek myths about the gods and goddesses are fun to read.
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Example: Have you ever thought of what it would be like to be a Greek god?
Name:______________________________ Date:____________________ 4
Directions: Use the symbol to add commas to set apart the nonrestrictive information in the
sentences. The first one is done for you.
old tale.
4. Persephone is kidnapped by Hades also known as the god of the under world.
5 Name:______________________________ Date:____________________
Directions: Revisit the paragraph. Think about how you can improve it based on what you have
practiced throughout the week. Write your suggestions in the margins.
Publishing
Gods and Heroes
worshiped the gods, including Zeus (god of the sky), Poseidon (god of
the sea), and Hades (god of the underworld). The gods spoke to the
Greeks through oracles, or priests, who told them about the future. The
Greeks also used myths to explain the things they did not understand
about their world. For example, Pandora’s Box explains how evil came
into the world. Heroes emerged from many of these stories. The
Greeks used myths for entertainment and performed plays about these
Troy to his home. In this story, he encounters a Cyclops and the Land
of the Dead. But after years of trials, this hero makes it home to his
Name:______________________________ Date:____________________ 1
Directions: The ancient Greeks used myths to explain natural phenomena like seasons,
earthquakes, floods, and thunderstorms. Write notes in the margins about the information you
would include in an informative/explanatory paragraph about mythology and natural phenomena.
about relationships between the gods and the reasons for natural
favorite myth is about lightning. Long ago, Greeks believed that Zeus
a sacred place, and they built temples there. Earthquakes and storms
happened when Poseidon, god of the sea, struck his trident to the
with humans. He and his brother, Poseidon, sent rain and flooded
phenomena are stories about how the gods treated one another.
2 Name:______________________________ Date:____________________
Directions: Create your own myth about a natural phenomenon. Include details about
what makes the phenomenon happen. Use your notes on page 29 to help you draft your
informative/explanatory paragraph.
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Directions: Use cursive to explain how your new myth could fit into Greek mythology as we
know it today.
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Directions: A strong introduction to a paragraph gets readers interested in learning more about
the topic. Explain why the introductory sentences below are interesting for readers.
1. According to Greek myths, the seasons began because Hades kidnapped Persephone and
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3. You hear the rumble and wonder if it might be the gods above making a statement.
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4. The reason for thunder in Greek myths originates with the Cyclops hammering a
thunderbolt for Zeus.
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Time to Improve!
Go back to the informative/explanatory draft you wrote on
page 30. Revise your introductory sentence to make sure
that it grabs the attention of the reader.
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Directions: Use the symbol to add commas to set apart the nonrestrictive information in the
sentences. Then, rewrite the sentences without the information.
dragged away to the under world by Hades the god of the dead.
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2. Zeus the god of the sk y orders the Cyclopes to hammer lightning bolts,
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3. Sailors rely on Poseidon the god of the sea for safe travels and
smooth voyages.
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Directions: Create your own myth about a natural phenomenon. Include details about what
makes the phenomenon happen.
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Directions: Below are some facts about original fairy tales. How can you use these facts to
support the idea that fairy tales were originally written for adults? Write your notes next to
each fact.
Fairy Tales: For Children or Adults?
Prewriting
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Directions: Read the paragraph. Each claim should have evidence supporting it. Circle the
claims and underline the evidence.
adults not children. Even though the fairy tales today have been watered down
from their original versions, there are still many disturbing features. For example,
in the original version of Snow White, it is her biological mother who wants to kill
her. Snow White is only seven years old. Does it make it any better that today’s
version changes this to her stepmother? This seems to show a distinct bias against
stepmothers. At the end of the original story, Snow White makes the stepmother
(evil queen) wear shoes made from iron. The stepmother is ordered to dance until
she drops dead. In the version we know today, lightning strikes as she attempts
to push a boulder onto the dwarves. Instead of killing the dwarves, she falls off a
cliff to her death. Why is this a better version for children? Both versions involve a
terrible death, something that is more suitable for adults. Fairy tales, both old and
new, promote bias and violence. For these reasons alone, we should avoid allowing
A claim:
• is one sentence long
• is short and to the point
• omits “I think” or “I feel”
• is defended with evidence
3 Name:______________________________ Date:____________________
Directions: Explain what each sentence means. Think about how the commas help change the
meanings of the sentences.
1. The story of the poisoned apple, which is almost 200 years old, frightens young children.
Revising
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2. The story of the poisoned apple which is almost 200 years old, frightens young children.
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3. The Brothers Grimm fairy tales, written in the early 1800s, can be bought at
bookstores today.
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4. The Brothers Grimm fairy tales written in the early 1800s can be bought
at bookstores today.
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Nonrestrictive means that if we removed it from
the sentence, it would not change the meaning
of the sentence. Nonrestrictive information is
set off with commas. Restrictive means that
if we removed it from the sentence, it would
change the meaning of the sentence.
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Directions: Circle the pronoun in each sentence. Then, draw an arrow from the pronoun
to its antecedent.
1. The evil queen thinks she is the most beautiful in the world.
4. The Three Lit tle Pigs are hunted down by the wolf, so they keep on running.
5 Name:______________________________ Date:____________________
Fairy tales are stories filled with bias and violence and are better suited for adults
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not children. Even though the fairy tales today have been watered down from their
original versions, there are still many disturbing features. For example, in the original
version of Snow White, it is her biological mother who wants to kill her. Snow White is
only seven years old. Does it make it any better that today’s version changes this to her
stepmother? This seems to show a distinct bias against stepmothers. At the end of the
original story, Snow White makes the stepmother (evil queen) wear shoes made from iron.
The stepmother is ordered to dance until she drops dead. In the version we know today,
lightning strikes as she attempts to push a boulder onto the dwarves. Instead of killing
the dwarves, she falls off a cliff to her death. Why is this a better version for children?
Both versions involve a terrible death, something that is more suitable for adults. Fairy tales,
both old and new, promote bias and violence. For these reasons alone, we should avoid
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Directions: Free writing is a type of brainstorming. Free writing helps define perspective.
Use free writing to complete the chart.
2 Name:______________________________ Date:____________________
Directions: Do you think fairy tales would or would not be better if they were told from the
villains’ perspectives? Include reasons to support your argument. Use your notes from page 39
to help you draft your argument paragraph.
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Cursive Practice
Directions: Use cursive to write how a villain might answer the question above.
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Directions: Use the symbol to add commas to set apart nonrestrictive information to the
sentences. Then, explain how adding the commas changes the meanings of the sentences.
1. The stor y of the Frog Prince which originally showed a ver y selfish and
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2. The tale of the evil queen giving Snow White a poisoned apple which is
almost 200 years old might be dif ferent if told from the queen’s perspective.
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3. The wolf originally depicted as the villain in the stor y paints a picture that
makes the Three Lit tle Pigs look like the true villains in the stor y.
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Time to Improve!
Look at the draft you wrote on page 40.
Revise at least two sentences to include
nonrestrictive information.
4 Name:______________________________ Date:____________________
Directions: Circle the pronouns. Then, draw arrows from the pronouns to their antecedents.
1. The wolf believes he is the one in the right, not the pigs.
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2. The witch is only tr ying to cut corners when she finds Hansel and Gretel
eating the house.
3. Cinderella’s stepmother is only looking out for her t wo older daughters first.
4. The evil queen tells terrible stories of how her stepchild does not obey
the rules.
Time to Improve!
Revisit the paragraph you wrote on
page 40. Edit your text to make sure Remember!
you used pronouns and antecedents
correctly. If you can’t find any, An antecedent is a word or words that a
consider adding pronouns and pronoun refers to or replaces.
antecedents to vary your writing.
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Directions: Do you think fairy tales would or would not be better if they were told from the
villains’ perspectives? Include reasons to support your argument.
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1 Name:______________________________ Date:____________________
Directions: Read the report about an unsolved crime. Write notes in the chart below about why
each suspect may have committed the crime.
filming the final scenes of her latest movie, she invited two cast members
over to her home. One of the guests noticed Wilamena lying unconscious
on the floor around 1 a.m. This guest called the police and then disappeared
from the crime scene. The emergency phone operator said the voice
was deep and low. When the police arrived, they found no shoe prints or
fingerprints at the scene but only chocolate on the ground. To their surprise,
she suddenly woke up! Wilamena doesn’t remember what happened, but
Suspect 1: Chet was the stunt director for Wilamena’s latest film. He
loves race car driving barefoot. Chet’s left hand is deformed and he often
wears a glove to cover it. The police found out that Chet was mad because
in the movie. Wilamena could not have produced the movie without her.
Most of the time, Ginger snacks on sweets such as chocolate. The police
found out that Wilamena had yelled at Ginger for eating all her chocolate.
Claim Evidence
1. Ginger
committed
the crime.
2. Chet
committed
the crime.
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Directions: Read the paragraphs. Circle the claim in each one. Underline the parts of the
paragraphs that support the claims. Then, answer the question.
Unsolved Mysteries
Drafting
Paragraph 1
Suspect 1, Chet, committed the crime. He was clearly the one who called the police
since the operator said the voice was deep and low. Also, the police found out that Chet
was mad at Wilamena because she cut some of his greatest stunts from the movie. He
also wears a glove to cover his hand, which could be why there were no fingerprints at the
scene. There is no doubt that Chet committed the crime.
Paragraph 2
Suspect 2, Ginger, committed the crime. Although Wilamena could not have produced
this latest movie without Ginger, she was upset with Ginger and yelled at her in front of
everyone on set because she ate all of her chocolate. Lastly, chocolate was found on the
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Directions: Who do you think committed this crime? Use cursive to write your answer.
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Directions: Circle the possessive pronouns in the sentences. Then, explain how each pronoun
shows ownership.
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Example: Wilamena filmed her ideas. This shows that the ideas
belong to Wilamena.
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Directions: Use the symbol to replace the underlined nouns with possessive pronouns.
Her
1. Wilamena’s voice was loud when she embarrassed Ginger.
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2. Ginger’s specialt y was histor y.
5 Name:______________________________ Date:____________________
Directions: Reread the paragraphs. Write notes in the margins next to each one about what the
author could add in order to make them stronger.
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Paragraph 1
Suspect 1, Chet, committed the crime. He was clearly the one who
called the police since the operator said the voice was deep and low.
Also, the police found out that Chet was mad at Wilamena because
she cut some of his greatest stunts from the movie. He also wears a
glove to cover his hand, which could be why there were no fingerprints
Paragraph 2
not have produced this latest movie without Ginger, she was upset with
Ginger and yelled at her in front of everyone on set because she ate all
of her chocolate. Lastly, chocolate was found on the floor of the crime
Name:______________________________ Date:____________________ 1
Directions: Read the scenario about a supposed ghost story. Underline the relevant
information that could lead to solving the mystery. Then, form an argument to support
the idea that a ghost delivered the cupcake and an argument that does not support the idea.
Ghosts
Prewriting
It was the year that my pet dog, Rosebud, died in an accident.
pink. She told me to not worry about her. She had found peace,
hands and face were spattered with something sweet. Flour paw
after all.
2 Name:______________________________ Date:____________________
Directions: Do you think a ghost delivered the cupcake in the story on page 49? Use details to
support your argument. Use your notes to help you draft your argument paragraph.
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Directions: Use cursive to explain why you do or do not believe in ghosts.
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Directions: Circle the possessive pronouns in the story. Then, underline the objects that they
show ownership of in the sentences.
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Revising
It was the year that my pet dog, Rosebud, died in an accident. Instead of
sleepwalking, which used to be a problem for me, I began having nightmares. My
birthday was coming up and I dreaded the celebration because she would not be
there. The night before my birthday, I dreamed that she visited me in my room. She
brought a cupcake frosted with my favorite color, pink. She told me to not worry
about her. She had found peace, and she wanted me to enjoy my day because her
spirit would be with me celebrating the day. I woke suddenly and found that my
hands and face were spattered with something sweet. Flour paw prints covered the
floor. Then, I saw the cupcake on my table. It was the exact cupcake in my dream.
4 Name:______________________________ Date:____________________
Directions: Use the symbol to replace the underlined noun in each sentence with
a possessive pronoun. Then, explain why the pronoun is possessive.
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4. Ever yone wondered about the mess on Kara’s face, hands, and floor.
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Time to Improve!
Revisit the claims and evidence you
drafted on page 50. Edit your writing
to add in more possessive pronouns.
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Directions: Do you think a ghost delivered the cupcake in the story on page 49? Use details to
support your argument.
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1 Name:______________________________ Date:____________________
Directions: Below are facts about how royalty lived in medieval times. Use the facts to write two
lines of dialogue (one per person) between two people living in that situation. The first one is
done for you.
Prewriting
Living as Royalty
Noble children
were sent to be
apprentices at
the castle.
These children
worked as
pages, squires,
knights, and
maids of honor.
Ladies of the
castle spent
time managing
the workers of
the castle.
Once things
were taken care
of, the ladies
spent their
afternoon doing
needlework.
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Directions: Read the paragraph. Find places where dialogue could be added. Add notes
in the margins about what the dialogue should be.
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The shaking peasant approached the lord. The lord asked why he
was shaking. The peasant told him that he did not pay his tithe to the
church that year. The lord asked why he didn’t fulfill the obligations
“I knew my family would not have enough food to eat, so I did not
pay.” He continued to explain that he knew the church’s tithe barn was
overflowing. The lord reminded him that this debt would be written
Cursive Practice
Directions: Use cursive to write at least three sentences that tell how it would feel to be the
peasant in the above scenario.
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Directions: Circle the pronouns in the sentences. Then, write S for subjective or O for objective
before each sentence to show the case of the pronoun.
_____2. In the mor ning, he heard the repor t about the crops.
_____3. When the work was sloppy, the lady of the castle treated him harshly.
_____ 5. They retired for bed when the lord was tired.
Me, you, him, her, it, us, and them are object pronouns because
they receive the action of the verb.
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Directions: Use the symbol to replace the underlined parts in each sentence with a
pronoun. Then, write S for subjective or O for objective on the lines.
_____1 . The knight ser ved the lord of the castle by fighting.
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_____2. At just seven years old, the page had to wait tables and help the lord
dress for the day.
_____3. The castle ser ved as a school for the the knights.
_____ 4. After ser ving for seven years, squires became knights and lear ned how
to defend the lord.
5 Name:______________________________ Date:____________________
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peasant told him that he did not pay his tithe to the church that year. The lord asked
why he didn’t fulfill the obligations since it only required 10 percent of his crops. The
peasant replied, “I knew my family would not have enough food to eat, so I did not pay.”
He continued to explain that he knew the church’s tithe barn was overflowing. The lord
reminded him that this debt would be written down in the Domesday Book.
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Directions: Below are some facts about how peasants lived in medieval times. Use these facts
to write dialogue between two peasants living back then.
Living as Peasants
Prewriting
Peasants built
homes using
mud, straw, and
manure while
the lords lived
in castles.
The priest
required that the
peasants work
the church land
for free.
Peasant children
did not go to
school; instead
they worked in
the fields.
After paying
taxes to the lords
and church, the
peasants often
did not have
enough to feed
their families.
2 Name:______________________________ Date:____________________
Directions: Imagine you are a peasant living during the medieval time period. Describe one
day, including who you speak with and the events that take place. Use the facts and dialogue
from page 59 to help you draft your narrative paragraph.
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Directions: Use cursive to write a title for your narrative.
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Directions: Circle the correct pronoun in each sentence. Then, write S if it is subjective or O if it
is objective.
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_____2. The priest required they/them to work the church land for free.
Write two sentences using objective The subjective case is used when the
and subjective case pronouns. pronoun is the subject of a sentence.
The objective case is used when
the pronoun is the object of a verb
or preposition.
4 Name:______________________________ Date:____________________
Directions: Use the facts to write two sentences that have subjective case pronouns.
Then, write two sentences that have objective case pronouns.
Facts
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Children cleared stones off the land and chased birds away from the fields.
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Remember!
To tell the difference between a subjective
or objective pronoun, first decide if it acts
as the subject of the sentence. If so, it is a
subjective pronoun. If it receives the action
of the verb, then it is an objective pronoun.
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Directions: Imagine you are a peasant living during the medieval time period. Describe one
day, including whom you speak with and the events that take place.
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1 Name:______________________________ Date:____________________
Directions: Place check marks in the circles with information you could use in a narrative
paragraph about Renaissance artists. Give reasons for your answers under the information.
Prewriting
Renaissance Artists
Michelangelo remembered
the misery he felt painting the
Sistine Chapel.
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Directions: Read the paragraph. Find places where more detail and description could be
added. Add ideas in the margins about what the descriptions could be.
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It had been 20 years since Michelangelo had painted the ceiling. He
arrived back at the chapel and took in the beauty of its scenes. He saw
the creation of Adam, the creation of Eve, and the flood of Noah. He
remembered the misery he felt painting during those long four years.
painter!” Michelangelo wanted to finish the tomb. But the Pope is the
Now, Michelangelo stands and looks at a wall that will be the canvas
for his next painting, The Last Judgment. Now that he is older, he
Cursive Practice
Directions: Write a sentence in cursive that tells how Michelangelo felt about painting the ceiling
of the Sistine Chapel.
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3 Name:______________________________ Date:____________________
Directions: Rewrite the paragraph using varied sentence length. Use pages 64 and 65 to help
you add details.
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Leonardo da Vinci painted The Last Supper on the walls of a dining hall in a monastery.
Instead of painting on wet plaster, he painted directly on the wall, which caused the painting
to deteriorate quickly. Over the years, people have tried to restore the painting back to its
original condition. The last restoration took place in 1978 and took 20 years to complete.
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Directions: Use the symbol to add commas to set off the nonrestrictive information in the
sentences. Then, write your own sentence with nonrestrictive information.
1. Mona L isa Leonardo da Vinci’s most famous painting is housed in the Louvre
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in Paris, France.
2. Michelangelo wrote a poem about his work in the Sistine Chapel something
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chapel and took in the beauty of its scenes. He saw the creation of Adam, the creation of
Eve, and the flood of Noah. He remembered the misery he felt painting during those long
four years. How his body had hurt, and how much he complained!
When he first received the commission, he had been sculpting a tomb for the pope. “I’m
a sculptor not a painter!” Michelangelo wanted to finish the tomb. But the Pope is the Pope
Michelangelo stood there and looked at the wall that would be the canvas for his next
painting, The Last Judgement. Now that he was older, he wondered how long it would take
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Directions: Based on the topics in the chart, what are some ideas for narratives? Write your
ideas in the right column.
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Leonardo da Vinci developed
the idea of the submarine.
2 Name:______________________________ Date:____________________
Directions: Imagine you are living during the Renaissance. Write about a Renaissance
invention, and describe how it can change the way people live or learn. Then, use one of the
topics and your notes from page 69 to help you draft a narrative paragraph.
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Directions: Use cursive to write a sentence about which Renaissance invention you think is the
most important.
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Directions: Rewrite the paragraph using varied sentence lengths.
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years for monks to painstakingly copy each book by hand. Because
of this long process, books were expensive to buy for the common
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Directions: Use the symbol to add commas to set off the nonrestrictive information in the
sentences. Then, write your own sentence with nonrestrictive information.
1. The flush toilet invented by Sir John Harrington was created for Queen
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create the first printing press something that has changed book making
forever.
to study the heavens and wrote about his findings in his book,
Starry Messenger.
4. The dome of the cathedral a beautiful building in Italy was engineered by the
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Directions: Imagine you are living during the Renaissance. Write about a Renaissance
invention, and describe how it can change the way people live or learn.
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Directions: What questions would you ask the following people about their lives as pirates to
include in a narrative paragraph? Fill in the chart with your questions.
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Directions: Read the narrative paragraph about Mary Reed. Write notes in the margins about
where the author could include more details to make the paragraph more exciting.
But, she never really planned on being a pirate. After her husband
died, she joined the army and boarded a ship. When a pirate captured
her ship, he kept her as a crew member. After a while, she found that
she enjoyed the pirate life. From then on, she dressed as a man and
patrolled the waters of the Caribbean.
Remember!
When writing narrative paragraphs, focus on
one event. For example, instead of trying to
tell an entire story in a paragraph, only tell
one brief snapshot about the event.
Cursive Practice
Directions: Use cursive to write a sentence explaining what you would do if you were a pirate.
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3 Name:______________________________ Date:____________________
Directions: Read the sentences. Then, revise them to vary the sentence openings.
1. Blackbeard’s actual name was Edward Teach. Blackbeard was only a pirate for three
years but is probably the most famous pirate in history.
Revising
Pirates and Treasures
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2. Sir Francis Drake worked as a pirate against the Spanish ships. Drake was nicknamed the
Queen’s Pirate because he worked for Queen Elizabeth.
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3. William Kidd had some skirmishes at sea and was named a pirate. Kidd was put on trial
and executed for being a pirate.
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Examples
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Directions: Use the symbol to replace the underlined words with more descriptive actions.
1. During bat tle, Blackbeard scared his enemies by burning fuses in his beard
2. Instead of gold, Blackbeard found treasure such as barrels of sugar and cocoa.
3. Legends say that Blackbeard’s body went around the ship three times af ter
4. Some say that Blackbeard was the most successful pirate, but that is simply
not true.
5 Name:______________________________ Date:____________________
Directions: Revisit the narrative paragraph. Add details to the paragraph to make it more
exciting. Then, answer the question.
Publishing
Pirates and Treasures
Mary Read is one of the most famous female pirates of the 1700s. But, she never
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Directions: What questions would you ask the following people about their lives as explorers
to include in a narrative paragraph? Then, imagine you are an explorer and write notes about
adventures you want to embark on.
My Adventure
2 Name:______________________________ Date:____________________
Directions: Imagine you are an explorer. Draft a narrative that describes your adventure and
what you discovered. Use your notes from page 79 to help you draft your paragraph.
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Drafting
Adventures into the Unknown
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Directions: Use cursive to explain why you think going on an adventure is important.
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Directions: Read the sentences. Rewrite them using varied openings to make them
more interesting.
1. Christopher Columbus sailed across the ocean hoping to find the Far East. Columbus
reached North America instead.
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2. Ferdinand Magellan’s crew was the first to circumnavigate the earth. Magellan actually
died during the journey, but his crew sailed on.
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3. Amerigo Vespucci discovered South America on his journey. Vespucci was given the
honor of having the Americas named after him.
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Example
Captain Cook cured his crew of scurvy by giving them fresh fruit.
Out of concern for his men, Captain John Cook ordered them to
eat fresh fruit and ended up curing them of scurvy.
Time to Improve!
Revisit the paragraph you wrote on page 80 about an adventure into the unknown. Add varied
sentence openings to make your paragraph more interesting.
4 Name:______________________________ Date:____________________
Directions: The sentences are missing descriptive action words. Add them above the
symbols.
2. The queen explorers, and so she gave Columbus the money and three ships
3. Columbus where he landed was near India, so he called the natives Indians.
Time to Improve!
Revisit the paragraph you wrote on page 80 about an adventure into the unknown.
Edit your text to make sure you include descriptive action words. If you did not use
any descriptive action words, find places to add them.
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Directions: Imagine you are an explorer. Write a narrative that describes your adventure and
what you discovered.
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1 Name:______________________________ Date:____________________
Directions: Look at the pictures of the bridges. Then, answer the question.
Suspension Bridge
Building Bridges
Prewriting
Arch Bridge
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Directions: Read the informative/explanatory paragraph. Label each sentence as exclamatory
(E), interrogative (IN), imperative (IM), or declarative (D). The first one is done for you.
Building Bridges
Drafting
E What amazing structures bridges are! _____You may have noticed that bridges
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often look different from one another. _____Engineers build four main types of bridges: beam
bridges, truss bridges, arch bridges, and suspension bridges. _____They have a few things
to consider when deciding which type to build. _____What kinds of materials are available?
_____How long does the bridge need to be? _____The answers to these questions help
them decide on the shape, size, and type of bridge that they will build. _____The next time
you cross a bridge, pause for a moment and think about what went into building it.
Cursive Practice
Directions: Use cursive to write a sentence explaining why bridges are important.
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Remember!
Don’t go overboard when changing the
sentence structure. Change only a few
sentences to make your writing stronger.
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Directions: Some information is necessary to understand sentences. Use the symbol to add
correct punctuation and the symbol to correct the capitalization errors.
1. Most beam bridges are less than 250 feet (76 meters) long a beam bridge
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Editing
looks like a long, straight line the beam is heav y so it has to be a shor ter
2. The bridge that can span the far thest is the suspension bridge a suspension
3. The bridge with the most strength is the arch bridge arch bridges can carr y
the most weight because of the design of the arch long ago the Romans
4. Perhaps the most complex bridge is the truss bridge a truss bridge
5 Name:______________________________ Date:____________________
Bridges often look different from one another. Engineers build four main types of bridges:
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Publishing
beam bridges, truss bridges, arch bridges, and suspension bridges. They have a few things
to consider when deciding which type to build. They think about the materials that are
available. They think about how long the bridge needs to be. Answering these thoughts
helps them decide on the shape, size, and type of bridge that they will build. Bridges are
amazing structures.
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2. What advice would you give the author to improve the paragraph?
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Directions: Look at the pictures of different types of parachutes and read their descriptions.
Then, answer the questions.
Designing Parachutes
Prewriting
Cargo can be heavy, so a round parachute To keep from breaking, ribbon-ring
is used because the shape offers the parachutes have openings that allow air
most drag. to pass through.
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2 Name:______________________________ Date:____________________
Directions: Explain the differences between round, ribbon-ring, ram-air, and square parachutes.
Use your notes from page 89 to help you draft your informative/explanatory paragraph.
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Designing Parachutes
Drafting
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• have an introductory and a
concluding sentence
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• include details that support the
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Cursive Practice
Directions: Use cursive to write a sentence explaining why parachutes are important.
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Directions: Follow the directions to change the declarative sentences.
Designing Parachutes
Revising
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4 Name:______________________________ Date:____________________
Directions: Some information is necessary to understand the sentences. Use the symbol
to add correct punctuation and use the symbol to correct the capitalization errors.
2. Ram-air parachutes help control speed and direction so, this makes them
ideal for people needing to land in par ticular places and at controlled speeds
the force of the air does not break the ram-air parachute
3. Ribbon-ring parachutes have openings that allow air to pass through this
4. Cargo can be heav y so a round parachute is used because the shape of fers
the most drag this way the cargo does not drop at a high speed and can
land safely
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Directions: Explain the differences between round, ribbon-ring, ram-air, and square parachutes.
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Designing Parachutes
Publishing
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1 Name:______________________________ Date:____________________
Directions: Place check marks in the circles with ideas that you would include in an argument
paragraph about Groundhog Day.
Prewriting
Groundhog Day
Should We Celebrate
Groundhog Day?
it is a German tradition
about groundhogs and
that has been around for
the weather during
hundreds of years.
that time of year.
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Directions: Read the argument paragraph. Write notes in the margins about how the author
can make her argument stronger.
Groundhog Day
Drafting
Some people wonder if Groundhog Day is a holiday worth
and the spring equinox. In the 1700s, German settlers made their way
Cursive Practice
Directions: Use cursive to write a sentence explaining whether or not we should
celebrate Groundhog Day.
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3 Name:______________________________ Date:____________________
Directions: Read the claims. Think about how you can revise them to make them better.
Then, rewrite the updated versions.
tradition from settlers long ago and brings attention to the groundhog.
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2. I believe that some people say Groundhog Day should be celebrated as an official holiday
and others disagree.
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3. Groundhog Day is not an official holiday because it is not based on truth or science but
rather a tradition from long ago.
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Remember!
A claim is a statement that is argued and supported in an essay.
A claim:
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Directions: Read the paragraph. There are commas missing. Use the symbol to add them.
According to superstition the sun caused the groundhog to see his shadow and
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the shadow would frighten the groundhog back into hibernation. If it were cloudy
then the groundhog would not be frightened back into hibernation. Spring would
come early. Farmers depended on this information to plant crops. However the
groundhog was not always accurate in predicting the weather. This caused many
Examples
Introductory Phrase: In the 1700s, German settlers made their
way to Pennsylvania.
5 Name:______________________________ Date:____________________
Directions: Revisit the paragraph. Write notes about how to improve it on the lines below.
Publishing
Groundhog Day
Some people wonder if Groundhog Day is a holiday worth celebrating. In the 1700s,
German settlers made their way to Pennsylvania. They brought with them folklore
involving hibernating animals as a way to predict the weather for that year. According to
superstition, the sun caused the groundhog to see his shadow. The shadow would frighten
the groundhog back into hibernation. They interpreted this to mean the remainder of their
winter would be cold and stormy. On the other hand, if it were cloudy, the groundhog
would not be frightened back into hibernation. This meant that spring would come early.
By 1887, the local newspaper promoted the groundhog as the official weather forecaster.
Based on today’s records, scientists say that the groundhog is only 36 percent accurate in
predicting weather.
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Directions: Read the paragraph. Then, brainstorm at least three ideas to support each side
of the chart below.
during the Industrial Revolution, adjustments were needed for workers to work more hours.
Many countries began instituting daylight saving time as a way to get that extra hour in the
afternoon. More work meant a better economy. Also, people were exposed to more
sunlight, which meant a rise in vitamin D in their systems and time for more
exercise outdoors. However, some say that daylight saving time contributes
to more gasoline usage and pollution because people are out and about
2 Name:______________________________ Date:____________________
Directions: Do you think daylight saving time is necessary? Provide details to support
your argument. Use the information in the chart on page 99 to help you draft your
argument paragraph.
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Daylight Saving Time
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Directions: Use cursive to write one sentence that summarizes why you do or not think daylight
saving time is necessary.
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Directions: Explain why the simple sentences can be combined into compound sentences.
1. Some people argue that daylight saving time promotes better health. People get vitamin D
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2. The Industrial Revolution created a need for more workers. They instituted daylight saving
time to add an extra hour into the day.
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3. Some say that daylight saving time promotes more pollution. More people drive their cars
in the daylight than at nighttime.
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Remember!
To change a simple sentence into
a compound sentence, join two
sentences together using a comma
and a conjunction such as and,
because, or so.
4 Name:______________________________ Date:____________________
Directions: Decide if each claim below is well written. Use the symbol to delete the
unnecessary information from the claims that are not well written. If necessary, explain what
is wrong with the claims on the lines.
1. I think that daylight saving time should be mandated for all states and
Editing
Daylight Saving Time
territories because it would keep ever yone on the same schedule no mat ter
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impor tant to conser ving energy and does not add to people’s work day
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3. I feel that daylight saving time should not be used because it is not adhered
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4. Daylight saving time should be used because it has the potential to conser ve
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Directions: Do you think daylight saving time is necessary? Provide details to support
your argument.
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1 Name:______________________________ Date:____________________
Directions: Place check marks in the circles with ideas that should be included in an
informative/explanatory paragraph about the origin of a superhero. Give reasons next to each
circle you mark.
Prewriting
Superhero Origins
Most kids
Metal Man is a
select Metal
popular movie for
Man as a favorite
people today.
superhero.
Metal Man
Metal Man
Some say
was meant to
Metal Man is the
be a symbol of
strongest of all the
weapons of mass
superheroes.
destruction.
Although
Metal Man has Metal Man’s
no superpowers, armor is designed
he does have for protection.
his armor.
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Directions: Read the paragraph. Make notes in the margins about comparisons between
the two superheroes. Draw arrows in the paragraph to show these comparisons.
Superhero Origins
Drafting
Super Woman was created during World War II to fight the evil
powers. Back then, people were afraid of their war enemies, so she
gave people hope that she would defeat them. Later, she also fought
other villains. She was a symbol for the new kind of woman who would
rule the world. On the other hand, Wonderman came about during the
These villains were the same ones that the common man had to fight
back then.
Cursive Practice
Directions: Use cursive to write about the origin of your favorite superhero.
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3 Name:______________________________ Date:____________________
Directions: Read the sentences. Look for examples where two different words or phrases
mean the same thing. Then, rewrite the sentences using only one of the words or phrases.
1. Since the 1960s, Super Woman became a symbol of feminism and women’s rights as
she fought her villains.
Revising
Superhero Origins
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2. At first, Wonderman’s foes and enemies included crooked politicians, unfair city
government leaders, and slumlords that did not treat their tenants fairly.
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3. Insect Man fans felt they could relate to him because he had been bullied and pushed
around by others in his school before gaining the superpowers.
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4. World War II was a difficult time for many Americans, so Mr. America gave them hope and
promise that the war would be won through perseverance.
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Name:______________________________ Date:____________________ 4
Directions: Read the paragraph comparing two different superheroes. Then, use signal words
in the Signal Word Bank to write two sentences about the paragraph.
Superhero Origins
Editing
different difference but also similarly in contrast
same as as well as as opposed to on the other hand not only
Fans love Insect Man because people feel they can relate to him. When bitten by a
radioactive spider during a field trip, Insect Man gained amazing strength and powers.
He used powers to protect those who could not protect themselves. Mr. America
survived polio as a child, which left him very weak. He gained strength by taking a super
soldier serum. Insect Man was created in the early 1960s when people were afraid of
what radioactive materials and nuclear war could do to people. Mr. America was created
in WWII as a symbol of hope, courage, and ultimate patriotism. People were afraid
that the war would continue to drag on, so this superhero provided encouragement
to persevere.
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2. ________________________________________________________________________
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5 Name:______________________________ Date:____________________
Directions: Reread the paragraph. Then, explain why this is or is not a strong published piece
on the lines below.
Publishing
Superhero Origins
Super Woman was created during World War II to fight the evil powers. Back then,
people were afraid of their war enemies, so she gave people hope that she would defeat
them. Later, she also fought other villains. She was a symbol for the new kind of woman
who would rule the world. On the other hand, Wonderman came about during the Great
Depression. Similarly, his purpose was to give power to people who felt they were
powerless. At first, Wonderman fought common villains like powerful leaders, slumlords,
and crooked politicians. These villains were the same ones that the common man had
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Name:______________________________ Date:____________________ 1
Directions: Read the information about superheroes. Write reasons why each one would or
would not make a good choice for an informative/explanatory paragraph.
Superhero Powers
Prewriting
Super Woman—superhuman strength; flight; super-speed; super-stamina; super-agility;
proficient in hand-to-hand combat; ability to communicate with the animal kingdom; has
a potion that forces people to tell the truth; a pair of indestructible bracelets; a tiara that
serves as a projectile
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Insect Man—can cling to surfaces; superhuman strength; agile and acrobatic; web‑slinging
allows him to move quickly; insect sense that gives him an early warning detection
of danger
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Mr. America—does not have superhuman abilities; serum gives him the maximum human
potential in speed, strength, reflexes, endurance, durability, and agility; bench presses
1,100 pounds (499 kilograms), runs a mile in about a minute; immune to diseases; heals
faster than normal people
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2 Name:______________________________ Date:____________________
Directions: Explain how superpowers are beneficial to superheroes and everyday citizens.
Use your notes from page 109 to help you draft your informative/explanatory paragraph.
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Drafting
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Cursive Practice
Directions: Use cursive to write a superpower that you would like to have if you were
a superhero.
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Directions: Read the signal words and phrases. Create four sentences about superhero
powers. Include signal words or phrases in each one.
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Revising
Signal Words and Phrases
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Time to Improve!
Look back at the draft you wrote on
page 110. Look for places where
signal words or phrases can help
make your writing more clear.
4 Name:______________________________ Date:____________________
Directions: Read the sentences below and look for examples where two different words mean
the same thing. Use the symbol to cross out the repeated information. Then, explain why it
was deleted.
1. Super Woman’s potion forces people to be honest and tell the truth.
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3. Since possessing the skill and abilit y of web slinging, Insect Man can
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Directions: Explain how superpowers are beneficial to superheroes and everyday citizens.
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1 Name:______________________________ Date:____________________
Directions: Place check marks in the circles with ideas that should be included in an
informative/explanatory paragraph about black holes.
Prewriting
Black Holes
Black Holes
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Directions: Read the paragraph. There are many key vocabulary words that help explain black
holes. Underline the key vocabulary words that you see.
Black Holes
Drafting
Black holes are not empty spaces. Within a black hole, gravity is
gravity can squeeze a star that is 10 times more massive than the sun
into a space that is the size of a modern day city. A tiny black hole has
large black hole can have mass that is 20 times larger than the mass
found in the sun. A supermassive black hole is larger than the mass of
1 million suns.
Cursive Practice
Directions: Use cursive to write a sentence explaining what a black hole is.
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3 Name:______________________________ Date:____________________
Directions: Read each topic sentence. Write a concluding sentence to go with each one.
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Revising
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2. While black holes may look empty, they actually contain more mass than we can
even imagine.
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Directions: Look for nonrestrictive information in the sentences. Then, use the symbol
to add commas where necessary.
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Editing
2. A tiny black hole has the mass of a mountain a concept that seems amazing
to many people.
3. A ver y large black hole a fact that can be inconceivable for most people can
have mass that is 20 times larger than the mass found in the sun.
5. Gravit y pulls light into the middles of black holes so scientists cannot see
black holes.
Remember!
Nonrestrictive information can be set off with
commas. Removing the information does
not change the meaning of the sentence.
5 Name:______________________________ Date:____________________
Directions: Revisit the paragraph. Make notes in the margins of how you could make this a
better informative/explanatory paragraph. Then, rewrite the new and improved paragraph below.
Publishing
Black Holes
Black holes are not empty spaces. Within a black hole, gravity is
gravity can squeeze a star that is 10 times more massive than the sun
into a space that is the size of a modern day city. A tiny black hole has
large black hole can have mass that is 20 times larger than the mass
found in the sun. A supermassive black hole is larger than the mass of
1 million suns.
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Directions: Explain why each statement should or should not be included in an
informative/explanatory paragraph about space travel.
Space Travel
Prewriting
Space Travel Should this be included in an informative/explanatory
Topic paragraph? Why or why not?
NASA is planning
on taking humans
to the moon again
by the year 2020
in preparation for
travel to Mars.
At some point in
the future, humans
dream of traveling
to Mars, but know
they will be unable
to return back
to Earth.
NASA plans on
using the Orion
capsule for human
travel because it
is safer than the
shuttle used in
past years.
In movies, people
travel from planet
to planet in a
matter of hours.
2 Name:______________________________ Date:____________________
Directions: Explain some of the preparations NASA is making for future space travel.
Use the information from page 119 to help you draft your informative/explanatory paragraph.
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Drafting
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Cursive Practice
Directions: If you could travel anywhere in space, where would you go? Write your answer
in cursive.
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Directions: Read each topic sentence. Write a concluding sentence to go with each one.
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2. While it may seem impossible to live on the moon, scientists are already making plans for
humans to do just that.
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3. Space travel is something NASA is preparing for in our lifetime.
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Remember!
Strong paragraphs include a concluding sentence
that summarizes the main idea of the paragraph.
A concluding sentence uses the information from
the topic sentence. A concluding sentence tells the
reader that the paragraph is complete.
Time to Improve!
Look at the draft you wrote on page 120.
Reread your concluding sentence. Try to
revise it to make it stronger.
4 Name:______________________________ Date:____________________
Directions: Read the sentences and look for places where commas are needed to set off
nonrestrictive information. Use the symbol to add commas to the sentences.
1. NASA is planning on taking humans to the moon again by the year 2020 in
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preparation for travel to Mars something only the adventurous would do.
2. Humans the brave ones any way dream of traveling to Mars but know they will
3. Some people think space travel that is travel outside of our atmosphere is
4. NASA plans on using the Orion capsule a new t ype of spaceship for human
travel because it is safer than the shut tle used in past years.
5. In the movies, people travel from planet to planet in a mat ter of hours which
Remember!
Nonrestrictive information can be set off with
commas. Removing the information does
not change the meaning of the sentence.
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Directions: Explain some of the preparations NASA is making for future space travel.
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Directions: Read the planning notes and the short script for a play. Make notes about how well
the script follows the planning notes in the margins of the script.
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Live Theater Scripts
Planning Notes
Cinderella: Oh, that. No, darling, I’m quite okay. It’s just my nerves.
Prince: But we just started dancing. I don’t want to let you out of my
the buffet.
Prince: Don’t worry; I have a sickness bag that you can use. I use
Cinderella: Thank goodness! I’m not sure I would make it to the ladies’
to dancing.
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Directions: Use the context clues to explain what the underlined words mean.
Prince Charming: I always have a sickness bag for when my stomach gets upset. I use
them when I go on long rides into the woods.
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Cinderella: I frequently travel into the woods to get away from my dysfunctional family. I
often wonder if there are any families who act normal.
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Prince Charming: Perhaps if you loosen the corset around your waist your stomach might
feel better. It is a shame that women have to wear these tight things.
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Directions: Think of a title for the narrative script and write it in cursive.
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Directions: Read the sentences and look for examples where two different words mean the
same thing. Explain why some of the words should be taken out.
1. Cinderella: The very mention of the buffet makes me feel queasy and nauseated.
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2. Prince Charming: Don’t worry; I’ll call a lady’s maid or servant to help you.
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3. Cinderella: Please hurry and act quickly. I don’t think I can last much longer.
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4. Prince Charming: They are on their way and should be here momentarily or shortly.
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Directions: Read the sentences. Correct the capitalization errors using the symbol to show
a word should be capitalized or the symbol to show a word should be lowercase.
prince Charming.
4. Even with cinderella being the main character, the Audience really knows
5. Fair y godmother saves the day by giving Cinderella a dress and a way
to the ball.
Remember!
Proper nouns should always be
capitalized, while general nouns
should always be lowercase.
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Cinderella: Oh, that. No, darling, I’m quite okay. It’s just my nerves.
Cinderella: Do you know where the closest ladies’ room is located? I think I need to take
a short break.
Prince: But we just started dancing our very first dance. I don’t want to let you out of
my sight. Was that your stomach rumbling?
Cinderella: I’m not used to eating so much food. I think I overdid it at the buffet.
Prince: Don’t worry; I have a sickness bag that you can use. I use them when I go on
long rides into the woods.
Cinderella: Thank goodness! I’m not sure I would make it to the ladies’ room in time. Give
me just a minute, and we can get back to dancing.
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Directions: Complete the chart with ideas to include in a television script. Think about how
each section benefits a scripted narrative.
2 Name:______________________________ Date:____________________
Directions: Draft a script for a scene in a new television show. Be sure to focus on one
event and include multiple characters. Use your ideas from page 129 to help you draft your
narrative script.
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Directions: Use cursive to write a title for your television show.
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Directions: Read the sentences. Look for examples where two different words mean the same
thing. Explain why some information should be deleted.
1. Detective: The very mention of this criminal getting away makes me feel angry and mad.
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2. Mother: Don’t worry; I’ll make sure the worker or laborer is around to feed the cat.
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3. Brother: I’m feeling weak and frail. Please hurry up and call the doctor.
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Time to Improve!
Go back to your television script on
page 130. Replace at least four
words in the script with stronger or
more interesting ones.
4 Name:______________________________ Date:____________________
Directions: Read the sentences. Use the or symbols to correct the capitalization errors.
people laugh.
2. Television Scripts are similar to theater scripts in that they both tell the
3. It is impor tant that Scripts tell the stor yline in words and actions.
describe something.
5. Car toons are Television Shows that can be designed for both children and
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Directions: Write a script for a scene in a new television show. Be sure to focus on one event
and include multiple characters.
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Directions: Read the planning notes for a comic strip. Then, answer the question.
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Comic Strips
Planning Notes
Create a conflict. (The worker wants a promotion, but his boss does not think he is ready.)
Plan a place to start or a beginning. (The boss tells his worker what he thinks.)
What this is intended to show. (If you work hard, you will succeed.)
In this frame, the boss will tell the worker In this frame, the worker will try to prove
that he is not ready to be promoted like the himself by turning in what he thinks is a
worker wants. well‑written report. The boss will reject it.
The image should show the boss yelling The image should show that the boss is
at the worker. The worker should look sad unhappy. The boss should be giving the
and defeated. poorly-written report back to the worker.
In this frame, the worker will prove he In this frame, the worker will get his
deserves the promotion. promotion.
The image should represent the worker The image should show the boss shaking
doing something worthy of getting the the worker’s hand.
promotion, such as presenting growth for
the company.
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Directions: Read the comic strip about a worker who thinks he deserves a promotion.
Then, answer the question.
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I know that you want the
promotion, but you’re not
good enough to get it. This report is terrible!
I am going to work very Rewrite it!
hard and prove to you that Grrrr . . . I worked so
I deserve a promotion! hard on that paper.
Congratulations! Looks
After I rewrote that report,
I’m happy and like you’re good enough I knew that if I
I made lots of money
impressed. for the promotion after all. worked hard enough,
for this company!
I would get it!
1. How does the comic strip portray the argument getting solved?
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Directions: Create names for the characters in the comic strip. Use cursive to write them.
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3 Name:______________________________ Date:____________________
Directions: Read the sentences. Underline examples of figurative language. Label each one
using the information in the chart.
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Directions: Read the sentences. Some of the commas are used incorrectly. Use the
symbol to delete commas to make the sentences correct.
1. Comic strips, and movie reviews are of ten opinion pieces found
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in newspapers.
3. Writers of ten find it easier to express opinions, and thoughts using comic
4. Since most comic strips are made up of dialogue, it is not necessar y to use
comic strips.
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2. Does the author make his argument clear, or could the author state it more
clearly? Explain.
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DAY
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Directions: Read the statements about movie reviews. Write T if the statement is true and
F is the statement is false. Then, give reasons for your answers on the lines.
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2 Name:______________________________ Date:____________________
Directions: Think about a movie you have seen. Draft a review for it. Be sure to state your
opinion of the movie and provide evidence to support your opinion. Use the information from
page 139 to help you draft your argument paragraph.
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A strong argument paragraph should:
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Cursive Practice
Directions: Use cursive to write a sentence explaining what a movie reviewer could say to
persuade you to see a movie.
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Directions: Read the sentences. Underline examples of figurative language. Label each one
using the information at the bottom of the page.
1. Movies are time outs in a busy world. They make us stop and smell the roses every once
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in a while.
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2. Movies mostly make me mad, but only because I know they are not true stories.
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Remember!
Time to Improve! A hyperbole is exaggerating the truth.
Go back to the draft you wrote A metaphor compares two unlike things.
on page 140. Add in at least two
different kinds of figurative language. A simile compares two unlike things using
the words like or as.
4 Name:______________________________ Date:____________________
Directions: The sentences below contain incorrect punctuation. Correct the punctuation errors
using the symbol.
1. Movie reviews have both summaries, and opinions of the movie being reviewed.
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2. People of ten consult movie reviews, either online, or in print, when deciding
to see a movie.
3. Responsible movie reviewers always give reasons for their opinions, and
4. A helpful tip for writers is to use figurative language to make the movie
5. Movie reviews are somewhat similar to comic strips in that they both express
Remember!
Commas are used when listing more
than two items or when setting
off nonrestrictive information in
a sentence.
Time to Improve!
Revisit the movie review you wrote on page 140.
Edit your text to make sure you used commas
appropriately. If you find any comma errors, use
the correct editing mark to delete them from
your paragraph.
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Directions: Think about a movie you have seen. Write a review for it. Be sure to state your
opinion of the movie and provide evidence to support your opinion.
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1 Name:______________________________ Date:____________________
Directions: Think about how narrative texts are different from informative/explanatory texts.
Then, place check marks in the circles with ideas that describe only narrative texts.
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can give facts can tell made‑up can have creatures that
about real stories about go on quests
creatures creatures
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Directions: Read the paragraph. Find at least three places where more details are needed to
make the story more exciting. Underline these areas and make notes in the margins of what you
might add to the story.
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The wizard hung his head in
Cursive Practice
Directions: Use cursive to write at least two sentences that tell how you would feel if you
experienced losing your magic lamp like the wizard does.
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3 Name:______________________________ Date:____________________
Directions: What details could you add to the text below to make the wizard an ideal character
for a novel? Write your revisions to this text on the lines below.
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Fantasy Creatures
The wizard hung his head in defeat. He had lost his magic. What would he do? Most
importantly, how would he retrieve the magic lamp and return it to the city to make it whole
again? The wizard knew he had to tell his followers the truth, but could they be trusted with
this important and embarrassing information? All he did know was that the dragon could
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Directions: Read the sentences. The underlined pronouns are incorrect. Use the symbol
to delete them. Then, write the correct word above it.
1. If the dragon really wants to stop the wizard and his elves, they can burn the
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forest down with one breath of fire.
2. Most people believe that dragons are fierce, but what would happen in a
3. When one goes on a serious quest, you has to be ready for hardship and
4. The elves ran out of bows and had to rever t to karate to protect
5. When the wizard finally found the magic lamp, they had to be careful not to
5 Name:______________________________ Date:____________________
Directions: Read the paragraph. Based on what you learned this week, add details on the lines
provided to make the story more exciting.
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importantly, how would he retrieve the magic lamp and return it to the city to make it whole
again? _________________________________________________________________
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The wizard knew he had to tell his followers the truth, but could they be trusted with this
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find out!
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Directions: Read the titles. Write reasons why each one would or would not make a good title
for a narrative fantasy.
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Does Not Make a Good Title
2 Name:______________________________ Date:____________________
Directions: Imagine that you are a wizard about to embark on a daring adventure. Describe the
events of your journey, including what happens and whom you meet along the way. Use your
notes from page 149 to help you draft your narrative paragraph.
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Directions: Use cursive to write at least two sentences summarizing your fantasy story.
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DAY
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Directions: Revise the ideas presented in the sentences by adding more details about the
quest. Write your revisions on the lines below.
1. Elvin knew he would have to climb the tall mountain to reach his one true love.
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2. The dwarves feared the dragon, and that was the one they would need to defeat to claim
their gold.
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3. The boy knew the spider was waiting in the forest that surrounded the castle.
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4 Name:______________________________ Date:____________________
Directions: Read the paragraph. It is missing pronouns. Use the symbol to add
the pronouns.
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The dragon was exhausted as looked back at the burning forest. He had no breath
left and therefore no fire or smoke when suddenly saw the wizard and his entourage
hiding behind the last tree standing. How did escape my fury? he questioned.
Then, ran for the mountain expecting to be burned in the process, but the dragon
Revisit the fantasy story you wrote on page 150. Inappropriate pronoun shifts happen
Edit your text to make sure you used pronouns when a sentence shifts between first
appropriately. If there are any inappropriate person (I, we) to second person (you)
pronoun shifts, use editing marks to replace or third person (he, she, they). Be sure
them with the correct pronouns. not to include inappropriate pronoun
shifts in your writing!
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Directions: Imagine that you are a wizard about to embark on a daring adventure. Describe the
events of your journey, including what happens and whom you meet along the way.
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1 Name:______________________________ Date:____________________
Directions: Place check marks in the circles with ideas that you would include in an argument
paragraph about rights and equality.
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Rights and Equality
Studying equal
Gaining the right
rights is something
to vote was a step
that should be left up
forward in equal rights
to lawmakers not the
for women.
general public.
Because of
Today, many
the Civil Rights
believe that people
Movement, schools
should get equal
became desegregated Rights and Equality pay for equal work,
and African Americans
regardless if they are
learned alongside
male or female.
white children.
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Directions: Read the paragraph. What evidence does the author use to make an argument that
people should have equal rights? Underline that information, and make notes in the margins
about the underlined parts.
people around the world are still fighting for equal rights. For example,
in some parts of the world girls are not allowed to attend school
different reasons. First, when families have to pay for education, they
send their sons. The daughters stay home to help their mothers run
religious beliefs. In societies like these, girls are fighting for the right
Girls that do attend school and learn to write, read, and count may
eventually have children of their own. They will educate their families,
too. In doing so, they will raise the economy of the entire country.
Cursive Practice
Directions: Use cursive to write a sentence explaining why equal rights are important.
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3 Name:______________________________ Date:____________________
Directions: Decide whether or not each claim is well written. Then, edit the claims for accuracy
where needed.
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2. Some people say that equal rights is an important topic, while others disagree.
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3. I think that daughters stay home to help their mothers because of unequal rights.
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Remember!
A claim is a statement that is argued and
supported. Begin with explaining the subject.
Then, add what you think about it. Finally, give
a few reasons for your viewpoint.
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Directions: Underline the run-on sentences in the paragraph. Use the symbol to add
commas and conjunctions to make the compound sentence correct.
Some people think that equal rights were settled long ago people around the world
are still fighting for equal rights. For example, in some parts of the world girls are not
allowed to attend school because they are female. This generally happens because
of a few different reasons. First, when families have to pay for education, they send
their sons the daughters stay home to help their mothers run the family. Second, not
educating girls is sometimes tied to their religious beliefs. In societies like these, girls
are fighting for the right to an equal education. Studies show that without an education,
they are living with an increased risk of dying young or living in poverty. Girls that do
attend school and learn to write, read, and count may eventually have children of their
own they will educate their families, too. In doing so, they will raise the economy of the
entire country.
5 Name:______________________________ Date:____________________
Directions: Revisit the paragraph. On the lines below, write suggestions to the author for how
she could improve it.
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Some people think that equal rights were settled long ago. However,
people around the world are still fighting for equal rights. For example,
in some parts of the world girls are not allowed to attend school
they send their sons. The daughters stay home to help their mothers
run the family. Second, not educating girls is sometimes tied to their
religious beliefs. In societies like these, girls are fighting for the right to
that do attend school to learn to write, read, and count may eventually
have children of their own. They will educate their families, too. In
doing so, they will raise the economy of the entire country.
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This week I learned:
• how to vary sentences by
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Directions: How does diversity benefit the classroom? Use the outline to write notes and
ideas to support your argument.
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2 Name:______________________________ Date:____________________
Directions: Do you think diversity is important in a classroom? Draft your argument, and
include details to support your argument. Use your notes from page 159 to help you draft
your paragraph.
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Cursive Practice
Directions: Use cursive to write an introductory sentence to a paragraph about the argument
you outlined.
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DAY
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Directions: Revise each claim to make it stronger.
1. I think that diversity is a good thing because it offers people different points of views.
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Directions: Use the symbol to add the missing conjunctions in the compound sentences.
happened to them at some point in their lives af fects how they view
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the world.
2. Other workers who are doing the same job are being paid more money
because of their skin colors, this experience will most likely af fect how this
3. This experience will most likely af fect how this person feels about the topic
of equal pay, other people, who have never had this experience, can learn
Time to Improve!
Look back at your draft on page 160.
Look for compound sentences, and
make sure they use commas and
conjunctions correctly.
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Directions: Do you think diversity is important in a classroom? Write your argument, and
include details to support your argument.
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1 Name:______________________________ Date:____________________
Directions: Place check marks in the circles with ideas that might be found in an
informative/explanatory paragraph about the sport of lacrosse.
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Lacrosse
Lacrosse is my
favorite field sport
The object of the game is on two feet.
to advance the ball into the
goal guarded by the goalie.
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Directions: Read the paragraph. Circle the main topics, and underline the supporting facts
and examples.
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Have you ever thought of playing a game that combines the rules
hockey, and soccer. American Indians, the first to play lacrosse, played
preparation for war. About 300 years ago, the Iroquois first introduced
lacrosse to Europeans. It is played on a field with sticks that have
baskets for holding the ball and other protective gear such as pads,
helmets, and goggles. Players take their positions on the field and the
ball is tossed up. The object of the game is to advance the ball into the
goal, which is guarded by the goalie. The ball advances down the field
when players throw and catch it using their sticks. There are different
rules for men’s and women’s lacrosse, with men’s lacrosse being
more physical.
Cursive Practice
Directions: Use cursive to write the main idea of the paragraph.
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2. This paragraph will talk about lacrosse, a sport that combines rules from basketball,
soccer, and hockey.
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Directions: Use the symbol to add commas to set apart the nonrestrictive information in
each sentence.
1. The game of lacrosse the fastest growing spor t in the United States is played
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with sticks and a ball.
2. Players advance the ball which is small and hard down the field by throwing
3. American Indians the first to play lacrosse played to set tle disputes, for
4. There are dif ferent rules for men’s and women’s lacrosse with men’s
Remember!
Commas can be added to set apart
nonrestrictive information in a
sentence.
5 Name:______________________________ Date:____________________
Have you ever thought of playing a game that combines the rules from several different
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sports? Lacrosse, one of the fastest growing sports today, is a sport that combines many
rules from basketball, hockey, and soccer. American Indians, the first to play lacrosse,
played to settle disputes, for spiritual reasons, to heal illnesses, and as a preparation for
war. About 300 years ago, the Iroquois first introduced lacrosse to Europeans. It is played
on a field with sticks that have baskets for holding the ball and other protective gear such
as pads, helmets, and goggles. Players take their positions on the field and the ball is
tossed up. The object of the game is to advance the ball into the goal, which is guarded by
the goalie. The ball advances down the field when players throw and catch it using their
sticks. There are different rules for men’s and women’s lacrosse, with men’s lacrosse being
more physical.
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2. What advice would you give the author to improve the paragraph?
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Directions: Read the rugby rules. Then, write what is unusual or interesting about this sport
next to each rule.
Rugby
Prewriting
The game of rugby is called a match.
2 Name:______________________________ Date:____________________
Directions: Explain how the game of rugby is played. Include details to make it easy to
understand. Use the rugby rules from page 169 to help you draft your informative/explanatory
paragraph.
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A strong informative/explanatory
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Cursive Practice
Directions: Use cursive to write two new rules you might add to the game of rugby.
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Directions: Explain why the sentences are or are not strong introductions.
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2. This paragraph will talk about rugby, a sport that is similar to football and soccer.
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3. Rugby is an interesting and fun sport to play.
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4. If you have ever wanted to play an aggressive sport, rugby might be the sport for you!
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Time to Improve!
Go back to the informative/explanatory
piece you wrote about rugby. Revise your
introductory sentence to make sure that it
grabs the attention of the reader.
4 Name:______________________________ Date:____________________
Directions: Use the symbol to add commas to set apart the nonrestrictive information in
each sentence.
1. The game of rugby one of the most aggressive spor ts today is played on a
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2. Players advance the ball down the field by kicking it and running with it but
3. A try one way to score a point is when a player takes the ball to the goal and
4. A goal another way to score a point is when the player kicks the ball inside
5. The object of the game which is a dif ficult one to do is to score more points
Time to Improve!
Remember!
Go back to the piece you wrote on page
170 about rugby. Edit your text to set off Nonrestrictive information is information
nonrestrictive information with commas. If that would not change the meaning of the
you did not use nonrestrictive information, sentence if it were deleted.
find places to add some to your paragraph.
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Directions: Explain how the game of rugby is played. Include details to make it easy
to understand.
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1 Name:______________________________ Date:____________________
Directions: Place check marks in the circles with ideas that could be used in an informative/
explanatory paragraph about pets.
Prewriting
Domestic Pets
Every family
should have a pet.
Pets such as cats
need attention, love,
food, and shelter.
Pets
Name:______________________________ Date:____________________ 2
Directions: Identify whether the sentences in the paragraph are declarative (D), exclamatory
(E), imperative (IM), or interrogative (IN).
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_____Have you ever thought of the benefits of owning a pet? _____Studies show
that pets can improve the health and well-being of people. _____For example,
research shows that children who live in homes with cats and dogs have fewer
they grow older. _____Pets have shown to reduce blood pressure in older adults.
_____Pets can even reduce anxiety! _____So, before you take medicine for a health
problem, think about getting a pet first.
Remember!
Declarative sentences state facts or
arguments and end with periods.
Cursive Practice
Directions: Use cursive to write a sentence explaining why owning pets is beneficial for people.
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3 Name:______________________________ Date:____________________
Directions: Each sentence below has nonrestrictive information that should be set off with
commas. Add in the commas to each sentence to set off this information.
own pets.
2. Some people such as older generations who live alone own pets because
they want companionship.
3. While some people get their pets from breeders and stores, others go to
shelters places where people can adopt pets to find the newest members
of their households.
4. Owning pets something that t wo out of three families do has been proven
to of fer health benefits like lowered blood pressure.
Remember!
Commas can be used
to add nonrestrictive
information to a sentence.
Name:______________________________ Date:____________________ 4
Directions: The sentences contain incorrect punctuation. Correct the punctuation errors using
the symbol to show that they do not belong in the sentence.
1. Many people enjoy pets, because pets do not judge them based on
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appearance, or social status.
2. Pets do not care whether people are beautiful, or ugly; they simply are loyal
to their owners.
3. Since fish can have a calming ef fect on people, many doctors have large fish
4. Because pets depend on their owners for food, and shelter, many parents
5. Animals, such as dogs, and horses, can help their owners get more exercise,
Remember!
Commas are not necessary when
only listing two things. When listing
three or more things, use commas to
separate the words or phrases.
5 Name:______________________________ Date:____________________
Directions: Revisit the paragraph. On the lines, write suggestions for the author about how she
can imporve it.
Publishing
Domestic Pets
show that pets can improve the health and well-being of people. For
example, research shows that children who live in homes with cats
have higher immune systems as they grow older. Pets have shown to
reduce blood pressure in older adults. Pets can even reduce anxiety!
So, before you take medicine for a health problem, think about getting a
pet first.
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Name:______________________________ Date:____________________ 1
Directions: Read the facts about exotic pets. Then, explain why each one may or may not be
the ideal pet for you.
Exotic Pets
Prewriting
Flying Squirrel
nocturnal animal
bonds easily with owner
loves sleeping in pouches
uses a gliding membrane to fly in a
downward direction
needs room to run and jump
diet of nuts, seeds, mealworms, moths
Bearded Dragon
easy to tame
very social and likes to hang out on
owner’s shoulders
grows to about two feet (61 centimeters)
has strict feeding habits
needs an environment with the right
humidity, warmth, coolness, and UV light
can live 10–20 years
needs a 55 gallon (208 liter) tank
Tarantula
needs little space
can live 30 years
too much handling can cause it stress
venomous bite but is comparable to a
wasp sting
can release tiny hairs that can irritate
human skin
not social with other animals
2 Name:______________________________ Date:____________________
Directions: Choose an exotic pet. Then, draft a paragraph explaining the characteristics of that
animal. Use your notes from page 179 to help you draft your informative/explanatory paragraph.
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paragraph includes:
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• an introductory and a concluding
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• details that support the main idea
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• complete sentences
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Cursive Practice
Directions: Use cursive to write why an exotic animal makes a good pet.
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Directions: Read the sentences. Label each sentence as R for restrictive or N for nonrestrictive.
Then, create two of your own sentences. Have one sentence include restrictive information and
the other sentence include nonrestrictive information.
__ �� 1. Even though tarantulas have venomous bites, something comparable to a wasp sting,
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many people still choose to own them as pets.
_____2. The bearded dragon, which is very social and likes to hang out on its owners’
shoulders, can live anywhere from 10 to 20 years.
_____3. The flying squirrel, originally a nocturnal animal, can adapt to being awake during the
day to socialize with its owners.
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Time to Improve!
Go back to the paragraph you wrote about
owning an exotic pet on page 180. Revise at
least two sentences to include commas and
nonrestrictive information.
4 Name:______________________________ Date:____________________
Directions: The sentences contain incorrect punctuation. Use the symbol to correct the
punctuation errors.
2. Bearded dragons need environments with just the right temperatures, and
UV lights.
3. For someone wanting a pet to live a long time, tarantulas can be the ideal
4. Owners of tarantulas should avoid touching them too of ten, because too
5. Exotic pets are not for ever yone; but they can make great pets for some
Time to Improve!
Look back at the draft you wrote on page 180.
Edit your text to make sure you used punctuation
marks appropriately. Use editing marks to make
any necessary corrections.
Name:______________________________ Date:____________________ 5
Directions: Choose an exotic pet. Then, write a paragraph explaining the characteristics of
that animal.
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1 Name:______________________________ Date:____________________
Directions: Explain whether or not each idea is appropriate for an argument paragraph.
Prewriting
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Directions: Read the paragraph. What evidence does the author use to make a claim that
eating healthy is important for our bodies? Underline that information, and make notes in the
margins about the underlined parts.
Eating
Drafting
Some people might doubt the importance of eating healthy. But the
latest research seems to prove that good nutrients affect our brains,
movement, and bodies. For example, too much sugar interferes with
our ability to concentrate. We get distracted easily and tire out more if
we consume too much sugar. But sugar definitely makes things taste
yummy. If we eat more fruits and vegetables, our blood pressure may
But it’s best to stick to a nutritious diet if we want our brains and bodies
to stay healthy.
Cursive Practice
Directions: Use cursive to write one more reason why eating healthy is good for our bodies.
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3 Name:______________________________ Date:____________________
Directions: Decide whether or not the claims are well written. Then, revise the sentences to
make them better.
1. I think that eating healthy should be important to us because it helps our brains,
movement, and bodies.
Revising
Eating
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2. Some people say that eating healthy should be a priority in our homes, and others
disagree, saying that the public is making too big a fuss about it.
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3. Eating healthy is important because it improves our brain function, movement ability, and
the overall health of our bodies.
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4. I feel that eating healthy is a good thing to do because it makes us feel better.
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Remember!
A claim is a statement that is argued and supported
in writing. Begin with the subject. Then, add what
you think about it. Finally, give a few reasons for
your viewpoint.
Name:______________________________ Date:____________________ 4
Directions: Revise the two underlined sentences into compound sentences. Use the symbol
to insert a comma before each conjunction. Then, rewrite the sentences on the lines below.
Eating
Editing
Some people might doubt the importance of eating healthy. But the latest
research seems to prove that good nutrients affect our brains, movement, and
bodies. For example, too much sugar interferes with our ability to concentrate. We
get distracted easily and tire out more if we consume too much sugar. But sugar
definitely makes things taste yummy. Studies show that if we eat more fruits and
vegetables, our blood pressure may be lower. Every now and then, it might be okay
to enjoy a cupcake. But it’s best to stick to a nutritious diet if we want our brains
1. _____________________________________________________________________
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2. _____________________________________________________________________
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Remember!
To change a simple sentence into a compound sentence, join two
sentences together using a comma and a conjunction. This helps
to vary the length and structure of sentences within a paragraph.
It also makes the paragraph more interesting for readers.
5 Name:______________________________ Date:____________________
Some people might doubt the importance of eating healthy diets. But the latest
Publishing
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research seems to prove that good nutrients affect our brains, movement, and
bodies. For example, too much sugar interferes with our ability to concentrate. We
get distracted easily and tire out more if we consume too much sugar. But sugar
definitely makes things taste yummy. If we eat more fruits and vegetables, our blood
pressure may be lower. Every now and then, it might be okay to enjoy a cupcake.
But it’s best to stick to a nutritious diet if we want our brains and body to stay healthy.
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Name:______________________________ Date:____________________ 1
Directions: Review the information in the paragraph about how exercise benefits students.
Then, write a claim that explains your opinion using the following outline.
Exercising
Prewriting
Doctors and researchers recommend that students strive to get exercise every day.
Studies show that students who exercise regularly have stronger muscles and bones.
Students who exercise regularly tend to sleep better at night, too. They also can handle
emotional challenges better than their peers who do not exercise. In fact, a recent study
showed that students who exercise do better on creativity tests than those who do not
regularly exercise. Some form of exercise each day will help students to perform their very
best both in and outside of school.
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2 Name:______________________________ Date:____________________
Directions: Some people think exercising is a good thing, while others think it is not a good
thing. Explain which side you support and why. Use the information from page 189 to help
you draft your argument paragraph.
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Drafting
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Remember!
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A strong argument paragraph includes:
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• an introductory sentence stating
_________________________________ your claim
Cursive Practice
Directions: Use cursive to write a sentence about your favorite way to exercise.
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Week 36
DAY
Name:______________________________ Date:____________________ 3
Directions: Change the simple sentences into compound sentences. Make sure to add
commas and conjunctions.
1. Studies show that students who exercise are better problem solvers. If you want to think
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more creatively, you need to exercise.
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2. Exercising helps students develop stronger bones. Students should strive to get more
exercise every day.
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3. Doctors worry about students’ health. More and more students spend time inside playing
video games instead of playing sports outdoors.
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Time to Improve!
Go back to the paragraph you wrote on page 190 about
how exercise can benefit students. Revise your paragraph
to include both simple and compound sentences.
4 Name:______________________________ Date:____________________
Directions: Correct the punctuation errors using the symbol. Then, decide if each claim
below is a well-written claim or not.
1. I think that exercise helps students, because studies show it promotes bet ter
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3. I feel that exercise is impor tant because it promotes bet ter bone, and muscle
grow th in students.
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4. Students should strive to get more exercise, because studies show there are
great benefits, to their bodies, minds, and habits.
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Name:______________________________ Date:____________________ 5
Directions: Some people think exercising is a good thing, while others think it is not a good
thing. Explain which side you support and why.
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Week 1: Places I’ve Been Adventures are This is not a good title for
Always Fun for a narrative because it is an
Day 1 (page 14) Everyone argument-based title and would
Checked circles: be better suited for argument
can tell stories about going on cruises writing.
can have characters that go to the mountains
The Day We This is a good title for a
can include real or imagined travel to new places Ended Up In narrative because it prepares
can have sequences of events that tell about adventures Outer Space the reader to hear the story of
can include novels about sailing on oceans what happens.
can be short stories about going to Grandma’s house The Reasons Our This is not a good title for
can have beginnings, middles, and ends to adventures Cruise Line is the a narrative because it is an
can have settings to show where adventures take place Best argument-based title and would
be better suited for argument
Day 2 (page 15)
writing.
Student answers will vary, but may include:
The first place we stopped for gas was the gas station. How to Plan the This is not a good title for a
That was bad news because all the snacks in our car were Most Efficient narrative because it is a how-to
ruined when my little brother spilled his milk. Camping Trip for title and would be better suited
Your Family for informative/explanatory
Then, the worst thing happened, but I won’t talk about it
writing.
now.
Day 3 (page 16) He Never Believed This is a good title for a
He Would See the narrative because it prepares
The sentences should be in the following order: 1) When
Ocean the reader to hear the story of
she pulled on the cord, the balloon began to rise far into
what happens.
the sky. 2) At first, the thin air took her breath away.
3) But then, her lungs grew accustomed to the altitude. The Story of This is a good title for a
4) Farther and farther she flew until she couldn’t see her the Rescue Boat narrative because it prepares
village anymore. 5) Only then did it dawn on her that she Adventure the reader to hear the story of
might not be able to find her way back to the village. what happens.
Day 4 (page 17) Day 4 (page 22)
1. If a student really wants to have fun, he or she can
go to the backyard for an afternoon adventure. I/we, I/we, I/we, my/our, my/our, I/we, I/we, I/we,
2. Most students enjoy flying on planes instead of me/us, me, I/we
driving to the mountains because it takes too long Day 5 (page 23)
for them to reach their final destinations.
See Narrative Writing Rubric on page 208.
3. Whenever one spends time in the rainforest,
one has to be ready for the rain showers at any
moment.
4. The train zoomed past them so fast that their
tickets blew from their hands.
5. When Emily went to the secret garden, she had to
be careful of the poisonous flowers.
is relevant to the topic. relevant to the topic. is not fully relevant to the topic.
Points 5 4 3 2 1 0
Uses descriptive and precise Uses a broad vocabulary. Uses a limited or an unvaried
language with clarity and vocabulary.
Written Expression
Points 5 4 3 2 1 0
Points 5 4 3 2 1 0
Points 5 4 3 2 1 0
Uses descriptive and precise Uses a broad vocabulary. Uses a limited or an unvaried
language with clarity and vocabulary.
Written Expression
Points 5 4 3 2 1 0
Points 5 4 3 2 1 0
Points 5 4 3 2 1 0
Uses descriptive and precise Uses a broad vocabulary. Uses a limited or an unvaried
language with clarity and vocabulary.
Written Expression
Points 5 4 3 2 1 0
Points 5 4 3 2 1 0
© Shell Education
Week Week Week Week Week Week Total Scores
6 8 18 26 30 36
Student Name
argument Writing Analysis
209
210
Directions: Record each student’s rubric score (page 207) in the appropriate columns. Add the totals every two weeks and record the
sums in the Total Scores column. You can view: (1) which students are not understanding the informative/explanatory genre and (2)
how students progress after multiple encounters with the informative/explanatory genre.
© Shell Education
Directions: Record each student’s rubric score (page 208) in the appropriate columns. Add the totals every two weeks and record the
sums in the Total Scores column. You can view: (1) which students are not understanding the narrative genre and (2) how students
progress after multiple encounters with the narrative genre.
© Shell Education
Week Week Week Week Week Week Total Scores
2 10 12 14 24 28
Student Name
Narrative Writing Analysis
211
The Writing Process
Step 1: Prewriting
Think about the topic. Brainstorm ideas, and plan what
you want to include in your writing.
Step 2: Drafting
Use your brainstormed ideas to write a first draft.
Don’t worry about errors. This will be a rough draft.
Step 3: Revising
Read your rough draft. Think about the vocabulary you
used and how your writing is organized. Then, make the
appropriate changes to improve your written piece.
Step 4: Editing
Reread your revised draft. Check for errors in spelling,
punctuation, and grammar. Use editing marks to correct
the errors.
Step 5: Publishing
Create a final version of your piece, including the
corrections from the edited version. Be sure to reread
your work for any errors.
#
# add space symbol I ran tothe tree.
Do I have at least three reasons based Include at least three solid reasons why
on facts for my claim? the reader should agree with you.
Do I have an example for each reason Each reason must be followed by one
that strengthens my argument? strong example.
Have I used correct spelling, grammar, Revisit what you have written. Then,
and punctuation? check for mistakes.
Have I included enough information that End with a strong sentence that makes
the reader will be interested in learning the reader want to learn more about
even more? the subject.
Have I used correct spelling, grammar, Revisit what you have written. Then,
and punctuation? check for mistakes.
Have I used correct spelling, grammar, Revisit what you have written. Then,
and punctuation? check for mistakes.
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